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After talking with tamanna Sukhiya had to come up with the game plan where rudra did not meet CR alone but RS should be present there. Because Sukhiya knew that in front of RS, CR would not able to show her affection for rudra fully. He was aware that seeing rudra in this situation though CR's heart will cry for her son but she would not let her image tarnished at least in front of king. CR had to put on mask of the queen and wife who hate rudra's rowdy behavior. CR had to scold rudra in front of RS and after that he had to instigate CR somehow that she stopped desperate RB from meeting rudra. Sukhiya knew that if once this situation would be well settled than other few small things could be taken care very easily.

After this quick thought Sukhiya ordered one servant to rush to the RS room to inform RS and CR about rudra's accident. Getting this news about rudra both of them panicked and without wasting a single second they hurried towards main hall.

CR was worried about rudra and seeing him in such a bad state she was anxious. However, from rudra's appearance RS understood the situation and before CR could react in any way RS shot him angry look and with his acid tongue he shouted on rudra.

RS: phir se aap goondaa gardi kare ke aaye hain yahaa………(his voice thundered across the hall and everyone froze. Even CR was startled by that anger. )

RS With iron in his voice:… sharm aani chaahiye aapko ees tarahaa share aam hamaare khandaan ki izzat ko nilaam karke…

Rudra was feeling hurt and irritated by his dad's behavior because instead of showing sympathy with him he had started blasting him off.

RS: lekin aapse oomidd bhi kyaa ki jaa sakti hain ………..pooraa din aawaara dosto ke saath gumnaa aur aiyaasi karnaa bas aur ees tarhaa behaal ho kar wapas aanaa…..sharma aati hain hume aapko apnaa bte kahete huve……

Rudra was boiling with anger he would not control himself already he was feeling humiliated because of tamannaa and now his dad was insulting him, instead of worrying about rudra's health RS was more concern about his pride and dignity.

Rudra hollered: to mat kahiye hume beta…………

It was dreadful for CR to see rudra reacting adversely. She felt that their argument was growing more heated by the minute and if she would not interfere than it would not be favorable. However,her heart was crying for his son but she knew that rudra was drunk too and at this time if she would try to save him RS might get very angry on her. she thought it would be best that instead of RS she scold rudra and later on she would pacify him in that way RS might not come to know that rudra was drunk and would think that i was being good mother trying to bring rudra on right path.

CR: aap sahi kah rahe hain rajaji…….sharm aati hain hume eenhe apnaa beta kahte huve…har waqt goondaa gardi ………maar pit…….kyaa kami rah gayi hain humaari parvarish main ki hume aisa din dekhnaa pad rahaa hain………

Rudra's heart was aching because instead of worrying about his health they were worrying about their prestige and pride. Rudra was looking at his mom in disbelief and Sukhiya was contented seeing turn of events in his favor.

RS: aapki parvarish main koi kami nahi rah gayi hain CR ……lekin lagtaa hain humaare pyaar kaa ab naazaayaz faayadaa oothaa rahe hain………

Rudra thought: naazaayaz faaydaa pitaaji ……..pyaar aapne hume diyaa hi kab hain har waqt ………aapko to sirf kamiyaa hi nazar aati hain hum main……….

Hearing those commotion outside yudi came there and he was worried seeing rudra in bad health.

Yudi: pitaji , chhoti maa…..hume kshamaa kar dijiye hume bich main nahi bolnaa chaahiye lekin hume lagtaa hain rudra ki haalat gambhir hain oonhe bahut dard ho rahaa hogaa………….pahele hume doctor ko bulaanaa chahiye pir baad main hum een sab baato ke bare main rudra se baat karenge ………ye sahi waqt nahi hain rudra ko gussaa karnekaa………..dekhiye oonse khadaa bhi nahi rahaa jaa rahaa hain…….

