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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi

Even i was surprised as it was something like i mentioned in anvi's FF.
....rani hugs him and cries and refuses to release him when he tries to separate her....and yudi all happy, smiling'hugs her tight'
So finally the conclusion is that we should keep pouring our wishes in the forum (as always suggested by Anvi), even if one or two are taken we will be satisfied.

yes we have to keep writing the way we want to see our yura...their relations and future track and as if they lift only few things from our idea we will float in sky very high............
audiance power if they really want people to enjoy and one day they will realise and may be start copying everything from all the ideas here in this forum all fans have written about...........they are really very inspiring
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi

So Bhanu is upto another dangerous plan which, no doubt, is going to hurt only her'..boori nazar waale tera munh kaala'...aur gadhe pe bitha ke ooski baarat ko nikaalaa😆😆😆

and I think, the other day also she was the one who saw yura in corridor. Certainly she will be planning something else also to degrade Rani'lets see what happens'

Today RS's happiness has given me hopes. Now I don't have any worries regarding yura's fate. They certainly have a bright future together. When only improvement in BR's health can make RS so happy that he is ready to grant any wish to yudi, just imagine what would happen when she will be completely alright. So now yura would have got the clue that their future lies in the recovery of BR. There are two benefits of that, one BR herself will come forward in support of yura and second, RS's joy would know no bounds so he will literally grant any wish to yudi.

their future indeed depend on BR's recovery and that will be big turn of events.......but that is not that easy especially CR is around and she is already very frustrated....and BR will be yura's greatest strength in future but which way that is still secret

Beena I am happy that in your FF Rani's character has more depth and is getting more mature day by day. Yudi's efforts to uplift Rani's status are really appreciating. First her admission in college and now computer, how caring. If given a chance he will, no doubt, bring stars for her, but that's not going to help her in long run. He not only wants to give rani the materialistic happiness but he is trying to let her gain the real pleasure, which will come only when she is determined, strong, educated and self-esteemed. His frustration was well understandable that in the shade of Nikki he is going to benefit Rani. But his intentions are not bad. In order to get a gain for Rani he is unknowingly helping Nikki also. And at the end it will be Rani who would do something really worthy for Nikki. One positive gesture will lead to another.

i always believe in love only give love physically or mentaly is not important one should give their better half..space and invironment where as individual they grow also.........though they are united and their life is always in togetherness but they have their own personality also that make them unique from each other....and no daubt as couple but as individual also you should progress ..........and if this progress take place with mutual understanding than your relation actually bloom
............kisi paude ko panpne ke liye ...khad, pani, prakash ke saath khuli hava aur dekhbhal ki bhi jaroorat hoti hain........
and yes rani if stay in nikki's company more will able to understand her agony and will definatly try for nikki

CR and RB's frustration was worth watching and Kali was hilarious as usual ' bua ab kyaa hoga muje to abhi se ye dikh rahaa hain ki rani ko dhakke maar ke mahal se nikaal diyaa jaayegaa bua kitnaa mazaa aayegaa.

😆aaahaaa

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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena, when are you planning to update? Not rushing you, just asking...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
dear you are not rushing me but me rushing myself actually i typed nearly 5 to 6 paqges and my danm word game me problem and locked everything than got in computer language anyway i had to retype everything and you know it is difficult to rewind thoughts........
but tomorrow i will post half the thing....as i don't want to wait long
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part: 63

RB stormed into the bathroom and slammed the door with loud bang.

When he threw her purse on bed, the snake, which was coiled in the corner peacefully, stirred in its place and started to slide. However, it was not huge snake but it was poisonous. It hissed and slid near purse and suddenly slid into the purse. Snake settled itself in purse comfortably.

Suddenly somebody knocked on RB's room door. RB came out of the bathroom and ordered that person to come in.

Sukhiya was on door with covered tray. Actually he had brought food for RB as per CR's instruction. He covered food tray so every think that he was delivering prayer's stuff to RB.

Sukhiya: CRji ne aapke liye khana bhejaa hain.

