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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenifer.

Oh Beena 🤗

This part was so sweet. I was going to say how much I love Sugandhi but I think I should direct the praise to you for shaping up a character like her. She's just the extra zing your FF required and I guess some of that credit should go to Kirti.
I was reduced to almost nothing at the part where Sugandhi turns to wipe her tears so NiSha don't witness it. So much love it bursting out of that tiny scene of such small gesture, it's overwhelming to read.
So it's Shaks birthday? What a great day for all this to be revealed to him. And bless him, he was aware of Nikki performing this pooja for him every year but he never allowed her to acknowledge it. And he collected every single dhaag, aww. It's painful to read about their restricted love but again the compliment goes to you for being able to portray all this.
You can guess I jumped for joy when Nikki finally managed to muster up some courage and go for it. I'm so relieved. Now don't take me wrong but the way you ended this part, I wouldn't have pointed guns at you if you decided to end your FF. I just have this great feeling that they've taken the first step and the rest will slowly follow. But, I shall not allow you to do so. I would like to know how they will carry on and lets not forget about YuRa and Rudr.
So go on a much needed break, refesh yourself and I shall await your return.

yup jen kirti suggested she wants some bubbli sister of saksh so i tried hard that i can bring that bubliness out of my character because so far i have all very serious characters ...........
yes i have not ended FF yet still there are many things in store ......actually shaped up in my rough book as points and in my mind as scenes but problem is time..........but will get back soon.........and there are many emotional scenes and exciting one too between all characters.........
but i will be back soon to entertain you all..............
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

finally got to read the last part. beena take your time no hurry. All the personal obligations come first. Trust me I know what it takes to write one episode as we both like to write long ones and once we start we forget the time. Take your time. Truly enjoayble episode. I liked sughandhi very much she made Nih more aware of her feelings for saksh. She daringly asked to tie the dhaga. to saksha kalai.

I enjoyed sughandhi's character very much. She is a kidder all right. Poor saksh afraid sughandhi might reveal everything and embarass Nih.
Loved the episode😊👏👏. Write when you time no hurry. finally caught up.😊

yup di i always feel some more and some detail and end up writing too much.......
i am happy everyone liked sugandhi i was very scared to experiment but it worked like wonder..........and thanks to kirti i was abled to give new turn in nisha's relation
and sugandhi is very young and cheerful who love and respect people but same time have daring to say things like new genrations who some times think it is good to say things aloud than crying silently like in our days..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi friends after many days........i felt like now i should start updating my story though i have managed to write only one part ....so far because you all know how depressive show is going but i have decided i will concentrate on my story and will serve you the entertainment that can give you pleasure you all deserve now i don't know i will be successful or not in my try but there is no harm in trying.......right??????
so tomorrow i am going to post my new part
i left on note that nikki and saksh were temple and both were there do some special prayer that they do everyyear
it turned out that it was saksh's birthday and this birthday his sister sughandhi was with him........whom initially nikki misunderstood as his girlfriend and felt jealous and dejected but the moment she realised that sughandhi is saksh's sister she could not hide her delight and the change in her expression could not remainhidden from sughandhi who was aware of saksh and nikki's feelings for eachother
she planned something for this two trouble soul and instigate nikki to tie the holy thread on saksh's hand...........saksh was expecting that nikki will do that but he was not sure knowing nikki's sober nature....
according to sughandhi's plan saksh and nikki were going on saksh's car to palace and nikki suddenly called saksh for something
now thing we have to see is whether nikki will able to gather courage and give the gift that saksh deserve or it would something else that she wants to share with saksh.............that we have not even imagine about............
lets see.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
😃

Can't wait till tomorrow. I tell you, I am more in love with your story than I am with what I see onscreen.

Kal kab hoga?
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Posted: 16 years ago
😲 ...
The best news I've heard in ages. Bring it on!
Oh, and thanks for the precap. Minds like mine need it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

😃

Can't wait till tomorrow. I tell you, I am more in love with your story than I am with what I see onscreen.

