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Part: 61
Yudi shouted hysterically: Raniiii......!!!
Yudi: raniiiiiiiiiii...............nahi...............(the horrified scream fill the room)
Yudi startled off his bed. His body was shaking and his heart was racing wildly. Frantically, he wandered his room to look around but he did not see anyone around him. Still in a daze and bewildered by his surrounding he was trying to come to terms with what just happened. So many thoughts raced through his troubled mind. In his bed, he sat still and did not move a muscle. He felt his heart would jump out his chest with the trepidation. He was trembling only by the thought of that dreadful dream. He was trying to catch hold of his wild heart beat.
Seeing nobody around him and it was only nightmare, he tried to compose himself. Realising it was only a horrific dream he exhaled in relief. He tried to console himself by the thoughts that Rani was safe. However, his heart desperately started to crave to see Rani safe and sound.
Yudi took deep breaths in an attempt to calm his perturbed mind but it was impossible to get Rani out of his thoughts. Yudi tried to look out of his window. The sun had risen and had filled the earth with its warm golden rays. He heard the chirping of birds, the humming of bees looking for flowers.
On another occasion, the beautiful morning outside would have would have filled his heart with joy and happiness, however on this particular day he was filled with gloom.
The only thing that could ease him right now was Rani's presence. Suddenly he felt the urge to see Rani because he knew that until he would see her perfectly alright he would feel anxious. At this moment his craving to be with Rani and in her solitude, grew deeper and deeper. He wanted to lose himself in her warm embrace. He knew that all his worries and anxiety would evaporate in her affectionate embrace.
Yudi looked at the clock and realised that Rani might be in BR's room. With the determination to meet Rani at any cost yudi got up from his bed and entered his bath room.
CR passed entire night flipping sides; she was worried about his dear son and wanted to see him first thing in the morning. CR was on her way to rudra's room when Sukhiya approached to her and stopped her.
CR: kyaa baat hain sukhiyaji aap yu achaanak koi jaroori baat hain?
Sukhiya: ji CRji , bahut jaroori baat hain.
CR: kahiye?
Sukhiya: CRji, hum RB ko leke chintit hain.
Cr: kyun kyaa huva RB ko?
Sukhiya: huva kuchh nahi lekin aap sochiye, jab oonhe pataa chalegaa ki kunvar rudra ko chont lagi hain to woh apne aap ko rok nahi paayegi aur daudti huyi kunvar rudra se milne chali jaayegi. Ab sochiye.........agar kisi ne oonhe milte dekh liya...........to yura ki baat to baad main bahaar aayegi.........oos se pahele rumi ki baat bahaar aa jaayegi...........aur sab ko pataa chal jaayega ki woh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain😲
CR started to think something and Sukhiya was happy that his words were leaving some effect on CR. ⭐️
Sukhiya (CONTINUED): aur sochiye agar ye baat sab ko pataa chal gayi to aapke yura ke plan ke bare main bhi sab ko pataa chal jaayegaa....aur phir RS ke krodh se aap ko koi nahi bachaa paayegaa.......😕😕
CR: baat to aapki sahi hain sukhiyaji humne to ees bare main socha hi nahi ......achha huvaa aapne humaaraa dhyaan ees aur khichaa...warnaa to humre kiye karaaye par paani phir jaataa...
Sukhiya: rani saahibaa.........aapkaa buraa ho aisa to hum soch bhi nahi sakte ees liye har waqt aapki bhalaayi ke bare main sochte rahete hain........😃😉
CR: shukriyaa hum abhi RB ke kamare main jaake oonhe samjaate hain ki woh kunvar rudra se milne naa jaaye..........
The moment RB came to know about rudra's accident she was desperate and worried about him. She was about to leave her room, when CR entered her room.
RB: CR aap????????ees waqt yahaa hum rudra se hi milne jaa rahe the humne sunaa oonkaa kal accident ho gayaa hain aur woh buri tarahaa se zakhami hain.......jab se ye baat suni hain hum to apne aape main hi nahi hain..............kahiye naa CRji woh theek to hain naa?
CR: RB aap chintaa mat kijiye kunvar rudra bilkul theek hain.aur hum jaante the aap jaise hi ye baat sunegi aap apne aap ko rok nahi paayegi. eesi wajah se hum yahaa aaye hain aapko rok ne ke liye.😕😕
RB was confused: rok ne ke liye ? hum samje nahi CRji..........aap kahenaa kyaa chahti hain?😕😕
CR: RB ........aapkaa ees waqt rudra ko milnaa humaare liye khatraa saabit ho saktaa hain........agar kisi ne aapko dekh liyaa aise rudra ko milte huve to jaanti hain humaaraa khel hum par hi war saabit ho saktaa hain..........
