FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1

summary : this is very short summary as many of us know the back ground of story.......

Rani' family

Rani: very nice ,, loving and caring girl who is always ready to help everyone either that person is good or evil. Very ood in studies and all other activities

Rani's mom(sumitra): very warm and caring mom who is always worried about her kids . she is illiterate.

Rani's grand mom: very cute and smart granny. Who always trust rani and ready to fight with anyone for their right. Not afraid of any one.
Rani's brother munna: very bubbly and mischievous 8 years old boy. Happy to teach people lesson for their mistake or bad behavior. loves his sister a lot .

Rani's chacha and his family: they are very cunning and want to steal sumitra's land by taking her advantage of illiteracy.

Munshi : always helping chacha

Royal family.

Kunvar yudhisthir (yudi): our hero. Very cool and nice person. Though he is kunvar he loves to be simple and down to earth . he is always ready to help needy. And respect his parents a lot and loves his siblings a lot . he is hot and handsome

Rajaji: very arrogant and strict raja and father . always give first preference to all ritual and family customs.

BR: (badi rani): she is raja's first wife and yudhisthir and nikki's mom. She is bed ridden and paralyzed . she is always worried about her kids.

CR: (chhoti rani): raja's second wife: very cunning and sharp . very shady character.

Nikki: yudi 's widow sister , very shy, and caring sister.

Rudra: yudi's step brother

Bhavi: yudi's step sister.

Saksh: servants 's son but yudi treat him as his best friends, very cool guy and near to reality and fact.
Story in short:

Rani and her family were leaving in village happily , and rani always used to score highest marks . she wants to study further and fulfill his dead father's dream.
Rani's chacha tried to snatch their land many times but rani could read paper so he could not fulfill his dream. For him rani was throne in his way. So he made plan with munshi to remove this throne .
One day kunvar yudi and his family came to village for kuldevi's prayer and in this prayer only one family allowed to do their arti . purposely munshi announce rani 's family for that and in this way he show rani to CR . munshi suggest rani's name for servant as CR was looking for one illiterate girl to look after BR. But rani was educated though munshi lied to CR about that.
In the morning rani was singing prayer in temple that time yudi was distributing kumble to poor people. As soon as he heard rani's voice he was attracted by it.
Rani's beautiful voice gave disgusting idea to rani's chachi. She asked her daughter to request rani to sing song on behalf of them while they will lip singing and they asked rani not tell anyone about it.
In night during jalasa on stage chacha's daughters were lip singing while rani in back stage were singing the song. Yudi immediately understood that he heard this voice in morning and he understood also that some one is singing in back stage so he follow the direction of voice. When rani realized that yhudi is coming towards her she ran away. Yudi tried to follow her in that process rani's duppata got stuck . so rani's left her duppata behind and ran away. Yudi who was mesmerized by her voice took that duppata with him,.

Rani's chacha and chachi created scene that rani was not in jalasaa and some where doing something wrong and try to ruin her image. Sumitra got scared off all this so he accepted chacha's advice to sent rani with royal family to town for further study.
Chach lied to sumitra that rani is going town for study while he told to CR she is coming as servant.

When rani reached there she realized that she has been cheated but chacha with his sweet talk make her understand that her dadi is very sick so she should earn money for them.
In palace bhanu and kali two head servants gave hard time to rani . But she survived all brunt given by bhanu and kali.

CR suggest rajkumari bhoomi as very good life partner for yudi and raja like this alliance . so they decided that yudi should meet her. Rajkumari bhoomi(RB) with her parents were invited in palace.
While rani was cleaning RB's room her friend ask help from her as kunvar rudra was looking for rani's friend so rani wore RB's cloths and ask rudra to leave the room. After her friend left before rani could changed to her original cloths yudi enter the room and rani tried to tell him truth. But before she could utter a single word she fell in his arm. And yudi who was mesmerized with her beauty thought that she is RB.
And he give his consent for this Rishta.
While living in palace RB who is chain smoker wanted to go out for smoking as she cannot smoke in palace so she ased rani to wear her cloths. So rani again change into RB's cloths and after RB left yudi came into the room to ask rani's thought about this Rishta.
Rani gain fail to tell the truth about her reality.

