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and u wrote so decently beena......3 million thumbs up!
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beena you have done a gr8 job well done i like the way you explained it all it was lovely😊 can't wait till the next part beena

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every1 also take luk at my story " raja ki aagayi baraat" in discussion forums ................no competion beena........but just a married YuRa story...........
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beena you have done a gr8 job well done i like the way you explained it all it was lovely😊 can't wait till the next part beena

thanks dear ..........for lovely comments.and next part will come by thursday ...........as busy with somethign and this monday .is already killing me............as mind is worried about what rani will do so unable tothink anything..hope they show something excellent .........
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Originally posted by: ***eesha***

every1 also take luk at my story " raja ki aagayi baraat" in discussion forums ................no competion beena........but just a married YuRa story...........

it;s ok eesha it inot cometition it is love for yura..............and i am happy many creative member or i would rather say lovely friends are coming up with romantic and excellent ideas................love all for that and those reader whoa re supporting with lovely comments it more more important..............
and i read yhour work it is excellent ........keep it up dear..............as i am feeling very happy ...........the way all yura lover has planty of ideas..to entertain us during free longest days.......................
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Beena all part awsome..rani ne kiss ki..wow ab yudi kab jawab dega
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hi aksn thank you dear for taking out some time and reading all parts.....how are you?
rani ko to yudi jawaab degaa apne andaaz main ...........shahi tarikaa
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Part 53

Yearning and search has very intense bond.

Whichever path yearning goes search always accompany to it. Searching take place sometimes intentionally or sometimes unintentionally. Sometimes person do not have any idea what is he searching for, even though he or she does not stop his searching. 😳

With that unintentional search yudi enter BR's room; his eyes were habitually searching for his love, rani. It had become his habit to meet rani in BR's room, if possible every day first thing in the morning.😳 BR knew that Yudi's eyes were looking for rani and she was aware of the fact that RB was supposed to arrive and live in the palace for a week. BR could see Yudi's desperation on his face and she was happily surprised the way his son had committed himself with rani. 😳Rani and yudi was far end of two opposite sides even though there was something that was connecting them with strong bond. What was that bond? BR was amused to think about that. 😕

It was almost like the theory of body science: body science believes that this body is made up of five elements earth, water, air, fire and sky.

What is the reason between the intense attractions between these five elements?

They are very different, totally, opposite though attached to each other.

' kitna theheraa huva sa prithvi(earth) tatva(element)

Tarangit hota jal tatva

Dahktaa(hot) huva agni tatva

Pravaahmaan(always moving) vayu tatva(air element)

Aur kahaa agochar(mysterious) aakaash tatva

Koi bhi to taal mel nahi dikhtaa aaps main

Ye kaise mile bethe? Kaunsa swar sadh gayaa inke beech main'''..?

Something was there to keep them together''''yes it was the sixth element '''.love'..PYAAR'''' PREM''..who keep connected them with each other. They are in love with each other''''that love has given them strength to be with each other. 😳

'ye chhathaa tatva jinke beech janam le letaa hain, woh milte hi hain phir, unhe milnaa hi hota hain, Milan oonki 'niyati ' ho jaati hain'

Milan ghatataa hi hain kahi par bhi kisi bhi samay ees Milan ke liye sthaan arth kho detaa hain aur kaal bhi''

Sthaan aur kaal ki simaaye tod kar bhi milnaa hota hain'''.

And BR could see that Milan had taken place in palace, that love had bonded rani and yudi together regardless of their differences. However, she knew that this MILAN would change the history of shishodiya family's long running PARAMPARAA. 😳

Yudi sat beside his mom and took her hand in his hand, it was evident to BR that he was struggling with some unspoken, unbelievable, unidentified emotions and he wanted to pour his heart out. Yudi was looking for words to empty his heart in front of his loving, unprejudiced, practical and prudent mom. Yudi knew that she was the only person in entire family who could understand his deep feelings for rani. 😳

Yudi was aware of that BR was solicitous mother, who could have done anything in her power, to unite him with his love, if she would have been physically capable to take control over the situation. However, right now her emotional and mental support was also work as wonder for yudi.😳

BR seeing him confused raised her brow in indication that whether he wants to share something.

