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Posted: 16 years ago
ok kirti for you i will shift that part on this page with the other part i will post in half hour
and everybody i will comment later on your comments thank youall
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Great job Beena di,

Loved every moment of it. I can feel Yura's pain..😭😭.
What a brave Yura!!!!! You are doing a wonderful job with your Hindi dialouges. I am thoroughly enjoying it. Please post the next part soon. 👏👏👏
Waiting patiently.😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi simra , noni and rani i have to shift this part on this page because kirti was having problem viewing that page so sorry dears your comment went on back page but while i will comment on them i will quote them so will come back here sorry for that
PS: hi friends i have one request to make tow i am going to post two parts this part is ready but another part i have to finish last page that i will write by night and update it by tonight so for your long wait bonus today😳..........and i want to dedicate this both part to all those girls who have worked hard to bring kanjali on top two in NB4 thank you all.........and hats off to all of you
another request when i was writing this part i did not realise it will become too long, because in between i have to add saksh and yudi's conversation because i personally felt that , it was needed otherwise it was giving effact that yudi as a person and prince has weak character..........so i am sorry if you feel bit lengthy don't forget to comment or critisize because that gives me idea what people want............thanks
enjoy this part so mean while i will post another continual part thanks
Part 65

Yudi was about to blurt out the truth that CR was desirous to hear about. The truth he was going to say could bring catastrophe in many lives. Everybody around him was staring at him in bewilderment. He was standing their as rock. He frowned and his mouth trembled.

Yudi: pitaji woh aapke liye ek naukrani hogi lekin humaare liye woh''😭

But before he could finish his sentence there was sharp noise of shattered glass diverted everybody's attention towards that direction.

Sukhiya was startled by the glances people giving him. 😲The moment he reached to dining hall he was restless seeing yudi about to reveal the truth. If yudi would have spill the beans, it could have wash out his many years planning. It could have hurt his master's trust upon him. It could have destroyed his master's life, and his loyalty towards his master had thought him how to salvage situations. In split of second he took vase near by him and threw it on floor because he knew nobody was watching him. His effort did not go in waste because, that noise broke everybody's concentration. Yudi was still rooted to his place, confused and devastated.

From his heart Sukhiya was thanking god that the servant gave him message and asked him to convey it to RS and that was the reason he came to dining hall.

CR stared angrily at Sukhiya, her face livid with fury.

CR: Sukhiya 'kyaa huva kyun eetne daude chale aa rahe ho'.dekh nahi rahe yahaa kitni mahtvaapurn( important) baate ho rahi hain? (she shouted, her face suffused with anger and annoyance.)

Sukhiya (trembling and his voice trail off, for moment he could not understand what to say he but) : ji '.hmm,,woh'..ye bataa ne ke liye aaye thee ki BR ko honsh aa gayaa hain'..aur woh naukrani ne hume turant italaah(inform) di ki hum aapko ye khabar de kyunki BR'.RS ko yaad kar rahi hain.

CR lost her rag completely, she was feeling hot under her collar and she felt angry bile rising in her throat. She thought that Sukhiya was really a stupid he could have wait for a moment before delivering this message. If Sukhiya would have waited than yudi would have blurted out the truth she was desperate to listen. However, she did not have any other option but to change her facial expression from angry to contented and happy hearing about BR's good health.

RS ( was delighted the moment he heard this news) : kya kaha aapne BR ko honsh aagayaa'..CR hum bahut khush hain ye sun kar ''..chaliye hum abhi mil ne jaayenge BR ko''''.aur kunvar aap se hum baad main baat karenge ees Vishay(topic) main'''aap bhi chaliye'''.

Crestfallen and despondent, yudi did not reply and still rooted to his place. However, in his happiness RS did not wait to look at yudi otherwise he could have understand that after hearing happy news about his mom, yudi was still in a state of depression.

CR was not ready to leave this topic so easily so when she saw yudi still standing near his chair.

CR: kyaa huvaa aapko bte''..chaliye didi aapko dekh kar bhi khush hogi''..chaliye bte'..dekhiye aap BR ki chintaa kar rahe the naa bhagvaan ne hum sab ki sun li woh theek hain'''aake mil lijiye to oonko bhi sukun lagegaa'.

Yudi( faint voice): ji CR aap chaliye hum aate hain'''.

CR: nahi bte aap hume bahut paresaan lag rahe hain oos naukrani ko lekar lekin ''..lekin aap chintaa mat kijiye woh theek ho jaayegi aur''.aise chhot mote waakiye hote rahete hain'aisi baato se paresaan honaa aapko shobha nahi deta'''

Yudi stared at CR, he was puzzled and was thinking was it very small matter? Rani ,his life , his passion, his prayer in short everything for him, was fighting battle of her life somewhere in this palace and how could he relax and not think about it?

CR could understand that look yudi gave her but she pretended not to acknowledge it she asked RB to join her too and started to go towards BR's room. Heavy heart yudi started to follow her but his mind was racing very fast, he thought that he had to find way to meet rani and till he would not see rani he would not able to sit in peace. He would not able to breath, he would feel perturbed.

On his way one strong hand pulled him in one corner. It was saksh who actually returned after collecting medicine from Clinic and today he drove car very fast because his mind was only thinking about yudi and the moment he enter palace he realised the delicate situation but thanked god that at nick of the time because of Sukhiya ji the situation had been handled properly but still he had doubt that yudi would not give up till he would see rani and might be for that he would tell truth to RS.

yudi was blankly staring at saksh.

Saksh: kunvarji'.sambhaaliye apne aapko ''''.aap ye kyaa karne jaa rahe the?

Yudi: saksh ''.rani ..rani'

Saksh: hume maaloom hain rani ko saamp ne kaataa hain '

Yudi (raise his eyebrows and with sourness in his tone) : aur aapne hume bataane ki bhi jaroorat nahi samaji saksh?

Saksh: kunvarji'''.hum aapse wahi baat bataane jaa rahe the ki CRji ne aapko bulaa liyaa'''humne sochaa aane ke baad bataayenge lekin humaare bataane se paheli hi aapko maloom ho gayaa aur jis baat kaa hume dar thaa wahi ho jaataa'aaj

Yudi: humaari rani apni jindagi se jooj rahi hain aur aap ko kisi aur hi baat ki chintaa sataa rahi hain?