In night while talking on the phone with yudi who was worried about RB(RANI) accidently flower vase fell on rani's feet. Yudi who hear her scream on phone rush to her room and take her to doctor.
While coming back on the way some goon attack them, in process to save rani yudi got hurt. Rani took him to nearby cottage and apply some lep made of hurb. And yudi was totally in awe seeing rani taking care of him .

As yudi's engagement was coming near rani decided to tell him truth before he himself cometo know and feel hurt so she went to his room and tell the person sitting on chair . that person was non other than kali . so knowing it was kali not yudi rani decided to write letter and leave it on his table

So after that my story start in my version. This previouse part I have kept same as I picked up story from middle . Hope you all will enjoy this journey as much as I am going to.

PS: if you have any question regarding anything please ask me i will be happy to answer them anytime.

Edited by bsingapury - 15 years ago

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NOTE:when i started this FF i thought i will not be able to write that long but some how i am enjoying and i started this FF from middle so who ever start from first part they feel lost that's why i have given summary so please first read that i might update summary part also to look more perfact begining and this first part also i will edit to look more appropriate. thanks.

my story has same background as original story after this point i have created my own story as per my imagination.

PART: 1

when yudi was informed about RB's arrival he was delighted and radiant smile cross his blushing face. he knew that his ecstasy will not remain hidden and he would end up being laughing stock for his family memeber. he excused himself from dinner table to leave the dining room immediately concealing his happy feelings. however yudi tried very hard, he could not hide his happiness and shyness from CR, RS, RUDRA and bhavi and the moment yudi left dinning hall they started laughing and they all were very happy that yudi was contented and happy with this relation.

however, rani's pain was unbearable, rani was very hurt as she was verywell aware from the fact that if tommorow yudi will see RB in function he is going to be devastated. those thoughts were tormenting her and after thinking she decided to confess every thing in front of yudi. least she wanted was to keep yudi in dark and left him dejected and crestfallen. she was determined to share everything with yudi and was mentally prepared for the consquences

she started to go towards yudi's room, making sure nobody was watching her and following her.because she was aware from the rule that no maid were allow near prince's room. the moment she reached near his room she heard yudi talking to RB about that night he took her out but before he continues his talk, he heard some noise outside his room as rani accidently bang her head on door she got scared and ran away from there and went to her room all crying,😭. tears were rolling down her eyes and she was sobbing.

yudi came out to see who was there but did not see anyone but he felt something very strange but very familiar fregrance as she was there he felt why i am feeling her everywhere 😳. he laughed on his imagination he thought may be i was talking to her that's why i felt her here .

rani could not control her emotion she can see that yudi is deeply in love with her but she cannot love him as she is aware of her limit, 😭

she decided to tell him but it will be very difficult for her to stand infront of him and bea his glare and she won't be able to tell him, so she decided to write letter she wrote everything in that letter and again went to his room . she sneak in room through glass, she saw nobody was there so she decided to leave that letter on desk so yudi will read and she will be free of obligation and any kind of guilt.

she heard noice from bathroom so she understood he is in bathroom, so she just came out hurriedly and waited outside the door as soon she came out yudi also came out from bathroom he felt somebody came to his room but again thought ooof my imagination😆 rani was praying that please god he read letter .