BR thought' hum jaante hain aap humse kyaa kahenaa chaah rahe hain'..hum aap ke saath hain betaa. Hum jabaan se bol to nahi shakte '''.lekin hum dil se kah rahe hain hum aapke pyaar ki raah par aapke saath hain.'😳

Yudi: maa''.pataa hain aaj hume bahut becheni ho rahi hain''aap to jaanti hain aaj RB aa rahi hain ek hufte ke liye , yaahaa mahal main rahene ke liye''''aur humare saath samay bitaane ke liye '''..lekin '''..lekin''

Yudi looked at his mom who was listening to him very carefully.

Yudi: lekin hum oonke saath samay vyatit nahi karnaa chaahate'😭😭'..aur aapko kaaran bhi pataa hain hum'..kisi aur ke saath rahenaa chahte hain'😕'.lekin koi raashtaa nahi dikh rahaa hain hume''..hume ees waqt aapke aashirvaad ki sakht jaroorat hain''..ki humse aisa koi vartan naa ho jaaye jisse hume lage ki hum apne pyaar ke saath chhal kar rahe hain''😕''.apne pyaar ke saamne kisi gair ke saath har waqt rahenaa''''kaise kar paayenge hum'😭😭.maa humari kuchh samaj main nahi aa rahaa hain''.maa''.dar saa lag rahaa hain.jivan main pahele baar humne aapne liye kuchh tamannae ki hain .apni marzi se .kuchh paane ki.........koi kuchal na de '''eesi dar ne humare dil aur dimaag ko jaise tanaav se gher liyaa hain'''😕😕

BR tried to squeeze Yudi's hand and yudi was surprised, by the pressure and warmth he felt in his hand. First time after her mom's sickness, he felt that strength in his mom's touch. He was surprised and had feeling that his mom is with him, and when he saw, BR looking at him with lots of affection and pure love in her eyes, yudi understood what her mom wanted to tell him that she was with him and yudi was delighted, experiencing his mom beside him in his decision. 😳😳

Yudi: pataa nahi hume kyun lag rahaa ahin ki aap hume kah rahi hao ki aap humare saath hain'.aur ees baat ko mahesoos kar ke bhi humare dil ko kitna sakun kaa anubhav ho rahaa hain''..hum aap ko bataa nahi shakte.😳

BR smiled at yudi and assured him by nodding her head in affirmative.

Yudi: maa ab hum chalte hain '..hume deri ho gayi hain dining table par pitaaji humari raah dekh rahe honge'''

Yudi one more time looked around and looked at door whether rani had entered the room or not, but Ooski aankhe khali hi wapas laut aayi''''darwaaje se''maayushi si chha gayi yudi ke chahere par''.lekin maa ke saath ki yaad bahelaa gayi ooske dil ko''''ki kuchh hi din ki baat hain'''.andheri raat ke baad''..khushiyo ki bauchhaar hain'''

He took out one letter from his pocket read it and again folded it and it seemed like he wanted to leave it there with BR for rani but was afraid if somebody else will get hold of this letter than it could create problem.

Yudi again open the letter and folded it again and than deciding something moved towards door '''..the moment he opened the door, he was happily delighted to see rani out side the door😳😳''it was pleasant coincidence for him.

Khile hove gulaab ki taraahaa taro taazaa apni khushboo se apne aas paas ke vaataavaran ko mahekaati'''..ooske chahere ki saumyataa ko dekh kar jaise saare badan ki sushati kahi havaao main gul ho jaaye'''..dil aur dimaag dono ko jaise taro taazaa kar jaaye''''

Overjoyed, yudi gave wide smiled and rani was also very happy seeing yudi there. They exchanged glance.