Saksh: kunvarji aisi baat nahi hain'''''

Yudi: ''.hum ees waqt ye sab bahesh main nahi padnaa chahte ' hum abhi eesi waqt rani se milnaa chahte hain''..

Saksh: kunvarji ''..aap jaante hain aap kyaa kah rahe hain?

Yudi (with determination) : ji saksh hum jaante hain hum kyaa kah rahe hain aur ,'..hum kisi se darte nahi hain'''ees waqt rani ko humaari jaroorat hain bas itni baat hum jaante hain'''.

Saksh (with pleading look): kunvarji aap.bhavnaa o main bah kar koi aisa kadam mat oothaalena jis ke liye baad main pachhtaanaa paade''jindagi main aise imtahaan aate hain kunvarji jab bhaavnaao ko sanyam(self control) main rakh kar''.dil par kaaboo paake soch samaj kar faisle karne padte hain''

Yudi: saksh agar hum ees waqt humaare pyaar kaa saath nahi de paaye to jindagi main apne aap se nazare nahi milaa paayenge'.hume lagegaa ki ees mushkil ki ghadi main agar jamaane ke dar se hum apne pyaar kaa daaman naa thaam sake to woh krutyaa(act) kaayartaa(coward) kaa krutyaa hoga ''''.aur hum kaayar nahi hain''.samje aap?

Saksh (frustrated) : jihaa kunvarji hum jaante hain aap kaayar nahi hain lekin agar aap ees waqt sabke saamne rani kaa saath dete hain to woh ek bewkoofi ki baat hogi''.virtaa ki nahi'''..

Yudi was puzzled: aap kahenaa kyaa chahte hain saksh.

Saksh: kunvarji ees baat ko ooske parinaam ki kalpnaa kar ke sochiye to aapko pataa lage gaa ki ees waqt aap kaa apni bhaavnaa o ko sanyam main rakh naa bahot hi jaroori hain''..sochiye '..agar ees waqt'.RS ko pataa chal gayaa to kyaa hoga?

Yudi: kyaa hoga? Woh gusse main hume mahal se bahaar nikaal denge apni jaaydaad se bedakhal kar denge ''lekin hume ees baat ki koi parvaah nahi hain''hum apni mahenat se apnaa aashiyanaa banaayenge hume hum par vishwaas hain'

Saksh: hum jaante hain aap main kaabiliyat hain lekin ees waqt'..rani ki haalat naajook hain ees waqt oose dekhbhaal aur aaraam aur ache se achhi doctor's ki jaroorat hain''agar rani ko aisi awasthaa main kathinaayiyo se gujarnaa pade aur maansik tanaav kaa saamnaa karnaa pada ya to phir achhese saarvaar nahi mili to ooski jindagi khatre main pad sakti hain'..aur bhagvaan na kare oose kuchh ho gayaa to kyaa aap apne aap ko maaf kar paayenge?''.sochiye kunvarji '''..thande dimaag se ye baat ko sochiye aur phir koi faislaa kijiyegaa'''

There was valid point in saksh's argument, yudi realised that rani needed best medical help and rest at this point of time, and if his father would come to know about his truth than it would become impossible to arrange all this facility immediately after going out of the palace. And he could not jeopardised rani's life for his impatience to see her at any cost. Saksh's argument forced him to think alternative way to meet rani. before yudi could discuss further with saksh, one servant gave him message that RS and CR was waiting for him in BR's room.

Jaise yudi ne BR ke kamare main kadam rakhha BR apne bte ko dekh kar kaamp gayi. BR ko lagaa jaise kisi ne yudi ke sharir main se praan har liye ho , jaise binaa sur kaa saaj sunaa lagtaa hain aur jaise yudi ke chahere se noor hi chalaa gayaa ho. BR kaa dil apne bache ko pida main dekh dard kar oothaa. Maa kaa dil thaa apne bte ki vyaathaa ko bhalibhaati pahechaantaa thaa. Aaj oose lagaa Rani jaise yudi kaa praan swaas hain. Rani yudi ke liye jaise gunghroo ki ghanti main chhipaa huvaa woh chhotaa saa boondaa hain jo kisi ko dikhaayi to nahi detaa lekin ooske binaa ghunghroo kitnaa sunaa ho jaataa hain'.kyunki woh boondaa hi dar asal oos ghanti kaa astitvaa hotaa hain. Oos se hi oos ghunghru main jaan hoti hain, ghughru ki pahechaan hoti hain ''''woh ghunghru ke sine main khanaktaa rahetaa hain aur ghunghru ko jivant banaataa rahetaa hain.

Yudi set beside his mom and took his mom's hand in his hand. Words were not coming out from his mouth but right now he felt that if he could find solace in his mom's lap where he could relive his all pain.

BR ke dil se apne bachche ke liye oothtaa dard aanshu banke oonki aankho se tapak padaa.

CR who was watching every thing with full concentration got connection to her game plan and talk that was left abruptly in dining hall.

CR: didi kyaa baat hain aap ro kyun rahi hain'.aap theek hain naa?.......dekhiye naa rajaji didi kisi baat se paresaan lag rahi hain?

RS: kyaa baat hain BR? Aap chintaa mat kijiye aap ab bilkul theek hain aur doctor ne kahaa hain bas thodaa saa maansik tanaav thaa ab woh bhi theek ho jaayegaa aap bas apnaa khyaal rakhiye.

CR: kunvar''..aap bhi paresaan mat hoyiye''.aapkaa chaheraa dekhiye kitnaa utar gayaa hain''didi ab theek hain aap ees tarah se vyatheet rahenge to didi ko jyaadaa chintaa hogi'.

Yudi did not utter single word he looked at his mom. He felt his mom's eyes were reflecting his own pain. His mind was racing very fast, because with every passing minute his anxiety was increasing and his desperation to meet rani was also increasing.

CR: kunvar hume kyun lagtaa hain abhi aap woh naukrani ke bare main hi soch rahe hain'..galati humaari hain hume aapko nahi bataa naa chahiye thaa'''hum aapke bhaavuk man ko jaante hain''.ki aap chhoti chhoti baat se paresaan ho jaate hain''.

Yudi: CR ye chhoti baat nahi hain''kisi ki jindagi kaa sawaal hain'''

RS: kunvar ''..ye kyaa baat kar rahe hain aap .honsh main to hain''..woh ek naukraani hain''

Yudi snapped: pitaji woh aapke liye ek naukrani hogi lekin''lekin humaare liye woh'''woh''.