yudi went near the desk to collect his purse and his other belongings, his eyes fell on the letter that was nicely folded. he was amused by that letter so he look around but he could not find anything suspicious, however rani was impatienceand praying hard that yudi read that letter😆

yudi started to read

" aadarniy kunvarji ( he thought this is from RB😳 but how is this letter land here)

hum aapse bahut jaroori baat bataana chaahte he . ye padh ke aap shaayad dukhi honge lekin hamaara iraada apko dukhi karanaa kateyi hi nahi thaa par ap hamaari baat samajneki koshish karenge. ho shake to hame maaf kar dijiyega

rani was happy that he is reading her letter but while reading ammused yudi look here and there as he felt that somebody is watching him and he saw two sparkling eyes looking at him through glass door. he founnd those eyes very familiar and felt very happy that RB is here and he does not even know that is it his imagination again as he is seeing her everywhere but he felt no this two twinkling eyes are looking at him so he came towards door realizing yudi is coming towards door rani hide nearby wall as soon as he opened the door he saw nobody he wanted to read more in that letter but mean while suksham came calling him " kunvarji kya huva kya yaha waha dekh rahe he. "

seeing him he folded letter in kept inhis wallet and thought will read when i am all alone

yudi: " kuchh nahi hum to sirf aese hi. ha ye bataiye suksham RB and all are coming tomorrow right

suksh " ha kyu ap sirf unke bare me hi soch rahe the yaha darvajie ke pass khade khade 😆 under jana bhi bhul gaye bahut kho gaye ho unke khayal me

yudi blushed on this remark yes he was totally lost in RB's love....everywhere he was imaginging her...though the feeling he was thinking was imagination was actually real as rani was near by him whom he was unable to see.....unaware the sweet feeling he is having right now is going to be painful throne of his heart ......very next day.....😭

more i will write tomorrow in EKANT thanks

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part1&2 Chithi aayi hain page:1

rani wrote letter to yudi revealing her true identity but before yudi could finished the letter he felt somebody was outside the room. upon seeing yudi coming out rani hide....saksh inform yudi about CR calling him and they leave to meet Cr rani is still not aware of the fact that yudi has not read letter yet......when rani went to store room to clean it munna who was hiding there see rnai doing naukrani work andhe is surprised to see that

part 3 and part 4 I can feel her , page:2

munna meet rani and and curiously ask why rani was doing household chores but rani change topic. after meeting CR and talking regarding yudi's engagement with bhoomi saksh and yudi went for walk where they have heartily talk abotu love and it's magic ......yudi remember rani and saksh remember nikki........rani took munna to chacha 's room and ask them to take munna with them to village .......after talking to saksh when yudi was going towards his room rani was going towards her room they passed by but could not see eachother but yudi could feel very familiar fregrance he could feel her.........still yudi had not read rani's letter and itis in his wallet....

part 5 ,6 and 7 Engagement , page:3

It is yudi's engagement day and yudi is veryhappy that RB is goning to be part of his life .....yudi, nikki and saksh have some light moment together, yudi is sad that nikki could not join him for his engagement ceremony....rani is serving BR and taking care of her but her mind is stuck in that letter and her confusion is yudi whether knows the thruth or not...nikki come to meet her mom but she could not hide her pain.........mother and daughter share soem light moment and remember how nikki became widow on next day of her marriage and rani heard all and promis herself that she will try to cure RB for yudi and nikki........RB has arrived for engagement and function has started yudi is very happy but rani is scared as now at any moment yudi could come to know about truth .......thruth about reall bhoomi.......

part 8 Where is she?, page: 4

yudi was about to slide ring in RB's hand at the same moment CR suggested to lift RB's vail and yudi was perturbed seeing original RB. he was devastated with the reality he found out that moment that the girl he was loving was somebody else not RB

part 9 and part 10 What shall I do?, page: 6

yudi was in dilemma what shall he do as if he refused to go ahead with engagement his family's honour was at stack and if he go ahead with engagement his heart will not accept RB with full consent. in end he decided to go ahead with his parents happiness and that is to get engaged with RB.

saksh was worried about yudi as he could sense that somethign was bothering yudi. yudi tried to spend some time with RB but he was unable to forget rani(though he did not know her name or who was she)...saksh tried to talk to yudi but yudi refused to tell anything. nikki take yudi to temple where yudi hear rani's voice and run in the direction of voice

part 11 Somebody knows something

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Before yudi could catch rani, niki and saskh stopped him. something was bothering saksh he was carefully watching yudi. nikki and saksh shared very emotional moment but bhali insult nikki for being widow that hurt saksh and nikki. saksh know about real RB and fake RB and yudi was surprised hearing those words from saksh

part 12 Should I trust you? page: 8

Saksh tell yudi about the letter,that rani wrote to yudi and when yudi read that letter he is in confusion whom to believe ..yudi wants to know why rani cheated him but saksh is very sure that rani had some kind of MAJBOORI.

