FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 121

Beena there is nothing to be analyzed. You have written it so beautifully and so perfectly. Anyway, let me say something

[quote=Beena].... Out side the window the sun was ready to disappear behind the horizon after promising to return next day with new hopes and new challenges and handing over the remaining job to moon and telling moon to look after the part of the earth till he comes back. Sun's orange hues were spreading its beauty over each and every particle coming in contact with it. Birds were anxious to go back to their nest where their loved ones were desperately waiting for them. It was beautiful scenario that nikki had not enjoyed since many years but suddenly she felt everything was getting beautiful around her. she felt the world around her were changing slowly but steadily, one gentle step taken by her brother for her future has changed many things within her too. She was thankful to saksh also for showing his brother this path. She blushed without her realisation. ...[/quote]

One gesture of love and care changes the entire environment. Suddenly the world looks so beautiful.

Ye aasman ye baadal ye raste ye hawa,

Har ek cheez hai apni jagah thikane se

Kayi dinon se shikayat nahin zamaane se....

Hope Saksh gets to see Nikki's happiness, which in turn will give him the contentment and joy.

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Its quite natural that the truth about NiSha is slowly getting revealed on Rani. She did not jump on a conclusion immediately. Its obvious, when we spend more time with somebody then only we are able to observe that person's emotions, qualities, nature etc. then only we get the true picture of that person.

As it happens in real life, anayaas hi sach Rani ke saamne aa raha hai, Nikki is not even aware....

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.... But that brief moment had filled rani's mind with many thoughts and confusion. She could sense those feelings in nikki but could not make the picture perfect out of those indication because nothing was concrete but only her assumptions.

Rani nikki ko jaate dekti rah gayi rani ko kyun baar baar lag raha tha ki nikki apne dil main ubhar rahe umango ko tarango ko apne chahere ki ghambhirtaa ke pichhe chhipaa ne ki koshish kar rahi thee. Lekin ooske dil ki khushi ooski ankho se chhalak rahi the'. [/quote]

See this is the natural thought process if you have sensed something.

Rani and Gauri's communication was also very natural as it should be between two friends. Loved Gauri for her maturity, understanding and a true well-wisher of her friend. Just like Saksh to Yudi, same way Gauri to Rani.

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[quote]...Charo taraf sanaataa saa thaa, jaise din bhar chahal pahal se bhare mahal main achaanak se sthirtaa aa gayi thee aur pura jan jivan jaise thambh gayaa ho. Chaand bhi apni chandni ko apni baaho main lekar apni duniyaa main kho gayaa thaa. Tare bhi apne sapno ko boon ne main lage huve the'''....[/quote]

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[quote]....jaise rani ka masoom chahere taalaab main khili huyi dukh si safed poyani(white lotus) ki tarahaa chamak raha thaa, jo chandni main naha rahi ho aur apni khushbu ko shaant vatavaran main faila rahi ho." ...[/quote]

The description of pen.....its relation with ink.....

These things make your writing very charming. And you know Beena, it depicts your personality, your aesthetic sense, a person who sees beauty everywhere because she is beautiful from inside. That's the reason you sing, you dance, you write poetry, you write lovely relations......and I can say for sure that you decorate your house in an artistic manner.

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And what to say about the letter. It was full of emotions, how can I not be overwhelmed. Actually I like these types of letters, and kaash (like you are thinking).....somebody would have written like this to me...

I just died for this.....

Mayur ki koi shobha na hoti agar mayur pankh ooske paas na hoti,

Chaand ki koi upma na hoti agar har kala ooski adaa na hoti

Pyaar ki koi dastan na hoti agar Milan aur judayi ooske saath na hoti,

Humaari jindagi bhi koi khash na hoti agar aap humaari jingagi ka hisaa na hoti. .....

Lekin ,

Har sharuaat ke bij kisi ant se jude hote hain

Jis tarah mrutyu aur janam ke bich garbh dharan kaa arshaa hota hain

Eesi tarah

Humara panptaa ye pyaara saa rishta

Purani paramparaa aur nayi likhi jaane waali daastan ko jodtaa ek setu(bridge) hain

Jo ek na ek din ees setu ko sampurn kar hume humaari manzil ki aur le jaayegaa

Hume ek dusre se jod dega humesha kaa liye'..

Bas eesi kaamnaa ke saath

Jo bhi hoga achchha hoga. Hai na...😛

Originally posted by: Saloni1974

Beena, very nice part. You are a very good writer. When I read your FF it seems like characters came alive and scene is happening in front of my eyes. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: ramas

great part beena. i loved the love letter took me so long to read. But it is beautiful. I can imagine yudi missing rani and not able to talk to her when he left. But rani got the gift that is most precious to yudi.