RB: lekin aap ye kyun nahi samajti ki oonko dekhenge nahi to hum shaanti se nahi rah paayenge.......
CR: hum aap ko kahete hain naa rudra theek hain aur aap jazbaati mat hoyiye.,.....kunvar rudra bhi yahi chaahte hain ki aap abhi oonhe nahi mile😲😲 kyunki woh.........bhi nahi chaahte ki eetni mahenat karne ke baad kuchh bhi Galati ho jaaye .
RB: lekin chhoti maa.......
CR: hum aapke dil ki haalat samajte hain.......aur aapse waadaa karte hain jaise hi hume maukaa milegaa hum aapko khud rudra se milne ke liye le jaayenge aap humaari baat par yakin kijiye.......aur thodaa aur intzaar kijiye.......
RB was disappointed and sad. Desperately she wanted to see rudra but she knew that it could be very dangerous and harmful for their plan. So heavy hearted she just gave up her urge to see rudra and promised that she would not meet rudra till CR herself take her.
CR was contented when RB dropped her plan to meet rudra. Now she had other task and that was to go to see rudra and ask forgiveness from him about the last night.
Bhavi, when heard his brother was seriously injured, she went to see him in his room.
Seeing rudra badly injured bhavy was very much worried about rudra.
Bhavi: bhaiya ye sab kaise huvaa......aap thik to hain naa
Rudra: bhavi tum?..............ye sab ......kuchh nahi woh jara dosto se masti kar rahe the thoda jyaadaa ho gayaa..😲😲.....ab hum thik mahesoos kar rahe hain........
Bhavi: bhaiya aapke chahere se saaf nazar aa rahaa hain ki aapko dard ho rahaa hain.......
Rudra: are nahi bhavi ...aisi koi baat nahi hain..chalo humari baat chhodo hume bataao tumhaari padhaayi kaise chal rhai hain?
Bhavy: bhaiya humaari padhaayi to bahut achhi tarahaa se chal rahi hain..humne bahut saare dost banaa liye hain....
Rudra: achhaa.ye to bahut achhi baat hain....
Bhavi: ha aur hum aap ko ek raaz ki baat bataaye sirf aapko hi bataa rahe hain kyunki hum jaante hain ye baat sirf aaphi samaj paayenge.......hum apne dosto ke saath aaj raat ko bahaar jaane waale hain......
Rudra was alert hearing bhavi's words, suddenly tamannaa's words started to echo in his mind.........the way she had warned him regarding bhavi, that the way rudra was taking advantage of other girl somebody else could also take advantage of her sister...😕😕.....rudra was feeling very uncomfortable. This weird feeling he never had before and suddenly he was feeling apprehensive and perturbed regarding bhavi's safety.
Bhavy: are bhaiya aap kahaa kho gaye........humne eetni interesting baat aapko bataayi aur aap ne kuchh nahi kahaa.........hum bahut utsuk hain humaare dosto ke saath baahaar jaane ki baat se.......ye paheli baar hum jaa rahe hain.....
Rudra: bhavi......ees tarahaa se raat ko bahaar jaanaa anuchit hogaa😕😕
Bhavi laughed: are bhaiya aap kabse aisi baate karne lage..hume to hansi aa rahi hain aisi buzurgo jaisi baate aapke muh se sun kar..😆......aap bhi naa bhaiya mazak bahut karte hain..
Rudra was serious : bhavi hum mazaak nahi kar rahe hain...........hum sahi kah rahe hain....raat ko akele dosto ke saath jaanaa ladkio kaa ......aur pitaaji ko pataa chalaa to shaamat aa jaayegi....
Bhavi was surprised: bhaiya aap aisi baat kar rahe hain......sach main hume ab lagtaa hain aapki tabiyet thik nahi hain...eesi liye aap aisi baheki baheki baate kar rahe hain.....
Rudra was feeling frustrated and surprised about his own thinking and bhavi was right something was terribly wrong with him that's why he was talking out of his character😕😕. He, himself was confused about his own behaviour and he was blaming tamannaa for all this......... she was the one who had manipulated his thoughts.😕😕
Suddenly CR entered rudra's room
CR: kyaa ho rahaa hain bhai aur bahen ke bich main............