RS: woh kyaa ? aap kabse sirf ek hi rat lagaaye bethe hain hum bhi sune kyaa hain who aapke liye''.

RS was very angry and BR was scared thinking about worst and praying to god to help his son and to give him strength to endure all pain.

CR was smirking and waiting for the triumphant moment of her life.

Yudi was charged with emotions though for a moment he fumbled for words than : woh''..humaare liye '.bhagvaan kaa bhejaa ek aisaa faristaa hain jisne humaari maa ki jaan bachhayi hain'''.

Yudi was trembling while delivering those words. BR closed her eyes and breathes of sigh. His abhorrence to his inability to meet rani was making him feel belittle in his own eyes. However, his determination to try in every possible way that could give him single chance to at least see his rani at this point of time, was making him feel confident also.

CR was fuming because of the way yudi had twisted the words but she was also too determined to try all her weapon in all possible way.

CR: lekin .kunvar.naukro kaa farz hota hain'apne maalik ki sevaa karnaa aur apne maalik ke liye jaroor pade to jaan de denaa'..hum sahi kah rahe hain naa RS?

RS gave frown glanced to yudi: hum bilkul sahemat hain aap se CR.

Yudi: agar sevako(he could not say naukar to rani his love for her did not permit him to use that word for her) kaa farzz hain apne maaliko ke prati to maaliko kaa bhi farz hota hain oonke prati'''''aur hum ek rajvanshi hain '''..aur pitaji aapne hi hume shikhaayaa hain ki har raajavanshi ko apni praajaa ke jaan maal ki rakshaa karni chaahiye aur '.oonke ahesaano kaa badlaa agar kisi aur tarike se naa chukaa paye to ho sake to shukriyaa karke chukaanaa chaahiye'''

CR: kunvar ye aap kyaa baat kar rahe hain aap jaante hain? Ek kunvar ko ye sab shobha nahi detaa'''

Yudi: CR'. humaaraa farz hume kahetaa hain hume abhi jaake oos vyakti ki khabar puchh ni chahiye aur oonkaa shukriyaa adaa karnaa chahiye'''.aur hum jaa rahe hain apnaa farz nibhaane ke liye'..hume kshamaa kar dijiye pitaji lekin hume yahi baat sahi lagati hain''

CR ground her teeth in annoyance because her all attempt to open yudi's mouth was going in vain. She took a deep breath and tried to suppress her rising irritation.

Yudi stood up and was about to go when RS stopped him on his way.

RS: thaheriye kunvar'.

CR saw some ray of light that now RS would stop yudi and that might force yudi to open up. Yudi's hope seemed crushed with disappointment, he stood rooted to the spot, thwarted and frustrated.

RS (continued and looked at CR): CR hume lagtaa hain kunvar sahi kah rahe hain'''

Yudi could not hide his felicity, his face light up with delight that RS himself giving him permission to meet rani, he turned towards RS in anticipation to here promising words.

However, CR had completely opposite emotions hearing RS's words.

CR: aap kyaa kahaenaa chahte hain RS.

RS: CR''..aaj kunvar ne hume apnaa ek raajaa hone kaa farz yaad dilaa diyaa''..hume oos naukraani kaa shukriyaa adaa karnaa chaahiye jisne apni jaan ki parvaa naa karte huve humaari patni ki yani BR ki jaan bachaayi''..aur insaaniyat ke naate ye humaaraa farz hain aur ek raja ke naate ye humaaraa kartavyaa bhi hain'''kyun BR hum theek kah rahe hain naa?........aap bhi yahi chaahti hain naa?

RS affectionately looked at BR, who by blinking her eyes responded in affirmative.

Yudi was contented: achhaa pitaji to hum abhi onhe milke aate hain jinhone humaari maa ki jaan bachaayi'..

RS: nahi kunvar ''.(yudi looked at RS with puzzlement) '..aap akele nahi jaayenge ''.hum bhi aap ke saath aayenge'.

Yudi, CR and RB all of them could not believe their ears, everyone had their own reason to feel surprised by RS's words. Yudi wanted to meet rani alone so he could take her in his arm and share her pain and assure her that he was there for her in her time of need. He wanted to ensure himself that rani was alright.

Yudi: aap''.aap bhi challenge?

RS: kyun koi aapati hain?.......

Yudi: nahi .lekin

RS: abhi aapne kahaa naa ki raja kaa farz hain to chaliye'''

Koi chaaraa naa thaa sivaayi ooske ki yudi apne pitaji ke saath rani ko mil ne jaaye'..eetni tasalli to rahegi ki woh kam se kam rani ko mil to paa rahaa thaa. oose dekh paa rahaa thaa.

When RS and yudi reached to rani's room nikki was still sitting there. Rani was still unconscious. Saksh had informed Nikki about whatever happened in dining hall and she was concerned about yudi, but she was amused by RS and yudi's visit to rani.

Nikki looked at yudi whose eyes were asking many questions about rani's wellbeing. Nikki could feel yudi's anguish.

Nikki: pitaji aap'.aur bhaiyaa''..

RS: ji '.nikki aap yahi par hain abhi tak?

Nikki: hum abhi jaa rahe the''thodi der main ''..(she looked at yudi from corner of her eyes, who was very disturbed seeing rani in this state)

RS: kahiye ye ab kaisi hain'''

Nikki: ji'.woh'.doctor ne kaha khatre ki koi baat nahi . aur who bilkul theek hain''sirf davaai kaa asar hain eesi liye aaraam kar rahi hain'..

Nikki had to tell that because she did not want her brother to get restless worrying about rani. it was tormenting for yudi to see rani's pale face, that was as white as sheet, he felt like caressing her innocent and bloodless face and kiss on her forehead. He was trying very hard to control his raging emotions.

Yudi: oonki jaan ko koi khatraa to nahi hain naa?

Nikki: nahi bhaiya''..kal subahaa tak to who bilkul theek ho jaayegi''.chintaa ki koi baat nahi

Nikki mentally asked forgiveness from god and yudi also, that she was lying about rani's health but she did not have any other option.

RS: chaliye kunvar hum kal is naukrani kaa shukriyaa adaa kar lenge ees waqt ye aaraam kar rahi hain.

Yudi with heavy heart left rani's room.

In his room he kept thinking about rani, he tossed and turned whole night. He could not sleep.