' ankho ne aankho se baat ki, hale dil kaa takaajaa liya,

Dil ki gaherayiyo ne dared dil ko aankho se bayaan kiya.'😳

While passing by, yudi held rani hand from side and immediately left the room. Uncertain, rani could not understand the movement that took place in the blink of her eyes, but suddenly she felt yudi had left something in her hand. Rani looked carefully the thing yudi had left in her hand and she was surprised to see small piece of paper. Rani could not stop herself but to read what yudi had written.😳😳

Lamho hi gujaarish hain ki aapse dur rah kar bhi jee liyaa jaaye,

Tamannao ki gujaarish hain ki aapki yaado ko jine ki wajah banaa kar ji liyaa jaaye,

Khwaayisho ki gujaarish hain ki aapki saanso ko apni saanso main maheka kar ji liyaa jaaye,😳

Aapki gujaarish hain har gam ko has ke pee liyaa jaaye,

Aapki gujaarish sar aankho par lekin,

Hamaari bhi gujaarish hain ki aapke pure din main se kuchh pal hume diye jaaye.😳

Rani smiled reading those lovely words, how beautifully yudi had asked her to meet him everyday at least once.

Yura's unspoken interaction could not hide from BR's experienced eyes. She felt 'jaise mahobbat kaa masihaa ne een dono pyaar karne waalo ko duniya ki dhoop se bachaate huve apni chhonv main le liyaa ho' 😳

On breakfast table:

RS: badi khush lag rahi hain choti rani sahibaa?

CR: khush kyun naa ho aaj RB jo aa rahi hain.

RS: are haan hum to bhool hi gaye the''''.sab taiyari yaa ho gayi oonke swaagat main''..

CR: jiha humne sab taiyariya karwaali hain

RS: koi kami naa rah jaaye . jab tak woh yaha hain oonhe koi kami nahi honi chaahiye. '.aur hum jaante hain'..aapki taiyariyo main kabhi koi kami nahi hoti''.

CR: shukriyaa rajasaheb, RB ke aane ki khushi to kuchh aur hi hain'''hum bahut khush hain kunvar ke liye'''..

RS: hume maloom hain aap kunvar ko kitna chaahti hain''''lekin hain kahaa appke kunvar'''

CR: ye lijiye aa gaye''appne yaad kiya aur kunvar '''haajir

Yudi: pranam pitaaji, pranam chhotima

RS: jite rahiye kunvar'.hum abhi aapka hi jikra kar rahe the.

Yudi: humaaraa kyun?

CR: woh aaj RB aa rahi hain naa eesi wajah se''yaad to hain naa aapko ki bhool gaye''

Yudi thinking ' kaise bhool shakte hain RB ek aisa tufaan hain jinhe nyotaa(invitation) dekar aur swaagat kar ke bulaaya jaataa hain'😆

Yudi: nahi CRji hume yaad hain.

RS: lagtaa hain RB ki khushi eetni badh gayi hain ki aap apne kaam ko nazar andaaz kar rahe hain.😕

Yudi: nahi pitaaji aisi koi baat nahi hain.

CR: aap aisa kun kah rahe hain Rajaji , sab jaante hain kunvar yudi apne kaam ke prati kitne nisthaawaan hain..

RS: lekin hum dekh rahe hain kitne dino se oonkaa dhyan kahi aur hi hain''''''..ab kal ki hi baat le lijiye ''.pooraa din kunvar aap office nahi aaye''aapki kitni jaroori meeting theewoh bhi bhool gaye''..aisa pahele kabhi nahi huva lekin ab baar baar ho rahaa hain''.hum jaan shakte hain kal aap saaraa din kahaa the.?

Rudra intervene : lagtaa hain bhaiya bhabhi ki aane ki khushi main oonhe kuchh surprise plan kar rahe honge'''bhabhi ko khush kar ne ke liye'''pura din oosi main hi nikaal gaya hoga.kyun bhaiya kyaa surprise hain''.hume bhi to pataa chale''😆😆

RS was infuriated by rudra's remark he gave angry stare to rudra.😕

RS: rudra, soch samaj kar bola kijiye'.ye sab baate aapko shobhaa nahi deti'''.

