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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice. both parts were fantastic i could not wait for next part
and the way you have describe their feeling is very good
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Posted: 17 years ago
just loved the part it was great
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks pp and thanks irika for liking both part as i have taken the longest time for this part only as i did many re writing , re composing and re editing for those two part so i am happy that my hard work paid of

thanks all of you
i will post next part may be tomorrow as this will lead to story now
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Posted: 17 years ago
PS: this part is more like concret part as it will make base for coming story so only have more details and indications



Part : 29


Rani and yudi was ready to go back to palace. Both seems very happy, after so many days they have got their happiness. Yudi opened front door for rani and indicate her to sit.

Rani now took her deserved place next to yudi 😳 , that day she was sitting next to yudi but that time that place was not belonged to her. But today she was on top of the world that she was on her desired place. 😳
yudi was also unable to hide his happiness. He was looking at rani from corner of his eye.

Yudi: aap andaaza nahi lagaa shakti hum aaj kitne khush hai…
Rani was looking at him mesmerizing.
Yudi: kya aap bhi khush hain..?

She just nodded her head in affirmative. She was too shy to give words to her feelings 😳 😳 . Yudi kept his hand on rani's hand 😳 and while changing gear of the car also he did not let it go. 😉

Yudi: hum aap kaa haath ab ek pal ke liye nahi chhod naa chaahte. Hume dar lagtaa hai ki shaayad aap phir se humari nazore se ozal na ho jaaye…..kyunki gum ho jaanaa aapki aadat ban gayi hain. 😆 😆

Both laughed on this statement as it was very true. Since so many days that had been happening between both of them.

Yudi: aap ko dhundh ne ke liye humne aur sakshum ne kitni mahenat ki hain aap ko maloom hain….??? 😃
Rani: sakshumji bhi ? 😳
Yudi: han oonhe bhi maloom hai ki hum aap ko kitna pyaar karte hain .aur ek wohi to hain jinho ne humare dard bhare dinome humaara saath diya hain. Warnaa hum kabke toot chuke hote. 😳 😳

Rani: to kya mahenat ki aap ne hume dhoondh ne main?

Yudi narrated all the drama he and sakash did to bring forward rani's identity. Rani was amaze to hear that, all those fall and list were actually part of drama and she was astonished to hear that yudi had taken so much trouble to find her. 😳 😳

Yudi: aap bahut kam baat karti hain …?
rani: aap baat kar rahe hain to hum sun rahe hai. agar ek baat karne waala ho to dusraa sun ne waalaa to chaahiye warnaa dono baat karenge to phir sunegaa kaun?? 😳 😳
Yudi: aap ki baat bahut pyari aur samajdaari bhari hoti hain…
Rani: kunvarji…..
Yudi: kahiye koi baat hai jo aapko pareshaan kar rahi hain?
Rani: haan …woh hum soch rahe the ki…
😕
Yudi: kahiye jijkiye mat…hum chaahte hai ki aaj ke baad aap ko humse jo bhi kahenaa hai dil khol kar kahiye dare bina. Kyunki hum maante hain ki koi bhi rishte main agar khula pan na ho , vishwas na ho to woh rishta jyaada tiktaa nahi….. 😳
Rani: woh hum ye kah rahe the ki agar aap ees taraha humaare saath mahel aaye to phir mushkil ho jaayegi. Humaara mutlab hai ki agar kisi ne dikh liyaa to phir…
😳

Yudi: gabharaayiye nahi ..hum aapki chinta samjate hain . eesliye humne eeska bhi intzaam kar diyaa hain…thodi door par sakshum driver ke saath humaara intzaar kar rahe hain. Hum wahaa se saksh ke saath doosri gaadi main chale jaayenge aur aap eesi gaadi main driver ke saath mahel chale jaayiyega …hum thoda kaam niptaa kar mahel aayenge. Aur han woh driver humaare bharose kaa hain to chinta mat kijiyegaa 😆 😆

Telling that yudi let go her hand, because at corner of the road he can see his car and saksh waiting for him. He reduced the speed of car and with heavy heart …