RB (frown): yaha rakho aur dafa ho jaao.

Sukhiya: CRji ne kaha hain ki khaane ke baad aaraam kar lijiye aur phir do paher ke khaane ke samay par BRji ke kamare main jaayiyegaa.

RB: theek hain hum chale jaayenge aur kuchh?......kyaa mushibat hain yahaa par………koi shaanti se jine nahi detaa….order pe order milte hain yaha…….

Sukhiya left RB's room. He was disgusted by RB's behaviour but he had no way out but to pretend in front of CR that he was CR's loyal person……..if it would have been in his power he would had let everyone know how RB was in pretence of prayer eating breakfast in her room.

Kali and bhanu was impatiently waiting for RB's scream. However, when after long time they did not hear kali was very anxious.

Kali: buaa….ye RB kyun chillaa nahi rahi hain?

Bhanu: hum bhi heraan hain…..ye saamp gayaa kahaa

Kali: bua hume lagtaa hain RB ne ki saamp ko kaat liyaa hogaa..woh itni jaherili hain ki agar saamp ko kaant legi to saamp bhi mar jaayegaa

Bhanu: kali chup kar.kisi ne sun liyaa to humaari kher nahi..\

Kali: bua hume bhukh lagi hain.ab humse yahaa khadaa nahi rahaa jaataa

Bhanu: theek hain abhi hum yahaa se chalet hain kyunki yaha aise khade rahenge to kisi ko shak ho jaayegaa.

In the car seeing yudi very happy, Saksh asked the reason of his happiness.

Yudi: saksh…..aaj hum kyaa bataaye hume lagtaa hain aaj to suraj oolti dishaa se uday huva hain…….

Saksh : are haaa aapko bhi yahi lagtaa hain…..hume bhi yahi lagaa……….

Yudi was confused and looked at saksh.

Saksh: baat ye hain ki jab hum har subhaa ko uthate hain to suryaa humaare aankho ke saamne se uday hota hain lekin aaj aisa nahi huva . jab hum uthe to surya humaare pichhe se uday huva……..(saksh was smiling all the while)…..phir hume pataa chalaa raat ko hum ulti disha main so gaye the

Yudi and saksh both laugh heartily on saksh's joke and saksh was happy to see yudi in light mood.

Yudi: aap bhi naa saksh…….achhaa mazaak bahut ho gayaa hume aapse madad chaahiye…….

Saksh: humne phele bhi kaha hain kunvarji aapki sevaa main ye bandaa humesha haajir hain……kabhi bhi humne aapko shikaayat kaa mauka diya hain?

Yudi: nahi eesi liye hume aap par pura bharosaa hain…….

Than yudi narrated him everything that happen in dining hall and asked him to arrange for computer and internet service today itself because yudi had very important meeting to attend with client and then he had to go to project sight.

Saksh: theek hain kunvarji …..aapkaa kaam ho jaayegaa……hum in sabkaa intazaam karke aapko sight par milte hain……aur ek baat kahe

Yudi: haa kahiye………

Saksh: aapne nikkiji ko bhi computer shikhaane kaa nirnay kiyaa hain woh bahut hi umdaa hain kyunki woh kabhi batlaati nahi lekin bahut hi akelaa mahesoos karti hogi apne aapko

Yudi did not answer but just nod in affirmative. Yudi had regretted that he could not do anything for his sister but he was happy now he had chance to bring little difference in his sister's life.

During lunch time when RB did not come in hall, CR understood that she might have fallen sleep so CR decided to go to RB's room and call her by herself.

RB was resting in her room; oblivious to the fact that poisonous snake was resting in her purse.

Hearing knock, RB woke up from her sleep.

CR(after entering RB's room): kyaa kar rahi thee aap? Humne aako BR ke kamare main jaane ke liye kahaa thaa naa?

RB still rubbing her eyes: ji haa lekin humaari aankh lag gayi…

CR: ab jaldi kijiye….warnaa deri ho jaayegi

RB: ab deri kyaa ho jaayegi…BAdi maa thodi naa apne kamare se kahi bahaar jaayegi….