RS: aapko jo lage woh…kariye………..(saying that king left from main hall feeling disgusted and CR helplessly followed king. She was in despair but she knew that yudi would take good care of rudra. Howeve, she wanted to be with her son at that moment but she thought it would be more important to stay with king who was very angry right now)

Yudi called doctor and helped rudra to take him in his room. Yudi waited with rudra in his room and try to console him and told him not to take kings word to his heart because king was only worried about rudra's wellbeing. However, rudra was not in condition to think anything coherently but to his abhorrence those two dear people he wanted to be with were not there and the person he least thought would help him were actually taking care of him. First tamannaa in strange way helped him because he knew that, if other person in her place would have left him there alone to die on his own fate's mercy but tamanna not only took care for him actually she dropped him to the palace, second his brother whom, he hate the most and want to harm and spoil his life, was taking care of him.

Doctor informed yudi that though wounds were not very serious but rudra had to take rest for few days after that he would be alright. Yudi offered rudra that hyudi could stay with him through out the night but rudra wanted to be alone. Rudra was dejected and disturbed as many events had taken place in one night and still he was in confusion about many things, his fatigue was not letting him think orderly. Under medicine's influence he fell asleep. Seeing him sleeping peacefully yudi turned off the lights and went to his room.

During entire day yudi was worried about nikki and he was already disheartened thinking about Nikki and her loneliness, suddenly his dad's inappropriate and aggressive behavior with rudra had left him perturbed. yudi felt that at that moment rudra was needed sympathy and support by his own people but instead his dad was worried about his pride. Though rudra might have been at fault but his dad could have scolded him once rudra would have been in good shape. His dad's this behavior had left yudi sadden and worried because he realized that his dad could not forgive a little mistake against his pride and whatever he was doing was a grave mistake in his dad's eyes…….in his thought yudi did not realized when he enter his room and lie down to his bed.

He was deeply lost in thought and more he was thinking more he was feeling guilty. However his love for rani was not sin or mistake but yudi knew that in his dad's eyes it was against the pride of his family. In split of second yudi's thoughts diverted from nikki to rudra and now his own fate.

Eetne dino main paheli baar oose dar lagaa………..apne pitaaji kaa dar nahi ………aur nahi ye shaan saukat chhin jaane kaa ………..lekin woh dar thaa rani se bichhad jaane kaa…………ooskaa dil joro se dhadkne lagaa…….ek anjaani si becheni jo kai dino se dil ke paataal main chhipi huyi thee achaanak aaj ooske maanaspatal par ek bul bule ki tarahaa aa gayi………..oose khud samaj nahi aa rahaa thaa kyun ye dar ooske jahan main bethaa jaa rahaa hain…….kyun oose baar baar lag rahaa hain koi oos se rani se door kar degaa……….lekin ek atal vishwaas thaa oose ki kuchh bhi ho jaaye chaahe oose ye mahal aur shahi rutbaa chhod naa pade phir bhi woh….rani kaa saath nahi chhodegaaa…..apne pyaar par itnaa vishvaas hone ke baavjood ye kaun saa anjaanaa saa ankahaa saa dar oos par kabjaa kar rahaa thaa??????........ya phir aaj apne pita ko ees tarahaa se rudra par gussaa hote dekh woh…..hil gayaa thaa ki jo pitaaji rudra ki eetni chhoti si galti nahi maaf kar sakte woh….oose kaise bakshenge………..aur woh jo apne pitaaji ki puja kartaa hain , jis pitaaji ke muh se nikle har lafz ko woh patthar par khichi lakir maantaa hain jo mitaaayi nahi jaati aur jis pitaaji ke aadesh ko pura karnaa apnaa dharm samajtaa hain oos pitaaji ke saamne woh bagaavat kaise kar paayegaa………oose kyun achaanak lagne lagaa ki oos kaaa manobal kamjor pad rahaa hain………

Kyun ooskaa jivan ek maachis ki tili ban gayaa hain….jis ne ek aur pyaar kaa diyaa jalaaya hain aur oos diye se woh…sabko roshni denaa chaahtaa hain aur dusri aur nafrat ki aag jaalegi jis aag main sab kuchh jal ke bhasm ho jaayegaa ………..lekin tili se chaahe pyaar kaa dipak jale yaa nafrat ki aag dono main tili khud to binaa kaaran jal hi jaati hain…………koi oose ke dard ko nahi poochhtaa bas sulgaa detaa hain oosko.

