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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
continue from previouse part that yudi threw his phone

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At the same moment his cd started playing song in jagjitji's Makhmali aawaz

"apani marazi sai kha apne safar kai hum hai,
Rukh hawa auo kaa jidhar kaa hai udhar kai hum hai"

At this moment he was very disturb and trying to cool down and collect himself. 😭

He tried to rest in comfortable reclining chair keeping his feet in very relaxing manner and looking out of the window , that opened directly in garden . he had open sky view so today full moon was also visible. After so many days he was experiencing this Khushnuma atmosphere. But that was also unable to cheer him up. 😭 😭

The song was going on and yudi was listening it while his eyes closed and his life was passing through his eyes as movie.

"chalet rahete hai ki chalnaa hai musaphir kaa nasib
Sochte rahete hai kis raah guzar te hum hai"

He was thinking that this wordings are so true for his life. He was also being one Musaafir but he has no right to choose his destination. He wants to go other way but destiny is pushing him another way. 😭

Woh apne aap ko ek aisa phool dan(flower vase) samaj rahathaa, jis se koi kabhi nahi puchhta ki who apne mai kis phool ko sajaana chahtaa hai. Maalik ki jo marzi hoti hai wahi phool oos mai sajte hai , koi oose nahi puchhta ki wo kahaa sajna chahtaa hai. Har koi oose unlogoki marazi se sajaa detaa hai. 😭

He cannot think what will he do now?

He was struggling with his irritation as in morning he was very happy and in exciting mood but this meeting and now this piece of news has left him in dismay .? 😭

Ek toofan jo ooske dil mai ootha thaaur doosra toofan bahaar aane waala thaa. Jaise ooska dard aaj khudae bhi she nahi paa rahaa tha , aasman jaise fat jaane walaa ho. Chaaro aur kale baadal chhane lage the. 😭 😭


Rani who was with BR, she gave dinner to BR and after giving her medicine she made her go to sleep. She was clearing all stuff from BR's bad and massaging her feet. She did not know that yudi was back from work . today she was relaxed that he is not around and same time yudi was under impression that rani has gone out with others.

Suddenly atmosphere changed and wind start blowing with all its might. Lightening were striking with full it's effort . thunder was making atmosphere more drastic. 😕

Aisa lag raha tha jaise in do prami au ko tadap ke dekh amber bhi dhaara se judai se nahi paa rahaa ho. Aur jaise wo dhaara se milne ko bechen ho. In dono ka dard jaise bigali banke gir rahaa thaa jami pe.
😭 😭

Suddenly it started raining very heavily. Yudi had to get up and closed windows as it was getting worst and worst. Suddenly light went off in whole palace.

Rani who was with BR at that time got worried . she was unable to see anything around her and if BR will wake up than how is she going to take care of her . so she decided before it's too late she has to go out and get candles. For that she had to go to kitchen.

Now this is some new blow on yudi .Yudi was also worried because of sudden electricity loss. He could not find candle in his room he tried to use torch in his mobile but that he threw on bed moment ago . Now he was very upset and he has no other way than go out and look for somebody who can help him out.

Jaise woh bahaar gayaa oose thodi si roshani dikhayi . woh oos roshani ki dishaa me jaane lagaa .kyunki oose lagaa waha koi hai oos se wo madad le sakegaa.

Raani mombati (candle) leke rasoi ghar se bahar aa gayi thi aur who BR ke room ki taraf badh rahi thi . ees baat se anjaan ki yudi oosi ki taraf aa rahaa he.
Aur yudi ko sirf candle ki dim light dikhayi de rahi thi .jisne oose pakdaa tha woh nahi.