Na oosko chain thaa naa sukun kyunki who to rani ke paas chhoot gayaa thaa. Aankhe bandh karte hain oose rani kaa who julsaa huva chaheraa nazar aa jaataa thaa aur bure vicharo se ooska badan kaamp jaataa thaa.

He did not realise when he fell sleep while thinking about rani. in the morning he heard knock on his door and he woke up from his sleep. He asked that person to enter the room.

Saksh: kunvarji'..aap abhi tak so rahe the

Yud.(first question he asked)i: saksh''..rani kaisi hain'''..?

Saksh: kunvarji hum sidhe aapke paas aa rahe hain.hum abhi tak rani se mil ne nahi gaye''..

Yudi: to aapko oonse mil ke aanaa chahiye thaa naa'''.(his frustration was clearly visilble in his tone)

Saksh: hum to aapse ye kahane ke liye aaye the ki CR aur RS aapkaa BR ke kamare main intzaar kar rahe hain'''

Yudi: theek hain hum abhi taiyaar hoke jaate hain'..aap rani ko dekh aayiye'..hum koi bhi bahanaa kar ke aaj to jurur oonse mil ne jaayenge '..agar who honsh main aa gayi ho to oonhe humaaraa sandesaa kah dijiyegaa

Saksh: ji kunvarji''''aur aap theek to hain naa? Aapki aankhe bataa rahi hain aap saari raat theek se soye nahi''..

Yudi did not answer but his pain was clearly visible in his eyes. Yudi went to bathroom to get ready and saksh went to meet rani.

When saksh enter rani's room nikki was already there helping rani with her medicine.

saksh: rani ab aap kaisa mahesoos kar rahi hain?

Rani: are sakshji aap''aayiye'..hum ab theek mahesoos kar rahe hain shukriyaa''.

However, rani was trying to look normal her discomfort did not remain hidden from her face. Her eyes seemed tired and drowsy under the influence of medicine. Her hands were shaking because of weakness and her voice was very faint.

Rani looked around saksh understood that she wanted to ask about yudi but she was in confusion.

Saksh: rani kunverji bhi theek hain'.aap chintaa mat kijiye''who aap ko leke paresaan hain lekin oonho ne apne aap ko achhe se sambhaal kar rakhaa hain''

Rani's biggest worry was yudi's reaction for entire situation. Knowing yudi's nature she was very well aware that yudi would not able to stop himself and would not able to sit in peace till he would see her perfectly alright.

However, before she could ask more gauri came to give her CR's order.

gauri: rani ''.kaisi ho tum?

Rani: hum theek hain gauri'.

Gauri:CR ne tumhaare liye sandeshaa bhejaa hain ki agar tum theek ho aur kamjori mahesoos naa ho rahi ho to adhe gante ke baad BR ke kamare main oonse milne jaanaa'''.

(CR knew that once rani will get her order she will definitely come to BR's room and she had planned something else to provoke yudi's feelings more because seeing rani's worst condition yudi might react the way she always wanted him to)

Rani: kyun koi khaash kaam hain onhe?

Gauri: ye to hume nahi maloom'..ab hum chalet hain hume RB ko bhi sandeshaa dene jaanaa hain ki oonhe bhi CR ne BR ke kamare main bulaayaa hain'.

Nikki was puzzled : CR ne appko kyun bulaayaa hogaa''..aur rani aap ees haalaat main nahi jaa sakti wahaa pe''..aap abhi bahut kamjor ho''.saksh aap kyaa kahete hain ees bare main?

Saksh: pataa nahi lekin '..kunvarji ko bhi CR ne bulwaayaa hain RB ke kamare main aur jahaa tak hume maloom hain kunvarji ko RB ko chhod ne jaanaa hain oonke mahal waapas.

Rani: tab to hume jaanaa hoga

Nikki: kyaa bacho jais baate kare hain rani'''.agar bhaiyaa ne aapko aisi haalat main dekh liyaa to aur udvigna ho jaayenge

Rani thought for a while and said: lekin nikki ji agar hum nahi gaye to oonki vidambanaa(problems) aur badh sakti hain''..woh jyaadaa chintit ho jaayenge''humaare swasthya(health) ke bare main soch kar'''ki hum jyaadaa bimaar honge eesi wajahaa se hum BR ke kamare main nahi aaye''.

Nikki: lekin'..agar aap ees haalaat main kaise jaayengi''.aapko dekh kar to jaroor oonko pata chal jaayegaa ki aap theek nahi hain

Rani: lekin hum swasth dikhne kaa pryaas to kar sakte hain '''aur agar who hume nahi dekhenge to who RB ko chhod ne jaane se bhi inkaar kar denge''eesi wajah se hume lagtaa hain hume jaana chahiye'hum apne aap ko thodi der ke liye sambhaal lenge'''aap vyathit na ho nikki ji

Hopelessly nikki looked at saksh: aap samjaayiye saksh ''aap kyun kuchh bol nahi rahe hain''..

Saksh gave assured glance to nikki and said: nikkiji'''rani jo kah rahi hain hum oos baat se sahmat hain''..humaare paas aur koi chaaraa nahi hain vajaay eenke ki rani abhi BR ke kamare main jaaye warnaa kunvarji sab kuchh bhul ke sidhe yahi daude aayenge''''aap chintaa mat kijiye hum hain naa oonke saath hum dono milke sambhaal lenge''.

Nikki though was reluctant but just shook her head and agreed with them. Rani saw the trust and assurance in nikki's eyes for saksh. It was strange but though she was feeling very weak but it was not remain hidden from her attention that there was something that only few people have for each other. The way yudi's words give her heart soothing sense, she felt same way nikki also felt by saksh's words. However, she was feeling so fragile right now that did not think more about it.

Saksh: theek hain aap log thodi der main pahonchiye BR ke kamare main hum kunvarji ko saath leke aate hain aur oonhe tasalli bhi de dete hain ki raniji theek hain.

Saksh went back to meet yudi.

Nikki helped her to stand but rani felt so cold that she was literally shivering. Her hands were clammy and the back of her dress was soaked with perspiration. There was bitter taste in her mouth and her stomach churned. She grimaced in agony as she struggled to sit up. When nikki touched rani she was perturbed because nikki felt that rani was feverish.

