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Posted: 17 years ago
kab..ye shayri likh ke itezar karva rahi hai..
next part kyare post karvani chu..
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Posted: 17 years ago

yar i am also trying to get some time peacefully so ic an write nice romantic part...for that i need nice atmosphere 😉
but i think by tomorrow i will definatly post it...

that 's why in betweeen i post rudra's topic because for that i did notneed to work hard.....

but for romance 😉
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part:32

When yudi heard about his mother's ill health he could not stopped himself immediately he went to meet his mom, from within he had wish to have a look at rani too. When he reached there, he was happy to see her mother resting peacefully but he was disappointed that rani was not there 😳 .

Yudi: maa kaisi hain aap? Humne sunaa aapki tabiyet kharaab ho gayi thi kal raat ko?

BR indicated him by her eyes that she is feeling much better than yesterday night. There was nothing to worry about. She was happy that her son was worried about her and came running to see her. 😃

Yudi: maa aap jaldi se theek ho jayiye hume aapse bahut saari baate karni hain….aap nahi jaante aap theek ho jaaye ees din kaa hum kitni besabri se intazaar kar rahe hain.. 😳

Nikki: woh to hum bhi kar rahe hain..Hume bhi maa se bahut baate karni hain….lekin aap chahe to humse baat kar shakte hain…kahiye kya kahenaa hain aapko…. Hum sunege aapki baat..

Everybody laughed on that, yudi was also happy that nikki is now getting out from her sorrow and started living life. Br was happy to seeing her kids bonding with each other.

Yudi: woh to humari khaas baat hain jo hum sirf maa ko hi bataa shakte hain….hum aapse nahi bataayenge

Nikki: lekin hume bhi baate nikaal naa aataa hain to hum bhi pataa lagaa hi lenge ki aap kya chhipaa rahe hain..

Yudi: theek hain jasoos ji jaisa aap theek samje…

They were having very light moment together but all the while Yudi's eyes were looking for rani though he was talking to Nikki he kept looking towards door. Nikki was also watching her brother cleverly knew that his brother is desperate to meet or see rani.

Nikki: kyaa baat hain bhaiya aap kisi ka intazaar kar rahe hain….baar baar aapki nazar darwaaje par jaa rahi hain?
Yudi: nahi jasoosji hum kisi ka intazaar nahi kar rahe hain….hamaara jaane ka waqt ho gayaa hain hum niklte hain……maa hum shaam ko phir aayenge aapko dekhneke liye tab tak aap ees jasoosji ke saath baat kijiye….

They all laughed on Yudi's joke but Nikki was sure that now his brother would give frequent visits to BR as that was the easiest way to see rani.

While going out yudi was disheartened that he could not see rani but he tried to console himself that she might be tired as yesterday whole night she might be taking care of BR so today she should be resting. He was optimistic to meet her tonight when he would be back from office and he decided to visit BR again during her dinnertime.

In the evening, again yudi got disappointment, as rani was not there in BR's room. For yudi it had became very difficult to stay without even seeing rani, all passing moment was increasing his anxiety but he was trying to console himself.

Today was the third day he had last met to rani and now it was the limit of his patience. He was frustrated for not being able to do anything, though they were living under one roof it had become impossible for him to locate rani. He was discontent with the thought that even rani had not tried to meet him…but other hand he was trying hard to be normal as his frustration and anger could spoil everything….he had no other option but to wait and look for the chance……

In his desperation he did not even realized that he did not meet saksh since last too days. He heard someone footsteps were approaching towards his room and he thought might be…………….

Ees samay yudi ki haalat aisi thi ki

" har ek dhimi si aahat oose, oonke aane kaa andeshaa deti thi,
Lekin darwaaje par oonhe naa paake, mayush nazar khali laut aati thi
"

This time also he thought that rani was coming to meet him but when he opened the door; saksh was standing in front of him.

Yudi: oh aap aaye hain? 😕
Saksh: haa hum kyun hume dekh kar aapko khushi nahi huyi 😳 …ya koi aur aane waalaa thaa aur galti se hum aa gaye? 😆

Yudi: aur kaun aayegaa? Hume milne ke liye? 😕

Saksh could feel that yudi was unhappy about something.

Saksh: kaun milne aayegaa matlab? Hum nahi samje…
Yudi: kisi ko kyun hume milne ki jaroorat hain. hum hi paagal hain ki oonkaa intzaar kar rahe hain… 😆

Saksh now understood what was bothering yudi.