Rudra thought ' agar aapka bas chale to saans lene se pahele bhi hume sochne ki angyaa(order) dede''..koi kaise relax ho ke jee saktaa hain aapke anushasan main.😆😆

Yudi: kshamaa kijiye pitaaji , kal bahaar kaa ek bahut jaroori kaam aa padaa to hume jaanaa padaa'''..warnaa ye galti nahi hoti'..phir bhi aage se hum dhyan rakhenge'aisi galti kabhi nahi hogi''

RS: aur rudra aap kahaa hain''.aap to bij ke chaan bante jaa rahe hain'''..

CR: woh Rudra to bhavi ke admission main oonki madad main joote huve hain kayi dino se''bhavi ki college shuru ho gayi hain ab . aur aap to jaante hain bhavi main rudara ki jaan basti hain. Bhavi ke liye rudra kabhi bhi koi bhi samjautaa nahi kar shakte. Bhavi kaa bol jaise rudra ke liye patthar par likhi lakir hain'.bhavi ko koi paresaani ho woh rudra bardaast nahi kar shakte''''..

RS: ootnaa hi thodaa dhyan woh agar apni jeendagi ko dene lage to oonki jeendagi ki gaadi bhi patri per aaraam se daudne lage''''.😉

Yudi understood that RS' s words might be hurting rudra so he decided to change the topic.

Yudi: kshaamaa kijiye pitaaji lekin hum chalte hain hume der ho rahi hain'

CR: kunvar yaad se jaldi aa jayiyegaa kyunki RB do pahar tak aa jaayegi aur hum chaahte hain aap jyaadaa se jyaadaa waqt oonke saath bitaaye''.

Yudi: theek hain hum aajaayenge.

However,Yudi was upset but did not reveal his feelings.

It was late afternoon and CR was impatiently waiting for RB's arrival. CR had given last moment instruction to all servant regarding RB's arrival and her stay in palace. CR instructed rani to take care of all the smallest necessity of RB and RB should not have any kind of inconvenience during her stay in palace.

Bhanu was feeling uncomfortable when CR was giving too much importance to rani. bhanu was determined to create all possible situation that could land rani in trouble with RB. 😡

Guard inform CR about RB's arrival, CR did aarti for RB.

RB: pranam chhoti maa.

CR: jeeti rahi ye'' RB aap andaazaa nahi lagaa shakte hum kitne khush hain aaj. Jaise aapke aane se pure mahal main bahaar si aa gayi hain'''..

Cr thought' ab bahaar ke saath tufaan kab aayegaa ooski hum besabri se intazaar kar rahe hain'🤢

RB: hum bhi bahut khush hain yaha aake chhoti maa'..hume bhi aap sabki bahut yaad aa rahi thee'

Bhavi: bhabhi hum sab ki yaad ki bhaiya ki yaad''''..

RB was shy hearing those words'..

CR: hume lagtaa hain RB aap thak gayi hain'''.aap jaake aaraam kijiy..kunvar thodi der main aate hi honge''''..

RB: ji chhoti maa''..

CR: rani, RB ko apne kamare main le jaayhiye'''

Rani: ji chhoti rani sahibaa''''

In RB's room

RB: haaasssssss''humaaraa to puraa badan tut rahaa hain ''hum to bahut hi thak gaye'''aur tum ......kyaa hain ab dafaa ho jaao ab yaha se kyaa sar par khadi rahogi'hum akele rahenaa chaahte hain.😡

Rani: jo aapki agyaa'lekin ..RBji agar aap ko kisi bhi chij ki jaroorat ho to hume bataa dijiye''hume aapki sevaa main niyukt kiyaa gayaa hain.

RB: theek hain''''

While rani was going out, RB looked at her carefully and stopped her'''.

RB: ruko'''

Rani: ji RBji

Rani stopped abruptly on her way to out.

RB: tum wahi naukrani ho na jo do chotiyaa banaayaa karti thee''..aur humne kuchh der tak humari jagah par''''😕😕

Rani: ji RBji hum wahi hain'''

RB observed rani from top to bottom and with sarcasm started to insult rani with her poisonous words.😡😡

RB: badi ban than ke ghum rahi ho''..kahaa gayaa woh ganvaar saa pahenaavaa''..yaa mahal main naukari kar te kar te yaha ki maharani hone ki kvaayish jag oothi hain''.😡😡

Rani was shocked hearing those harsh comments.