Suddenly he heard knock on his room door he was puzzled who could be at this hour. He ask that person to come in. with hard push rani rushed into the room. Yudi stood up seeing rani in his room. Yudi was surprised by rani's sudden visit.

Yudi: rani aap ees waqt yahaa?????

Tense and confuse, rani was looking at yudi.

Yudi: rani kyaa baat hain aap eetni dari huyi kyun lag rahi hain sab theek to hain naa aur aap achaanak yahaa …….kyaa baat hain

He affectionately held her hand he was concerned seeing rani distressed.

Rani's eyes were wandering and seemed she searching something on yudi's face.

Rani: aap theek to hain naa kunvarji?......

Yudi with confused look: hum………..hum theek hain ……..kyun hume kyaa huva…….hume to aapki chintaa ho rahi hain …….aap to theek hain naa?

Rani was still in dilemma: aap ko koi chont to nahi aayi naa…….

Yudi: chont??????/kaisi chont rani…….humaari to kuchh samaj main nahi aa rahaa hain…aap kiski baat kar rahi hain?

Rani: agar aapko chont nahi aayi to phir woh dusri ladkiyaa kyun aisi baat kar rahi thee ki kunvarji ko badi gaheri chont aayi hain aur doctor ne oonko do tin deen sampurnaa aaram karne ke liye kahaa hain……..kyun who..log kah rahi thee ki bechaare kunvarji dard se tadap rahe the……..?

Yudi started to smile………rani was still confused and yudi seeing her confused and puzzled burst out ……..

Rani: aapko hansi aa rahi hain aur humaari jaan nikaal rahi hain……..

Yudi cupped her face in his strong palm and rubbed his thumb on her cheek.

Yudi: raniji lagtaa hain aap bhul gayi ki ees mahal main humaare alaavaa ek aur bhi kunvarji hain………….

Suddenly rani realized that not yudi but rudra was hurt and servants were talking about him and this sudden realization brought sigh of relief.

Rani: hum to dar hi gaye the ye baat sun kar……….kyunki jab hum mandir main aapko chhod kar aaye aap bahut hi bechen the hume lagaa kahi aapki gaadi ………….hume shochne se bhi dar lagtaa hain…………ye b aat sun kar humaari haalat buri ho gayi thee kaise humne sambhaalaa apne aapko ab tak woh …hum hi jaante hain kyunki aapki milne bhi nahi aa sakte………..sabke so jaane kaa intzaar karte rahe aur jaisa hi maukaa milaa hum dode chale aaye……….

Yudi was emotionally staring at rani, he was over whelmed by rani's concern and worry for him. Yudi was overwhelmed by the magnitude of rani's love for him. He was thanking god for giving him solicitous companion like rani.

Abruptly rani said: ab hum chalet hain ………warnaa……..

Yudi lift rani's face :aap jaane ki baat kar rahi hain? aap jaanti hain ?aapke aane se pahele hum aapke bare main hi soch rahe the………..aisa lag rahaa hain hume jaise aap humaare khwabo se nikaal kar hakikat ban kar humaare saamne upasthit ho gayi hain.

Rani could not hold yudi's ardent gaze she lowered her eyes and softly voiced her feelings.

Rani: kunvarji, hum jante hain aap humaare hi bare main soch rahe the....lekin ab hume jaanaa padegaa warnaa hum nahi chaahte ki kisi ko bhi humaare ye Milan ke bare main bhanak tak pad jaaye warnaa............warnaa ye Milan ka ek lamhaa jindagi bhar ki judaayi banke rah jaayegi..........

Yudi kept his hand on her mouth indicating not to utter such inauspicious words. Yudi's eyes were reflecting the pain and dilemma he was feeling moment before rani entered the room.

Yudi: aap ...aisi baate mat kahiye ...humaaraa dil joro se dhadak ne lagtaa hain......aap se door jaane ki baat bhi soch kar pataa nahi hum eet ne bhavuk ho jaate hain ki hum apne aap ko sambhaal nahi paate hain

rani looked at yudi affectionately, and cupped his face and without breaking her eye contact.

Rani: kunvarji kyaa baat hain aap kisi baat se paresaan lag rahe hain?

