FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 5

Part 9
Kuchh bhi samaj me nahi aa raha tha use . ghayal dil dimagh ke samne tike rahne ki poori koshi sh kar raha tha. 😭
Dil kah raha tha ye mera pyar nahi he or dimag "to kaha he tumhara pyar?".wo to ek chhalawa tha jo hakikat he wo tumhare samne he.
or dil ka man na tha ki hakikat se me pyar nahi karta or agar me ishke sath mangani karoonaga to me khush nahi rah paunga, 😭
to dimag tark ke sath taiyar tha ke kaisi khushi kaisa pyar jis ka tumhe nam tak ka pata nahi, jo kaha he wo tum hani pahechante ,tum kise me apni khushi dhundh rahe ho ek mrughjal(mirage) me?? 💔 Or kya hoga unlogo ki khushi ka, jiski nigahe is waqt tumpe lagi hui he, jinke liye tum sab kuchh ho , wo pita jo tumhare gungan gate nahi thakte wo mata jo tumse aas lagaye bethi he or tumhare vansh ki maryada kya sab tum ek dhoke ke liye tyag kar paoge. 🥺
Nahi tik paya yudi ka ghayal dil ,in sab tark ke samne or uske pass or koi naya rasta na tha sivay apne dimag ki sun ne ke 😭
kunki sab nigahe use ascharya se dekh rahi thi or uske pass ab sochne ka samay nahi tha
Jaise chabi diya huva khilana sa ho yudi ne bhari dil se ring bhoomi ko pahena ne ke liye hath badhaya. Hath bhi jaise apne sharir ka hissa na ho sirf apna kam kar raha tha. Koi jan isme na thi . yudi ki halat bina pankh ke pakshi (bird without wings) jaisi thi jo udna chahraha tha lekin kaise??? . ❓
Bhoomi ne bhi unko ring pahenayi. Sab bahoot khush the .
Everybody clapped and greet eachother, bhoomi's parents also greet to rajaji,CR and BR.Yudi and bhoomi took blessing from all elders but yudi was just following instruction like machine .
Saksh jo yudi ki sab khushiyo se vakef tha wo yudi ke chahere ke badalte rang ko dekh raha tha 😕 or use pahechan ne ki koshish kar rahatha. Use lag raha tha koochh bat jaroor he jo yudi kitne dino se ek pankhi ki tarah se chahek raha that wo itna murjaya huva phool kyu lag raha he. jayse ek hava ke jonke ne phool ko dali se alag kar diya ho. Kuch to bat jaroor he aisa saksh ko ahesas ho raha tha. Lekin ye samay nahi tha kuchh bhi soch ne samjne ka .
Rani looking at yudi from out side crying bitterly 😭 😭 . she was very well aware of yudi's situation. Use pata tha yudi ka dil tar tar ho raha he. majboor wo bhi thi takdir ke hatho. Usne koshish ki thi yudi ko is shama se jalne se bachane ki . lekin ushki har koshish nakamyab rahi thi. Aaj yudi ki jo halat thi wo rani se sahen nahi ho rahi thi use lag raha tha wo dodke jake unko tham le .unko bikhar ne se rok le lekin kuchh nahi tha uske hath me 💔 . jaise hath se ret sark jati he usi tarah ye pal uske hath se nikal raha tha.
Yudi who was trying to come on term diverting his mind towards all guest , his happy father, and mother . he was totally on loss of word what shall he do. He was feeling that in the beginning of his new life someone has put the cart before the horse.
Jisko uska dil pahechanta tha , janta tha wo to ek chhalawa nikla. Door door tak nazar karne par bhi wo kahi nahi thi or jo hakikat thi usase wo bil kul anjan tha. Lekin usne khud ko sambhal ne ki puri koshish ki kyunki wo apne khush mata pita ko dekh raha tha or aisa kuchh bhi nahi karna chah raha tha jisse unlogo ki izzat pe dag aye.
Wo bhoomi ki taraf dhyan de raha tha taki wo os chhalave ko bhool paye lekin wo itna aasan nahi tha. 😭
Jis lamhe ko wo ji lena chahta tha or uske liye besbri se uska intezar ker raha that aaj wohi lamahe se uska dum gunt raha tha. 😭 Itne log ke bichme bhi wo apne apko akela mehsoos ho rahatha. Lagta tha ki wo apne kamare me jaye or apne dil ka behal denkhe. Is mahol se use dhrina ho rahi thi . uske dil ki chikh sunane wala koi nahi tha or jisne ye dard diya tha wo bedard ka to koi pata hi natha kaun thi wo ❓ . Jisko wo kaheta tha ke achhi tarah se pahechanta he wo ek paheli ban ke rah gayi thi. Na uske nam ka pata tha, kaha se ayi thi , kuchh bhi nahi malum tha use . ek jana pahechana ,dil ke jo bahut karib tha aaj aise lag raha tha ki sirf khayal tha uska.