Aisa lag rahaa tha mano jalti huyi ye mombati aaj ees do premi ke beech ki doori ko khatam karke ek nayi roshani unki zeendagi me lane wali ho. 😳 😳

After while when yudi reached near rani, he was behind her. And at the same moment rani also felt somebody is behind her 😕 . This realization made her panic. She was wondering who can be here at this time 😕 as long she was aware no body was in palace except BR , nikki and herself and guards were outside the palace.
Before she thinks more

Yudi: kshama kijiye kya aap hamari madad karengi ? Hume mombati chahiye thi. 😳

This was beyond her belief that kunvarji can be there and now what she can do to hide herself , yudi was waiting for her reply and in fear rani wanted to move ahead 😕 but in darkness she did not realized that her leg got stuck in carpet and she fell………………
😳
But luckily two strong hands saved her from falling down 😳 😳 . And she was in yudi's arm, holding his shoulder with one arm and candle in another hand . 😳 😳 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Beena tane shu kahu..mindblowing part..jagjitsingh ni gazal..ab yudi ka pain dekha nhi ja raha..i like your syari andaz..ab monday tak wait karna padega..rani yudi ki baho me..
waiting..
Edited by pop77 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
hi friends how are you all i had my excellent holidays

thanks payal yes now rani in yudi's arm so lets see whats happen ............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
yep i had very nice holiday because it was shopping holiday and you all gals know we women always enjoy shopping and we forget everything around us.
i went to thailand(bangkok) and i spent wonderful time with my brother and his family . and we did tones of shopping . and we kept pestering my bro that it is not enough we want more.
my brother was like you women no body canbeat you in shopping 😆 😆
eventhough in the end we could not walk we went for thai message so next day again we start our shopping .
actually i love thai food that is my favourite food. 😳

but the only wrong thing happen was on the first day while walking i twisted my leg and and it tore few legament though i was in pain i took pain killer so i could beat other ladies in shopping race 😆 😆

now i have to get back to my story again 😆
once i figured out i will update the post as soon as possible i tried to do it but i di dnot work out the way i wanted
thanks dear missed you all
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95

recap::: in palace raja, CR, rudra and bhavi has gone to attend poonja at rajaji's friend palace. only yudi, Nikki and BR is at the palace . few main servants also went with them. yudi had unsuccessfull meeting with delegats and meanwhile he got call from his dad that they are planing to take his marraige asap. he is upset and now it is electicity loss in palace , while looking for someone in palace he met rani in dark and she fell i n his arm........

Part: 19

What a coincident. When he least expected to find her she was in his arm 😳 .
Jis jugnu ko woh pane ki khvaish rakhtaa thaa aaj woh ooski baahon me thaa. Saaraa jahaan jaise isi ek pal me samaa gayaa ho.
Atmosphere also celebrating their Milan, lightening was taking snaps. Wind was playing melodious music. Aur paani ki boonde jaise phoolo ki barsaat 😳 . And soils fragrance was enhancing this glorious moment
They have forgotten everything around them lost in each other . but candle's nature is to melt and burn the person who come in it's contact. 😕 Same thing happened .
the moment candle melted it burned rani's palm who was holding it. And rani screamed in pain and the same moment yudi realized that he is not dreaming but he his holding his dream ,that has become fact ,in his arm. The moment realization came the same moment he became more alert as he did not want to let go his dream from his reach. So he helped rani to stand up and second moment he took candle from her hand and with second hand he hold her hand very tight. 😳

Rani ne koshish ki apna haath chhoodaane ki lekin vyarth rahaa ushka prayatna. 😕

Yudi pulled her and took her in his room 😕 . in room he kept candle on one table and took rani in bathroom to wash her hand that have been burnt. Though it was not very serious burn but yudi did not want to take any risk. 😳
He wiped her hand and took first aid box from drawer . all the while he was holding her hand and did not utter single word . rani who was amused and restless trying to figure out what yudi is doing and how will he react after that, as so far he has not uttered a single word. She was trying to read his mind. 😭 😭
Yudi make her sit on his bed and started to apply cream on her burn. He did not even looked at her once all this while busy doing whatever he was doing.
Now this silence was killing rani 😭 . She was unsuccessfully fighting her tears back. Rani looked at yudi who seemed engrossed applying cream on rani's hand. 😳
Bahaar kaa toofaan jaise tham rahaa tha lekin andar ka toofan abhi saare baandh todne walaa thaa.
Jab rani se ye chupki na sahi gayi usne hi ees khaamoshi ko todte hue kahaa.

Rani: kunvarji hame maaf kar dijiye.