Yudi tried to avoid the discussion because he knew that he would not able to control his emotions and he did not want to feel weak in front of rani especially he knew that if rani would sense his anxiety and apprehension than she would start worrying with out any reason. Yudi did not want to pass his fear.

Yudi: nahi rani koi baat nahi hain...........aap khamkhaa paresaanho rahi hain.

Rani: hum khaamkhaa paresaan nahi ho rahe hain hum lagtaa hain ye bimaari aapko lagi hain....kahiye kyaa baat hain....aap hum se chhipaayenge apni paressani....kyaa kar paayenge aap aisaa?

Yudi: rani hum jaante hain hum aap se kuchh nahi chhipaa sakte lekin hum aapke binaa matlab ke paresaan anahi karnaa chahte..............

Rani: waise bhi aap ko paresaan dekh kar hum paresaan ho hi jaayenge.aur agar aapne wajah nahi baataayi to humaari to neend haraam ho jaayegi....

Yudi took her hand in his hand and pat gentle kiss on her hand: pataa nahi rani aaj pitaaji ko rudra ke upar gussaa hote huve dekh ek ajib saa dar dil main beth gayaa hain.........

Rani was listening to him with full concentration.

Yudi: rudra buri tarahaa se zakhmi thaa phirbhi ooski parvaah naa karte huve pitaaji apni maan , maryaade ke bare main jyaadaa chintit the...agar socho oonhe hamaare bare mainpataa chalegaa to oonkaa pratibhaav kyaa hogaa......hum jaante hain woh ees rishte ko apni anoomati nahi deknge...lekin hume dar ees baat se lag rahaa hain ki kahi hum ek dusre se bichhad naa jaaye.....kisi bhi wajah se......

Rani understood his predicament, he was in confusion and the worry yudi was having, was justified and inevitable.

Rani: aap ees tarah se vyathit naa hoyiye kunvarji sab theek ho jaayegaa.

Yudi: kyaa aap ko lagtaa hain sab theek ho jaayegaa? Kyaa aap ko ye dar kabhi nahi lagtaa ke hum aapse bichhad jaayenge? Rani hum to ees baare main sochte hi kaamp oothte hain kyunki aapke bina hum apne astitva ke baare main soch bhi nahi sakte......

Rani lead yudi near his bed and made him sit and she also set beside him. She rested her head on his shoulder and with very deep voice.

Rani: kunvarji, agar hum kahe ki hume dar nahi lagtaa to hum jooth bolenge, lekin....humaare liye aap humaare hi wajood kaa ek hissaa hain....hum jab bhi apni aankhe mode te hain aapki tasveer humaare saamne aa jaati hain. Aapko humaare paas paane ke liye kabhi bhi hume aapke sharirik taur pe paas hone ki jaroorat nahi mahesoos hoti....kyunki aap humaari aatmaa main bas chuke ho. ....humaaraa atut hissaa ban chuke ho.......aap jaante hain jab sakkar ko dudh main gholaa jaataa hain tab dudh sakkar ke gun ko apnaa letaa hain .....sakkar dudh main aise vilin ho jaati haiin jaise ....woh dudh kaa hi atut hissa ho....woh apne gun ko dudh ko samarpit kar deti hain...aur phir dudh aur sakkar ko koi juda nahi kar paataa...aap kuchh bhi jatan kar le.....sakkar kaa jo gun hai aap aankho se nahi dekh sakte ....nahi haatho se chhoo sakte ho sirf ....mahesoos kar sakte ho ........oosi prakaar aapkaa pyaar aapkaa astitva humaare ander ees tarah se samaa chukaa hain oose koi alag nahi kar saktaa aur oose sirf hum mahesoos kar sakte hain...........aur ek baat kunvarji......aap se koi aapke bhagvaan ki murti ko chhin saktaa hain lekin aapki puja ko prathnaa ko koi nahi chhin saktaa kyunki woh humesaa aapke saath raheti hain aapke under......aur sache pujari ko mutri ki jaroorat nahi hoti woh apne man se hi apne bhagvaan ko pujtaa rahetaa hain..oosi prakaar bhale hi kisi bhi wajah se hume baahyaa taur se aapse alag honaa pade lekin aantrik taur par .....maansik taur par aap humesaa humaare saath rahenge.......eesi wajah se hum aap se bichhad ne ki baat se eetne vyathit nahi hote aur hum aap se bhi gujaarish karte hain ki aap aisi chintaa chhod dijiye......

yudi was looking at rani in amusement. Yudi's heart was beating very fast and his all heart beat was craving to be with her all the time. Yudi took her in gentle embrace.