But i am sure he conveyed his love in that letter way better than he would have confessed. I liked Gauri very much. I am thinking the girl who said saksham may be Rani but not sure.

Great part again,keep it up.

Originally posted by: Anvi2009

Beena, this part was so beautifullllllll.

I love the way YuRa interact with each other: through letters, valuable priceless gifts, messengers, and most importantly, through each other's heart.

Yudi's gift idea was perfect. He gifted a symbol of unconditional love to that 1 person whom he loves unconditionally, and how perfectly Rani understood the importance of this gift without Yudi saying even a word about it (before reading his letter).

I also love the way you are showing NiSha story. You are the only one who can do justice to it. Creatives are a hopeless case now.

I wonder who the girl is now, who already knows about Nikki's feelings for Saksham.

On a side note, I really love your RS siggi. Specially that photo, which you have perfectly edited to show RS handing over the throne & responsibilities to Yudi. I really wanted to see a proud father happily crowning his much deserving son and giving him the responsibility to run the kingdom rightfully. But these stupid creatives had to mess up with this most important event in RKAB too along with YuRa marriage. Knowing the significance of this photo and the emotions behind it, I can stare at it forever.

Originally posted by: jibi

Beena there is nothing to be analyzed. no, don't say that.....😳You have written it so beautifully and so perfectly. Anyway, let me say something.oh thanks........as you know i always wait for long analysis

[quote=Beena].... Out side the window the sun was ready to disappear behind the horizon after promising to return next day with new hopes and new challenges and handing over the remaining job to moon and telling moon to look after the part of the earth till he comes back. Sun's orange hues were spreading its beauty over each and every particle coming in contact with it. Birds were anxious to go back to their nest where their loved ones were desperately waiting for them. It was beautiful scenario that nikki had not enjoyed since many years but suddenly she felt everything was getting beautiful around her. she felt the world around her were changing slowly but steadily, one gentle step taken by her brother for her future has changed many things within her too. She was thankful to saksh also for showing his brother this path. She blushed without her realisation. ...[/quote]

One gesture of love and care changes the entire environment. Suddenly the world looks so beautiful.

Ye aasman ye baadal ye raste ye hawa,

Har ek cheez hai apni jagah thikane se

Kayi dinon se shikayat nahin zamaane se....

oh my god this is lovely and perfect and very true.........you know what everything around us remain same many time but when our vision changed towards that thing than we can either enjoy it or hate it..........kahete hain naa jasi drasti waisi hi srishti.......ek insaan do kapdo main bhi khushhaal jivan basar kar saktaa hain aur kuchh...........saare wordrob bharke kapde ho phir bhi.....dukhi rah kar jivan basar kartaa hain.....

jis nazraane ko dekh kar bhi naa mahesoos kiya

jis lamho ko sirf divar pe lage chitro ke liye hi jiya

jis rishto ko aaj tak naa samaj ne kaa mauka diya

lekin aaj kis ne ye sab kuchh badal diya......

Hope Saksh gets to see Nikki's happiness, which in turn will give him the contentment and joy.

And see the difference, Nikki, no doubt, was very happy with the YuRa relation but still her emptiness was there with her. When a similar thing happened to her, she could actually feel the essence of joy. Her happiness increased multiple folds.

'Ja tan laage vaa tan jaane'

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Its quite natural that the truth about NiSha is slowly getting revealed on Rani. She did not jump on a conclusion immediately. Its obvious, when we spend more time with somebody then only we are able to observe that person's emotions, qualities, nature etc. then only we get the true picture of that person.

kabhi kabhi to janam lag jaate hian kisi ki bhavnaao ko samaj ne main.......kisi ki antaraatmaa ko kaun samaj payaa hain agar........kisi ki antar ki baat samaj ne ki sab main shakti hoti to shaayad mahabharat ko yudhh nahi hota.....kunti ki baat pandav samaj jaate😕😕.........lekin haa .........but ya if we spend some time with anyone we can atleast see the glimses of their emotions, qulities and nature and ETC....

MAN ki maya man hi jaane

As it happens in real life, anayaas hi sach Rani ke saamne aa raha hai, Nikki is not even aware....

😆😆😆...ye to creative ki maya hain

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Nikki: rani aisa hota hain''shayad '''pyaar main'.jab aap kisi ko milne ke liye betaab ho ''to oonse milne ki chahat jiske khayaal humaare dil main hota hain ooski khushbu, ooski upsthiti aur ''.ye sab bhram karati hain hume'''.

.... But that brief moment had filled rani's mind with many thoughts and confusion. She could sense those feelings in nikki but could not make the picture perfect out of those indication because nothing was concrete but only her assumptions.

