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Posted: 17 years ago
i am extremely sorry for delay but i did not want to disapoint you all so working very hard to give best one hope i full fill your hopes.,,,,,,,,,,
bhai bhabhi gare avya chhe to thodi agtaa awaagtaa maa poorto time nathi malto 😉
so here i come with new part
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Posted: 17 years ago

part :20
Nikki heard Rani scream and felt a chilling fear deep inside. She wondered what happened! Nikki dashed out running barely missing the edge of the doorframe. Passing through the corridor in a mad rush, the elegant white pillars of the majestic palace whizzing past in a great blur, she barely saw the beautiful red and blue flower vase in the corner at the end of the hallway. Her dupatta brushed against the vase but it was enough to trip the delicate vase over and it fell with a loud crash. She looked back and thought about stopping to pick it up, but she had more urgent tasks to attend to. It was very dark in the palace. Barely able to see down the corridor, she reached Yudi's room, out of breath from her sudden sprint down the hallways. Seeing the Yudi's room door open and a dim light on inside the room, she paused before deciding to go inside.

Rani had already left by the time Nikki reached Yudi's room. Nikki found Yudi deep in thought.
Nikki: "bhaiya…."

When Yudi did not answer, she came near him and tapped on his shoulder. Suddenly, the palace lights came on with a blinding flash. Yudi's eyes had got accustomed to the darkness and the sudden intensity of light jolted him to his senses.

Nikki saw Yudi holding burn ointment. She suspected his palm might have been badly burnt.

Nikki: bhaiya aap theek to hai na???? aap ka haath jal gayaa kyaa dikhaiye…
Trying to sound as if nothing had happened…
Yudi: nahi kuchh nahi…hame kuchh nahi huaaa hai…hum theek hai
Nikki: to phir ye jalne pe lagaane walaa marham.
Yudi: kuchh khaash nahi… tum chintaa mat karo… woh to hum achanak bijli ke jaane se thoda pareshaan ho gaye the


Nikki realized that her brother is disturbed about something. But she had never seen her brother so troubled before. Nikki was wondering what was bothering him. Sensing his distraction, she wanted to leave him alone. But she could not shake off that scream she heard earlier.

Nikki: Bhaiya, abhi kiske cheekhne ki awaaz aayi thi? Yudi did not respond. Nikki gave up and decided to check on her mother.


Nikki then rushed to BR's room to check on her mother. When she reached there, Rani was lost in thoughts too. Nikki thought to herself…what a strange co-incidence. Daal mein kuch kaala hain!! Bhaiya aur Rani dono kyoon khayalon mein khoye hain? In the other room Yudi was holding burn ointment and Rani was lost in her thought holding her hand.
Nikki: rani kya huaa?
Jaise kisi ne gaheri neend se jaga diya ho. Rani looks so numb and disturbed.

Nikki: tum theek to hon na? kya hua tumhaare haath ko?
Rani tried to hide her hand but nikki held her hand and saw that her hand was little burned. Her burns were covered with the burn ointment.
Nikki's mind was racing as she tried to piece the jigsaw puzzle together. Her intuition told her that something was going on between yudi and Rani. And her heart was indicating her that " ees dard kaa oos marham se jaroor koi naataa hai."


Nikki could sense that rani's eyes were all red and teary. Woh kaun si wajaah hain jo rani ke chehre par dard banke chalak raha hain?


Nikki: rani… humain lagta hai tum bahut thak gayi ho. jaake aaram karo. Hum maa ke paas baithte hai.
Rani: nahi nikkiji hum theek hai , aap jaa ke aaram kijiye.
Nikki: aap humaari baat taal nahi sakti. hum aapko aadesh de rahehe ki aap jaaiye hum yahaan hai.
Now rani had to listen her and has to go back to her room.

this song was going on in back ground

tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahi,

mujko sazaa di pyaar ki aisa kya gunaah kiya

kai loot gaye han loot gaye hum teri mahobat main

sisak sisak kai is dil se aah nikal ti rahi

mujko sazaa di pyaar ki aisa kya gunaah kiya

kai loot gaye han loot gaye hum teri mahobat main

jism muje deke mitti ka shishe sa dil kyun diya

or oos per diya fitarat kai woh karta hai mahobat

wah re wah teri kudrat, ah re wah teri kudrat kabhi hai milan kabhi rukhsat..................................."


Yudi was repenting over his curt behavior with Rani. Why had he behaved that way? Was he just taking his frustrations of his unsuccessful meeting and his father's urgency of setting the wedding date out on Rani? Did she deserve to be treated in this manner?
Yudi seldom suffers from a quick temper. What went wrong today? Yudi was torn between his feelings for Rani and his respect and duty towards his family.
Rani was just a lowly maid in his household and his father was the king of the land who was greatly respected by all. Yudi belonged to a Raj gharaana. How would his family ever accept the union of a prince with a domestic helper? Shishodia rajvansh ki ejjat mitti mein mil jayegi!!! Kya yeh sabko manzoor hoga??
Yudi has a suspiciaion that Rani was just a servant but when the suspicion was confirmed, he had a hard time dealing with the reality. His heart accepted Rani but his mind would not allow her to take the space his heart created for Rani. He knew very well that his family accepting a servant as a daughter in law was next to impossible. Did he have the courage in himself to face all odds and forge a bond with Rani but simultaneously sever his relationship with his family.
There were many questions but yudi had no answers for them. His mind kept racing around in circles…and letting either one go was not an option. Yudi knew one thing for sure. He had to come to a decision quickly but time was not on his side. He knew he loved her but did she feel the same way about him. There was only one way to find out.