Yudi: rani aapki baate hume eetni saataa deti hain jaise registann ki tapti ret ko ek chhotaa saa baadal apni chhoti chhoti boondo se shitltaa detaa hain. Aur.......

But before he could finish his sentence yura was startled by the sudden intruder in the room. Yudi was shaken seeing his dad's sudden visit to him and that was at this period of night and when he was with rani in his arm. Shiver pass through their spine seeing RS standing in front of them. RS eyes widen seeing yura in each other's arm. Yura stood up and straitened themselves, their feet was turning weak with fear. Yudi felt his heart would jump out of his body with fear. The dreadful thought he was having moment before seemed coming true.

RS ki aankho se jaise angaare baras rahe the..aur yura sukhe patto ki tarah thar thar kaamp rahe the, yudi apne pita se nazre bhi nahi milaa paa rahaa thaa. Jo kalpnaa oose daraa rahi thee oose ees tarah apne saamne taadash hote dekh woh shithil ho gayaa thaa.

Rani ki haalat to aisi thee jaise dharti jagaa dede to woh abhi oosme samaa jaaye, thodi der pahele jis baat se yudi ko udvigan nahi hone ke liye woh samjaa rahi thee oosi baat ko apne saamne saakaar hote huye dekh woh bhi ......bhay bhit ho rahi thee......

Vaastviktaa eetni daraavni hoti hain ye kalpnaa bhi na thi hume,

Aaj kalpnaa ko apne saamne vaastviktaa bante dekh dar lagne lagaa hain hume.

RS: kunvar..........ye sab kyaa hain ?????????

Yudi: pitaaji...hum woh.....rani..hum..

RS: bas chup ho jaayiye ab ye sab karne ke baad safaayi deni ki koshish mat kijiye.....pataa nahi ye sab kab se chal rahaa hain humaari pith piche ....hume aapse ye ummid kateyi nahi thee........kitnaa bharosaa thaa hume aap par lekin aapne bhi humaaraa bharosaa tod diyaa kunvar......agar hum aaj rudra ke bare main aapse puchhne ees tarahaa achaanak anhi aate to aapki aisi ghiri huyi harkat ke bare main hume kabhi bhi pataa nahi chaltaa...

Yudi: lekin pitaaji aap humaari baat suniye.....aap galat samaj rahe hain

RS: kunvar ...galat hum nahi samaj rahe hain...galat aap kar rahe hain.......

Yudi: lekin pitaji hum rani se pyaar karte hain.😲😲

Rani was surprised hearing yudi's words. Rani's heart was throbbing very fast and she was shivering with fear. Her heart was pounding wildly and was perturbed seeing RS and yudi against each other. In her dream also she did not think that their relation would come in front of king in this ugly manner.

RS shouted: bas kunvar ek aur lafz nahi...........kyunki aap jise pyaar kah rahe hain woh pyaar nahi keval ek shanik aaveg hain jo samay jaate ........lupt ho jaayegaa.....

Yudi: nahi pitaji ye koi shanik aaveg nahi hain ye sachaa pyaar hain....aur hum rani ko apne sache dil se pyaar karte hain...aur oonke bina ek pal bhi nahi ji sakte...

RS taunted: achhaaa to ye aapkaa sachaa pyaar hain....kunvar ye kaisa pyaar hain aapkaa..jo ek naukrani ko raat ke andhere main...sabse chhip kar ek kunvar ke kamare tak le aayaa.....aur woh bhi sabse nazar chhipaa ke aapke bistar tak le aayaaa.

Yudi could not take rani's insult:pitaji ........rani ke bare main aap aisi baat mat kihiye..........