Bhavi: kuchh nahi maa hum to bhaiya ki khabar puchh ne aaye the.......aur hume lagtaa hain bhaiya ki tabiyet waakayi main theek nahi hain.........(she winked at rudra.........and gave teasing smile)..............achhaa maa hum chalet hain aur hume aane main deri ho jaayegi kyunki hum apni saheli ke ghar jaa rahe hain...😲😲......(she again looked at rudra ........signing .........that see I have also learned how to make excuses)
Rudra was now indeed worried about his sister and feeling helpless that he was unable to do anything, suddenly he felt his sister was going towards destruction.😲😲 But why suddenly he was thinking that way? Why he was suddenly influenced by tamannaa's talk. Why suddenly he feared for his sister's safety? Was tamannaa right that whatever rudra had been doing with other girls was wrong? He was completely lost in his thought but before he could think clearly CR's voice broke his trance.
CR: kunvar....kyaa huvaa aap thik to hain?
Rudra: ji
CR: hum jaante hain aap hum se naaraaz hain. Kal jo bhi huva woh nahi hona chaahiye thaa lekin hum kyaa karate..........RS ke saamne hum aapkaa saath nahi de paaye warnaa woh hum par bhi gussaa ho jaate.........
Rudra frustrated: hum wahaa zakhmi pade the aur aapko aapke bare main aur pitaaji ke gusse ke bare main chintaa ho rahi thee..😭😭.........ek baar bhi aapne nahi sochaa ki hum ko oos waqt aapki kitni jaroorat thee?😭😭
CR: rudra bachche jaisi baate mat kijiye......aap jaante hain aap hume kitne pyaare hain aur ye sab hum jo kuchh bhi kar rahe hain woh hum aapke liye hi to kar rahe hain.........aur kabhi kabhi samay ko samaj kar .bartaav karnaa padtaa hain. bhavnaao main bah kar kabhi kabhi bane banaaye kaam bigad jaate hain.......aur ab jab humaari manzil hume bilkul apne karib dikhaayi de rahi hain.........😡
Rudra was not convinced; though he did not reply he could feel his mother's ambition was as high as sky.......he was annoyed, confused and puzzled because so many thoughts had emerged from all the directions. He always believed that his mother was superior in everything and had always thought of his well being but when he needed her most she was not with him, was that called caring? Other side tamannaa whom he tried to hurt helped him, was that hatred? He used to take advantage of girls now he was feeling that could happen to his sister also, was that possible? 😕😕He thought RB was his love but right now she was not with him when he was in pain. And suddenly one thought crossed his mind if rani would have been asked to play such dirty game with other man, would she have agreed to do that? 😲😲In front of you, your love roaming around with other man and that is also hand in hand............... rudra was confused with his own thinking.
Rudra : RB kaisi hain ...........woh nahi aayi...........humaari khabar puchh ne ke liye..........taajuub ho raha hain hume.........shaayad lagtaa hain unhe maalum nahi hoga humaare accident ke bare main warnaa woh apne aap ko rok nahi paati.........maa aapne RB ko bataayaa ki hum zakhami hain?
Was he trying to prove his raging thoughts were wrong? Whatever he was thinking about RB was only her delusion but somewhere deep inside he himself was not sure about it.
CR stumbled: woh oonhe maaloom hain ............aur woh aap se milnaa chahti thee lekin baad main humne sochaa ki abhi ees waqt oonkaa apse milnaa uchit nahi hain.........aap chintaa mat kijiye sahi maukaa dekh kar hum oonhe yahaa bhej denge
First time rudra was not pleased hearing her mom's words. He wanted to be alone and wanted to think coherently something was troubling him immensely.
Rudra: theek hain ........ab hum aaraam karnaa chaahte hain....hume thakaan ho rahi hain .lagtaa hain davaai ki wajah se ho rahaa hain..........hum aap se baad main baat karte hain........
CR(stroke his hair with care ): theek hain betaa aap jaldi se theek ho jaayiye hume aapki bahut chintaa ho rahi hain..kuchh bhi chahiye to hume bataa dijiye. ab hum chalet hain.......
Rudra closed his eyes and tried to sleep. He thought sleep might help him to think clearly but the moment he was closing his eyes, tamannaa's face keep surfacing in front of him. He felt tamannaa was mocking at him. he felt, with one blow, tamannaa had made him helpless, lonely and scared.