Rani: ji''.RBji aisi ''..aisi koi baat nahi hain'..

RB: khamosh''''hum achhi tarah hain jaante hain tum jaisi do take ki naukraanio ko jo maukaa dekh kar apnaa vikrut chahera dikhaane se baaz nahi aati'''..jaraa hum bhi to jaane ees kaayaa kalp ke pichhe kyaa wajah hain'''tum jaisi ladkiyaa mauka parsat hoti hain'''.aur apne jism ke jaadoo se bhole bhale kunvaro ko apni moh jaal main faans deti hain''lagataa hain kisi ke oopar apne dore daalne ki taiyaari kar rakhi hain tumne'''🤢🤢🤢

Rani's heart sunk with sharp pain, RB's offensive words were hurting her like sharp knife. Tears came rushing in her eyes, and she chocked with emotions'''

RB: kyun kyaa huvaa'''..sachhayi saamne rakhdi to magar machh ke aanshu aa gaye aankho main''''lekin '''.bas kuchh mahino ki baat hai ek baar hum ees mahal main aajaaye ''.hum sab kuchh badal kar rakh denge'''

Rani stood their rooted, she knew that this was just the beginning of her ordeal and still many more this kind of insult and taunt would come on her way. ''''.and she knew that not only RB but when each and every person would come to know about her love affair with yudi this kind of allegation would crush her heart in small pieces. Every one will blame her that she deliberately deluded yudi with her youth. Seeing rani lost in her thought, RB felt frustrated.😭😭😭

RB: kyun ab kyaa yahi patthar ki murat ki taraha khadi rahogi'.dafaa ho jaao humari najaro se''''

However, RB could finish her sentence, nikki entered the room, the moment she got news about RB's arrival she came to meet her.

Nikki heard the last few words those came out from RB's mouth and she felt hurt too and sad for rani.

Nikki glanced at rani who was standing their totally shaken. Misery was written all over rani's face, she tried to fight back her tears.

Nikki: bhabhi ..kaisi hain aap''

Rani with that pronounce looked at nikki''.it was evident that nikki had spoken those words for RB but once rani felt that she was asking rani how was she feeling'..😭😭

Nikki consoled rani with nod.

RB: hum theek hain aap kaisi hain''''?

Nikki: hum bhi theek hain'''kyaa baat hain aap paresaan lag rahi hain'lagtaa hain aap thak gayi hain''..(anticipation to change topic and sent back rani)''.rani aap jaake RBji ke liye kuchh chayi ya juice leke aayiye''''..bhabhi aap kyaa lengi.?

RB: hume lagtaa hain hume chaayi leni chaahiye to thodi susti aa jaaye saare badan main''.

Nikki: jayiye '''rani bhabhi ke liye chayi leke aayiye'''

Rani: ji '.hum aabhi aate hain'''

Nikki: ho shake to kisi aur ke saath bhej dijiye'..aapko maa ke paas bhi jaanaa hoga''

Rani understood that nikki had come as her rescue, but the thing she was unaware of that bhanu the another terror had heard entire conversations in the RB's room and she had got golden chance to create difficult situation for rani. Bhanu was too proud and thankful to god for giving her this precious chance immediately after RB's arrival. Bhanu could not believe her stars are shining brightly in her favor.

Rani prepared tea for RB and called gauri to take it to RB's room. However when gauri was about to take tray, bhanu entered the kitchen.

Bhanu: gauri tray niche rakh do''..

Gauri looked at rani.

Bhanu: ooske saamne kyaa dekhti hain''.kahi ki maharani hain woh''.jaaoo tum yaha se aur raajkumaari bhavi ke room ki safaayi karo '''.aur tum rani..RBki jimedaari tumhe di gayi hain phir''kaam chor kahi ki'

Rani: nahi bhanuji woh nikkiji ne''.

