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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Beena rani chalk nikli..samne sane ke bajai nikki ko de diya..atleast they know the name..wht they gonna do? handwriting se kaise pata lagayege..
waiting for next part..tum suspense jayada rakti ho..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya payal ye rani badi chalak nikli bechare yudi aur saksham 😳 😳

hmmmm what about hand writing now that is suspence will come to light tomorrow 😆

suspense se hi padhne ka mazaa badhta hain right warna excitement nahi rahetaa
next two parts are going to change many things in yudi's life that is for sure i can promise 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Wow beena nice part 😳...so rani ne bahana kar hi diya 😆

so ab hand writting se maloom hoga yudi ko ...aur letter se hand wrtting milayega 😆..lekin wo rani se phir se likhwayega kesse ???😆

and jo tumne last meh lines likhi hai bahut hi aachi hai 👏

jaldi likho next part ...i can't wait

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
bahut achha andaza lagaya ke wo letter se hand writing check karega ab wo to story hai ki wo rani se likhvayega kaise 😆 😆

ab woh to kal hi maloom padega ki hamara chalak yudi kaya karega 😳 😳
and ya manu you liked last lines as i felt they are very true when you are love 😳 god also cannot take your sweet heart's place 😳
actually it was in panjabi but i gave it's translation.
Edited by bsingapury - 15 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Beena next part kyare post kare che..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok so your wait is over this is next part on your way enjoy it as after that another part i will post on may be monday if i did not get time tonight as i am going for holiday tomorrow for 3 days , but iw ill definatly try to post another part so you all can enjoy in weekends 😉

part: 17

to check handwriting , but how is this possible. saksh still could not think of a way to get rani's hand writing. 😕
So yudi suggested that they should give everybody some paper with their name on it and will ask the folks in the palace to write a wishlist of gifts in yudi's marriage. So that way they have name and that person's handwriting on that paper and after that rani's handwriting they can compare it with that letter he got the other day. 😳

Saksh liked this idea and he was looking at yudi and it was like telling him that now you also learn how to play game??? 😆 😆 but everything is fair in love and war, right?? 😃

So next day they had task to complete and that was to get everybody's hand writing and that is also no body should have slightest idea what is their real intention is. 😉


Yudi was anxiously waiting for the papers to arrive and this time he was hoping for best as last time that was glitch in their plan as nikki turned up instead. 😕

Yudi could now understand that the most difficult thing in this world is to wait for something , and that is also that thing is connected to your life . 😭

He passed whole night in restlessness no dream was giving him any comfort. 😳 Next day by afternoon he was going to get hold of the list and it was very difficult for him to pass time till than 😳 . though the moment came he was waiting for . saksh was on his way to his room with that list and both were excited to see it 😳

After coming in to the room saksh immediately start looking at the list some have given really big big list 😆 😆 and some has given some funny list but they did not care who has given what 😆 they only wanted to see what rani has written and when saksh open that page he could not believe his eyes how could this possible ??????????? 😕

Seeing him lost yudi ask him about what she has written, saksh just pass that letter he knew that yudi must be heart broken but instead he saw yudi giving cute smile as winner. 😳 Saksh could not understand he again took letter from yudi thinking he might have missed something, 😕 but whatever yudi could see saksh could not. To see those unwritten word one should have heart feel with love for that person and yudi had that heart."ha woh ek kora kaagaz tha kuchh bhi nahi likhaa tha oos mai" 😭 😭

Saksh: aisa kya hai isme jo ham nahi samaj paa rahe hai lekin aapki haasi dekh ke ye lagta hai badi jadui bhaasa me likha hai jo hamaare samaj ke bahaar hai. 😆 😆

Yudi who was touching that letter as he was trying to feel her and taking fregrance of that letter like he can sence her fragrance in that letter 😳 . The way he was showing his affection towards that letter that was making saksh more puzzled 😕

