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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice Beena, I like. Sugandhi stood up for her right, she didn't back down - I like that.

Whoever she turns out to be, I hope she shocks Nikki into accepting she has rights too. Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rosh.88

Time for me to predict!!! Sorry di, dont laugh but couldn't resist myself from doing so!!!!!!!!😳

Is the girl by any chance Saksham's sister and Niharika mistakes her to be Saksham's girl friend or something like that???? Coz since the story started Saksham has no feelings for anyother like that except for Niharika!!!! thats how his character is potrayed!!!!
Gr8 gr8 part as usual di!!!! Its awesome!!!!! You too have started giving giving cliff hangers???
You definitely need to open separate discussion thread for discussing FF's!!!! where the writer doesn't get to participate!!!😉😉😉

hmmm about your prediction like creative i will also not reveal anything till end😆😆😆
but i can see our girls have very deep trust on saksh😉😉😉
lekin my grand ma always used to tell us man and monkey cannot be trusted..kab gulaat maar de.....sorry no offence its just kahavat and as monu said i did not make it😆😆
and you can discuss my FF here i won' tmind you can critisize also ........only just write downmy name on topic you want me to comment and otehr you can discuss with other girls.....actually its great i dea i would love it...
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great part......

i think the girl is shaksham's sister........right?

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hmm main chup rahungi...........let see 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Nice Beena, I like. Sugandhi stood up for her right, she didn't back down - I like that.

Whoever she turns out to be, I hope she shocks Nikki into accepting she has rights too. Looking forward to the next part.

yes i also like people who stood up for their rights .........some action time right ? and many times it happens few people they don't realise their right on few dear things untill someone come and make them realise it and make them feel at loss.........that points some times become provoking points and many times it is important in life
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Lovely part Beena...I liked this pooja scene a lot ..wish Nikki cud be a bit assertive but then the person turned out to be the one for whom she prayed...but I hope Sugandhi makes Nikki jealous enough to make her express her feelings to Saksh...another hope that it's one sided love for Sugandhi...how can saksh love her ....it has to be Nikki......since this is a small part i am hoping the next part comes soon[/quote]
ya it may be possible sugandhi could have onesided feelings and tht thing might make nikki feel jealous and desperate...lets see will nikki able to stood up or she will loss saksh for evere thinking she cannot break all parampara😕😕
@jen:.......hum sab ladkiyo ko saksh par bahut vishvaash hain dekhte hian saksh vishvaash ke kabil hain ki nahi.........
thanks to all of you next part is coming soon and that would be small part like this
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena ye Shugandi kaha se aayi..but i like her..she can't give up..i hope now Nikki realise that Shaksham going away form her..Shugandi ko Shak se favicole ki tarah rakhna..when nikki around..i want to see jeoulesy on nikki's eye..
finaly i finish two parts..
Beeena Ekta ke sath last name hi share karna dimag nahi..
waise she looking for new creative..story me twist chahiye but not impossible stuff..
Shaksham itna bhi bura nahi..wo sirf Nikki ko hi dekta hai..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Beena ye Shugandi kaha se aayi..but i like her..she can't give up..i hope now Nikki realise that Shaksham going away form her..Shugandi ko Shak se favicole ki tarah rakhna..when nikki around..i want to see jeoulesy on nikki's eye..

finaly i finish two parts..
Beeena Ekta ke sath last name hi share karna dimag nahi..
waise she looking for new creative..story me twist chahiye but not impossible stuff..
Shaksham itna bhi bura nahi..wo sirf Nikki ko hi dekta hai..

she is like us payal fighter normal girl.......and will give some other angle to nisha's love story
favilcole kaa majboot jod😆😆..........
haash at last you manage to finish two part
and i am happy that you liked letter and gift too..........kaash koi ladkaa hume bhi khat likhtaa
lekin sab dar ke bhaag jaate the😆😆
chalo ektaa se sirf last name share karenge......kyaa kyaa woh creative dhundh rahi hain yaha ees forum main kitne taleted girls hain oose dikhaayi kyun nahi deti
yaa she is not looking for creative she must be loking for ......distructive😆😆.....
wanted to post new part today but got busy with somethign else will try to post by tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
PS: hello girls here i am with another short part but don't forget to share your long comments please hope you all will like it
Part 73

Nikki was rooted to the place when she saw saksh there. She stared at him in dismay, she felt her heart will jump out of her body with trepidation, she felt thunderbolt in her mind. She could not lift her eyes that have many questions. However, the girl whose name was sugandhi was looking at Nikki very carefully. Sugandhi understood what was tormenting Nikki right now. She did not want to let go this opportunity that had land surprisingly in her DAMAAN.