Bhanu cut her short'..: hume kuchh nahi sunanaa''.aur ye kis cup tum le jaa rahi ho. Agar CR kopataa chalaa to tumhaari shaamat aa jaayegi jaao waha bahaar ke cupboard main se naye waale cup le kar aao''.

Rani hesitantly went out to take out new sets of cup.

Bhanu: ab theek hain jaao'''

Rani was scared of going into RB's room but she had no other option left for her rescue.

Rani knocked on the door of RB's room.

RB: aajaayiye''.

Rani: aapki chaayi lekar aaye hain''

RB: yaha par hume dedo aur chalti bano yaha se''..

Rani gave tea to RB and about to leave the room, she heard RB shouting''.

The first sip RB took from cup she spit it out''''..she shout with anger'.

RB: ye kyaa batmizi hain'''..ye chaayi hain yaa saagar kaa paani'

Rani was immobilized by fear. She could not understand what had happened suddenly.

RB: jawaab kyun nahi deti ''..ek simple si chayi banaani nahi aati ''.kaamchor kahi ki''

Rani: lakin''RB ji

RBji : chup raho''.ek to aisa ghatiyaa pan karti ho oopar se jabaan ladaati ho''chayi main.kitnaa namak daalaa hain tumne'''.😲😲😲

Rani was shocked when she heard that the tea was salty, she knew that she did not add than who could be?

RB: lagtaa hain abhi thodi der pahele humne tumhe khari khoti sunayi oosikaa badlaa lene ki koshish ki hain tumne'..

Rani: nahi RBji .humne aisa kuchh nahi kiya'aur hume to maloom bhi nahi eesme namak kahaa se aagayaa''.

RB; achchhaa to tumhaaraa matlab hain hum jooth bol rahe hain'''ek to galti karti ho upar se jubaan ladaati ho'''begerat ladki''..

Outside the window, bhanu and kali were peeping inside the room and they were very happy that their plan turned out perfectly the way they had intended. Bhanu in pretence of getting new cups sent rani out and added lots of salt in RB's tea. Bhanu was very proud on herself for coming up with this brilliant plan'..happily they ran away from their before some body could catch them and suspect them.😡😡😡

Rani: nahi RBji humaaraa matlab bilkul aisa nahi thaa'.

RB: tum jaisi ghatiyaa naukraani ke muh lagnaa hum apni tauhin samajte hain''..hum '..

However, she finished her sentence yudi entered the room, seeing rani tense and RB shouting on her he understood that RB had started her drama. Yudi felt very angry the moment he saw rani's sad face.😲😲😲

Yudi: kyaa ho rahaa hain yaha'''.

RB and mostly rani was shocked seeing yudi in the room. Rani tried to hide her agony by lowering her eyes, as she knew that if yudi would see her eyes he would understand her sorrow.😭😭

RB: are kunvarji aap'''.aap kab aaye''

Yudi was trying to control his anger, as he sensed the tension and he realized that RB was insulting rani.

Yudi: aap kuchh naaraaz lag rahi hain.RBji'

Yudi was looking at rani from the corner of his eyes to understand the situation.

RB: koi baat nahi hain'''..woh to ye kaam chor naukraani ne humaaraa saaraa mood kharaab kar diyaa

Yudi did not like when RB used those deteriorated words for rani. rani hastily glanced at yudi and sign him to relax and not to react in anger. 😭😭

RB: chhodiye een sab baato ko '''.aap paresaan mat hoyiye'.chaliye humkahi bahaar chalte hain'''ees ne to humaaraa saaraa mood kharaab kar diyaa'.kahi jaake aachhe se samay bitaa te hain.sirf aap aur hum''.

Rani looked at yudi who was still rooted their feeling helpless, rani nod and silently signed him to go ahead with RB.

Yudi lead RB to the main hall and suddenly he remembered something.

Yudi: RBji lagtaa hain hum apnaa wallet bhool gaye hain apne kamare main'hum abhi leke aate hain aap yahi humaaraa intzaar kijiye'''.