Kyun rudra ko aisa lag rahaa thaa ki woh pinjare main padaa huvaa ek aisa pankhi hain , jise ooskaa malik ji jaan se chahtaa hain ..ya kaho ji jaan se chaah ne kaa dikhaavaa kartaa hain.....ooske maalik ne oose bhramnaa main daal ke rakhaa hain ki oos pankhi ke liye .......ye pinjar hi bahetarin jagaa hain...kyunki jo bhi suvidhaae hain oose wahi pinjare main aasaani se uplabth hain........pine ke liye paani ,,......khaane ke liye danaa............aur ooskaa maalik har waqt oose ye sapnaa dikhaataa hain ki ye saaraa aasmaan oos pankhi kaa hi hain.....aur aaj tak oos pankhi ko bhi yahi lag rahaa thaa....lekin achaanak..........kisi ne aakar oose vastviktaa ki jalak dikhaa di thee..........ki pinjare main pade pade aasmaan ki ser nahi hoti....kyun oose aisa lag rahaa thaa ki woh mulaakaati oose kah rahaa thaa ki aasmaan ko chhu ne ke liye udnaa padtaa hain apne pankh ko failaanaa padtaa hain........aur apni udaan khud bharni padti hain..........phir sara aasmaan tumhaaraa hain.............pinjar main pade pade kisi aur ki pankh kaat kar aasmaan paane kaa khwaab sirf khwaab hi rah jaataa hain.........
Rudra's head was spinning. The more he was thinking the more he was feeling confused he just held his head in his hand tried to get rid of all this thoughts.
After getting ready, yudi did not even wait to look in mirror and rushed towards BR's room. He knew that if rani would finish her work in BR's room and would go back to her other work than he might not able to meet her in anyway. First time he was feeling that perhaps he would have wings than he could have flied to meet rani, or perhaps this palace would not have been this huge than it could not have taken him very long to reach BR's room. Today, he felt this palace was very huge and grand. He quickened his pace.
When he reached near BR's room he saw rani was coming out of the room. Yudi sprinted towards her and called her name.
Yudi: rani.......
Rani stopped in her way abruptly. She turned and looked at yudi with her eyes narrowing. She saw yudi rushing towards her. rani looked around nobody was there in the corridor but thing puzzling was why yudi was calling her like that, it was something very strange and the way yudi was rushing in her direction she felt something was wrong.
Yudi came near rani; anxiously his eyes were looking at rani. Seeing yudi's restlessness rani starred at him in bewilderment. Their eyes locked in each other. Yudi cupped rani's face.
Yudi: rani........aap thik hain naa?( he looked at rani in a frenzy of panic)
Rani was confused: kunvarji kyaa baat hain?
Yudi was over powered by his emotions could not stop himself and he pulled rani towards him and buried her in his tight embrace. Rani was stupefied by yudi's behaviour. She felt yudi's palpitation, his raging heart beat was giving indication to rani that yudi was worried about something.
So great was his relief when he saw rani safe and sound. His desperation was evaporated seeing rani standing in front of him. he forgot his surrounding and in his urge to feel her , he just hugged her very tight.
Rani after a while spoke hesitantly.
Rani: kunvarji.........kyaa baat hain.kya huva aap itne paresaan kyun hain....aur ......
Yudi slowly loosen his grip around her and held her shoulder, his ardent look was telling rani that how desperate he was.
Yudi: kuchh nahi rani......
Rani (concerned): aap humse chippayenge?
Yudi: nahi rani koi khaas baat nahi hain ....woh....woh....
Rani: kyaa huva ??????kisi ne kuchh kah diyaa?
Yudi: nahi .woh humne ek bahut bura sapnaa dekhaa..........
Rani smiled: kyaa dekhaa hum aapse bichhad gaye the????
Yudi covered her mouth and looked at her in despair.....
Yudi: rani ..kabhi bhi aisi baat apne muh se mat nikaaliyegaa......aaj kah diyaa.....so kah diyaa
Rani: maaf kar dijiye hum aapko dukhi nahi karnaa chaahte the.......aap chintaa mat kijiye woh ek sapnaa thaa oose bhul jaayiye.........
Yudi: aap thik kah rahi hain..........lekin aapko humaare saamne dekh kar hume tasalli huyi ke aap theek hain humaare saath hain....
Rani looked passionately into his eyes and held his hand.
Rani: kunvarji hum humeshaa aapke saath hain........hum agar sharir se door bhi ho jaaye to kyaa man se humeshaa aapke saath rahenge.........
Yudi remember his conversation with rani in his dream............
Yudi: ji hum jaante hain jis tarahaa dudh se sakkar milti hain oos tarhaa aap humse jood gayi hain aur jis tarahaa...........murti aapse chhin sakti hain lekin aapki pujaa nahi oos tarahaa
Bewildered, rani looked at smiling yudi.....she did not understand why yudi was saying all this....like the way they have talked about it before............