CR was frustrated with RB's irresponsible approach towards everything.

CR: RB hum chaahte hain aap BR ko apne haatho se khaanaa khilaaye ……aur aap ees tarhaa aaraam farmaati rahi to rani unhe khaanaa khilaa chuki hongi..phir jab rajaji rani ki taarif kare to gusaa mat hoyiyegaa…

Rani ke naam kaa uchaaran bhi jaisi RB ke tan aur man main aag lagaa detaa thaa. Aur oonkaa man kadvaahat se bhar detaa thaa. Ye baat CR bhali bhaati jaan chuki thee eesi wajah se oonhe maloom thaa ki kis chaabuk se ye godi sidhi raah par chalti hain………aur ab CR wahi eestmaal kar rahi thee.

RB: theek hain hum chaalte hain …..chaliye

When RB took her purse she felt it little bit heavy but because CR was in hurry RB did not check her purse and went ahead with CR ignorant with the fact that she was carrying death weapon with her.

The moment they enter BR's room, Rani was about to serve BR her food. Rani was puzzled by CR and RB,s sudden visit but she pretend to be normal.

CR: rani…..aaj BR ko khana RB apne haatho se khilaanaa chahati hain…….aap jaake apnaa aur kuchh kaam kijiye…..aur jab BR kaa khaanaa ho jaaye tab ye tray yaha se le jaayiyegaa.

CR jaanati thi ki agar rani yaha rahi to RB kaa man ookhda ookhdaa rahe gaa aur who gusse main kuchh bhi galati kar sakti the …aur CR apni manzil ko pane ke raste main koi bhi rukaavate nahi chaahti thee……

In confusion rani looked at BR, who nod her to follow the instructions.

When rani went out of the room CR also excuse that she had to attend some important work so she left RB and BR alone in the room.

RB ke gusse ki koi sima nahi thee …..sochaa thaa ees raaj mahel aaraam se rahegi lakin …ab lagtaa hain woh naukrani ban gayi hain aur rani .maharani ……apne ees vichaar se jaise Rb ke gusse main ghi pad gayaa ho…lekin koi chaaraa nahi thaa ooske paas sivaayi Cr ke haatho ki kathputali bane rahene ke..apne kwaab jo pure karne the …ees raj mahal ki rani banane ke….kyaa kyaa karvaate hain ye khwaab bhi.soch ne samaj ne ki budhhi bhi bhrast kar dete hain ye khuli aankho se dikh ne waale khwaab…………

RB was too lost in her thoughts…she did not realise that snake started to slid out from her purse which she kept on opposite table. BR did not notice either.

Rani was approaching towards BR's room to collect food tray and on her way she met with nikki who was going to meet her mom.

Nikki: are raani aap yahaa….aaj maa ko khaanaa nahi dena?

Rani: aaj BRji ko khaanaa RB apne haatho se khilaa rahi hain eesi liye CRji ne hume kahaa ki hum apnaa kuchh aur kaam kare aura b hum wahi room main jaa rahe hain tray leneke liye

Nikki: achhaa to aaj RB maa ko khaanaa khilaane waali hain ye to badi acharaj wali baat hain..chalo hum bhi maako milne hi jaa rahe hain………

In BR's room dhire dhire sarkataa woh jaherilaa saamp BR ke bed tak aa pahuchaa thaa……….

After finishing BR's food RB went into the bathroom to wash her hand.

Dhire dhire sarkte huve siskaariyaa karte huve saamp BR ke upar aa chukaa thaa. Apne saamne maut ke dut ko dekh BR ke honsh jaise kho gaye. Oonki jaan gale main aake atak gayi.

Oonkaa sharir pasina pasina ho gayaa aur aankhe fati ki fati rah gayi.

BR tried to scream but she was helpless, her body stiffened at sight of horrifying snake. Her heart was pounding wildly and she was trying to move her hand but in vain.