Jaise khayal me hi wo ayi uske dil ko bechen kiya or jaise hons aaya shishe ki tarah chur chur ho gaya.
Function was about to finish all guest were leaving wishing yudi and bhoomi for their new life that was about to begin. Bhoomi and her parents also wanted to go back but rajaji who was very happy asked them to stay back for couple of day so bhoomi and yudi can spend time together and know eachother. Though he was against to all this but for his son's happiness he wanted to change. As he knew that yudi was desparet to spend time with bhoomi.
But he was unaware of new development that yudi just want to stay alone and wanted to come on term with his broken heart. Yudi seems very unhappy hearing that he has to spend time with bhoomi but otherway he thought may be that way he will able to forget that paheli and concentrate on fact and fact was that bhoomi is now going to be his life partner.
Saksham who was just observing yudi was getting all confused why cannot I see any happiness on yudi's face hearing that bhoomi is going to spend time with him.Yudi whi was always looking for excuse to meet and talk with bhoomi why he look distant . suddenly what have happen that has changed yudi's mood. He was determind to find out about all .
As soon as yudi reach his room he asked saksh to go as he wants to be alone. Saksh was surprised to hear that how dull yudi was sounding, like without any life.
Saksh: ham aapse kuchh puchhna chahete he kunvarji
Yudi: saksh ham bahut thak gaye he ham aaram karna chahte he
Saksh : hame kyu aisa lag raha he aap hame avoid kar rahe . kuchh chhupa rahe he.
Yudi : ye sab aap ka vahem he . sirf itna he ki ham thak gaye he
saksh: aap jante he aap ham se apne dil ki bat nahi chhupa shakete ham aapko bachpan se jante he. jaroor koi bahut badi bat he or aap kisi se nahi batana chahte . lekin wo dard hame apke chahere pe saf dikhai de raha he.
Yudi: aap khamkha apni uljan badha rahe he. itna mat sochiye koi bat nahi he
Saksh:aap kuchh bhi kahe ham nahi mante
Befor he say anything yudi who was all frustrated and unhappy got bit angry and asked sternly to saksh to leave his room. Saksh was worried and shocked to see his this avtar as he has never seen yudi this much upset. And thought that this time is not right I will talk to him tomorrow. He thought that yudi need some time to collect his emotions as he can very well understand that something was there that was bothering him and that must be very terrific .
So he just left him alone .
Yudi was trying to collect all the memory he had about bhoomi and he was totally at loss as he could not figure out what has happen.
He was happy that his life is going to blossom like spring but autom has dominated his life now. The shadow he was running after was actually a mirage. And he had no clue how to find her. She has become only one puzzle for him that he has to solve. But otherside his mind was not allowing him to do so. As if he will take any further step in direction of his paheli that means he is going away from bhoomi who has just got attached to his life without his willingness. Does he has anyother option than just go with flow and accept the fate he has been gifted. 😭
After lots of argument between his heart and mind he decided not to follow his heart as he has seen what has happen when he let his heart flow like uncontrolled water fall . he has been dropped from very high and cannot even complain to anyone. 😕
So he decided to give chance to bhoomi and try to understand her as it is not her fault and he has no right to punish her . he has promised her to be her life and now at this point he cannot ditch her.
As his parents are also happy with this relation and he cannot destroy their dream as he knows now very well when dream get scattered how hurting it is. And the pain he has been going through he cannot give to anyone.
So with this determination he tried to go to sleep but sleep was also as far from him as his paheli.