With great determination he decided to speak with Rani. The important decisions about his life in the past were taken by other but ab samay aa gaya hai ki yudi apni jindagi ka faisla khud apne aap kare aur apni jindagi ki lagaam apne haaton mein rakhein.

Uski zindagi ki naav jo aabhi samundar ke beech toofan mein dole rahi hain, oos naav ko oose khud hi kinaare lana hogaa.

And for that yeh zaroori hain ki woh rani ke dil ki baat jaane.

Deciding this he went to BR's room as he knew that she must be there. When he reached there he saw Nikki sitting there. His eyes were darting across the room, expecting to find Rani around but not finding her anywhere. Nikki realized that Yudi was looking for something or someone but was disappointed on not finding what he was looking for. She suspected he was looking for Rani.

She decided to collect more proof for her suspicion.

Nikki: bhaiya aap yahaan?
Yudi : haan, woh hum maa ko dekh ne aaye the.

His eyes were telling a different story. He was not aware that Nikki was observing him very carefully.

Nikki: aap kuchh dhundh rahe hai.
Trying to hide his disappointment of not finding Rani there, Yudi said : nahi hum to sirf maa ke liye pareshaan the ki kahi oonko koi takleef to nahi hai na isliye.

Nikki was not convinced. She was determined to find out the truth and she knew exactly how to get what she was looking for. Jab ghee seedhi oongli se nahi nikli to ungli tedhi karni padti hain.

Nikki: maa theek hai. aap chinta na kare. hum hai oonke paas. aaj hum hi biathenge oonke pass.
Yudi: kyun ???? nahi hamaara mutlab hai ki woh jo unka khyal rakhti hai woh kahaa gayi?

Nikki yahi sawaal sunanaa chaahti thi. oose pataa thaa ki agar yudi rani ko dhundh rahaa hai to jaroor ye sawaal puchhega. Ab samay thaa ooske chehre pe rani ke liye chinta ko dekhna. thinking that she told him

Nikki: woh rani

Now Yudi turned his attention towards Nikki as soon as he heard Rani's name. Nikki placed great stress on Rani's name and carefully watched the expression on Yudi's face.
Yudi: haan wohi… woh kahaa gayi????
Nikki: oh woh bechari ka haath bahut jal gaya to oose bahut dard ho rahaa thaa. Isliye maine oose aaraam karne ke liye bhej diyaa.

Nikki knew that Rani's burns were not severe but she decided to add some mirch masala just to see the reaction on Yudi's face. And Yudi reacted exactly the same way as Nikki had thought.
Yudi: kyaa???????(His voice full of concern that only someone who cares deeply can feel) kya huva unhe or kaise jal gayaa mera matlab hai oonhone kuchh lagayaa apne haatho main.

Though he was trying to be innocent he could not hide his restlessness. He was getting desperate to see rani and her burns himself. In the dim candle-light he had not realized how severe Rani's burns were.

Nikki's suspicions were slowly being confirmed albeit in small but positive reinforcements.

Nikki: woh to apne kamre mein chali gayi hai. Aap chinta na kare woh theek hi hogi. Aap bhi jaake aaram kare.
Yudi: aap theek kah rahi hai hum chalte hain. aap apna aur maa ka dhyan rakhiye aur kuchh jaroor pade to hume turant italah kar dijiye.

Yudi had to meet Rani immediately. He knew it was risky but kya option tha? As he turned towards the door to leave BR's room, he was startled to see……

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part..nikki ko pata chal gaya..yudi ko rani se pyar bhi hai or parivar ka kartvaya bhi nibhana hai..kya vo rani ko milne ke liye jayega..

enjoy with bhai..don't miss chance..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice part Beena. Ab Nikki ko patha chal gaya. Hope she along with Saksh helps Yura to unite.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi payal yes i don't want miss spending time with my bro and his family as it is lots of fun 😳 and bechaara yudi jaaye to jaaye kahaan aye dil ab to bataa 😭 😭 ek taraf hai janam daata aur dusri aur jispe dil hai aata 😳

hi goody how are you and where were you i haven't seen you since very long.was missing your comments 😳 ya now nikki will start her jasoosi further and may be help our dear yura 😳 😳 as many evil around we need few angles too 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks for asking Beena. I had tests, so was busy. Now at a stretch i read all the parts i had not read. Must say Beena, RKAB creatives must take some tips from you. There they not getting any idea make Yura meet.
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Posted: 17 years ago
i was wondering the same that you must be having exams and thanks for liking and reading all the parts.
hope they steal some of my ideas 😆 😆 😆
i think they have to run drama for many years that's why they always drag but atleast in dream sequence they should show some yura scene to satisfy our appetite to see our dear couple together.
and they need more villian than good people that's what i don't like.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
beena i agree with Goody..creative should take time idea from your FF..we just watching CR crap..ab aage yudi kya karega..
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Posted: 17 years ago

payal baat to sahi hai CR is really giving us headache and yudi darling to taraazoo ki tarahaa kabhi idhar to kabhi oodhar dol rahe hai.
one thing i also don't understand why chacha and chachi and munna still in palace...........and why not give yudi some hint about rani as right now he has no idea about her....

before only CR was there to give yudi and BR trouble than RB came and now this rudra so this trio will make our sweety's life miserable i don't want all this i want some love angle in yura's life too

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
creative just dragging story..they should only focus yudi and rani..we need more character to run story but they show us too much..

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