Hearing those insulting words , tears were rolling down rani's eyes. She was feeling big lump in her throat and with tears her vision was getting blurred, but the only thing she could feel was yudi's emotions, his broken heart and his shaken mind.

RS continued to rain torrents of abuse on rani, punctuating his sentences with profanities: achhaa ees do take ki naukraani ke bare aisi baate na kare to kaisi baate kare...are aisi ladkiyaa mahlo main aati hi hain aise maksad se ki bhole bhaale kunvaro ko fasaayaa jaaye.....aisi ladkio kaa koi charitra nahi hotaa

Yudi protested strongly: bas pitaaji ek aur lafz nahi rani ke khilaaf......

Yudi clenched his fist and the vein on his arm and hand showed. Rani was still standing there in daze and tears were rolling down her cheeks, she felt her world would collapse any moment now.

RS with note of finality: kunvar bas ..........ab ye ladki yaha ek pal ke liye bhi nahi rahegi.....aaj aapne humaaraa sar Sharma se jukaa diyaa kunvar.......aap .jis par hume naaz thaa, pura bharosaa thaa ki duniyaa eedhar ki oodhar ho sakti hain lekin kunvar yudi kabhi apne vachan aur parivaar ki maan maryaadaa kaa sauda nahi kar sakte lekin....ye humaaraa bhram saabit huvaa kunvar......

RS: shouted : gaurds......

Yudi was feeling panicked unaware what his father would do with them. In the state of fright his mind was unable to think, he stood their rooted, could not even meet his eyes with rani.

Yudi gathered his courage: lekin pitaji...ees main rani koi Galati nahi hain........

RS with firmest voice: bas kunvar .......warnaa humse buraa aaj koi naa hogaa......

RS: ordered guards : ees ladki ko abhi eesi waqt ees mahal se bahaar phek do.......

Yudi: pitaaji aap aisaa nahi kar sakte ...hum aapke mujrim hain jo saja deni hain woh aap hume dijiy....rani ko nahi...

RS: kunvar humne kahaa naa ek aur shabda nahi ....hum ees ke age kuchh nahi sunnaa chaahte .....guards....dekh kyaa rahe ho dhakke maar kar nikaal do ees ladki ko ees mahal se.....

Rani was pleading to king: RS aisa mat kijiye....hume thoda samay dijiye hum khud hi chale jaayenge........

She looked at yudi helplessly, sobbing constantly and her sobs were ripping yudi's heart in small pieces. He rushed near king to ask for mercy but king was not in mood to listen single word from any one. Guards were dragging rani towards stair and yudi was still argueing with his dad to think twice before taking any drastic decision. However, when yudi realised that his dad was stone hearted and he won't listen to any body's plight he rushed towards rani. He saw rani was struggling with guards and they were about to drag her down stair. Seeing rani in pain and getting insulted yudi's blood was boiling with rage.

Yudi shouted on guards: thaheriye......chhod dijiye rani ko warnaa......

Suddenly guards let go of rani's hand who was still trying to snatch her hand but in that hassle and struggle not rani, not guards andnot yudi realised that rani was standing on the edge of stair and the moment guards let go of her hand she lost her balance and before anybody could do anything...........rani.....................slipped....tripped .....and ........

Seeing her in that state yudi realised the danger and he was horrified seeing rani tumbling from stair.....

With hysteria yudi shouted: raniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😲

PS: hi friends i know this is something really vewry drastic ...but i could nto stop myself i thought why only creative get gaalis from you let me also share some with them....😳😳so ready on under table but sitting on table to collect

Beena, even though I loved your this part like previous parts, I am feeling scared now. How will you continue from here. RS has come to know about YuRa and he has completely misunderstood it. And now Rani is also hurt. I am sure Yudi wont leave her alone in this state. Will he fight against his father now, as he knows how stone-hearted he is. I just hope that no matter what, you dont separate YuRa either physically or mentally. I know that there will be problems in their path of love, but let them face it together, not seperately. Yes, I am repeating this sentence here too, as I have repeated it a million times by now for RKAB creatives. Well, I know RKAB creatives can let us down, but mujhe pura vishwas hain ki hamari Beena aisa kuch nahin karegi.😊 Usse pata hain ki hum jab YuRa ko saath dekthe hain toh kitna khush hote hain, aur unko alag hone ki vichaar se bhi hum kaap jaate hain. 😕

