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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry friends i was late in updating this part as i was very busy...still i will be busy for one more week that it will be fun to be back on track...this part is bit long hope you will enjoy the way you have enjoyed till now
thanks and your valued comments give encouragement so please leave them for me 😳

Part :24

CR ordered bhanu to send drink for RB. Rani was preparing BR's medicine in kitchen. Bhanu being kaamchor as usual paas this order to rani. Rani was reluctant to go; she could not forget the incident took place night before. She was under impression that yudi will hate her sight. She had no other way out but to follow bhanu's instruction. bhanu had made her life miserable. On first place rani had so much to go through and now she knew that yudi recognized her. He must be upset that rani is barely a servant. How will she face him?
Dishearten she went to Yudi's room and she tried to knock the room. The door was not closed properly so it opened with slightest touch. The moment she entered the room she was agonized to see yudi in RB's arm.
Ek kampan si uske badan se gujar gayi. Uska dil jaise dhadkana bhul gayaa. Aur ooske haathon main pakdi huyi tray kaamp ne lagi. Tray mai rakhe huye glass hilne se khankhnahat hui jaie se woh ooske dil ki khalbali ko bayan kar rahe ho.
Yudi's face was red with embarrassment, 😕 not even in his dream he had thought that he would caught in this kind of awkward situation. He pushed RB and straitened himself. 😭
Woh pal oose aisa lagaa jaise dharti oose jaga dede to wahi oosme samaa jaye. Ranike ankho se ubharte dard ke dariya anshu ban ke chhalak rahaa thaa………. 😭

Before he said something RB, who was boiling with anger started blasting off rani. 🤢
RB:ye kya batmizi hai…..itni bhi tamiz nahihai tum me ki darwaje par dastak diye bina ander nahi aate………..
😡 😡
It was unbearable for yudi to see rani being insulted. He was horrified to think that what rani must be thinking about him. His mind had stopped working and he was standing there rooted to the ground. Rani was frantic with fear that yudi must be very angry with her. She did not even notice RB's anger.
RB: ab kya yahi khadi rahogi ki kuchh bologi bhi??????
Rani was fighting her tears back. Voice was not coming out of her mouth. 😭

RB: hum tumse kuchh kah rahe hai …yehi khadi rahogi ya tray rakh kar yaha se dafaa ho jaogi…kaise batmiz nokar hai yaha par..jara si bhi tamiz nahi hai oonme.

RB was crossing all the limits now and yudi had to intervene. he could not bear more than this.
Yudi: RB aap gussa na hoyie shayad galati se khul gayaa hoga. 😕
RB: galati se kunvarji aap inlogo ko jante nahi ye sab aise hi sir pe beth jaate hai agar thodi si dhil de de to. Dekhiye kaise yahi khadi hai besharam ki taraha…..
Now rani could not take more insult, she kept the tray and left the room without even looking at yudi. 😭 Yudi could understand her pain but unable to do anything right now. Destiny is keep turning table against him. However, he had wowed to turn everything in his favored. Right now time was not with him. 😭

Yudi: hume lagataa hai hume ab niche chalanaa chayhiye . sab hamaari raah dekh rahe honge.

He did not even wait for her reply and left the room at the same moment.RB had to follow him though half-heartedly.

Rani dashed in to her room. She was crying uncontrollably. It was beyond her imagination to see yudi in RB's arm. However it was the fact that yudi was going to marry RB. RB was yudi's wife to be and it was obvious whatever she saw. Some how she could not except this fact. "har gujartaa huva pal jaise ooska imtahaan le rahaa thaa"

Everybody was waiting for yudi and RB. In addition, panditji was also ready with the muharat. Yudi was on his toe "ab takdir kaun sa naya khel khelne wali hai ooske saath?"
CR instructed sukhiya to tell rani that she can bring BR. Yudi was troubled by the thought that how will he face rani. She must be shedding tear somewhere. It will be traumatized for her to be present while panditji will announce Yudi's wedding day. 😭



When rani entered the room with BR, yudi could not gather courage to lift his eyes and have a look. Rani was down cast. She was standing there without any emotions. Rani's presence was increasing Yudi's grief. "jaise ek hava ka joka aake oose apni zindagi se door kahi ooda kar le jaane waala ho. " chand ki upasthiti (presence) jaise sagar mai bharti lati hai aur chand ki unupasthiti(absence) jaise aut lati hai oosi taraha rani ka vajood yudi ki bhavnao ko valay de rahaa thaa.
Yudi's mind was only thinking about rani. He was least interested what panditji has to say. " aaj ooski jindagi kaa aham faisla hone waala thaa aur woh jaise patthar banke waha betha thaa"