part 13 and part 14 I want to meet her page: 9

saksh and yudi make plan to bring rani's truth out and they deside to pretend that yudi had fallen down from horse and hearing that yudi thought rnai might come with lap ..........so that way he will able to meet her

.........somebody come on door and when she come inside it is rani and yura have emotional talk and suddenly somebody shout for yudi's name?????????

part 15 She might come to meet me , page : 10

The person calling yudi was bhavi who was trying to wake yudi up from his deep sleep..than yudi realised that he was dreaming about rani that she came with lape............now yudi and saksh put their plan in action in reality rani hearing yudi's woud offer bhanu her help to make lape and bhanu ask her to deliver that lape in yudi' s room ....sudenly saksh and yudi hear the knock on the door for that they were actually waiting

part 16 I know her name , page : 11

Nikki was on door holding lape in her hand...but yudi and saksh successfully make nikki blurt out the name of the person who made this lape..........though yudi was sad that if rani would have come herself he might have recognise her but it was too late now..so they decided to check rani's hand writing with the letter she wrote to yudi

part 17 and part 18 She is in my arm , page : 12

when yudi got all the letter from all the servant only rani's letter was blank and yudi understood that rani is the girl he was searching..............RS and whole familyhad to attend some puja at RS's fried's place but yudi could not go as he had meeting...his meeting was unsuccessful and when irritated he came back he got call from RS that they are thinking to take yudi and bhoomi's marriage as soon as possible this double blow was very difficult for yudi so he was very upset suddenly light went of in palace and when he was looking for candle or somehelp rani who was going with candle in BR's room ....................fell in yudi's arm ..........

part 19 I don't want to listen page : 13

part 20 Why I did this with her page : 14

Nikki rushed towards yudi's room and she was puzzled seeing yudi lost. in BR's room rani was also lost in her thought and nikki realised that rani's hand was little bit burnt and in his room yudi was holding oinment. yudi was puzzled and he had to find some way out of it. deciding something he went to BR's room in hope he could meet rani where nikki had laready sent rani to her room. seeing yudi's confusion nikki had daubt about something. yudi decided to meet rani in her room but.

part 21 Why is this happening with me? page :16

king announce his decission to take yudi and RB's marriage as soon as possible. yudi is dejected but with heavy heart just nod with his father's decission

part 22 Dear Rudra page : 17

rudra is going out to meet his friends but king is not happy with that. pandit has arrived to anounce yudi and bhoom's marriage date. BR is not happy hearing king's urgency for yudi's marriage. and Cr is busy spinning more trap for yudi.

part 23 desperation page : 18

yudi took some decission about his life. he wanted to meet rani but he could not and he was about to go out to welcome RB and her family RB herself came to meet him. yudi was surprised seeing RB in his room and perturbed by her alluring behaviour. but before he could stop her somebody enter his room and yudi was shocked to see that person

part 24 pyaar kaa imthaan page : 19

yudi was perturbed seeing rani there. RB insulted rani yudi tried to interven but could not he is disappinted with RB's behaviour and dejected by the thought that rani had seen him with RB in her arm. pandit announce that yudi and RB's marriage can take place after six months. BR seeing yudi's happy face trying to understand what was goingon in yudi's mind. nikki also try to figure out yudi's reaction.yudi got more proof about RB's bad behaviour and he was disgusted experiencing them. in night saksh inform yudi that rani has gone to her village for two days.

part 25 my mom page : 20

rani is going to village and she is thinking about her mom andher family and decided to start her life afresh.