Nikki: rani aapko to halkaa saa bukhaar hain aur ''aap kaamp bhi rahi hain'..aur kal doctor ne hume italaah di thee ki thoda sa bhi bukhar ho to oonhe turant hi bulaayaa jaaye''.hum ees haalaat main aapko nahi jaane denge'ees main khatraa hain''.

Rani with trembling voice and breathing very high : thodi der ki baat hain ''.ek baar kunvarji chale jaaye eeske baad hum doctor ko bulaayenge''.

Nikki: lekin''.

Rani: lekin vekin kuchh nahi '''.nikkiji ees waqt hume sirf kunvarji ki mano sthiti ke bare main sochnaa chahiye '''chaliye''.

Rani stood up and tried to compose herself and took deep breath though she was feeling very weak but yudi's thoughts were giving her strength'''..

Ye kaise ek dusre ke sahaare the''''jo door hoke bhi ek duje ko sambhaal lete the''..

When rani reached BR's room, the moment she entered the room her eyes fell on yudi who was sitting on BR's bed near her legs, she cast furtive glanced and than averted her eyes towards RS who was sitting on chair near BR's head but on another side, CR was standing behind RS and next to her was standing RB and saksh was standing near yudi. Rani paid her respect to all of them. From corner of her eyes she looked at yudi and assured him that she was perfectly alright, because she could see the concern in his eyes.

CR: rani''.aap kaisi hain?

Rani: hum theek hain crji''shukriya'

All the while yudi's eyes were stuck on rani with anxiety.

CR: aap ne ''.aapni jaan ki parvaa naa karte huve BRji ki jaan bachaayi ees liye RS aapse bahut khush hain aur kuchh kahenaa chahte hain'''..

Rani's body was shaking but she was trying hard to control herself. She was feeling nauseating.

Rani: CRji who humaaraa farz thaa jo humne kiyaa'.

RS: aur hum eeske liye aake shukra guzaar hain''..aap nahi jaanti aapne hum per kitnaa badaa ahesaan kiyaa hain'''.BR ki jaan bachaa kar''.

RS looked affectionately at BR.

RS(continued): aur eeske badle main hum apni saari riyasat aapko de de who bhi kam hain'''ees liye hum aapko aaj ek wachan dete hain''ki jindagi ke kisi mod par kabhi bhi humse kuchh bhi maang lijiye gaa''''..ye ek shishodiya rajvansh ke raja kaa vachan hain''jaan denge lekin aapke vachan ki purti karenge'''

Everyone was shocked by RS's gift to rani. CR in her dream also not thought that RS would give vachan as gift'''..now what if rani might ask yudi in return'''oh that was something very trouble some but somewhere deep down CR knew that rani was very self respected and dignify person who could not use such boon for herself. However, Cr was sceptical about her own thoughts.

Yudi was also startled and surprised by RS's words. RB felt disgusted because of this special treatment with rani.

Rani was overwhelmed by this kind gesture and words of RS, she felt big lump in her throat and her words choking with emotions. :.shukriyaa''''.rajaji '.humare liye bas eetnaa hi kaafi hain ki BRji ki jaan bach gayi''.hume aur kuchh nahi chahiye''.

RS: chahe abhi aapko jaroorat naa lage lekin jindagi ke kisi mod par agar aapko avshyaktaa pad jaaye tab maang lenaa'''ab aap jaa sakti hain'..aur aaram kar sakti hain

Rani bowed down: shukriyaa''

CR actually called in front of yudi because she knew that rani might be weak and might not come or even though if she would come then she would not able to stand and from seeing her that state yudi might be restless. She underestimated rani's will power and self esteem. CR's mind was thinking at the speed of light to stop rani for few more minutes because she could observe that rani was trying very hard to control herself'.

CR: rani thaheriye''.humaare paas bhi kuchh taufa hain aapke liye'.

Rani , when RS asked her to go felt relived that though she was unable to stand she tried to handle herself and now can go back to her room, but now when again stopped her she was feared.

Yudi was just witnessing every situation evolving around him and that is helplessly.

CR: saksh '..woh tauhfa hum apne kamare mainbhool gaye hain aap jara leke aayenge?

Saksh and nikki was also fearing the same that the more rani would stand here that was more troublesome. Saksh gave hasty glanced to nikki who understood the situation.

Nikki: Crji koi baat nahi baad main de dijiye gaa ''..rani to yahi hi hain naa''

CR: nahi nikki hum chahte the ki RB apne mahal main jaane se pahele ''..rani ko apne haatho se de''.aur kunvar abhi oonhe chhod ne jaa rahe hain''

Yudi suddenly remember that he had to go to drop RB to her palace that he completely forgotten about. He was startled and something snapped within him. he felt dejected and disgruntled and thought pop up in his mind that he should just refuse to CR that he will not able to go to drop RB but he could not do that.

Rani's legs were shaking and her head was throbbing. She was trying with all her will but though her vision grew blurred and the things around her started to spin. She held her head in pain and she felt she was about to lost her consciousness.

Yudi who looked at rani was petrified and could not stopped himself and stood up with jerk and rushed near rani

Yudi: rani''.rani''.

continue on next post................as part :66
Edited by bsingapury - 16 years ago
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PS: ok i have created some dramatic situation though it is very strange but i feel it is like test for one true person how far he can go to save his or her loved one's life.......and while doing that will one can control our their wild and raging emtions like physical and emotional........that's why i have created that situation though i will with open arm will welcome all shock and surprise and if an y tomato and rotten eggs because of that...😆😆........please do not forget your opinion about that and suggestions........please

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However, rani immediately held pole near the bed and balanced herself and stopped yudi on his way by the gesture of her another hand.

Rani: hum theek hain kunvarji''

Yudi was concerned: aap ki tabiyet theek nahi lag rahi hain rani''.aap kitni kamjor lag rahi hain'..

RS who was watching all this was fuming with anger and CR was really very happy seeing her effort bearing fruits'''saksh and nikki was tense and their heart was beating very fast.

Rani: kunvarji woh to humne naastaa nahi kiyaa davayi lene ke baad eesi wajah se hum thoda kamjor mahesoos kar rahe hain''warnaa chinta jaisi koi baat nahi hain'

Yudi: lekin

RS: kunvar'..jab woh kah rah ihain woh theek hain ''..phir kyun bahes kar rahe hain'''..(his voice was cold and hard and he gave frowning glance to yudi)

RS to rani: aap jayiye jaake aaraam kijiye'''CR kisi naukarani ko kahiye ki rani ke saath jaaye''

Yudi shake his head disapprovingly but kept silent understanding the demand of time.