Yudi (after seeing saksh puzzled face): saksh baadal kitni bhi koshish kare suraj ko chhupaaneki suraj ki kirane suraj ke hone kaa ahesaas karvaahi deti hai. 😳
Saksh: matlab 😕
Yudi: matlab ye ki dekhiye sabne apne list me kitni saari chize likhi hai par inhone kuchh bhi nahi likha kyun??? 😳
Saksh: kyun woh hi to ham jaan ne ki koshish kar rahe he aur aap hume paheli suna rahe he. 😆 😆

Yudi: woh hamse kya maange ge ,jinke pass hamaari sabse kimti chiz hai …. 😳 Nahi samje hamara dil…………….. 👏

Yudi: unhone kuchh bhi naa likh ke bahut kuchh likh diyaa hai aur dhyan se dekhiye is kaajak pe aansu ki bunde dikhi padegi tumhe. 😭

Saksh saw very carfully and yudi was right in middle of the letter it was bit soft .

Yudi: unho ne list me apne aanshu bheje he woh bataa rahe hai ki wo kitni majbur hai , lekin hum majbur nahi he hum unhe dhundhkar hi rahenge chaahe jo ho jaye . woh kitni hamse chhupneki koshish kare. 😳

After hearing this passionate words saksh did not want to disturb yudi so he just left room silently leaving yudi alon with his sweet old memories and new found memories.

but was yudi's search over the way he was thinking or actually this search is going to lead hidden facts. this is going to disclose many more puzzles those were actually already layed out in palace and in his life.
after knowing her truth will he able to get her that easily???? or he has to pass many more tests ?only time knows what has been stored but indeed this truth is going to change many lives .

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome part..yudi really love her..even black paper say many words..i hope yudi can see and talk to her..we can wait for monday..have a nice trip..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey beena very beautiful part dear 👏..i love yaar jis tarah tum beech meh shayari karti ho 😳

i love this part ...yudi rani ko bahut pyar karta hai tabhi toh samaj gaya ki papar meh kuch na likha ho kar bhi bahut kuch likha hai 😳

ab toh usse maloom ho gaya hai ki rani hi wo ladki hai ...so ab toh uske liye usse doondna muskil nahi 😆

so ab tum next part Monday likhogi ??...hum wait karte hai 😳..Have a nice Trip 😃

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
yes payal and mannu our yudi dear fultu 😆 in love with rani . blank paper sometimes deliver message that too mnay words cannot . the way sometimes tell" khaamoshi bahoot kuchh bolti hai"

manuu thanks for likeing my shayari i love playing with words and that's my husband sometimes tell me that i am very filmi 😆 😆 😆

yes next most dhamakedar will be on monday if tonight will not get time to edit it as it is already written but need time to edit. it.
and thanks i will have fun during my trip but i am now so much hooked to this forum that i will miss you all. 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok some how i managed and i did it . i edited the part and now i am posting it in two sub part as when i finished it it seems very long to me.

so for weekend i am not here so take your time listen some nice jagjit sinji's gazal and read this portion and please do leave your comment i will answer them when i will be back 😳 😳



Part 18

(1)

The beautiful morning has come along with bright sunny day. Blowing breeze was spreading blooming flower's fragrance all around. That was making atmosphere very pleasant. 😳

This morning yudi was also in very refreshing mood. He wanted to enjoy this moment with full spirit 😳 . After many days strenuous work has bear fruits and now he was very near to solve his puzzle, that has stolen his sleep.