part 26 who is that driver page : 21

rani was having fun time with her family when servant from haveli inform her that driver was waiting for her to take her back to palace. rani was surprised seeing new driver. on their way to palace rani was scared by the driver who was constantly watching her through rear mirror . in palace shadow and tamanna are partner in some big game we still don't know and rudra is drunk and had arguement with CR.

driver took rani to desserted place, rani is fear stricken and when seh try to run away she heard that driver's voice and she is rooted to the place

part 27 tell me the truth page : 24

yudi asked rani for the reason behind her betrayal. rani is firm and refuse to tell anything but yudi knows very well how to force rani toopen her mouth.

part 28 (1,2)truth is out page : 25

rani blurt out everything about RB. yudi asked rani about her own feelings for yudi. rani refuse to accept yudi's love but after yudi's arguement rani could not control her emotions and accept her love for yudi. both of them are rejoicing their happiness

part 29 u me and hum page : 26

rani and yudi back to palace and trying to concentrate on their work. nikki who was watching both of them is more suspicious seeing happiness on yura's face and tried to go to bottom of the fact.

part 30 , 31 jasoos nikki page: 28

nikki took yura to temple. she wants to confirm her suspect and in the end when she sees that his suspects that yura indeed in somekind of relation is not baseless, that revealation is shocking for her. she tried to meet saksh andinform him about yura but at the critical moment bhavi come there aqnd insult niki

rudra desperate to impress tamanna but in pub tamanna and rudra had some arguement and rudra felt insulted by tamanaa's behavior. he is very upset and angry and drunk, . when he went to palace he had arguent with king and king shout on him. CR calm rudra dwon and explain him about their future plan to trap yudi.

part 32 plan in action page : 29

yudi has not seen rani since thre four days and he is restless that rnai also did not show any initiative to meet him. in his desperation he did not realised that he did not meet saksh also but when sake meets him and come to know about his restlessness they come up with plan. saksh went to kitchen and inform bhanu to send somebody who could clean yudi's room behalf of Dkaka because he is sick. bhanu order rani to go to yudi's room and in room rani is lost in her thoughts and start talking to yudi's photo unaware yudi was standing behind her.

part 33 i got you page : 30

part 34 your fregrance in my heart page: 31

part 35 cruel destiny page: 33

part 36 surfacing pain for saksh page: 34

part 37 lost moments for saksh page : 35

part 38 find truth of RB page : 36

part 39 devil on job page : 36

part 40 pyaar kaa imthaan page : 38

part 41 someone is jealous page : 39

part 42 judai ke baad milan hain page : 41

part 43 ankho se chhalkataa hain dard page : 43

part : 44 you are my passion page: 44

part : 45 increasing desire page 46

part46 nikki's sacrifice page : 49

part47 race has began page : 51

part 48 our pain

part 49 rejoice

part 50 why this has to happen

part 51 evil cannot win over true love

part 52 gift for love

part 53 trouble has arrived

part54 love don't need word

part 55 mission impossible

yudi harass RB and made her drink karelaa juice. RB is very angry and CR create perfact situation where rani become victim of RB's anger and that is also infront of yudi...yudi try to protest and save rani but when RS intervern he feel helpless in front of his dad..........

part 56 i am desperately waiting for you

yudi create situation to meet rani but CR turned the table in her direction and yudi is helpless and frustrated. the gift he wanted to hand over by himself to rani he passed to nikki and request her to give it to rani behalf of him and write letter for rani..........he is lost in his thought in his room and realised that though he was over shadowed by his father , he had some qualities that make him unique and different..somebody knock on his door

part 57i hope i could see you

yudi is very happy that rani was wearing the dress he had gifted her but CR create situation there yudi was in puzzlement how to tell that he is the one who gifted rani dress but luckily at last moment nikki saved him lying that .......she was the one who gave that dress to rani and nikki at same time inher room tell to her brother that he coudl meet rani. when nikki was about to go to temple with rani so yura could meet.cr suggest.......something