Rani was aware about the fact that yudi's eyes were staring her and his stare was making her uncomfortable. Panditji's was calling yudi and he was lost in his thought.
Panditji: Rajaji humne kunvar Yudhisthir aur rajkumari bhoomi ki kundaliyon ka gahan abhyas kiya hai……aur hume dukh ho rahaa hai ki RB ki kundali ke anusar oonka Chandra abhi ashubh sthan per biraaj maan hai, aur oos par raahu ki boori chhaya pad rahi hai….itna hi nahi kunvar ka guru abhi kamjor hai isliye guru aur shani ka truti yog ho rahaa hai….

Rajaji: to aapka kahena ka matlab kya hai ? panditji khul ke bataye kya oonki kundali nahi milti hai ya aur koi problem hai??

Panditji apologised to rajaji in his thoughts........ Rajaji I have to lie you about their marriage muharat as their marriage can take place in this month itself but I am helpless. I have to follow someone's instructions otherwise my life will become miserable.

Panditkji: nahi Rajaji aisi chinta wali koi baat nahi hai . oonki kundali achhe se milti hai lekin abhi oonki kundali ke anusaar chhe(six) mahine tak oonki shaadi ka koi muharat nahi hai. Aur agar oonki shaadi chhe mahine pahele ki gayi to shaadi mai mushkil aa shakti hai ya shaadi toot ne ki bhi sambhavna hai…………

People present their had mix reaction hearing this news. Yudi, BR and saksh were happy to hear this but Rajaji, bhoomi, and CR were disappointed. Only rani was the person did not understand how to react upon hearing this news.
Panditji asked yudi hand to tie holy thread. He chanted some mantras and asked yudi to follow the instruction he asked him to do.
Panditji: aap man mai apne kul devta ka dhyan dhare ….aur ye sankal hum aapko de rahe hai ki aaj se thik chhe mahine baad aapki shaadi RB se hogi. To man mai apne kul devta ke saath apni hone waali patni ka naam le ke ye sankal kare ki jaab tak shaadi sampan nahi ho jaati aap ye dhaaga nahi nikalenge…. Ye aap ki raksha karegaa…aue saare graho ki jo buri dashaa hai oonse aapko bachaayega.

Yudi took their kuldevta's name and as wife to be instead of RB he took rani's name in his mind and did the sankalp that after exactly six months he will marry her. He prayed to god for His help. He was aware that there would be many tests on his way to fulfill his sankalp.

Yudi and RB stood up to take blessing from elder. While he was taking blessing from BR his eyes were stuck on rani who was standing behind BR expressionless.
BR ko lag rahaa thaa ki na jaane kyun lekin yudi ki ankhe bahut kuchh kah rahi hai. Ooske dil ki khushi ooske chahere pe chhlak rahi hai….lekin ek baat samaaj nahi aa rahi thi BR ko ki yudi ki nazare kahaa teeki hui hai.
RB took blessing and went to meet her parents and yudi stood there with BR.

Jab rani , yudi ke nazaro ke vaar sahen na kar payi to oosne nazare ootha ke ooske saamne dekhaa. Jaise nazaro ne nazaro se baate kar li ho….. rani ke aansoo apne aapko nahi rok paye oor rani ki nakaam koshish ke bavjood ek boond gir hi padi.
Jab ooski aansoo ki boond BR par giri to ajibsa ehsaas huva BRko…..pataa nahi jaise lagaa ke oonke saamne yudi ke ankho me jo sawaal ooth rahe hai ooska jawaab pichhe khadi rani ki ankho se tapak rahe hai……kya baat thi woh samaaj nahi paa rahi thi…..

Rani ki ankho se ghiri huyi boond ko yudi apne haatho me samaa lena chaahta thaa. Jaise woh boond chhip se milti to moti ban jaati, havaa se milti to gataa ban jati aur jami se milti to sona ban jaati…….

CR asked rani to take BR in her room….with heavy heart rani had to move from there but this whole incident has left BR thinking about yudi's confusion…….
Panditji took leave from Rajaji.
On CR 's suggestion yudi decided to take bhoomi out. yudi was hesitant to go alone with RB so he decided to take sakshum along with them. He had to talk with saksh about the incident took place today in his room. He had to find way to talk to rani before it's too late.
yudi: RB aap taiyar ho jayiye . hum bhi abhi ready hoke aate hai aur phir hum dinner pe jayenge.
RB: theek hain….