Rani nikki ko jaate dekti rah gayi rani ko kyun baar baar lag raha tha ki nikki apne dil main ubhar rahe umango ko tarango ko apne chahere ki ghambhirtaa ke pichhe chhipaa ne ki koshish kar rahi thee. Lekin ooske dil ki khushi ooski ankho se chhalak rahi the'. [/quote]

See this is the natural thought process if you have sensed something.

thanks.................

Rani and Gauri's communication was also very natural as it should be between two friends. Loved Gauri for her maturity, understanding and a true well-wisher of her friend. Just like Saksh to Yudi, same way Gauri to Rani.

i used to share all small detail with my best friend and may be that thing would have come out here........because the place our good friends have in our life we cannot give that place to everyone.........

Aur chhotee chhotee upmaayein, unka to jawab hai nahin. Like...

[quote]...Charo taraf sanaataa saa thaa, jaise din bhar chahal pahal se bhare mahal main achaanak se sthirtaa aa gayi thee aur pura jan jivan jaise thambh gayaa ho. Chaand bhi apni chandni ko apni baaho main lekar apni duniyaa main kho gayaa thaa. Tare bhi apne sapno ko boon ne main lage huve the'''....[/quote]

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[quote]....jaise rani ka masoom chahere taalaab main khili huyi dukh si safed poyani(white lotus) ki tarahaa chamak raha thaa, jo chandni main naha rahi ho aur apni khushbu ko shaant vatavaran main faila rahi ho." ...[/quote]

The description of pen.....its relation with ink.....

These things make your writing very charming. And you know Beena, it depicts your personality, your aesthetic sense, a person who sees beauty everywhere because she is beautiful from inside. That's the reason you sing, you dance, you write poetry, you write lovely relations......and I can say for sure that you decorate your house in an artistic manner.

hmmmmmmmmmdecorating house.......i love to do that.....neat adn clean but i have three verses one...three to create mess and one to clean😆😆......and they think i am hitler😉......

And what to say about the letter. It was full of emotions, how can I not be overwhelmed. Actually I like these types of letters, and kaash (like you are thinking).....somebody would have written like this to me...

😳 ya true kaashhhhhh......

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I just died for this.....

Mayur ki koi shobha na hoti agar mayur pankh ooske paas na hoti,

Chaand ki koi upma na hoti agar har kala ooski adaa na hoti

Pyaar ki koi dastan na hoti agar Milan aur judayi ooske saath na hoti,

Humaari jindagi bhi koi khash na hoti agar aap humaari jingagi ka hisaa na hoti. .....

And as i already said i am so excited with the end. Lets see whats in the store. Who is this who knows Nikki's secret.... Is it Gauri? Or Has Bhavi changed? 😉

😆 bhavi changed haila.........hmmmm let me think but i will not tell you suspense 😉😉😉

Ummed hai is part ka ant kisi shubh shuruaat ki aahat ho. In your words....

yup it is

Lekin ,

Har sharuaat ke bij kisi ant se jude hote hain

Jis tarah mrutyu aur janam ke bich garbh dharan kaa arshaa hota hain

Eesi tarah

Humara panptaa ye pyaara saa rishta

Purani paramparaa aur nayi likhi jaane waali daastan ko jodtaa ek setu(bridge) hain

Jo ek na ek din ees setu ko sampurn kar hume humaari manzil ki aur le jaayegaa

Hume ek dusre se jod dega humesha kaa liye'..

Bas eesi kaamnaa ke saath

Jo bhi hoga achchha hoga. Hai na...😛

tathastu jo bhi joga bhala hoga bachha......aur kaam par ho jaayegaa to bhola bhi hoga ......baad main hahhhhhaahhaha😆😆

😳😳😳

Pujariji was repeatedly asking nikki, the name of the person. However, before restless nikki could response to pujari she heard melodious voice coming from behind her back.

SAKSHAM'''.

Stupefied and startled nikki turned around to see the person and she was shocked seeing some unknown young beautiful girl who was busy talking on phone.

Before nikki think something and hold her palpitating heart and say something to pujariji, pujariji already left to do his prayer.

Agitated and troubled, nikki turned again to look at the girl who has unknowingly actually did something today that nikki could not do till now. Still that girl was busy on her phone'.actually upset with someone''..

Girl: kitni der lagegi aapko????

Girl: kyaa?????aap jaldi kijiye''puja kaa saaman lane main itni der 'achha hota hum khud hi le aate''..aab der mat kijiye ''..hum aapki rah dekh rahe hain'.aur humne to pujaari ko aapkaa naam bhi dediyaa puja kar ne ke liye'.

Nikki understood that this girl by mistake gave name thinking pujariji was asking her. but unknowingly and accidently today nikki's prayer got that person's name that nikki would have never brought on her lips''..nikki turned again to concentrate on her prayer but her disquiet mind was worrying about something else. She feared when pujariji will give her pujaki thali and holy dhaga that time he will announce that person's name. what if somebody will hear pujariji calling saksh's name and giving that dhaga to me? What will they think and what if this girl takes that dhaga instead, what will she do?