part:58 oh more trap

nikki create situation where RB got busy with prayer and during that time yura met but yudi was upset about somthing..............but rani cheer him up and yudi gave rani good news about rani's study.....CR and RB has more plan to harass yura......to bring their truth in front of RS

part 59 nehele pe dehelaa

CR and RB discuss their game plan to bring yura's truth out. rudra tried to take revenge from tamanna but tamanna beat him very badly and in the end help him to apply medicine on his wound and made him realised that whatever he was doing with other girls that same thing other boys could do with his sister too.....and drop him to palace where sukhiya has to play other game

part: 60 dreadful fear

seeing rudra in bad state yudi was worried about his future with rani...and rani came to meet yudi inhis room thinking yudi was the one who got hurt ...but when they were lsot in eachother arm RS enter yudi's room and he was very angry seeing yura together adn ordered guards to throw rani out of the palace in that dragging rani lost her balalnce and tumbled from stair

part: 61 emotional confusion

it was yudi's nightmare he was desperate to meet rani. rudra was confused about his feelings . his thoughts are interwoowen with so many confusion. tamannaa's words are haunting him.he is worried about his sister now. yudi meet rani and he is relived that rani is safe...bhanu is conspiring against rani.

part 62 happiness

bhanu set up trap for rani. an dRS is happy that BR is recovering and praise rani andyudi is happy for that and RS gave permission to bring computer for nikki so yudiis veryhappy.

part 63 farz

snake came to BR's room with sitting comfortably in RB's purse and it was about to attack BR , rani rushed to the place and saved BR but she has been bitten by snake and poison has started showing it's effact.

part 64 will he able to take it? page: 126

rani is still unconciouse and saksh is worried about yudi. he tried to inform yudi about rani's ill health but CR intrupt them. on dinig table Cr unfold the truth about rani's ill health and yudi is devastated hearing those words.

part :65,66 pyaar ek imtihaan page 133

yudi is trying veryhard to meet rani. when CR asks rani to come and meet in BR's room everybody is present there and rani suddenly feel dizzy and lsot her balance and yudi is perturbed seeing her inthat state and rushed near to her.

but rani stopped yudi and informs him that she is fine. on yudi's insistance yudi had to go to drop RB. tamanna came to meet rudra who is very upset with everyone around him. when yudi comeback to palace and went to see rani to her room he was devastated seeing rani fighting battle of her life. and the suggestion he get from nikki to save rani's life shakes yudi entirely

part : 67 Tufaan page: 138

yudi decided that he will give body heat to rani and nikki was devastated hearing that dicission ..her mind is just thinking about her love for saksh and her feelings for saksh. somehow, seeing , yudi's unconditional love for rani, nikki is getin perplex. she feels that her life is loneli without any one whom she can call hers

part : 68 dil e nadan

nikki went to rani's room and yudi ask her to look after rani. Rani is alright now. yudi had some self confrontation. in morning CR in struct nikki that servant will look after rani. Nikki goes to her moms room where saksh come to take permission to go to her room. sensing saksh's presense nikki's emotions get wilds and BR and nikki cry their heart out. saksh when nikki don't even look at him feel dejected and went to nikki's room and while he picks up cushion he saw some thing on bed and he was astonished

part : 69 pyar ki saugaat

saksh find bangle on nikki's bed and he is very happy that nikki was thinking about him. but he felt sad also that because of him she was feeling sad. saksh went to yudi's room and meet yudi where from letter they come to know that rani exams will be in one month and yudi decided to take help from nikki . at that moment saksh get idea that nikki should start her study

Part : 70 kahi khushi kahi gham

yudi inform nikki that with rani she can start her study and this suggestion given by saksh. nikki is overwhelmed by this news and very happy.

bhavi wants to go to pub with her friends and rudra stop her but she maniplate the situation and take permission from CR. CR is veryupset with rudra and rudra thinks that tamanna is behind all his mental frustration and he will take revenge from her.