only one song i remember for him at this time

"tanhai ...tanhai ...
dil ke rashte me kaisi thokar maine khai
tute khwab sare kaisi mayusi he chhai
har khushi so gayi jindagi kho gayi

tumko jo pyar kiya to mene saja me payi

tanhai tanhai milo he faily hui tanhai😭

khvab me dekha tha ek anchal mene apne hatho me

ab tute sapno ke shishe chubhte he in ankho me

kal koi tha yahi ab koi bhi nahi

banke nagin jaise he sanso me laherai

tanhai tanhai palko pe kitne anshu he lai

kyu aissi umeend ki mene jo aise nakam hui

dur banai thi manjil to rashte me hi sham hui

ab kaha jao me kis ko samjaon me kya mene chaha tha aur kyun kismat me ayi

tanhai tanhai jaise andhero ki ho gaherai

Beena wow! 👏 i don't have a word to say...you describe yudi pain too well..song also tell his dil state..i also cry 😭 with yudi..when he going to read letter..
waiting for next part..

payal

hi friends how are you all hope you enjoy reading this part also as muas you have enjoyed read all otherparts thanks
Part 10

There were many people at this moment trying to sleep but sleep was least interested to sing any lullaby for them and give the dream they wanted to indulge in .
Saksh was all worried for yudi as he can sense the restlessness yudi was experiencing but unaware about what has happen 😕
Rani, who was crying her eyes out 😭 . Indirectly she has become pain for yudi. Rani who has never in her dream given pain to any one has become the throne that has gone stuck in yudi's heart.
There was someone also present in palace who were happy to see yudi's this desparate situation and also very well known what is hurting yudi. But that person does not want to act fast as that person has to put many pieces together in this jigsaw puzzle as that person was the creater of this puzzle . and that person was all happy for the outcome he /she getting for all this drama that has taken place in last few days. Only time can say where will it lead to. 😕
Someone was there who was happy that today he saved rani from going infront of yudi and that way he stopped one big problem . but how long will he be able to save and stop this lightening that is waiting to fall on this family??? 😕

New day has brought new light and new chapter in many lives. There are many new chapters are awaiting to be written.
Sun was shining and bringing brightness in this world , and bird was roaming around with their melodiouse chirping ,they are looking for their food as everyday is same for them. But it was not same for yudi 😕 ,
This new day has changed many things around him. He has been gifted by many surprises 😭 . He was trying his best to look normal . and getting ready and knew that yesterday he has avoid all questions from saksh but he will not able to ignore him more as he will become more suspicious so he has to get control our his feeling before anyone intrude in his feelings ,those are trying to empowering him. And to get that strength he has to start from something.
He decided to take bhoomi for horse riding so atleast that way they can spend time with each other and he can understand her better so it will also help him forget that paheli 🤢 . Everymoment the paheli 's image come inhis mind that give some unknown feeling to him he was unable to figure it out . he was about to go out saksh enter his room
As he could not sleep last night thinking about yudi all the time . he was about to ask yudi regarding last night yudi told him that he wants to go out with bhoomi for horse riding and saksh should give them company as it will be fun . he was tyring his best to look normal.
Saksh could not stop himself but asking about his restlessness as he can sense that yudi is trying is hard to look normal
Saksh: kya bat he????????ham kal se dekh rahe he aap koi wajh se pareshan he.
Yudi :koi bat nahi he hamane aap ko kal bhi kaha tha.
Saksh: aap kyu nazar chura ke bat kar rahe he. ham aap ko bachpan se jante he. aap ka chahera dekh ke padh shakte he ki aap ko koi bat vichalit kar rahi he..

Yudi feeling very annoyed as he does not want to answer his any questions as he knows there is no point digging grave, but he knows saksh will not leave this subject that easily, and all this talk is bringing those memory back whom he is trying to forget

Yudi: saksh hum apki chinta samjte he lekin kuchh bate aise zakham jaisi hoti he jisco khuredne se jyada dard hota he . use chhod dene me hi sabki bhalai he. 😭
Saksh: lekin agar kisi bhi zakham ka ilaj na kiya jaye to wo nashur ban jate he or jyada dard dete he.
Before he say something else he was intrupted by nikki, 😳 she was looking very simple and beautiful in white salvar kamiz , 😳 who was going to temple and before going there she wanted to congratulate his bro for his engagement as yesterday she could not do it.
Nikki: kesa zakham, kis ko chont lagi he
Saksh: kisi ko nahi (trying to control situation) wo to hum aise hi bat kar rahe the. Ki dil ki chont badi ghaheri hoti he wo to jise pyar hota he wahi jan sakta he. (looking longingly at niki)
She also understood that his indication is towards her. But she tried to ignore it. 😳
Nikki: me mandir ja rahi thi apki nayi jindagi me bahar ayi he wo barkarar rahe uske liye prathna karne. Kya aap hamare sath aana chahenge???
Yudi : hum lekin hame to…
Before he could finish his sentence saksh intrupted him as he did not want to leave this golden opportunity to spend time with nikki 😳
Saksh: kunvarji hame jaroor jana chahiye. Or abhi to RB taiyar ho rahi ham mandir se an eke bad ghod savari ke liye chale jayenge
Yudi thought ye defiantly I should go and ask god why he did this for me ?? what does he want ? what I did wrong that first time I asked for something but I have been cheated 😭 . He must be very happy seeing me all suffering???? Let's go and see what he has stored for me at lleast I will get some answer from him ??? as per now I cannot see any path and the path infront of me I don't want to walk on it.