Yudi: rani ab kuchh bhi kar ke hume roz miliyegaa….ab hum aapko ek bhi deen dekhe bina ji nahi paayenge… 😳

Rani looked at yudi, nodded her head, and assured him to do so. 😳 😳

Yudi went to his car and rani change her sit to back sit and they went ahead on their own path. From this point their path were different but now nothing can separate their heart. In car yudi narrated everything to saksh and saksh was also felt disgusted towards RB 😡 . Saksh was happy for yudi that at least his friend had got his true love 😳 and he was optimistic about his luck too, that one day he will also get his love, nikki 😳 .

Rani reach palace and while getting down from the car she saw that envelope, (the servant in village gave to driver (yudi) to paas it to CR. However rani was unaware about this fact.) She was wondering about that envelop as who does it belong to? She realized that might be it was yudi's some important papers.

Rani: driverji..hume lagtaa hain ki kunvarji ye apne kaam kaa ye kavar yaha bhool gaye hain aap jab woh waapas aaye tab oonhe de dijiyegaa.
Driver: ji hum oonhe de denge.

Yudi was back from office and resting in his room when that driver come to know that yudi is back he thought to return that envelope to yudi, but when that driver was going up stair sukhiya met him on his way.

Sukhiya: aap kahaa jaa rahe hain?
Driver: woh ye kunvarji ko ye kavar denaa thaa woh gaadi main bhool gaye the.
Sukhiya: aap hume de dijiye hum oonhe pahonchaa denge.

Driver hand over it to sukhiyaji and went out. At the same time CR also came from other side.

CR: sukhiyaji woh rani aa gayi?
Sukh: han shaayad aa gayi hogi! Kyun chhoti rani sahibaji kuchh kaam hain hum kisi ko bhej kar puchhwaale?
CR: nahi hume rani se kaam nahi hain. Lekin oosko jo driver lene gayaa thaa ooske saath humaara koi kavar gaanv se aane walaa hain. Aur hum nahi chaahte woh kavar kisi ke haath nahi aana chaahiye. Isliye aap khud jaa ke oos driver ko dekh aayiye aur agar woh kavar mil jaaye hume ek gante main woh puraane kamare main miliye.

When CR left the room sukhiya was looking at that seal packed envelope with suspicion. So far he knew that the driver, who handed over him the envelop, was the same one who went to pick up rani. Sukh turned that enveloped two three times to look for some clues and the matter puzzling him was why that driver told him that yudi forgotten it in the car as yudi usually go with suksh in his own car not with driver, so there was something, that was amiss.

In br's room rani was feeding BR and from rani's face anybody can say that she was very happy. At same moment nikki enter the BR's room. Actually she came to check upon her mom because she was under impression that rani was still not back from village. That was the reason she came to see weather her mom has taken food or not. If rani is around nikki did not have to worry about anything, the day rani had come , rani was taking very good care of BR and it was visible that BR's health was also improving.

Nikki: are, rani aap aa gayi?
Rani: haa hum thodi der pahele hi aaye…
Nikki: aur aake kaam par bhi lag gayi
Rani: haan warna kya karte, BR ka khane ka waqt bhi ho gayaa thaa.
Nikki: haa aapko humari maataa ka kitna khyal hain. To phir kahiye kaisaa rahaa aapka safar aur kaise hai sab aapke ghar main.
Rani: sab bahut achhe hain. Aur humaara safar bahut badhiya rahaa.

Rani's journey was excellent. When she left for village it was totally different scenario but when she came back suddenly her life had changed. The moment she remembered her last journey from village to palace she unknowingly blushed and her face was crimson with glow. She could not hid this feeling of her from nikki's eyes and suddenly nikki , who was talking with rani casually could not understand the reason behind the spark in rani's eyes and glow on rani's face. Nikki was thinking that something was not right why rani was very happy today. Usually rani's face was very dull or always in deep thought but today something was there. Nikki was again in her finding the truth mode as she was eager to know the reason behind rani's change.