RB: theek hain kunvarji hum yahi aapke aapne kaa besabri se intzaar karte hain''..der mat lagaayiye gaa

Yudi : hum abhi gaye aur abhi aaye.

Rani was engrossed in cleaning the floor suddenly she felt someone had entered the room she turned to have look and she was surprised to see yudi entering the door and closing door behind him.😲😲😲

Rani: kunvarji aap yaa ????///

However, rani could say further more yudi pulled her desperately and took her in his passionate embrace. Frighten, rani did not stop yudi seeing him overwhelmed, but slowly she released herself from his strong grip.

Rani: kyaa baat hain kunvarji aap itne paresaan aur aapko yaha ees taraha nahi aanaa chaahiye thaa..pataa hain agar kisine dekh liya to'

Yudi: dekh lene dijiye''''hume koi parvaah nahi hain'..kyaa ho jaaye gaa ees taklif se to chhootkaaraa mil jaayegaa hume'.😭😭

Rani: ye kyaa baat kar rahe hain aap .ye achanak kyaa ho gayaa hain aap ko?

Yudi: rani'.aapko ees tarah zalil hote huve hum nahi dekh shakte''..RB ki itni himmat ki woh aapki tauhin kare''jo man main aaye woh bol de'''aap ko ees taraha se dukhi hote nahi dekh shakte'''

Rani smiled: kisne kahaa aapko hum dukhi hain'''.aur dookhi kyun honge hum''aur RB kibaato se hume koi dukh nahi huva''..dukh to tab hota agar aap aisa bartaav humare saath karte'..aap humse badsaluki karate ya koi aisa jo hume behad chahtaa hain'''.aur humari tauhin karataa'''.jo hume chahtaa hi nahi ''.jiski nazar main humaari koi maayine hi nahi oonki baato se dookhi khun honaa''''.kunvarji''''😳😳

Yudi : rani lekin'''aap kaa kasht humari becheni badhaataa hain.humne sun liya jo woh aapse kah rahi thee''.hum bekaaboo ho rahe the agar aapne eeshaare se hume chup rahene ko nahi kahaa hotaa

Rani: to aage bhi aap sayam se kaam ljiyegaa'''..ye samay bhi nikaal jaayegaa'aur ab aap jayiye ees se pahele koi yaha aa jaaye''..

Yudi: rani aap sahi kah rahi hain ??aap theek hain naa''??'''.hum RB ke saath bahaar jaa rahe hain'koi paresaani nahi hain naa aapko???😳

Rani: aap bejijak ho ke jayiye'.chintaa mat kijiye'''hum theek hain

While yudi came to meet rani in RB's room down stair in main hall RB was getting restless.

RB: kunvarji wallet lane gaye hain yaa bazaar se kharid ne.kitni der lagaa rahe hain'.kitni der ho gayi onhe gaye huve 'aur kah kar gaye hain abhi jaate hain aur abhi aate hain'..kyaa paresaani hain ye..kinte baj gaye'

She tried to see in her wristwatch and than she realized that, she had forgotten her watch in her room.😲😲

RB: are hum to apni ghadi room main hi bhool aaye.jaake ke le aate hain'lekin kunvarji aa gaye aur hum yaha nahi mile to'.kher khud to itni deri lagaa rahe hain hum abhi jaake leke aate hain ''.yaha koi naukar bhi nahi dikhtaa ki oos se kahe''..saare kaam chor nikkame naukar hain yaahaa par ek baar hume aane do phir kyaa badlaav aataa ahin yaahaa

Deciding that RB went to her room to get her watch and the moment she reached her room ''''.she opened the door with one push and''''.😲

PS:friends this part is not upto my mark as we all know we are little bit upset so effact i can see on m y creativity...and one more thing the openign of para essence i have take from amrita pritam's book
thanks and please do leave your valuable comments....sorry for delay
Edited by bsingapury - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena I'm sure I don't need to tell you what i think! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Beena.. as always..I loved it...beautiful...this is what i wanted to see, Yudi & Rani facing troubles together.

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