Suddenly RB came out of the bathroom and the moment she saw snake near BR, she broke into cold sweat and she felt cold to her every bone. The bloodcurdling scream came out of her mouth………"saamp ….saamp"

RB was near hysteria and was immobilised by fear.

RB: bachaao bachaao…..

When rani and nikki heard those heart stopping scream it did not take them long to understand that those scream were coming from BR's room. The shiver passed through their spine and driven by fear they rushed towards BR's room. Their eyes widened and their jaw dropped at the sight of the snake lurking near BR's body.

RB was still screaming hysterically. Rani and Nikki were startled seeing BR struggling defenceless to save herself. Hearing all those commotion, snake was also scared and very furious.

Rani's mind was racing very fast, she thought she had to react fast before snake pierced its fangs into BR's body. Nikki was rooted to the place by horrendous sight. rani kaa farz kahtaa thaa ki oose apni jaan par khel kar bhi BR ki jaan bachaani thi…..chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye aur ooske paas samay bilkul nahi thaa….

Rani leapt near BR's bed and was about to push away snake from bed, at the same moment furious snake struck with what force it had left and plunged it's fangs into the rani's hand. The fangs held there for only a moment, but in that brief instant, the muscles in the snake's neck contracted and sent a jet of lethal poison deep into rani's bloodstream. Easily, so easily, the fangs withdrew and the snake fell back upon the floor and slid away from there.

Everything happened in just blink of eyes that the every person presents their scared out of their wits.

Rani was screaming with sever pain and her painful cry brought nikki to her senses. Nikki rushed towards rani and held her by her arm. Nikki shouted for more help and ask RB to look after BR while she was taking rani to her room.

Hearing all commotion few more servants rushed to BR's room, nikki ordered gauri to call doctor as soon as possible and ask another to call king and CR.

Nikki: rani…..ye kyaa kar diyaa aapne…aap sampbhaaliye apne aapko..

Rani though in pain: hum..hum theek hain nikki ji aap BR ko dekhiye woh bahut dar gayi hain..

Nikki: aap maa ki chintaa mat kijiye sab hain oonke paas….aap chaliye apne kamare main abhi doctor aate hi honge…

The pain was unbearable for rani and because of poison she had started feeling drowsiness.

Nikki (seeing rani's eyes getting closed): rani…kuchh bhi ho jaaye apni aankhe mat bandh kariyegaa…….rani koshish kijiye..abhi aapkaa kamaraa aa jaayegaa

They reached to rani's room. Nikki made her sit on bed comfortably…..rani wanted to sleep but nikki knew that it would not be advisable because once rani fell to sleep the poison would start spreading into her body very fast.

Rani: nikkiji humaari aankhe khuli nahi rakh paa rahe hain hum…..( her body was trempling and her voice was very faint)

Nikki was trying her best to keep rani awake by keeping her busy in talk.

Nikki: koshish kijiye…app aankhe khuli rakhne ki abhi doctor aate hi honge…..

Nikki kaa dil jor jor se dhadak rahaa thaa……..rani ko agar kuchh ho gayaa to ooske bhaai ka kyaa hoga …..soch bhi oose daraa rahi thee………..woh nahi chaahti thee ki ooske jaisi haalat ooske bhai ko ho….jiski khushiyo bhari jindagi shuru hone se pahele hi.gamo ke baadal oose ger le.kaisa darvnaa saa khayaal thaa………jo kaalaa andhera ooski jindagi ban chukaa thaa agar ooskaa bas chale oos andhere ko woh apne bhai ke paas se bhi naa guzar ne de.

Mean while gauri rushed to rani's room with doctor. Doctor asked everybody to go out of the room while he looked after rani. Nikki was anxiously pacing up and down in the corridor praying to god for rani's safety.

CR and RB was with BR and trying to calm her down because BR was frighten and actually she was worried about rani too. The way rani did not take moment to save her life, BR was feeling indebted to rani but same time she was perturbed thinking about yudi's reaction. BR was worried about yudi because she knew that the moment yudi would come to know about rani he would not able to stop himself and would definitely rushed to see her and if something happened to rani that yudi would be devastated. First time BR was thinking that rani should not have saved her, because any way she was lying here and had not that importance in anybody's life.