She was lost in her dilemma when pujariji came and exact same way call saksh name and forward his hand to deliver that dhaga to nikki but before nikki could take that dhaga one soft and delicate hand came in between and snatched that dhaga from pujariji'''

Flabbergasted by that move nikki moved back. She looked helplessly at pujariji who was equally surprised by what ever happen in that split second.

Pujariji: dekhiye'.ye dhaga aapka nahi hain ye to''..eenkaa hain'.

Girl: eenkaa????? (Now that girl cast questioning glance to nikki and pujariji)'''lekin naam to humne kaha thaa''.

Pujariji: lekin pujaki thaali to eenki thee'''.aur naam'..

Girl: naam aapne hume puchha to humne bataayaa thaa to phir dhaga bhi humara huva'.right? kshmaa kijiye lekin aap hi kahiye '..hum kyaa galat kah rahe hain?

Pujariji was puzzled and confused. Nikki was crestfallen witnessing embarrassing moments taking shape in front of her. she was not in state to fight for her right. However, she did not want to let it go either.

Nikki: lekin pujariji''naam to aap humse puchh rahe the'''aur'

But that girl interrupted nikki : lekin pujariji dhaga jiske naam ka bana ho oose hi milnaa chahiye aur ye dhaga humne humaare''..

However, before she could finish her sentence their argument was disturbed by somebody's dominating voice. When they around to see nikki's restlessness increased more because bade pujariji has arrived after finishing his work. Nikki did not want to stretch this matter and wanted to give that thread to that girl but''

Bpujariji: kyaa ho raha hain ye pujariji?????

Npujariji stuttered: ji who'.ye'..

Seeing nikki there bade pujariji came towards them and asked to nikki.

Bpujariji: are rajkumariji''.aap''????? kyaa huva kuchh samsyaa hain????/

That girl was shocked when she realised with whom she was talking.

Girl: pujariji hum bata te hain aapko.baat ye huyi ki rajkumariji ne apni puja ki thaali di''.aur baar baar pujariji ke puchh ne par jab who naam nahi bataa paayi''.oos waqt hum jo phone par baat karne main masruf the hume lagaa pujariji hume baar baar puchh rahe hain''to humne naam de diya''..ab samsyaa ye hain ki puja to rajkumariji ne karvayi lekin''..woh puja aise insaan ka naam lekar ki gayi hain jo hume jaan se bhi pyaaraa hain'''.aur ye dhaga oos ke naam se matarani se liyaa gayaa hain'''ab aap hi bataayiye ''kyaa kiyaa jaaye?

Bpujariji: 'hmmmmmmm'.samsyaa to hain ''.

Girl: ab pujariji''.sabse pahele hume ye batayiye ees dhage kaa mahatvaa kyaa hain '''phir hum soch te hain hume kyaa kar naa chahiye'.

Bpuajriji: ees dhaage kaa mahatvaa ye hain ki jis kaa naam lekar ye matarani se liya gayaa ho oose puja karvaane waalaa khud pahenaaye to matarani ki kripa bani raheti hain oos vyakti par. Matarani humesha ooski rakshaa karti hain aur oose pragati ke maarg par le jaati hain''

Girl: to ees kaa matlab jiske naam kaa dhaga ho oosi ki kalaayi par ye jaanaa caahiye'.right pujariji''..

Bpujariji looked at nikki and it was very clear that he was unhappy: ji'..

Realising that girl was not ready to leave that dhaga at any cost and nikki did not want to create any scene.

Nikki: koi baat nahi pujariji''.(she looked at that girl ) aap ye dhaga le sakti hain'..hume koi aitraaz nahi hain'.....hum matarani se prarthnaa karenge ki aapne jis ke liye ye puja karvaayi hain oose matarani har khushi de'..

Girl: shukriyaa''hum bhi yahi chaahte hain ki humne jis ke liye ye puja karvaayi hain oose matarani har khushi de''

At same moment they were stunned by somebody's voice.

" kyaa ho raha hain sugandhi''..tum yaha bhi shuru ho gayi?????"

When those words fell on nikki's ears she could not believe her ears and when that person came where they were standing and nikki saw that person'''.nikki's eyes popped up with surprise. She could not believe what has been happening since morning with her. first she was late for temple, than main pujariji was not there to perform her puja, than new pujariji kept asking her name, than this girl by mistake gave the name that nikki's heart always keep chanting, than argument about thread and now'''''.the realisation''..after seeing that person''..

Ki jiske liye nikki ne puja karvaayi thee aur jiskaa naam oos ladki ne galti se dediya thaa who dar asal main ek hi insaan thaa'''.