Saksh: oh to ye baat hain raniji se mulaakat nahi huyi eesi vajah se kunvarji khafaa hain….koi kaam aa gayaa hoga oonhe ..BR ki bhi tabiyet theek nahi thi to shaayad…
Yudi: maa ki tabiyet ab to theek hain aur teen din se hum maa ko dekhna jaa rahe hain subha shaam aur woh he ki thodi der waha rook bhi nahi shakti? 😆 😉

Yudi's anger and frustration was visible in his tone. Saksh knew that " pyaar aadmiko itna bechen banaa detaa hain ki oose jaamaane ki parvaa nahi raheti hain" 😳

Saksh: baat to aapki sahihain lekin koi wajah jaroor hogi..
Yudi: hume bhi ab chinta ho rahi hain oonki. shaayad woh bimaar na ho ya kuchh aur…

Saksh: bimar to nahi hain woh…..
Yudi: ye aap kaise kah shakte hain?
Saksh: woh jab hum aaye to hume woh niche mili thi abhi…..aur woh theek hain.
Yudi: achhaa tosirf hume milne ki fursad nahi hain unhe…. 😃 .achha theek hai to phir 😕 …humari baat chhodiye hum to aapse puchhnaa hi bhool gaye ki aap kya kaam se aaye the.

Saksh: ha woh hum bataane aaye the ki pitajiki tabiyet theek nahi hain to woh aur do din nahi aayenge…..hume lagaa hum aapko bataa de.
Yudi: aap chinta na kijiye …dinukaka ko kahiye woh aaraam kare aur koi jaroorat ho to hume bataa dijiye.

Saksh: shukriya..ab hum bhanu ji se milne jaate hain..aur oonko kah kar kisi aur se aapka kamraa saf karvaa dete hain….

Yudi realized that his room had not been cleaned since last two days but he did not even care about it. But this sudden discussion gave him some idea and he seemed very happy and sly smile cross across his face……

Yudi: haa kamara to humaara saaf karne ki jaroorat hain…aur hum bahut gusse main hai ki hamaara kamara saaf nahi huvaa…

Saksh: kyaa ye kyaa huva aapko achanak..?
Yudi: kisi na kisi ko humaara kamara saaf karne aanaa hi hogaa right…
Saksh: haa to hum bhejte hain na kisi ko.
Yudi: kisi ko matlab ….hum kamre main nahi hain aur hum bahut gussa hain to koi apnaa chaahiye kamara saaf karne ke liye……samje aap…

Now saksh understood what yudi meant to say….


Saksh: oh samaj gaye aisa hi hoga jaisa aap chaahte hain…main abhi bandobast kartaa hoon…aap chinta na kare aur jaraa …….style se taiyar ho jayiye..oonke swaagat main…. 😆

They both were very happy about their new scheme. Yudi went to bathroom to take refreshing shower and get ready to welcome his dream girl.

"Ooski khushi kaa koi thikaanaa nahi thaa kitne dino baad aaj woh akele main rani se milne waalaa thaa aur ees Milan ko woh yaadgar banaana chahtaa thaa. Itne dino ki tadap aur becheni jaise pal main gaayab ho gayi ho. rani se milne kaa khayaal bhi kitna sukun de rahaa thaa oose." 😳


Saksh went to kitchen, informed bhanu about dinukaka's ill health, and asked her to arrange someone to clean Yudi's room. Kali offered her service to do so; 🤢 she was very delighted that she could go to Yudi's room. Saksh was horrified to imagine what could happen if yudi would misunderstood kali as rani 😆 ….shiver pass through his spine, immediately he though of plan and told bhanu that yudi was very angry and if any mistake would happened he would not spare that person. 😆 😉
Immediately kali suggest Rani's name to bhanu that rani should be sent to Yudi's room. Saksh sighed with relief that his plan had worked…..the way they wanted it. 😳

Rani was hesitant to go towards Yudi's room but she had to follow bhanu's instruction because she had no other way out. Somehow rani was consoling herself that she hadn't met to yudi since last three days so this way at least she will able to leave message for him in his room. Slowly she approached to Yudi's room though her heart was beating very fast and unknown fear had taken her toll. " gabharayi huyi sahemi huyi woh dhire se chupke se yudi ke kamre tak jaa pahunchi….

kaamp rahe the ooske haath darwaajaa kholte huve" slowely she opened the door and look around the room nobody was there but yes room was in mess. All things were lying around. As soon as she took first step in room "yudi ki khushbu jo oos havaa main thi ooski sanso main bhar gayi….yudi ki khooshboo ees taraha se rani ke man ko mahekaa rahi thee jaise mausam ki paheli barsaat se jo dharti se khushboo aati hain aur jaise saaraa mausam khushnooma ho jaataa hain." Rani took deep breath to inhale yudi's fragrance in her to feel him. slowely she enter the room and closed the door behind her. 😳 😳 😳

Everywhere her eyes were imagining yudi, like on bed she could feel that yudi is peacefully sleeping lost in his dream world, rani proceed towards bed and her finger was running over his bed " jaise soye huve yudi ke badan ko woh saraah rahihon. 😳 Ek unkahi khooshi ko woh mahesoos kar rahi thee. Pass pade huve yudi ke coat ko oosne oothaa ke aise apni bahone main bhar liya jaise woh khud yudi ki bahone main samaa rahi hon 😳 . yudi ki shirt jo bed ke corner par padaa thaa oose fold karke apna sar aise oosne shirt pe rakhaa jaise woh khud apna sir yudi ki choadi chhati pe rakh kar yudi ki dhadkano ko mahesoos kar rahihon. 😳