Sugandhi: hum batate hain aapko'.and than she narrated everything that had happened there'''

Bpujariji ( continued) : galati humaari hain'..dar asal rajkumari ji har saal eesi din ye khaas puja karvaati hain''.(nikki averted her glance towards pujariji and wanted to stop him because he was unknowingly blurting out the secret that she did not want anyone to know because nikki knew that saksh will understand entire situation but words were not forming and her mind was in daze she felt that words were chocking in her throat and making lumps. She just stood there rooted realising today everything is happing to create some short of disaster. She held her puja ki thaali very tight and started to dig floor with her toe nail and she felt if in this moment she could disappear in thin air than she would not have to feel embarrassment in front of saksh)

Saksh looked at her ardently and understood nikki's trauma. Sugandhi who was witnessing this situation, was just watching both of them carefully.

Bpujariji: 'aur''..hume maloom hain oonho ne aaj tak kabhi kisi kaa naam nahi diyaa aur humne puchha bhi nahi ''aur aaj bhi hum oon ki raah dekh rahe the lekin oon he deri ho gayi aur hume kisi yajmaan se milnaa jana thaa eesi liye humne ye naye aaye pujariji ko kaha thaa ki rajkumariji aaye to puja karvaa de'aur eesi wajah se ye gad bad ho gayi .,,,,,,,,,hume kshmaa kar dijiye rajkumariji.

After too much effort nikki only manage to speak few words: koi baat nahi pujariji'

Sugandhi: hume maaf kar dijiye'rajkumari nikkiji'ye dhaage par sirf aur sirf aap kaa adhikaar hain'..aur hum jaante hain aap ne jinke liye ye puja karvaayi hain ooski aapke dil main ek khaas jagaah hain''hum jitnaa eenhe chaahte hain ''oos se kayi ghoonaa shaayad aap oonhe chahte hain'.jiske liye aap ne puja karvayi hain.

Sugandhi put that dhaga to nikki's trembling hand. Nikki felt that any moment she will lost her control and start crying.

Nikki took that dhaga and buried in her feast. She was unable to face sughandhi and Saksh she was heartbroken.

Kyun kyun ho raha tha ye ooske saath? Kyun saksh ko kisi aur ladki ke saath khada dekh kar oose achha nahi lag raha thaa? Kyun jab ye anjani si ladki saksh ko apnaa kah rahi thi to nikki ka dil tukde tukde ho raha tha? Kyun jab bhi who ladki saksh ko chahti hain aisa kah rahi the tab nikki ko aisa lag raha that ki koi ooski saans ko ooske ghale main ghunt raha hain?

Who apne haath main pakde huve dhaage ko aise apne haatho main dabaaye huve thee jaise who apne tute dil aur ankho ki palako par bethe huve anshuo ko thaame rakhne ki vyarth koshish kar rahi ho

Sughandhi was searching nikki's face and watching all reflecting emotions carefully. She, with eagle eyes, was observing Nikki's all reactions. Saksh who was busy talking with pujariji, was unaware of all this.

Pujariji asked saksh: sakshji aaj aap jaldi aa gaye''? Aap bhi har saal aaj ke din puja karvaane ke liye aate hain lekin thodi der se''..

Saksh looked at nikki from corner of his eyes and he realised that nikki heard what pujariji told him he also did not want nikki to know about it but now it was too late.

Saksh: ji who aaj sugandhi ki wajah se hum jaldi aa gaye oose baad main shopping karnaa hain aur who chahte hain hum pura din oon ke saath bitaaye to jid karke hum jald le aayi.

Nikki was dejected hearing saksh's words. she did not like that saksh had some one who was very important in his life and with whom he wanted to spend entire day and from his talk it was clear that he was very delighted and excited. However, the matter right now bothering to nikki was, that why saksh did not tell her or ever mansion anything about any other girl in his life.

Pujariji and saksh was still talking.

Bpujariji: achha to ab hum chalte hain .hum matarani se prarthnaa karenge ki aaj ke din aap ki har kaamnaa puri ho aur har khushi mile.''.jay mata di.

Saksh: jay mata di

Nikki thought khushi?////// hume to sirf khushi ki ek kiran mili thi lagta hain who bhi andhkaar main lupt ho rahi hain humaare saamne'

Saksh turned towards sugandhi and Nikki who were standing there listening to their conversation. When Saksh's eyes fell on Nikki he felt that something was bothering Nikki because her misery was clearly written on her face. He thought because of that argument with sugandhi Nikki was hurt and upset.

He was concern for her : kyaa huva nikkiji aap theek to hain na?

Nikki tried to collect herself and cast hasty glance at sugandhi and without looking into saksh's eyes : ji hum theek hain'..

Saksh: lagtaa hain ees sugandhi ki bachchi ne aap ko paresaan kar diya.

Sugandhi: achchha ji ab humne kyaa kiyaa.( she pretend to be upset) ees main humaari kyaa galti hain? Lagta hain een sab ke pichhe bhagvaan ki hi koi lila hain.( she cast penetrating glance at nikki who was still looking at floor and digging it with her toe nail.)'..kyun raj kumariji'..