The moment rani left BR's room RS's anger shot the roof and he was furious by yudi's behaviour.

RS: kunvar ''..ye aap kyaa kar rahe hain..kitne dino se hum dekh rahe hain..aap kuchh ajib saa vyavhaar kar rahe hain''..aur ek kunvar ko is praakar se naukaro ke liya chinta karnaa uchit nahi hain''hume aapse katayi ye umid nahi hain ''..

Yudi: lekin pitaji''woh ghir bhi sakti thee

RS's face turned red with anger: bas kunvar ab aage kuchh nahi'''aap jaake pahele RB ko chhod aayiye baad main hum aapse baat karte hain''..RB ko deri ho rahi hogi

Yudi did not want to go to drop RB, his entire concern was only rani at this point of time.

Yudi: pitaji ''..hume kuchh jaroori kaam yaad aagayaa hain''..hum aisa karte hain RB ko driver ke saath bhej dete hain

RS: kunvar''..koi bhi kaam itnaa mahtva purn nahi hain jo ek din ke liye tham nahi saktaa''..RB ko chhod ne aap hi jaayenge ''aur ees baat pe koi bahes nani hongi'''

CR was smirking because she was successful to sow seed of suspicious in RS's mind. However, she had high expectation from this situation but things did not take turn the way she wanted but at least it was not washed out entirely though.

Reluctantly yudi stood up to go with RB. CR asked saksh to meet him in her room because she had some important work for him, and RS wanted to sit beside BR. Nikki also took leave from RS and CR and went to rani's room to check upon her.

When nikki went to rani's room and checked her temperature she realised that rani had high fever so immediately she called to doctor.

Rudra, who was lying on his bed keeping his eyes closed, opened his eyes when he heard soft noise in his room. He was dumbfounded when he saw tamanna entering his room. He stared in amazement at the unexpected visitor; he could not believe his eyes. He rubbed his eyes because for a moment he thought he had hallucination.

Rudra: tamanna tum yahaa?

Tamanna: kyun ??????mr. kunvar aap to ees tarah se chonk gaye jaise koi bhut dekh liya ho( she said while closing door behind her)

Rudra: lekin tum yaha?...ees tarahaa..aur kyun?...humara matlab hain ki ab kyaa baaki rah gayaa hain jo tum yaha chali aayi.

Tamanna: are mr. kunvar''jara hume saans to lene dijiye ek saath itne sawal jawab lagtaa hain aap hume milne ke liye aur baate karne ke liye betaab the''( she smiled and took seat beside rudra's bed. Rudra set up on his bed. He was still confused and actually annoyed by tamanna's sudden visit)

Rudra: tamanna galat vaham mat paalo '..hume tumse milne main koi dil chaspi nahi hain''..tum jaao yaha se''.hum waise bhi paresaan hain..humaara samay mat barbaad karo.

Tamanna: are ajib saa rivaaj hain aapke mahal kaa, ki ghar aaye mahemaan ko aise hi jaane ke liye bol rahe hain?.kitni mushkil se hum yaha aaye hain ''aur ye nahi ki humaari khatir dari kare''..chalo theek hain''

Rudra: lekin humaari samaj main ye nahi aa raha hain tumhe yaha aane kisne diyaa '.guards ne roka nahi aapko?

Tamanna (mischievously looking into rudra's eyes): abhi aap tamanna ko jaante nahi hain''badi sidhi si baat hain. Guards se humne kaha ki doctor ke yaha se aaye hain aapki davaayi dene aur doctor ne kuchh takid bataayi hain jo aapko bataa ni hain bas'.aur aa gaye'..mr. Rudra agar kisi se milne ki chahat ho to bahaane to hazaar mil jaate hain'..bas woh kahete hain naa eechhashakti honi chaahiye''( she put stress on that phrase purposely because she knew that Rudra wanted to meet RB but she did not try to meet Rudra and tamanna had to now spread net that can trap Rudra and confuse him emotionally also.)

Rudra's face became tight with annoyance and his voice full with irritation: ab aahi gayi hain to mil ne ki wajah bhi bataa dijiye aur phir chalti baniye''

Tamanna ( with softness in her tone) : hum aapki khabar puchh ne aaye the aur maafi maangne aaye the''oos din kuchh jyaada hi ho gayaa hume ees tarah se react nahi karnaa chahiye thaa'..

Rudra: bas ho gayaa aapkaa''agar ho gayaa ho to jaayiye yaha se ab hum araam karnaa chahte hain'..

Tamanna ( brought sad expression on her face) : hum eetnaa khatraa oothaa kar aapko mil ne aaye aur aap hain ki''theek hain hum chale jaate hain lekin kuchh pal ke baad kyunki'''

Rudra: kyun koi muharat dekh ke jaayengi aap?

Tamanna: nahi muharat to nahi lekin agar abhi gaye to pakde jaayenge kyunki raaj parivaar RB ko bidaayi de rahaa hain bahaar'woho to achhaa hoova woh bahar aaye oose pahele hum andar aa gaye aur phir chhipte chhupaate yahaa aa gaye''..

Rudra: RB ko bidaayi?

Tamanna: haa aapki hone wali bhabhi( she again put stress on this words and closely watch rudra's expression and she saw shadow of dejection pass over his face) ko aapke bhaiya lagtaa hain oonke mahal wasp chhod ne jaa rahe the''..

Rudra:RB chali bhi gayi'..aur who'.humse'''.( but realising tamanna's presence he left his sentence in middle)

Tamanna: are aap to aise dookhi ho rahe hain jaise aapko mile bina oonhe nahi jaanaa chahiye thaa'..kher''.ab hum chalte hain..

Rudra did not answer her

Tamnna walked towards door and about to open door but stopped, turned and looked at Rudra''

Tamanna: hum aapko jyaadaa paresaan to nahi karnaa chahte lekin'''

Rudra (said irritably): lekin kyaaa?????jo hain who saaf saaf bataayiye aur phir yaha se dafaa ho jaayiye'..

Tamanna: kal humne bhavi ko pub main dekhaa thaa'oonke dosto ke saath'.aur

Rudra (impatiently): aur kyaa?