On way to his room yudi narrated everything to saksh and asked for help. Yudi asked saksh to come along with them to avoid unnecessary problem from RB.
Yudi and RB were ready to go. While going out they met nikki. Actually the fact was when nikki heard about yudi's marriage has been postponed she wanted to see how yudi must be feeling. According to her ,yudi must be happy and she wanted to confirm her suspicion about that. Once she confirm her doubt she had decided to discuss this matter with saksh, it was her belief that saksh is aware about whatever is happening in yudi's life. That's why she was coming towards yudi's room and on their way they met.

Nikki: bhaiya kaise hai aap? Badaa dukh huva ye jaan kar ki aap ki shaadi ab chhe mahine ke baad hogi. Aap ko bhi achha nahi laga hoga kyun?
Yudi was not ready for any inquiry regarding his marriage so he was dumbfounded by this question.
Yudi: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Shaadi to bhagvaan ki marzi se hoti hai. Aur bhagavaan ki marzi jab hogi tab hogi
Nikki: ha aur jis se honi hai oosise hogi……..

Yudi was stumped with this sudden statement. He could see strange expressions in nikki's eyes. Saksh could understand too what nikki was trying to tell. Nikki's statement had left both yudi and saksh surprised. For moment they forgot that RB was also with them but by god grace RB herself make them realized her presence there.

RB: koi baat nahi nikki shaadi to honi hi hai. Abhi nahi to chhe mahine baad . tab tak hum intzaar karenge. Badaa mushkil hai lekin kya kare karna to padega. Kyun kunvarji.

Yudi's expressions were telling that he was least interested to spend time with RB whether it is now or ever.

to change topic saksh asked nikki about the book he gave to her. Nikki did not get time to brows it. Nikki loves to read books. Being a widow she had many restrictions but the only thing give her happiness was books. Through books she can be in touch with world. "who apni berang zindagi mai pustako se rang bharne ki koshish karti.aur achhi achhi books lake saksh is khali zindagi mai kuchh sukho ki lahero ko lane ki koshish karataa."
RB: aapko books padhne ka bahoot shokh lagtaa hai?
Nikki: haa books se humaara samay achha pass ho jataa hai
RB: haa varna aap saara deen aur kya kar shakti hai….. Aap widhawa jo hai bahaar bhi nahi jaa shakti ….aur kuchh to nahi kar shakti to ye shokh achha hai….hume to books dekhke hi bukhaar aata hai…..

.RB's statement was very immature and painful for everyone over there except RB herself. She did not even realized by using such word she had hurt all very gravely. RB ne nikki ki dhukh ti huyi rag par paav rakh diya ho.
Yudi was getting angry and before yudi blast off RB , nikki tried to salvage situation.
Nikki: aap hamaari baat chhodiye , aapko bahaar jaane mai der ho rahi hai. Hum bhi chalte hai.
She left the place as she could not control her tears and nikki did not want that her brother see her tear and feel hurt.
Yudi was hurt but he had to respect her sister's emotions.

Yudi: chaliye….saksh aap bhi humare saath aarahe hai na?
Saksh at this point wanted to go and have a look at nikki. As he knew she must be in pain. Before he answered, RB herself gave one more proof about her immaturity and selfishness.
RB: kunvarji hume lagaa hum akele jaa rahe hai. Phir aap saksh ko kyun saath aane ko kah rahe hai. Who humaare saath aakar kya karenge.
Yudi: woh to hum… but before he finished his sentence..
RB: nahi hum kuchh sunanaa nahi chaahte hum akele jaa rahe hai

Saksh: kunvarji ,RB theek kah rahihai aur hume bhi baut jaroori kaam hai. Who aap ki ek bahuut hi important client ke saath meeting fix karni hai na.
Yudi understood what saksh was telling about. Saksh was planning something about yudi's meeting with rani so yudi just gave him nod.

In the car

RB: aap har waqt saksh ko kyun apne saath rakhte hai?
Yudi was irritated : who humaare dost hai…
RB: dost?? Who to sirf ek naukar ke bete hai ..aur naukaro ke saath koi dosti nahi kartaa…
Yudi: aisi baat nahi hai RB aur aapko bhi aisa nahi sochna chahiye saksh ke baare mai…
RB: kunvarji dosti baraabar waalo mai hoti hai…..hume ye aapka saksh ke saath itna waqt bitaana pasand nahi hai

Yudi disregarded her thought about saksh. He knew that it is going to be very unpleasant time with RB tonight. With her selfish and dominating behavior RB has given one more proof that she was not the girl yudi want to spend time with….as she was not even a good human being so how can it be possible that she will become best life partner.

when after dinner yudi reached home saksh was waiting for him though his face was telling that the news he had for yudi ,was not that promising.