Kal kab hoga?

thanks nish now sometime i also feel scared if my story will not please you ..........i don't even have anyback to shift the blame😆
i am solely responcible for my story 😆😆😆
so the way you give very frank opinion to our creatives please give that feed back to me too and i promise 100 i will change story according to my audience wish.......😳😳
ok kal ho gay so no more waiting though this epi might be little rushed as i wrote when kids were around aso not much concentration 😕😕
thanks jen and sadia your wait is over and all of you please give me frank opinion i an open for that and i would love that
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Posted: 16 years ago
PRECAP is given on last page and this is last para from last part to continue story ahead and ya in last part sughandi took saksh's mobile because she said she wanted to call her friend and she did do somethign in car so remember that thing too
Suddenly saksh was about to start car he gave final glance in anticipation that nikki might ………may be this time….may be some surprised………but seeing nikki lost in her own world his last hope also he felt slipping out his hand. With heavy heart he turn key and ………he heard …….twinkling sound calling his name…….he was happily surprised when nikki stopped him ……

Nikki: sakshji………..kyaa aap apnaa daanyaa haath denge…….

She looked directly into saksh's eyes who was shocked hearing those words and his happiness was visible in his eyes………

Nikki: hum ye dhaga baandh naa chaahate hain aapke haatho main……..

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Bewilder, stupefied and ecstatic saksh stared at Nikki. Saksh was puzzled that whether Nikki indeed told him those words or he was thinking about it that's why he is just imagining things. Nikki's heart was beating fast she was surprised at same time how did she gather courage. She lowered her eyes and brought her hands forward signalling saksh to do same. Trembling and hesitated, slowly saksh brought his right hand forward and in his confusion and happiness he forgot that he was still holding his phone in his right hand.

Seeing this movement inside the car sugandhi was jubilant, she understood that at last Nikki had broken the small barrier and had taken small step towards her happiness. With her moist eyes she swallowed the gulp and tried to stop her tears rushing out. She composed herself because she remembered what next she has to do. She took out her mobile…

Nikki could not meet her eyes with saksh, she felt dryness in her throat and her heart was beating at very high speed. She could imagine Saksh's happiness without seeing her face. She was down casted. She tied that holy thread on Saksh's hand and saksh was overjoyed by this precious gift he got on this auspicious day of his life.

They were too lost to notice anything and suddenly Saksh's mobile phone rang.

(please click on this link and pretending that this is the ring tone playing on saksh's mobile start reading ahead)
Startled by this sudden vibration in his palm and unknown tune. His phone dropped from his hand and fell near nikki's feet.

Both of them were confused and felt awkward hearing that ring tone that was voicing actually their feeling. In their confusion both bend to take that mobile and in this tumult of emotions their head knocked with each other and they grab each other's hand instead of mobile phone …….but instead of feeling pain they were worried about each other so at same time word of concern came out from their mouth………." Aap ko chont to nahi lagi……." All the while oblivious to the fact that they were holding each other's hand….the moment nikki realised that she blushed and her angelic face turn crimson red and seeing that glowing face with those red hues saksh heart started palpitating and he felt current pass through his body. those moments were so unpredictable they both felt sensation to their spine. It felt like slowly they are getting out of their shell or mask they had worn since many years …….

Both smiled and seeing that sugandhi who was watching all this felt very happy that her another plane worked the way she wanted………

Saksh slowly let go nikki's hand. Nikki inform him to wait and she bend to take mobile phone. Saksh was passionately staring this divine beauty, when she bend her face was partially covered with her soft lustrous hair ……..saksh felt that

jaise poonam ke chaand ko kaali ghataa apni aad main chhipaa rahi hain,,,,,,,lekin chaand ki chaandni….chaand ki aabha banke nikhar rahi hain…….aaj kyun sab kuchh itnaa hasin lag raha hain .ye sama…..ye mahol …..aur ye saath………

har kadam tere saath chalte huve bhi tumhaare saath ko tadapte rahe

aaj kisi anjaan dagar par jaise kadam se kadam mil gaye the

aaj pataa nahi bichhada ne kaa koi gam bhi nahi dara rahaa thaa

kyunki tumhaare saath main ek apnaa pan bhi nazar aa rahaa thaa

teri ankho ki chamak se gam ke saare andhere dur ho gaye

teri ek khili muskaan se jaise janamo ko virah mit gaye……..