Yudi: hum aap ke sath ana chahenge.
They all went to temple .
As soon as they reach temple . nikki wanted to go and buy flower and other things for prayed. She asked yudi and saksh to wait there till she go andbuy stuff . yudi asked her that she will come with her but saksh suggest that he will go with nikki and help her out as he did not want to leave a single moment that give him nikki's company.
Suddenly nikki remember that she has forgotten to bring money so she asked yudi to give her some money but yudi gave his wallet to saksh and tell them to take as much as they want and he is waiting here for them so hurry up.
Nikki and saksh took his wallet and went to buy stuff that was needed for prayer.
And yudi looking in emptiness just waiting there for them. Suddenly very sweet voice fell on his ear 😛 , somebody was singing prayer in temple . yudi found that voice very familiar.he felt that the same voice he heard in village that has attracted him so he started walking in the direction of that voice 😊 . Like some one has spell a cast on him he was unaware of what is happening around him just walking in direction of that voice.
He was walking towards voice and the person who was singing this prayer was non other than rani 😳 who came to temple to ask happiness for yudi 😭 , as despondency has taken toll on her . so she came to pray to give her strength to stay away from yudi. While singing she started walking around the tample. The moment yudi reach in tample she was already near backside of temple so he could not see her but he kept following the sweet voice . he was following the voice the way kite follow the thread it is tied to without even knowing it's destination.
Rani finished her round and joined her hand to god for his blessing for all around her. She started going out and mean while yudi also reach near god but he could not make it out who was singing prayer as many people were there , so he asked the PAndit that who was just now singing this prayer , pandit point him towards rani's back :
Pandit: wo ladki jo waha bahar ja rahi he wo itna madhur bhajan ga rahi thi kyu aapko achha laga????
Yudi has no time to waste as he wanted to catch rani before she disappear from his sight. As her back was giving him flash back from jasan in village.
He ran after her and about to catch her , 😕 😕

hope he will able to catch her as that can unvail many secrets so what will happen next keep reading friends
thank you very much

Beena............awesome parts dear!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Part 9 : The way you have mentioned Yudi's pain is just amazing...........and the number of similis you have used 😲, I am just floored!!!! The dual feelings that he was suffering was projected very well!
Poor guy, I felt so sad for him! 😕 But I guess he really did not have a choice but to continue with the engagement!!! And I felt very very bad for Rani when you said she was crying bitterly!!
And Saksham is really a true friend, someone who knows to read the Prince's mind and expressions!

Part 10 : Loved the way you got Yudi to the temple and also probably Saksham and Nikky will read Rani's letter 😲............that would be really good and then they can help find Rani and get Rani and Yudi to meet up!!! 👏 And the best part is that Yudi now has also recognized the singer.
And I really love the love story between Sakhsam and Nikky too....look forward to reading that too! 😳

thanks prag
saksh is really very understanding to understand his friend but poor rani she does not have anyone to share her feeling 😭 she is very lonely
she has people around her to harras only 😭
about letter your guess is partially right good guess hmmm 😆 😆
thanks for taking out time for your busy schedule

Originally posted by: bsingapury

Part 9
Yudi: aap jante he aap ham se apne dil ki bat nahi chhupa shakete ham aapko bachpan se jante he. jaroor koi bahut badi bat he or aap kisi se nahi batana chahte . lekin wo dard hame apke chahere pe saf dikhai de raha he.

Beena, in Part 9....Saksham says the above dialog but you have Yudi's name against it, maybe you can correct that 😊 And I wanted to mention that I love that Tanhai song!

Beena nice 10 part..finally yudi recongnize her voice and follow her..i hope he catch her..nikki and shak..lovestory going right direction..shaksham doesn't leave chance to spend time with nikki..yudi and rani ne sathe milavi de..
waiting for next part..

thanks prag for stating error
it'[s nice to see that you read it very carefully 😳
i am also waiting the day rani and yudi meet hope fully that day come very fast goody girl

Hey Bina ..very Nice FF dear 👏👏

and very well written 👏...i love shaksham in ur FF ..cos serial meh toh wo chup hi rehta hai 😆.

main part 5 tak read kiye hai ..aur jesse hi time milega ..another 5 read karti hoon 😳

Manpreet

thanks manpreet i am happy that you liked it till part 5 and i know you will like another 5 parts and coming more parts too 😉
i like saksham too he is cute and lovely and lively