Nikki: kya baat hain rani tum bahut khoosh lag rahi ho.
Rani (paused for a while and tried to hide her emotion): ha woh hum wahaa sab se mil kar aa rahe hain naa ees liye… bahut deeno ko baad oonhe mile….
Nikki: kise mile ???
Rani: humare parivaar ko aur kise??

Rani was puzzled why nikki is asking her all questions and what is she trying to ask her?

Nikki: nahi hum aapke parivaar ki hi baat kar rahe hain… lekin ek baat humare samaj main nahi aa rahi hain ki agar hum aap ki jagah par hote to jab hum parivaar se milne jaate tab bahut khoosh hote lekin….jab oonko chhod kar aate to bahut dookhi hote…..shaayad eesi wajah se hum aap ko ye sab pooch rahe hai….hume galat mat samajiyegaa

Now rani was more careful because nikki's argument had valid point so rani decided to control over her feelings because right now nikki can sense that rani's behavior was strange so any body can sense the same. These things can create problem and many questions would arise, so rani decided to be very conscious.

Rani: haa hum dookhi to bahut huve oonko chhod kar aate waqt lekin phir hume maa ne samjaayaa ki agar hum dookhi honge to oonke bhi dil ko thes lagegi …. So hum ne apne aap ko sambhaal liya..

Nikki could understand that rani was trying hard to control situation so she also did not pull the matter long as BR was listening their conversation and nikki did not want to let her mother think something wrong.

Nikki: haa ye aapki maataa ji ne theek kahaa aur hum sab hain na yaahaa aapke saath phir dookhi hone ki kya jaroorat …achhaa ab aap yaha hain to hum chalte hain hume bhi kuchh jaroori kaam hain…

Nikki left BR's room to check upon her brother as she could not be in peace till she find out the answers those were bothering her. She was sure that yudi must be in very light and cheerful mood tonight if her suspicion is right. Since so many days she had been noticing that her brother was in deep thoughts and sad, something was there that was bothering yudi. That was the reason nikki did not want to waste single second and wanted to have look at her brother too.


Someone knocked on yudi's door, yudi was busy on his laptop doing his some office work so he just ordered that person to enter the room. That person was sukhiya who was there to pass that envelop to yudi. Seeing envelop yudi remember that he is supposed to give this to CR, but he himself cannot give this to her otherwise she would doubt him that how this envelop landed with him. So yudi asked sukh to live that envelop on the corner of the table. As soon as sukh left the room yudi called saksh to come to his room and told him about that envelop. Yudi asked saksh to come and collect that envelop and hand over to that driver so that driver can pass it to CR so nobody could suspect yudi.

While giving that envelop to saksh it slipped from yudi 's hand and all the document inside came out. Yudi picked them up and he was surprised to see those were some bank statement, and some bank account's important document. However, he could see more or see the person on whose name that account was, nikki enter the room. So without checking anything yudi hurriedly gave those papers to saksh and ask him to finish task as soon as possible.

Nikki: kaise hain bhaiya? Bahut busy lag rahe ho…
Yudi: nahi bas thoda saa kaam pending thaa wohi hum khatam kar rahe the.
Nikki: oh agar aap busy hain to hum thodi der ke baad aayenge….
Yudi: nahi aisa kuchh nahi hum sab kuchh rakh hi rahe hain kahiye kyaa ho rahaa hain aapki jindagi main….

Nikki: humari zindagi main to khaas kuchh nahi ho rahaa lekin aap ki zindagi main lagataa hain bahut kuchh ho rahaa hain

Yudi was keeping all her documents and arranging all paper work and closing his computer so basically he was distracted while he was talking to nikki.

Yudi: nahi kya ho rahaa hain sab kuchh normal hi hain…
Nikki: aap ke chahere so to lagtaa hain aap bahut khush hain kuchh baat jaroor hain….jaise kuchh bahut deenose khoyi huyi chiz aapko mil naa gayi hon.