Yudi: saksh pataa chalaa rani kaha hai ? Hum oonse abhi milna chahte hai?
Saksh: aap thak gaye hai aap so jayiye mulakaat kal ho joyegi.
Yudi: kya baat hai saksh aap humse kuchh chhoopane ki koshish kar rahe hai..
Saksh (hesitantly): nahi ye baat nahi hai…par woh hum aap ko lekar pareshaan the…aapka poora deen bada hectic thaa isliye..
Yudi: saksh please ,jo hai woh aap bataa de humse aur intazaar nahi hot a hai ab…ees pal ko jine ke liye hum kitni rato se beechen rahe hai..
Saksh: to phir do raat aur bechen rahena padegaa?
Yudi: matlab???
Saksh: matlab ye ki …har do mahine me aukaro ko do din ki chhooti milti hai apne ghar jane ki..aur ..

Yudi was desperate to hear that and : aur???
Saksh: aaj hi dopaher ko jub aap bahaar gaye takriban oosi waqt who apne gaanv chali gay ..ab who parso jub yahaan se driver oohe lene jayegaa tab waapas aayegi…
Yudi did not even utter a single word and left to his room …dejected but that is the rule of this world"raat ke baad subhaa,dukh ke baad sukh,patzad ke baad bahaar aati hi hai ..aur who oos samay jyadaa suhavani lagati hai…."

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi Beena kam che..hu pachi comment karish..
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hoo majamaa chhoo tu kem chhe ....ghani miss kari mai tane....
ane comments ni utavar nathi take your time dear your presence is more important
welcome back 😳
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beena me sirf ye weedend ke liye hi aayu hu..lekin i think maybe i will come back..
i miss all my RKAB family..
ASA i came forums i visit your and prags post..
i miss ypurs FFS..
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beena abhi rani ek sadme se bahar nahi aayi tu usko dusra sadma deti ho..RB ko kuch karo..kya bolti hai vo to malum nahi hai..nikki ka dil tod diya..shak go with nikki..rani do din ke liye ghar chali gay ab yudi do din tak kya karega..yudi ko gauv bhej do..BR ko kuch samz me aa raha hai..i hope wo yudi ko help kare..
waiting for next part..
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askn thanks yaar i am very happy and yesterday when i saw you online i was delighted keeps coming whenever you have time we will be very happy

and payal yudi ka dard dekha abhi thodi rani kp soch bhi dekhani padegi aur "judai na din jay chhe and lai jase ae mujne milan sudhi" so lets rani empty her heart than she will have all happiness
and BR is going to be very key character as long as i know to unite yura
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Hey beena update kar diya ..ok read karke batungi ki kessa laga ..actully thorda busy hoon

Bye😳

Manpreet

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ok n o problem mannu mai bhi bahut busy hoo ab kal se thoda time milega
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hi dear friends i want to dedicat this part to my dear mom . my mom who has spent her whole life only for one mission ,take care of us. when i was came to singapore 10 years before than i realized how much importance she has in my life. as whatever is easily available we always take it for granted. i hope i did not bored you by this chapter

PS : please do comment after this chapter whoever read it . i will appreciat it atleast press thank you button if you like this chapter

Part :25

Mother this is the only word that is complete in itself. It does not need any definition. so far nobody could define it.