part : 71 dil ki baat page 158

yudi has to go to delhi but he leave gift and letter for rani. rnai is very happy reading that letter and while talking with nikki she sense that nikki had soft corner for saksh. when yudi come to meet rani he get perturbed seeing gauri there but gauri promised rani to help her in future. nikki went to temple to do prayer abd when pujariji ask her the name of the person for whom she wants to do puja voice over give name saksham and nikkiis startled hearingthat

part: 72 dil ki becheni page 161

that girl was not ready to let go of that holy thread and had arguement and in mean while nikki realised that the person for whom that girl was fighting was non other than

part 73 ye kaisi uljan hain

nikki is upset seeing saksh happily bonding with other girl. she wanted to run away from there rather than witnessing their togetherness. she was unble to understand the confusion arising in her heart and mind...who was she ????????why nikki felt that saksh has very speciall feelings for that girl?????why saksh seems very happy with that girl?????

part: 74 armano ki jadi

part 76 page:173

Part: 77 Page: 175

Edited by bsingapury - 16 years ago

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

Beena...........that's a great start!!!! 👏 👏
Aur start karte hi suspense shuru??? 😆 😆 Kunwar ji ko khat poora padhne nahi diyaa!!!! 😆

Waiting for the next part and I like your title....Ek tha Raja, Ek tha Rani! 😊

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goody_girl

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi Beena,
Nice part dear. Cant wait till Yudi reads the letter.

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pop77

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Posted: 17 years ago

good start beena..yudi ko letter to pura read karne deti..yudi to pyar me sabhi jagape Rani ko dekta hai..tu usko engagement ke din pata chalne degi..

waiting for next part..

payal

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Nishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

its really nice 👏 ....what i like is that it was without unnecessary people...i was mostly yudi and rani 😃 ...although we don't expect him to know the truth so easily...so, knew someone will stop him from reading the letter... 😆 will wait for the next part... 😳

--Nishi--

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beena

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Posted: 17 years ago

thank you all for all encouraging response i really appreciat it about suspence there is no fun without suspence 😉
prag thanks i like that title too
yudi will read letter when time will come lets see next what happen
i had to stop yesterday because family wanted attention and that is alsoimportant 😳
so in while i am giving next part
thank you all
we will have great time for you all reading and me writing 😛

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beena

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Posted: 17 years ago

part 2

yudi: nahi woh to hume lagaa ki yahaa koi he to hum dekhne aa gaye
saksh : so ab apko har jagah pe koi dikhai bhi de raha hain

Yudi understood that saksh was teasing him but he could not stop blushing. in intention to change topic yudi asked saksh...

yudi: humaari bat chhodiye aap yaha kya kar rahe hain ?
saksh: oh ha hum to aap ki bat main bhul hi gaye kiCR aapse koi jaroori bat kahena chah rahihain to aap ko unke bhavan me bulaya hai . deri na karke idhar udhar na dekhke aap humaare sath chale

both of them started laughing

when rani saw them going ,she came out from her hiding. she wondered whether yudi read her letter or not? from yudi's behavior it was difficult for her to predict anything because yudi seemed relax and happy. she thought " lagta he abhi unhone poora khat nahi padha" she was tense thinking about that letter, she was restless and anxious because she thought" kahi unke padhne ke pahele ye khat kisi or ke hath na ajaye or bahot deri na hojaye"

she was standing there like statue without realising that kali is looking for her but suddenly she heard kali asking for her luckily she walk away fast from there as she did not want kali to see near yudi's room otherwise kali will start her nonsense blabbering again, about rani as imposter of bhoomi and if somebody will hear that and start doubting then it will become problem for yudi and her and all raj gharana
and last thing she wanted was anything bad happen to yudi and his family and atleast that is because of her
she asked kali: aap hame dhundh rahi hai ?

kali : tumhe bua ne bulaya he maharani ji kaha ghum rahi thi?