Tamanna: jyaadaa to kuchh nahi lekin mr. kunvar hume ooke dost kuchh acche nahi lage''abhi aapki bahen nadan hain'..eesi wajah se hum aapko agaah kar rahe hain.ho sake to oonse baat kar lijiyegaa''.hum oonki bhalaayi chahte hain eesi wajah se hum ne aapko kah diyaa kyunki ye omar bahut hi fislan waali hoti hain'.ek galti jindagi kharaab kar deti hain'..

Rudra shouted, his face suffused with anger: bas ek aur shabd nahi tamanaa humne oos din bhi kaha thaa tumse humaari bahen ke khilaaf ek shabd hum nahi sunege'.yahi chir kar rakh denge''

Tamanna: mr. kunvar aapko bataanaa humaaraa farz thaa humne bataa diyaa phir aap ki marzi hume kyaa'.

She did not stop for a moment and left room leaving fuming Rudra behind. Rudra's blood was boiling thinking about RB and those words tamanna told about bhavi. He was almost ready to explode when CR enter room at that moment.

Rudra : aagyi aap apni bahu ko bidaa kar ke''.( his voice was full of bitterness)

CR: Rudra ye achaanak aapko kyaa ho gayaa'itnaa gussaa

Rudra: aapne humse wada kiyaa thaa app RB ko humse milwaayengi lekin aap ne oonhe bhej diyaa.

CR: Rudra aap bhi kabhi kabhi bacho jaisi baate lekar ad jaate hain''.ab baat hi aisi huyi to hum kyaa kare'.hum chahte hain rani ko bimaar dekh.apni jindaji se jujte dekh yudi bekabu ho jaaye aur oos naukrani se mil ne jaaye phir dekhiye RS kaise oon dono ko is mahal se nikaalte hain''.eesi wajah se hume ye sab karnaa padaa

Rudra: aapko oon dono ko milaa ne main dil chaspi hain'.oonke bare main sochne se aapko fursat milegi to aap humaare bare main sochenge'''lagtaa hain ye sab karte karte aap ye bhi bhul jaayengi ki aapkaa ek beta bhi hain aur ek beti bhi hain'

CR (retort): Rudra''.bas kijye gusse main aap kyaa bol rahe hain aap ko honsh nahi hain''..hum chalte hain.hum aapse baad main baat karenge.jab aapke honsh theekane honge'.

CR stormed out of the room but Rudra was very upset by everything happening around him. He clenched his fist and with all his strength he banged on his bed. He threw his cushion on floor and his unblinking eyes turned red with anger.

Violent thoughts had taken charge over his mind. His despondency and dejection was so over powered that he was unable to think coherently, the more he was thinking the more he was feeling that whenever tamanna had entered his life, she had left him always with more confusion. Before he never felt the way he was feeling right now. Around him he was sensing that everybody was just ignoring him and neglecting him. However for his that thought and confusion he was thinking that tamanna was responsible for all this. He was worried about bhavi also and feeling helpless that right now he was unable to help her sister. For that also he thought tamanna should be blamed because if she would not have beat him badly he would not have been in bed.

He thought that tamanna I would not spare you for this and now this time you have to pay for the things you have done with me. You have made my life as joke'..and '"ooljaa ke rakh diyaa hain jaise ek jaal ki tarahaa aur main oos main oolaj ke rah gayaa hoo''jabhi aayi ho meri uljaane tumne aur badhaayi hain'lekin ab bas'..ek baar muje theek ho jaano de phir dekhtaa hoo'..aur ees baar khel bhi mera hoga aur vijaataa bhi main hi hunga"

Yudi's entire day passed meeting all relatives at RB's place though he was physically there but mentally he was with rani, he tried to call saksh also but he was not able to make any contect with him and it was not possible to call to palace and ask anybody. His desperation was increasing by each passing moment and waiting for night to fall so he could go back to his palace and meet his rani at any cost.

Jaise dhan ke lobhi kaa man humeshaa apne chhipaaye huve dhan pe sthit dahetaa hain oosi prakaar yudi ko lag rahaa thaa ki woh kuchh bhi kare ooska man rani ke hi vichaaro main sthit thaa''aur rani koi anmol khazaane se kam thodi naa thee ooske liye'

It was very dark outside and too late in the night. Yudi's car was running fast on deserted road. The only thought that had captured his mind completely was to reach palace as soon as possible and directly went to rani's room. The crescent moon and silver stars were not soothing his troubled mind. If it would have been another occasion he would have stopped on his way and would have admired the beauty of nature.

The moment his car enter the palace, Sukhiya who was still awake was alert and look around and make quick look in the direction of RS and CR's room that no body was awake in palace. He was thanking god because CR was adamant to wait for yudi but RS suggest that she should sleep because yudi could come very late and it was not good for CR to take any trouble that could harm her health. That was the reason CR advised Sukhiya to keep eye on yudi's movement.

Immediately after entering the palace, Yudi turn towards servant rooms. Sukhiya came behind him and try to stop him but yudi was not in mood to listen anything. He just kept his hand forward and stopped Sukhiya gesturing that nobody could stop him now''''."jaise ooska dhairya kaa bandh tut gayaa thaa aur jaise bhavnaae bahaad banke aa gayi thee jo oose baha kar le jaa rahi thee apne saath.

Sukhiya, who understood yudi's restlessness and melancholic, did not have the courage to stop him but he just stood near by that area so he could keep watch on any troubled situation that might take place.

Yudi rushed into the rani's room and closed the door behind him, but the scene he witnessed inside room that pulled land from under his feet. Nikki was struggling to warm up rani's body. She seemed scared and worried, seeing nikki distraught and on edge yudi was perturbed.

Yudi: nikki..kyaa huva ''.rani ko aap kyun eetni gabrayi huyi hain''.😲😲

Nikki (distressed and tears had formed in her eyes): bhaiya .bhagvaan kaa lakh laakh sukriya ki aap gaye ''bhaiya dekhiye naa rani ko kyaa ho gayaa hain'''

Yudi went near to rani and took her head in his arm and hugged her very tight bringing her near his chest. Rani was shivering and though she was unconscious she clinged to yudi's body. "jaise barfili thand main log ghar main beth kar jalti huyi agni se garmaahat pane ke liye ooske nazdik jaake bethte hain ......aur kambal ko apne sharir kaa jaise baahya hissaa naa ho oosi prakar angikaar karte hain ....bas waise hi jaise rani ko yudi ke sharir se hunf mil rahi thee aur who''apni jeeva dori samaj kar tike raheni ki koshish naa kar rahi ho."