Jab ek ladaki janam leti hai to woh ek kali hoti hai. Jab woh patni banati hai tab woh khilke phool banti hai lakin jab woh maa banti hai tabhi jake ek sampurna aurtavya ko prapt karti hai .
bhagvan ne jab duniya banai tab woh apni kalpana ko saakar dekhke bahut hi trupt huve. Lekin jab duniya ko sambhaal ne kaa samay aaya to bhagvaan ne bhi hathiyaar daal diye. Aur tab jaake oosne maa ka nirmaan kiya.aur maa ko banaake woh atitrupt huve.
Woh khud har jagah nahi pahonch paye isleye apne pratinidhi ke roop main oosne maa ka nirman kiya , unhonein maa ko dharti par bhej diya aur maa ke samparna ke samne ooska bhi sar juk gayaa .
Maa jisko apne bacche ko samaj ne ke liye koi bhaasa yaa jubaan ki jarurat nahi hoti .jab bachha uski kokh main hotaa hain tabse ooske chahelpahel se pahec haati hain ki ooske bacche ki kya jarurat hai. Woh sare dard ko sahan karne ke baad jab apne bacche ko janam dati hai to apne bacche ke saath maa ka bhi nayaa janam hota hai .bacche ke rone se woh samaj jaati hai ki woh kis wajah se roh raha hai . woh bhukha hai , bimar hai , sone wala hai . bacchaa bol bhi nahi pata phirbhi uske maa tak ooska sandesha pahonch hi jaata hai .
woh poori zindagi bacche ki chinta main vyatit kar deti hai . baccha paas ho ya door ma ka man ooske bacche ke paas hota hai .
maa ka dil mom sa pigalta hai jab ooska baccha dard main hota hai , aur wohi dhal banta hai jab woh apne bacche ki raksha karta hai , aur wohi shila banta hai jab duniya ki buraiyo ko apne bacche se door rakhne ki koshish karti hai.
Saari upmaaye bhi kam pad jaati hai jab maa ka varnan aata hai…..woh dharti ki tarah hoti hai jo thandi, garmi aur baarish ko sahan karne ke baad bhi apne bachhe ka poshan karti hai.
Woh ek maali ki taraha hoti hai jo phool jaise apne bachho ke jatan ki chinta mai hi sadey vyast raheti hai.
Woh gane vruksh (tree) ki tarah hoti hai jo har mushkil sah kar bhi apne bacho ko apni chhanv mai rakhti hai.
Kahete hai put shayad kaput ho shakta hai lekin maata kumaata nahi ho shakti .
Maa ka varnan karne ke liye to ved bhi kam pad jate hai toh hum toh kya chij hai . aaj aisi hi apni maa se milne ke liye rani do mahino ke baad apne gaanv ja rahi thi.
Rani ko maloom tha ki ooske chahere ki ek chinta ki lakir ooski maa ko ooske saare dard ka ahevaal de degi. Aur rani nahi chaahti thi ki ooski maa ko ooske dard ka jara sa bhi ahesaas ho.
Apne ghar ki disha mai jaa rahi gaadi mai bethe huve rani oos deen ke bare mai soch rahi thi jis deen woh aisi kisi ghaadi mai beth kar mahal gayi thi. Kitni khush thi woh . kitni oomango se bhari huvi woh apne pitaji aur apne khud ke sapne ko sakaar karne ki chah thi. Lekin ees do mahino mai oosne zindagi ke kitne rang dekhe the.
Zindagi ke athaara(eighteen) saal apni maa ke anchal mai kitne hansi kushi guzar gaye. aur pichhale do mahino mai oosne zindagi ki kitni kadavi sachchaayi ka anubhav kiya. Zindagi kaa asali roop oosne apni saloni duniya se bahaar jaake dekha. Aur itna daraavnaa roop dekhke oose maayusi ke alaavaa kuchh na mila.

Zindagi ke kitne pahelu ooske saamne aaye. Dhoka, farefi, apmaan. Kya kuchh nahi oosne sahaa.
aur Pahele pyar ka mitha ahesaas bhi oosne eesi do mahino mai anubhav kiya. Aur pyar mai dil toot ne ka ahesaas bhi oose mila.

Ab woh apni maa ke paas jake ooski god mai sar rakh ke apne saare dookh dard ko apne se door kar denaa chaahti thi. Aur eesi do dino mai woh apni pichhli zindagi ko pichhe chhod kar ek naye sire se apni zindagi shuroo karna chaahti thi.
Oosne tey kar deeya thaa ki jab woh waapas mahal jaayegi tab woh apnaa saara dhyan BR ki sevaa me lagaa kar kunvarji ki zindagi savaar ne ki hi koshish karegi.
Aur jaise hi apne ghar ko nazdik aate dekh woh apne aap ko sambhalne ki koshish karne lagi. Woh ghar jahaa par rahene waala har koi ooske dil ke karib thaa apnaa thaa. Aur ees hakikat kaa oose ahesaas huva jab woh oon sab se door huyi……..
Nayi zindagi ki sharuat ki tamnaa karte huve oosne apne ghar ke saamne rooki huyi ghadi se ootar kar apne ghar ke taraf prayaan kiya……………..
Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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beena i am 😭 😭 .. awsome part..everyday i say meri mom mere sathe hai to mujhe sabhali hai...

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