By the way, I absolutely loved the following para:
aur ek baat kunvarji......aap se koi aapke bhagvaan ki murti ko chhin saktaa hain lekin aapki puja ko prathnaa ko koi nahi chhin saktaa kyunki woh humesaa aapke saath raheti hain aapke under......aur sache pujari ko mutri ki jaroorat nahi hoti woh apne man se hi apne bhagvaan ko pujtaa rahetaa hain..oosi prakaar bhale hi kisi bhi wajah se hume baahyaa taur se aapse alag honaa pade lekin aantrik taur par .....maansik taur par aap humesaa humaare saath rahenge.......eesi wajah se hum aap se bichhad ne ki baat se eetne vyathit nahi hote aur hum aap se bhi gujaarish karte hain ki aap aisi chintaa chhod dijiye......

Wow, loved your comparision. Not only are you improving my hindi, but you are also making me wiser. Thanks Beena for bestowing such knowledge upon us. 😊

Thanks Beena ... I loved it. And i really loved your ending....I wonder where you will take us next!!!!

You know as i get to know your Rani, I sometimes wonder where your Rani ends and Beena begins. It sometimes feel that it is Beena speaking and not Rani. They say that a writer identifies with at least one of his main protagonists, i feel that in your case it is your Rani, or am i wrong??? Am i reading too much into the characters????

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Beena, even though I loved your this part like previous parts, I am feeling scared now. How will you continue from here. RS has come to know about YuRa and he has completely misunderstood it. And now Rani is also hurt. I am sure Yudi wont leave her alone in this state. Will he fight against his father now, as he knows how stone-hearted he is. I just hope that no matter what, you dont separate YuRa either physically or mentally. I know that there will be problems in their path of love, but let them face it together, not seperately. Yes, I am repeating this sentence here too, as I have repeated it a million times by now for RKAB creatives. Well, I know RKAB creatives can let us down, but mujhe pura vishwas hain ki hamari Beena aisa kuch nahin karegi.😊 Usse pata hain ki hum jab YuRa ko saath dekthe hain toh kitna khush hote hain, aur unko alag hone ki vichaar se bhi hum kaap jaate hain. 😕

ab tumne to muje uljan main daal diyaa itnaa vishvaas muj par to main kaise tod sakoongi .......ab dimaag kaa istmaal karnaa padegaa jo mushkil hoga😆😆😆 and i know we all cannot see yura seperated now i have created new problem for me lets see how will i able to break this chakrvyuh that i have created and anvi i loved your hindi it's lovely aur main tumhe koi bhi bure vichaaro se kaamp ne nahi dungi😳😳😳

By the way, I absolutely loved the following para:
aur ek baat kunvarji......aap se koi aapke bhagvaan ki murti ko chhin saktaa hain lekin aapki puja ko prathnaa ko koi nahi chhin saktaa kyunki woh humesaa aapke saath raheti hain aapke under......aur sache pujari ko mutri ki jaroorat nahi hoti woh apne man se hi apne bhagvaan ko pujtaa rahetaa hain..oosi prakaar bhale hi kisi bhi wajah se hume baahyaa taur se aapse alag honaa pade lekin aantrik taur par .....maansik taur par aap humesaa humaare saath rahenge.......eesi wajah se hum aap se bichhad ne ki baat se eetne vyathit nahi hote aur hum aap se bhi gujaarish karte hain ki aap aisi chintaa chhod dijiye......

Wow, loved your comparision. Not only are you improving my hindi, but you are also making me wiser. Thanks Beena for bestowing such knowledge upon us. 😊
chalo anvi kuchh to shikhi mera likhnaa naakaam naa rahaa...kisi ne kuchh shikhaa😆😆 but i am really happy to know that....dear.......

Beena,

Originally posted by: bsingapury

...... dur hain, anjaane hain, kabhi nahi dekhaa hain phir bhi kuchh jane pahechaane hain