Ek ek chiz ko woh sambhal kar apni jagah par rakh rahi thee jaise koi patni apne pati ki chijo ko achhe se rakh rahi ho….aur rani kuchh aisa hi mahesoos kar rahi thee….

yudi jo bathroom main apna snaan khatam kar chukaa thaa aur apni shirt lena bhool chukka thaa woh shirt lene ke liye bahaar aa rahaa tha ki ooski nazar apni hi duniya mainkhoyi huvi rani par padi….woh dhire se bathroom ke darwsaaje ki aad main khoyi huyi rani ko pyaar bhari aankho se dekhna lagaa….sab kuchh ek sapane jaisa lag rahaa thaa oose.. 😳 😳

Rani jo ab yudi ke table par pade saare paper ko theek kar rahi thee woh yudi ko nahi dekh shakti thee kyunki woh ooske pichhe ki taraf thaa. Paper ko theek kar ke ab rani ne yudi ki tasveer ko oothaayaa aur woh pyar se oose dekhna lagi jaise itne dino ki dil ki tadap woh sirf ooski tasveer ko dekhke meeta dena chah rahi ho 😳 😳 …bekhabar ees baat se ki yudi ooski saari harkate dekh rahaa hain. 😳

Pyaar se rani ne yudi ki tasveer se kahaa

Rani: kya dekh rahe hain aap hume ees taraha tukur tukur….hume sharm aa rahi hain… 😳 😳 😳 hum jaante hain aap hum se naaraaz hain shaayad… 😕 kyunki hum aapse mile nahi naa tin deen se lekin kyaa karte majboor jo the hum ……. 😃 😃 aap kaa kyaa hain …hume to apnaa kaam karnaa padtaa hain…. 😳 😳 .lekin hum bhi bahut tadap rahe hain aap ko milne ke liye….. 😳 😳 achha ji hum aap se vaada karte hain aaj to hum aapko kisi bhi prakaar milenge….ab aap naaraaz mat hoyiye… 😳 😳 aap to humse naaraaz bhi ho shakte hain lekin hum to aapse naaraaz bhi nahi ho shakte….kyunki….. 😳 😳

Rani stopped on that phrase , she was totally engrossed in her world that she did not even realized that yudi was standing just behind her and listening her conversation with his photo . ……usually rani seldom talked about her feelings so this was the best way yudi could know what did she feel about him…….but when rani stopped half way yudi could not stop him self and ….

Yudi: kyun …aap humse naaraaz nahiho shakti..Hum bhi to jaane….

😳 😳 😳



PS: to be contineud....i am very busy now a days so not able to post on time but fomr next week i will able to post it regularly
Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part..beachme part kuyn khatam kar diya..waiting for next part..jaldi..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: leothebest9

Very nice............ 😊

thanks leo i really appreciat your comment.....next part is full of romance but i am scared as i am not very good at writing romance but though i want to give myslef try....lets see......so please .....keep giving your praciouse comment as that encourage new writer like me

i thanks to all my friend and request atleast leave some emoticons to express your feeling as .....it gives idea how am i ...in my writing otherwise i don't know how people feel....so no way i can improve myself....so this is humble request to all readers and friends😳

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
part :31
i loved the way portrait fact about being a modern person....i like your tamanna i think she is more mature and self confident girl the way she address herself by her name i liked it....i think you are going to show more about she and rudra..is their any track are you going to develope between them???? and who is that person that want to distroy rudra's happiness....????

part:32
excellent yudi has become smart hmmmm very cunning 😆 😆 nice way he made rani come to his room and like the way rani was touching his stuff and feeling him in all those stuff..... 😳 😳
.i think you will able to write romance don't worry as i like the way you write...feelings...
waiting for next part..... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinalprachi

part :31
i loved the way portrait fact about being a modern person....i like your tamanna i think she is more mature and self confident girl the way she address herself by her name i liked it....i think you are going to show more about she and rudra..is their any track are you going to develope between them???? and who is that person that want to distroy rudra's happiness....????

thanks you liked it and you are right tamanaa is very mature girl and somehow i am liking her character too.....yes someone is there who wants rudra and CR to suffer that person could be well wisher of yudi😳

part:32
excellent yudi has become smart hmmmm very cunning 😆 😆 nice way he made rani come to his room and like the way rani was touching his stuff and feeling him in all those stuff..... 😳 😳

hi is smart but love make people smarter😆 thanks for liking the way rani was feeling his stuff


.i think you will able to write romance don't worry as i like the way you write...feelings...

thanks for your encouragement that is really very nice of you......
waiting for next part..... 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanks for this simple though lovely comment at least ic an undrstand that people likes whatever i am writing....so please keep leaving comments ....like this,i do appreciat😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bsingapury

thanks for this simple though lovely comment at least ic an undrstand that people likes whatever i am writing....so please keep leaving comments ....like this,i do appreciat😳

when are you posting next part..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

when are you posting next part..

next part i will post by tonight

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