Lekin maa ki mamtaa kaa mahatvaa kyaa hota hain woh kisi binaa maa ke bache se puchho……….maa ki god ke binaa kaise julas jaataa hain woh bachcha…kaise bach pan main hi badaa ho jaataa hain bachha kaise apne aanshu ko apni maa ke aanchal se pochh ne ko tadap jaataa hain woh bachha…ye baat to sirf..woh bachha hi bataa saktaa hain………..lekin BR ki chinta bhi vyarth nahi thee………yudi kaa jivan rani ke bina……..aise thaa jaise….pankh binaa kaa pakshi jo udnaa to chaahtaa hain lekin ud nahi saktaa……..bati binaa kaa diyaa jo prakaash to felaanaa chahtaa hain lekin khud jal nahi saktaa…….binaa surya, chand aur sitaaro kaa asmaan ek dam sunaa……

The more BR was thinking about yudi and rani the more she was feeling nervous.

PS: i friends this is very short part i know and will not be upto the mark as i have written this in very much haste and in very much tight schedule as now i am bakri my time will go answering questios also that's why i thought i will post thsi part at this time........though i wanted to add many more detail please do comment and let me know..............

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Posted: 16 years ago
omg...beenadi!!! Aapne hume aise mordh per la kay chord diya!!!! please please please jaldi update karyega! and btw...its so funny I was actually reading through ur FF AGAIN! today just 30 mins ago!!!

Brilliant as usual!! I cant wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
fantastic beena! what a twist!
cant wait to see yudis reaction!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up....xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

I haaaate snakes....

Can't wait to see Yudi's reaction, and poor Bhanumati, all her plans to ruin Rani have gone to waste..
Good one Beena. Waiting for next part...hope Rani is OK (well she will be na?)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Beena,

Yeh tum ne kiya kiyaa??? Rani poisoned? 😲
Abh bechara Yudi ka kiya halat hoga??
Update fast. Make her better...let Yudi come to see her...let them hug and let all be well again in the Kingdom of YuRa 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
simra
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omg...beenadi!!! Aapne hume aise mordh per la kay chord diya!!!! please please please jaldi update karyega! and btw...its so funny I was actually reading through ur FF AGAIN! today just 30 mins ago!!!

Brilliant as usual!! I cant wait for the next part!!

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kyaa kare yaar kuchh to excitement honaa chahiye naareally you were reading my FF again????smira that gave me such a pleasure you won't believe........thanks honey keep enjoying
jazz[quote]
fantastic beena! what a twist!
cant wait to see yudis reaction!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up....xx
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where were you dear....???????oh me too waiting for his reaction he is going to be devastated ...oh i am worried about him
payal
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thanks..aje bagha nathi marya..

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saaru thayu nahito maare aankh check up maate tane mokali padte
and dear very comment about part???????hmmm and where are you yaar missing you
nisha
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I haaaate snakes....

Can't wait to see Yudi's reaction, and poor Bhanumati, all her plans to ruin Rani have gone to waste..
Good one Beena. Waiting for next part...hope Rani is OK (well she will be na?)

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rani hamesha sabke plan fail karti hain.......yaar and i hate snake too eeeeeee
rani has to be ok she is our heroin yaar if i will kill than all will sign petition for that than i have to bring her bake from grave though........might be yaad dast bhooli huyi yaa some one exacte like her......you know ............hahahaahahaha
rakhie
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Beena,

Yeh tum ne kiya kiyaa??? Rani poisoned? 😲
Abh bechara Yudi ka kiya halat hoga??
Update fast. Make her better...let Yudi come to see her...let them hug and let all be well again in the Kingdom of YuRa
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ya rakhie our mahan rani for good cause yaar ...have to do something like that......twist to increase TRP 😃
yudi hug???????? oh that is something very difficult thing let me see.......have to do something
thank you all i was bit upset with the haste but i am happy you all appreciate it the way you all had done for all other parts...........thank you all

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