nikki hand over that phone to saksh and saksh was surprised seeing the person's name who was calling……because sugandhi's name was flashing on saksh's mobile .he understood it was sugandhi's plan and she was the one who changed his mobile phone's ring tone in pretence of calling her friend……he looked out but before his eyes could catch sugandhi she already sat in the car ……smiling he shook his head and kept phone in his pocket…..seeing those changing emotions on his face.,…………nikki could not stop herself and asked him….

nikki: kyaa baat hain aap kyu muskura rahe hain?

Saksh ( just nod her head) : kuchh nahi …..hum aap se shukriya kah naa chahte hain……ees naayab taaufe ke liye……

Nikki kept her hand on his mouth and sign him not to say that

Nikki: aap shukriya ada karke hume sharminda kar rahe hain…..aap humaare dost hain aur ek dost kaa haq bantaa hain……maafi to hume maangni chaahiye ki itne saalo tak hum aapko aapkaa haq nahi de paaye…..

Now saksh stopped her ………both were very happy the way things were changing around them. They did not even in their dream thought that things will change like this and at least they will share this kind of talk with each other and at least they have given name to their relation "friendship" and kahate hain achhe dost hi achhe jivan saathi ban paate hain …….doshti pyaar ki paheli sidi hoti hain………aur ye dono kaa pyaar to kitnaa gaheraa thaa…….bas iski koi manzil kahi dikhaayi nahi de padti thee….lekin aaj kahi par to onke rishte ne ek padaav dala thaa………bas sirf padaav manzil to abhi door thee………lekin kahate hain naa saath chalte chalte manzil to apne aap mil jaati hain……

Nikki: chaliye ab hume chalnaa chaahiye……warnaa bhaiya nikal jaayenge….delhi jaane ke liye……

Saksh put keys in latch and turned the engine on and in few seconds another song started playing on Car stereo (click here please that's the song will start in stereo (over look the dialogues play in that song))

both again felt embarrassed . so true it was the words playing. slowly their life was changing, thier feelings and emotions were changing and slowly their relation was going toward it's destination.......
that song was actually depicting their emotions that they were unable to convey, nikki lowered her eyes, she averted her glance because saksh's deep and earnest glances were giving jitters to her. saksh was trying hard to divert his gaze but today his sense were not giving him support.......he was enjoying each and every seconds in that beautiful enchanting moment ....he thought hope that time stop in this moment and he just live entire his life in this mesmerising company......
nikki who was trying hard to hide her emotions looked at saksh.....and looked at stereo ....saksh zapped out of his trance and realised his surrounding
and saksh understood that it was again sugandhi's mischief……he tried to turn it off but nikki stopped him and sign him that let it play………saksh was mesmerised by this new found nikki.

Sugandhi's car was about to leave compound gate and suddenly driver stopped car with sudden jerk…….sugandhi asked him what happened …he informed her that one boy came suddenly running towards car that's why he had to stop car…….sugandhi asked driver to check whether that boy was alright or not….and mean while she roll down her window glass to see and that moment melodious tune attracted her attention…….she looked around to see who was playing such a melodious tune on mouth organ…and her eyes fell on one young man whose only back was visible to her was sitting near the temple gate. Sugandhi was surprised that this young looking guy had to beg though she could not see his face she thought may be he is handicapped or something else and sympathy grew within her for that young man. She was so much mesmerised by that tune that she could not stop her self and throw five rupees coin towards him………

And the moment that coin land near that young man……driver sat in car and started driving car so sugandhi rolled up the window glass……..when sugandhi throw that coin near that young man it made twinkling sound and it broke that man's trance and he looked towards that sound and he was boiling with rage……he looked in the direction from where that coin had come and he saw only window's glass of one luxurious car was rolling up…the only glimpse he got was sugandhi's flying hair…..he stood up and started shouting …….