"nikki ne aise hi andhere me ek tir chalaake dekhaa"

Yudi: haa aisa hi samaj lo.
Nikki: achha kya khoya thaa aur kya mila?
Yudi: haa woh mil gayi na hume…(suddenly he realized that he was about to blurt out)

Nikki: kaun mil gayi??
Yudi: woh woh jise hum dhundh rahe the naa(he was trying to find excuse and nikki can sense that )
Nikki: ha wahi to hum puchh rahe hain kya dhundh rahe the aap?

Yudi: haan jamin,……han jamin woh humaaraa nayaa project shuru ho rahaa hai na ooske liye hum jamin dhundh rahe the oosiko dekh ne hum gaye the subahaa se sakshum ke saath…..aaj jaake humari talaash khatam huyi…hum eesi liye bahut khush hai…

(yudi was basically telling half truth but nikki could not figure out that weather yudi was talking about land or something else. Yudi was smart enough to cover fact at last moment and salvage situation, but he was under estimating her sister who was determined to find truth and she had decided to bring rani and yudi face to face and watch their activity to get more proof for her suspicion)

That envelop had reached again to sukhiya's hand and he was going to meet CR in old room. He reached there and hand over that seal packed envelop to CR, who was desperately waiting for that envelop.

CR: aap nahi jaante hum subhaa se is kavar ka intzaar kar rahe the….aapko to maloom hi hai har mahine ye gaanv se aataa hai humare liye…..aur hume chinta raheti hai ki kisi ke haath naa lag jaaye….

Sukh: puchh naa to nahi chaahiye lekin apne aapko rok nahi paa rahe hain aisa kya hin ees ke under jo aap ko har mahine eeska intzaar rahetaa hain.
CR: ye jaan ne ki aap ko jaroorat nahi hain….lekin aaj hum bahoot khush hai ees liye ek baat aapko bataate hai ….ki bahut thode deenomain mahel main ek badaa tufaan aane waalaa hain….hum aisa kuchh karne waale hain jis se kunvar Yudhisthir ki saari duniya titat bitar ho jaayegi……rani ko saamne rakh kar hum ne jo khel shooru kiya hain oosko hum aage badhaane waale hain…..

Sukhiya: kya karne waale hain aap CRji.
CR: bas dekhte jaao samay aane par sab pataa chal hi jaayegaa…….


(she was too proud about her game unaware about the fact that yudi and rani had already met each other. She wanted them to fall in love and the same situation had happen but she was still under impression that yudi is unaware about rani's identity and she will reveal it. When someone feel too proud about his or her game and start walking looking high with pride they forgot to see "khadda" in front and eventually they fall to their own death)
Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it is really very nice part and i love the way kunvar is taking care of rani.
one thing did not understand about that envelop it was sealed packed than how can those papers came out and again it was sealed when reached to CR is it some secret or indication 😕

and nikki seems in james bond avatar to find truth about yura. lets she how she will find it out....please post new part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
beena nice part..i read more than two times..well written..rani kaise everyday see yudi..nikki ko jasoos banegi kya..
env. kya chakkar hai..CR shabit kya karna chahti hai..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
payal and pp

envelop ka chakkar bada gahera hain.....woh ab dhire dhire khulegaa.....
budhhu yudi jo dekhna tha woh wapa bhej diyaa.....saksh ke haatho kher kuchh aur rashta nikalungi 😆 😆

haa aur ye nikki ab dhundhkar hi rahegi lekin sawaal ye hai ki woh accept kar paayegi ees riste ko 😕

aur CR rani ko y 😕 di ki zindagi mai lanaa chaahti thi aur wahi ho gayaa....lekin kuchh aur khel kudrat ooske saath khel rahihai woh oos se unjaan hain 😉

ab ye to mushkil hai ki rani yudi se har roz mile 😉 😉 ab kuchh to karnaa padegaa in dono premio ke liye 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
kab karegi post karegi do premi ka milan ki ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
by tonight i will post before milan one more test they have to pass or may be some one's ploy will become their milan 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow is the only word to describe this post yaar. Too good. 👏 👏

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