Nikki fumbled with this sudden question she did not understood how to react'.she thought ya it was god's wish that she could witness saksh with some other girl that she had never think not even in her dream. Her eyes became moist she cleared her throat and replied.

Nikki: ji'

Saksh realising nikki was still feeling anxious about that matter tried to create light atmosphere.

Saksh: haa aapki to koi galti ho hi nahi sakti 'galti to humaari hain jo humne aapko yun akelaa chhod diya. Aapko to humaare saath hi rakhna thaa.

Nikki was getting anxious with each passing moments. Saksh and sugandhi's closeness was actually making nikki restless. Though nikki was trying to maintain her faint smile on her stressed face. Nikki wanted to run away from there it was unbearable for her to see saksh bonding with another girl. However, she was confused about her raging feelings but she felt that she was feeling jealous. Yes, she was feeling jealous and heartbroken too.

Sugandhi: are baaba ''.ab bahut ho gayi humaari taang khichaayi . ab kyaa aise hi khade rahenge aap humaari pahechaan nahi karvaayenge rajkumariji se.

Helplessly nikki looked at both of them. She was still rooted there like rock.

Saksh: are haa'..hum to ye bhool hi gaye chalo karvaa dete hain aur hume yakin hain aapko mil kar nikkiji ko bahut khushi hongi'..

Sugandhi: oho ye baat hain ''''chalo to aisa karte hain ki hum khud hi apni pahechaan de dete hain'''hummmm

Nikki wanted time to stop in this moment. She was on denial. She did not want to hear what relation this girl share with saksh. She felt if reality will come out, it might snatch from her the only thing she had, her world of imagination where she had created her own beautiful world with her dreams and desire. Her desires to be part of someone's life, her wishes that someone become part of her life.

Kuchh baar kuchh baate anjaani rah jaaye to hi achchhaa hota hain, dil ko sukun rahetaa hain. Kyunki kuchh rahasya saamne aake saare sapno ko chur chur kar deta hain. Ees pal main nikki ko yahi lag raha thaa.

She wanted to close her ears. She felt the words she does not want to listen should not reach till her ears and should get shattered on their way.

Ek to taptaa suraj thaa jo apni tapis se oose jala raha thaa oopar se ek kala baadal ooski aur badh rahaa thaa ooski jindagi main andhera karne ke liye.

Blankly nikki was starring sugandhi and saksh.

Sugandhi: hum jo eenki(pointing towards saksh) jaan hain. Hum jinki khushi ke liye ye kuchh bhi kar sakte hain.(she put her hands on saksh's shoulder with affection and lean her head on her shoulder nikki was silently grieving )'''hum jo oonki jindagi main ek khaash jagaah rakhte hain aur koi waha tak pahunch bhi nahi saktaa''

Sugandhi was carefully watching nikki while putting stress on each words coming out of her mouth. The effect of her words, she could clearly see on nikki's changing emotions and facial expressions and body language. Saksh who was oblivious of this was looking at sugandhi with mischievous smile.

Saksh: are aap to puri prastaavnaa baandh rahi hain apni shaan main'''.ab bahut ho gaya sab jaante hain hum aapko bahut chaahte hain'''aur aap humaare bagiyaa ki chahakti chidiyaa hain''ji nikki ki ye humaari bahen hain................😳
SPECIAL thanks😳😳😳: this new character sugandhi has been introduced upon my dear friend kirti's request.........i love you kirti because bythis request actually you helped me that i could bring one more shades in Nisha's story........and i hope i have not disappointed you in sugandhi's character portrail...........friends still much in store how suganshi will change few things around.......though it is very little time cameo😉......but positive one😳
Edited by bsingapury - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

i was right . she is shakham's sister. 😊

good part.👏

will edit my post later.

thanks

😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow...😊😛 ...what a pleasant surprise... i logged in today and welcomed by two lovely NiSha doses, one your FF and one Rakhie's Magic.....i am flying high....😛
Oh Beena....every time you make me speech less and i stuggle with my reactions...
So so so so sweet... i loved Sugandhi's (slow poison) introduction and Nikki's jealousy, her restlessness, her disappointment....
Now i am waiting how Nikki will react after knowing that Sugandhi is Saksham's sister...
You know it was so charming when Nikki feels jealous...How nice it would be if Saksh also teases Nikki 😉...Nikki always hid the truth but how easily it is revealed on Saksh, let him analyse Nikki's expressions...
Edited by jibi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*Phew*. It's his sister...I haven't read it yet Beena but I skimmed to find that out....will save it for later when I can enjoy it properly 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yeh hui na baat!!! Thank god for the first time my prediction has come out correctly!!
Thanks di for the lovely update....Short and sweet!!!
Poor Niharika what she must have gone through when Saksham stars introducing her!!!

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