Man: ayiiiiii ayiiiii.,,,,,,,……main koi bhikhaari nahi hoo…..saali ………amir jaadi apne aap ko samjati kyaa hain…….rooko…….abhi dikhaataa hoo ,.

But before he could do anything car went out of the gate and his friend came running towards that man too and stopped him on his way…..

Friend: palash……palash………kyaa huvaa rooko yaar kyaa kar rahe ho……

Palash: who saali amirjaadi apne aap ko samjti kyaa hain main koi bhikhaari lagtaa hoo oose……..

Friend: kyun kyaa huva

Palash show him five rupees coin: ye dekho……ye fenk kar chali gayi jaise kisi bhikhaari par ahesaan kar rahi ho,,,,,,,tum ne khamkha rok liyaa warnaa aaj main sabak sikhaa detaa ..bahut dekhe hain aise amirkaade jo apne aapko tismaarkhaa samjte hain aur dusro ko gali kaa kidaa………

His friend started laughing……..

That made palash more angry……: ab tumhe kyun hansi aa rahi hain ees main hasne waali kyaa baat hain

Friend: are mere pyaare se angry young man……..oos main oos ladki ki kyaa galti hain…….agar koi mandir ke bahaar beth kar aise bhompu bajaaye gaa to log to oose bhikhari hi samje ge naa……..koi music master thodenaa samjege…..aur yaar tumko to har baat par har kisi par gussaa aata hain…….cool down yaar…..kyun itnaa gusaa bhara pada hain tumhaare ander……..kyaa shikaayat hain yaar tumhe jamaane se…..

Palash: ab tum shuru mat ho jaanaa…….ees jamaane se aur ees jamaane ke logo se muje koi lena dena nahi hain….dekh lunga ees amir jaadi ko kahi na kahi to mil hi jaayegi………he was about to throw that five rupee coin but his friend took it from his hand…….and while keeping it into palash's front pocket told few words of advice.

Friend: dost……aise gusaaa nahi hote…..shayad ye tumhaari kismet kaa tala kholne ke liye aayaa ho…..aur tuhaari jindagi ko apni sugandh se bharne aayaa ho …..ees sikke se shayad humaari taqdeer badal jaaye……

Palash did not utter single word fuming he started walking towards gate…………..

PS: ok girls ..........so far i could managed this much hope you all will like it......i tried my best as usual........and this palash and sughandhi character i am not going to forwrd with.........just wanted to give some gist about them....may be in future i might write somethign about them in another story.........but not here as already i am handling three couple and fourth is CR, RS and BR so that is too much to handle and i want to finish my story before drama finish or loos its charm and my all readers run away😆😆😆 leaving me alone here😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh Beena, you are so sweet.
How much i waited for that.

'kal tum juda hue the jahan saath chhod ke
hum aaj tak khade hain usee dil ke mod pe'


Awwe...Nikki is so lovely...how sweet was the gesture when she signed Saksh to let the song play...
Edited by jibi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow Beena kaise aaj new part update..
waise i like new character palash & Sunghidi..youcan write story for them..now days you should update more part then current storyline..
Atleast we are happy after reading part..rather watching epi.
Finally Nikki open up her feeling..wht she like..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena...oh Beena...🤗

What a way to start the day. How I have waited to see Nikki accept some happiness for herself...how her heart must be soaring...and Saksh, finally able to put a name to this fragile relationship...that one gesture of letting the song play says so much..." I am comfortable with the truth being out there, I am comfortable with you knowing, I am comfortable with accepting it for myself"....

Beautiful...I would not change a single thing. The idea of putting songs was great too, adds to the atmosphere. Loved it.

I think I like this Palash & Sugandhi story, am looking forward to reading more about them wherever you write it.

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