Yudi was crestfallen and shaken seeing rani's serious situation: nikki ,rani ki halat to bahut hi kharab hain aapne doctor ko kyun nahi bulaayaa''..aur hume bhi phone nahi kiyaa nikki'''..

Nikki: bhaiya'''.subahaa jab rani ko halkaa saa bukhaar thaa humne doctor ko bulaayaa onhone dawyi di oos se rani ko achha lag raha thaa lekin do pahar ko phir se bukhar badh gaya..aur phir tab wapas doctor ko bulaayaa gayaa''..oonho ne dusri davayi di aur '.takid ki '..ki ees dawayi se rani ko aaram rahegaa lekin oonkaa bukhar aur badhnaa nahi chahiye aur khaas karke'.thand se sharir ''..akad naa nahi chahiye'bhaia shaam tak rani bilkul theek thee '''.lekin wapas raat se bukhar chadhne lagaa humne doctor ko bahut try kiya lekin oonse contect nahi ho paa rahaa hain'''.aur phir ek ghante pahele'..rani ko bahut thand lagne lagi aur ab dekhiye ooska badan akad ne lagaa hain''.bhaiya hum kab se oonke haath aur pero pe massage kar ke oonke sharir ko garam kar ne ki koshish kar rahe hain''

Yudi: lekin aapko wapas doctor ko try karnaa chahiye thaa nikki'''ya saksh se kaha kar oonhe bulvaa bhejnaa chaahiye thaa ya hume phone kar deti''nikki rani ki haalaat bahut najook hain hume abhi hospital le jaanaa padegaa

Nikki: saksh ko CRjine kuchh kaam se dusre gaanv bhejaa hain aur hume phir samay nahi milaa ap ko itlaah kar paate itnaa jaldi sab ho gayaa'''..aur bhaiyaa ab rani ki haalaat dekh kar hume lagtaa hain hum jald se jald kuch kar naa hogaa samay bahut kam hain oonke badan ko garmi denaa bahut jaroori hain aur hospital yahaa se bahut door hain bhaiyaa'''

Yudi: nikki lekin hum yun haath pe haath dhare nahi beth sakte'''.humse rani ki halat dekhi nahi jaati aur''..agar oonhe kuchh ho gayaa to'''.

He could nto finish his sentence he embrace her passionately 'jaise kisi ko apne main samaa kar apnaa wajood banaa rahaa ho apnaa ek atut hissa bana raha ho jo kabhi bhi oos se naa bichh de''oose lagaa jaise rani ko apne ang kaa til banaa ke basaa le jo humeshaa oos se judaa(attached) rahegaa''ooska avibhaajya ang ban kar'lekin ees waqt ye sab sochne kaa waqt nahi thaa lekin kuchh tatkaalin nirnay lene kaa waqt thaa kyunki har gurzarte pal ke saath rani kaa sharir barf ki bhanti thandaa ho rahaa thaa'..ooske honth kaamp rahe the

She was having trouble bearthing and because of cold her body was stiffening. Yudi was anxious and scared for the safety rani's life.

Nikki: kuchh nahi hogaa bhaiyaa''..hume kuchh aisa karnaa padegaa jis se rani ke sharir ko garmaahat de sake'''

Yudi: to bataayiye hume''nikki hume kyaa karnaa chaahiye humaare paas samay bahut kam hain aap sochiye jald se jald sochiye''hum kuchh bhi kar ne ke liye taiyaar hain''''nikki lekin humaari rani ko kuchh nahi honaa chaahiye''(while saying those words his eyes glistened by tears aur jaise ooski jaan gale main aake atak gayi ho ooska soch aur samaj ne ki shakti ne jaise jawaab de diyaa ho. Oose lagaa charo aur sirf niraasha ke kale baadal hain aur rani ke jivan ki dor haath se sarak rahi hain''kahi se koi aasha ki kiran nazar aa jaaye'')

Nikki was also very much worried and massaged rani's hands and legs vigorously. Yudi was also caressing rani's face to make her feel better. Suddenly nikki saw the way rani was clinging to yudi's body and trying to get warmth from his body. Something snapped to her mind, though she herself was shaken by her thoughts but she realised, they don't have anyother option but to take chance in this critical moment and her knowledge and reading was telling her that the solution she was thinking actually works and it had been proven scientifically. Nikki looked at his brother and ray of hope formed in her eyes''..

Nikki: bhaiya'''.ek raastaa hain'..hum rani ke sharir ko garmaahat de sakte hain''lekin

Yudi: nikki''.bas aap kahiye paheliyaa na bujaayiye'''kyaa hain who raashtaa'..jis se humaari rani ki jaan bach sakti hain''.kahiye nikki '..

Nikki: agar rani ko jism ki garmi(body heat) di jaaye''.

The moment yudi heard those words he was shaken thoroughly, his eyes pop out with shock and he was flabbergasted. Shiver pass through his spine and he felt stinging blow in his mind and heart like piercing through it. He sitted their like rock unable to react'''.and only able to express his surprise by

Yudi: nikki''

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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice and gripping..waiting for next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow........those 2 parts were reli good cant wait to see wat happens next.....
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i read the last part. wow body heat 😃 let us see what happens will yudi agree to it/ he better if he does not want to loose rani.
But then How wil rani feel after finding out that she was saved this way?
great 👏👏keep posting.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena m'am you are on a mission to improve my hindi huh!!

Wow. What a gripping read. Poor poor Yudi, he is stuck between a rock and a hard place...he has to save his Rani by any method possible but.....Oh gosh Beena. But I have faith in Yudi, he will do what he needs to do and keep control on himself.

It was good to see Saksh keeping Yudi's mind clear. Yudi needs Saksh there to help him keep control, and I love that now Rani understands about Nikki and Saksh.

CR...😡

Good on Tamanna. She will knock some sense into Rudr one way or another!!

Waiting on the next part Beena. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
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Beena di,
Really good.......but does Yudi agree to body heat part...... Can't wait any longer we have to find out.......please post soon....😍
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

and simra happy birthday to you............



Thanks BeenaDi...and what an amazing part! I was completely hooked the entire time!!! I dont know how u think up these things but ur amazing!!!!! 👏 I could never write something with an actual PLOT! 😆

and I wonder what yudi will do now!!! 😃


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