they both went to bhanu and as usual bhanu started her bakvas with rani who was totaly lost in her own world worrying about her letter to yudi, seeing her lost bhanu'sanger crossed all the boundries; and she began to rain torrent of abuse on her "khayalo main se bahar aao or jake kuchh kam karo . kuchh kam ki na kaj ki dushman annaj ki "(that apply to you damit😡)

bhanu: woh store room main kisi ne sub kuchh ulat pulat kar diya hain jaha pe sab sagai ke din ka khane pina ka saman pada huva hain to jake use saf kar do

Rani wanted to spent some time in her solitude. she wanted to run away from all this suffering and ordering her to clean store room actually bhanu has blessed her indisguised of work. rani started to walk towards store room. she wanted to be alone because after trying hard also she was unable to hid her sorrow and worries from her face and least she wanted was that somebody notice her solen face and ask her any questions because she knew that she was unable to answer any questions.... and she wanted some time alone to come on term with her suffering

so she went to store room totally lost in her thoughts .unaware about all her surrounding.socked in her own world

yudi and saksh went to meet CR and seeing her

yudi: aap ne hume yad kiya chhoti ranima

cr: ha woh dining table par hi hum aapse bat karna chahte the per aap apne khyalo main itne dube huve the ki humne aap ko disturb karna uchit nahi samja "she was giving teasing smile to him"

he was embaresed and asked CR that what can he do for her.

CR: ye to apko malum hain ki kal apki mangani he or RB or uska family kal function se pahele yaha pahunch jayenge

he was bhlushing uncontrollably 😳 hearing this

CR: lekin hamari aap se ek vinati he ki function me jane se pahele aap BR ke arshivard lele

yudi: kya ma function me nahi aa rahi he?

CR: nahi woh ayengi lekin function bahut lamba chalega aur woh itni der waha ruk nahi payengi kyunki unki tabiyet thik nahi raheti to unko sirf ring ceremony me hi laya jayega taki unko aur tuklif na ho

yudi: aap baat sahi kahe rahi he aap ko ma ka kitna khayal he

CR: aap aisa kah kar hame dukhi kar rahe he wo hamari badi bahn hain to unki chinta hum nahi karenge to kaun karega. or hum chahte he ki aap ki jindagi ki nayi sharuat ho unse paheke aap ma ka arshivard le

hearing this yudi was overwhelmed by CR's thought that she is so caring loving towards all .

he assured CR that before going to function he will definatly go and take blessing from his mom and ask permision to go back to his room.

CR aske him that he can go and rest as tommorow is very big day for him so he should rest and be very fresh and energetic for all special guest. yudi smiled on this and make his moov with saksh

saksh who was observing yudi felt happy seeing yudi's happiness for his new life and life partner saksh could sense that how much yudi has fallen for RB. being yudi's childhood friend saksh has seen yudi as caring and loving personand yudi has only thought about others .

like other prince he has never take disadvantage of his authority and harrase people and never inhis dream he has thought about girl(how do you know😆) and now saksh could see that yudi was all the time thinking about and he can sense that yudi is helplessly in love with RB😳. and saksh was very happy for yudi.

saksh wanted to have some friendly chat with yudi so he offered yudi to go out for walk/

First yudi did not want to go but then seeing saksh's happiness yudi decided to go with saksh so both of them went out in garden for walk and some friendly chat

rani went to store room and as soon as she opened the door munna who was there hiding behind box ,came out of his hiding hearing some noice. when he saw rani he was puzzled why rani is working here she is supposed to be studying here

but he thought he will ask his didi by himself . unaware of munna's presence there rani who was sinking in her thought cleaning storeroom like machine as her hand was doing work but her mind was stuck to that letter who was resting in yudi's wallet peacefully.

and munna shouted "didi"

😲

ok so more suspence and more story will take place tomorrow hope you all will enjoy this part as much as you enjoyed last

cheers

Edited by bsingapury - 15 years ago

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Nishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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aww, i feel sad for rani... 😭 she is stuck from everywhere, kuwerji, kali, CR.....and kali already knows her truth...hope she doesnt twist and turn...i like convo btw yudi and saksh...that was nice. 😃

can't wait what happens next...since it's time for some action...i mean TRUTH... 😕 scaryyyy...

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