Woh aisa bhanvara tha jo kitne deeno se ek phool ki khooshboo ke pichhe khicha ja rahaa tha . aaj woh oos chaman(garden) tak ja pahunchaa tha jaha yeh phool kheela tha bas ab woh oos phool ko pahechaan kar oos ke paas jaanaa baaki tha. 😳

When he was having his breakfast with other family member. Seeing him very happy and in pleasant mood. 😃

Rajaji:kyon aaj kaun si aisi baat he jo aap bahut khile hue se lag rahe hai. 😃
Yudi: nahi bas aaj ka mausam badaa achha hai . 😃
Cr: hume maloom hai aap ki khooshi ka kaaran. Aaj RB se jo milna hai. 😕

Everybody started laughing 😃 and yudi felt that somebody has push him in reality. But today he did not like it. He was surprised after hearing this as he had no idea that how and where he is going to meet RB 😕 . as he did not confirm any meeting with her 😕 . since last few days he did not even call her as he was busy looking for rani. 😳


Rani who was near by dining area cleaning very beautiful metal statue, felt hurt when he heard this conversation 😭 . She could not understand why she was feeling distress whenever she listen RB's name together with yudi 😕 . There was tears in her eyes and the reason of her tears was not clear 😕 . Weather it was because she could not see yudi with anyone or because of the dust in her eyes. The way she was cleaning statue it seems like "Woh apne man se dhool udaane ki koshish kar rahi ho"

Yudi:RB se kaha ? kab: hamaara matlab hai hume kuchh maloom nahi aap kya kah rahe hai. 😕

Now it was shock for all. Actually what had happen is rajaji and his family had to attend pooja to his very good friend who leave near by town. And RB along with her parents is going to be there. And yudi had to attend very important meeting with USA delegates. they are going to be here only for one day. so after discussion they decided that yudi will go ahead with meeting while rajaji,CR, bhavi and rudra they will attend function accompanied by few servants .

CR gave instruction to bhanu , kali ,sukhiyaji and others who were going with them and instruct rani to take care of BR properly as today BR and nikki is going to be in palace while they were away.


Yudi had very long day today. He already went to office with saksh . he was aware that if they will get this project than it will add one more flag in their success. So he has to give his 100%. Especially he was going to attend this meeting without his dad so he has to prove himself also. 😳

It was almost night when they finished their meeting but few things did not settle the way he wanted 😕 . He was upset about that and very disappointed as they have asked for time to rethink and will let yudi know by one week. He did not expect this reply from them so he was troubled. 😭

This marathon meeting has drained yudi out . yudi decided to go back palace ,take bath and indulge himself with some light music to change his mood 😕 .
After reaching home he instructed servants not to disturb him. After going in the room he just threw his file on bed and immediately went to take refreshing bath and changed into beautiful simple white kurta .
he loved Jagjitshigji's gazal so took one album from his grand collection. after so many days he was going to listen jagjit singji's beautiful gazal. And he was hoping that this might change his irritated mood. 😳

Before he settled down he got called from rajaji.
Rajaji: kunvar aap kaha hai?
Yudi: who pitaji bahut deri ho gayi thi eesliye hum mahal vaapas aa gaye hai.
Rajaji: meeting kaisi rahi?
Yudi(did not want to answer this question): woh to thik rahi aap bataaye waha kaisi rahi pooja ? aap log ka baa rahe hai?
Rajaji: pooja to badhiyan thi hum logo ko deri ho jaayegi aane mai . lekin hamaare paas ek khush kabari hai aapko den eke liye.
Yudi: achha woh kya?
Rajaji: woh hum sab yahaa mile to hum logo ne tayi kiya ki aapki aur RB ki shadi jald hi karde…… aap ka kya vichaar hai. 😭 😭

Now this was another blow on yudi as he did not expect that this question will come in front of him 😳 . he was under impression that still he has time so he can meet rani and if she also loves him than he can talk to his dad and for all this he needed time. Woh kya jawaab deta?

When rajaji did not get answer he thought that yudi must be feeling shy .

Rajaji: hum samaj gaye aap ka jawaab . aap sharma rahe hai . to phir waha aake hum sub kuchh hi dino mai fix kar denge. Aap kyal rakhiyega apna hum phone rakhte hai aur CR , RB subko ye khush khabri dete hai. 😕

Yudi could not take this. he threw his phone on bed too in anger. Lekin phone pe gussa kyun? Was that phone's fault that it convay this message to him? 😭 😭



to be continued in next post

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