Rani: ji haa oosi prakaar. lekin hume ab jaane dijiye agar kisi ne hume dekh liyaa ees tarahaa to fir sirf pujaa hi rah jaayegi humaare paas
Yudi affectionately: nahi ....hum aisa hurgiz nahi hone denge aapke paas aapki pujaa ke saath apki murti bhi humesaa rahengi ......aaj se humne tay kar diyaa hain hum dar dar ke nahi jiyenge........kyunki paheli baat dar aadmi ko kamjor banaataa hain aur hum kamjor nahi hain dusri baat humne aapse pyaar kiyaa hain koi paap nahi .....aur hum jitnaa pitaaji ko jaante hain hum yakin se kah sakte hain ki jab oonhe humaare pyaar ke baare main pataa chalegaa ...woh gussaa jaroor honge lekin humaari baat ko samaj ne ki koshish karenge..........kyunki aaj tak humne aisa koi kaam nahi kiyaa jis se ees parivaar ki maryaadaa ko koi aanch aaye....aur aage bhi hum ees baat kaa dhyaan rakhenge rani...ees parivaar ki bhalaayi eesi main hain ki bhoomi ees parivaar kaa hissa nahi bane kyunki ye hum bhi jaante hain aur aap bhi ki woh ees laayak nahi hain. ...........ab kuchh bhi ho jaaye......chaahe hume ye sab chhod naa pade yaa duniyaa se bagaavat karni pade.........hum nahi jaante hum sirf itnaa jaante hai ki..humaare saath maa kaa shirvaad hain woh khush hain humaare faisle se aur phir agar aapkaa saath aur sahyog humaare saath hain to hum saare jamaane se lad jaayenge..........hum apnaa ek nayaa aashiyaanaa banayenge jahaa sirf pyaar aur vishwaas kaa baseraa ho.........rani. kyaa aap humaaraa saath dengi na???????
Rani shook her head in affirmative: hum aapke har faisle main aapke saath hain kunvarji......kyunki aapse humaari duniyaa hain......aur hume vishvaas hain aap jo karenge woh uchit hi hoga.....ab aap jaake BR se mil lijiye do tin dino se aapko dekhaa nahi hain to woh bechen hain aur oonse baat karke bhi aapko sukun saa mahesoos hoga
Yudi: thik hain rani hum chalte hain aap apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa,,,,,,,,
Yudi went to meet her mom, he wanted to share his feelings with her.
Rani went in the other direction but suddenly she felt that in other side of corridor somebody was eavesdropping to their conversation. She felt suspicious she looked into that direction carefully but she did not find anybody there. She thought, might be she was worried that somebody might see them talking that's why she felt that way, she thought it might be her illusion.
In kitchen, bhanu was very delighted, seeing her blabbering in her delirium kali was surprised and worried.
Kali: buaa kyaa huva aap kyun aise akele main bada badaa rahi ho?
Bhanu (overjoyed): are kali ...meri pyaari kali ....ab dekhnaa main rani kaa kyaa hasra karti hoo.
Kali was bemused : rani....ab kyaa kiyaa oos ne aur kyaa khazaanaa lag gayaa aapke haath..muje bhi bataayiye naa buaji ...muje bhi jaan naa hain...
Bhanu's eyes darted hither thither and conspiringly she whispered in kali's ears.
Kali was flabbergasted by bhanu's plan: lekin bua ees main to khatraa hain...agar kisi ko pataa chal gayaa to humaari to saamat aaj aayegi...
Bhanu was very much confident about her plan: are kuchh nahi hogaa.......kyunki socho RBji ke kamare sirf rani ko hi jaane ki rajaamandi hain...aur ooske alaavaa koi bhi RB ji ke kamare main nahi jaataa...........to sidhi shak ki suyi rani ke upar hi aayegi
Kali was apprehensive though, but she was too stupid to think anything else, so she had always learnt to go ahead with whatever her bua said.
Evil light flashed in bhanu's eyes. She was blind with her vengeance.
suggestion: this is i want to share with all of you and want opinion from all of you so please think carefully and let me know .........and you opinion should not be baised .........i like frank opinion........ last night me and my husband had discussion..........as he read couple of my part two in very begining when he helped me for editing and last one he only over looked like half only but he think i am wasting your time .........as according to him my story is not moving it's very slow so far nothing has happened so i should stop writing ............but i told him that he had not read entirly that's why he is feeling and i am writing all moods and emotions one could experience and going slowly .........as i have covered many character......all with different charateristic and in situation......so he suggested me that ishould ask allof you...........whether i should hurry up and finish the story and save your valuable time or should keep going with the pace i am going right now.............so please tell me ......it's very important for me to know .....thanks
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