Yudi did not say anything . aisa lag raha tha jaise ek lawa bhootal se phootne hi walaa hon.
rani could understand his agony so continued 😭

rani: hum jante hain humse bahut badi galati ho gayi hai. Lekin ye sab humne jaan buj kar nahi …………..

before she could finished her sentence. 😭 😭

Yudi who was pretending to be busy applying cream let go rani's hand and stood up immediately. He answer her back. His tone had mixture of pain and anger.

Yud: aap ye sab hame kyu bataa rahi hai. Humne aapse kuchh puchha??????????

Rani who was expecting that he will be angry with her but some where in bottom her heart she was feeling that yudi will listen to her. 😭

But when she saw that yudi is in no mood to listen any explanation she could not bear his cold behavior 😭 .

Yudi: hume koi safai nahi chahiye. Aapko to khush honaa chahiye hamaari ye haalat dekh kar. Yahi aap chaahti thi naa??

Rani: nahi kunvarji humaara aisa koi iraada nathaa. Jo kuchh bhi huaa who humaari galati nahi thi.

Yudi: bahut badaa khel khelaa hai aapne hamaare saath...
Before he say something more they heard noise outside. And suddenly rani remembered BR so she ran away from room leaving yudi with his agony and pain.
He just stood there disturbed , lost and heart broken .

Why he got angry on her ??? was he really angry with her??? since last few days he was dying to meet her.
Yudi ne rani ko dhoondhne ke liye aakash paataat ek kar diye. And when he got chance he reacted totally opposite .

his own behaviour left him surprised. it was not his nature to react the way he had reacted.

Aur shaayad woh apne aap se khafaa thaa. Subha woh kitna khush thaa ki ab who aasani se rani ko dhundh lega aur jab ooske pitaji ne ooski shadi jadli se le lene ki baat ki to oose aapne saare armaano ka bag ujadte lag rahaa thaa. 😭
the frustration that have built up ,came out as anger on Rani.
Toofaan ne aake sab tahesh nahesh kar diya thaa. Yudi ka man, vichaar, ooski bhaavnaaye, sanskaar. Yudi ko is tarahaa se oolja diyaa thaa ki woh wahi haath mai marham liye sochta khadaa rah gayaa………………what will he do now??????? 😭 😭


Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96

finally they meet..yudi was angry with her..ab vo kya kar shakta hai 😭 king ne uski shadi fix kar di hai..let see wht gonna happen..next part kyre kare che..
waiting..

PS: pag baraber che..shopping to daudi ne kari che..mara mate shu buy karyu..

Edited by pop77 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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you are right payal what can he do he is too frustrated with whatever happening inhis life.
other people are taking decisions behalf of him and he is so tied up that cannot do anything 😭
but as we know he has to do something and take action fast before it is too late 😳 😳

pag ma sojo chhe pan shopping karati vakhate badhu bhooli javay 😆 😆
tamara badha mate thodi fresh idea lai avichhu , hawe thodi story change 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

you are right payal what can he do he is too frustrated with whatever happening inhis life.
other people are taking decisions behalf of him and he is so tied up that cannot do anything 😭
but as we know he has to do something and take action fast before it is too late 😳 😳

pag ma sojo chhe pan shopping karati vakhate badhu bhooli javay 😆 😆
tamara badha mate thodi fresh idea lai avichhu , hawe thodi story change 😆 😆

fresh idea kyare write karine post kare che..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
i am on way it is almost written but the feeling i want in it is not coming so trying hard .
tamane badhaa ne niraash nathi karvaa.


may be by tonight or tomorrow i will post it
thanks for waiting
one song in dedication for my dear yudi's confusion


" ghungharoo ki tarahaa bajtaa hi rahaa hoo mai,
kabhi RB ke pass kabhi rani pass
jaane ko soch rahoo mai....

kabhi toot gayaa kabhi toda gayaa
har baar mooje phir jodaa gayaa
kabhi papa ke dar se kabhi mujboor dil se haartaa hi rahaahoo mai.........."
😭 😭 😭
Edited by bsingapury - 15 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Waiting for next part with lots of feeling..song goes well to yudi's state mind..

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