FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 14

i will update it by tomorrow as have to pen down as it is going to be very important one so i want it perfact 😳 so need time sorry for delay

Part:23
Saksham knocked on yudi's room's door but he did not get any reply. He knocked few more time but no use. With fear he pushed door , yudi was lost in deep thought. From yudi's look it was visible that he is trying to over come his problems that has taken control over his life. But he looked very confident and determined. The determination look was jaise suraj ki abhaa banke ooske chahere pe chamak rahaa thaa.

Sakhsum's arrival disturbed yudi's thought.

Saksh: kya soch rahe hain kunvarji?

Jaise kisi ne vichaaro ki avirat dhaara ko achaanak mod diya ho.

Yudi: are aap ?? kab aaye hume to pataa bhi nahi chalaa?
Saksh: kaise pataa chaltaa. Aap itni soch mai jo dube huve the.
Yudi: han sakshum hum ne aaj kuchh faisle liye hai apni zindagi ke bare mai. Aur hum ne tai kiya hai ki ees bhool bhulaiya mai bhatki huyi hamaari zindagi ko hum aapni marzi se , hamaari man chaahi manzil per hum leke jayenge . nahi kisi aur ke faisle hamaari zindagi pe havi hone denge.

It was news for saksh. Yudi who was in dilemma since yesterday suddenly appeared to be very confident to him. He was unaware about the meeting that took place last night between yudi and rani. He was trying to understand what has happen in one night that have cleared all the confusion yudi was suffering from past few days.

Saksh: hum samaj nahi paa rahe hai aap kya baat kar rahe hai. Aap ne kis baat ka faisla liya hai. Aur kya huva hai aapko . hum kyun lagataa hai ki kal koi bahut badi baat ho gayi hain aur hume maloom nahi hain.

Yudi : hum kal raat ko oonse milethe.

Saksh could understand that yudi was talking about rani but he wanted yudi to tell his feelings very clearly . saksh pretended that he did not understand anything. 😳

Saksh: oonse matlab kis se RB se ? 😃
Yudi: saksh hume maloom hai ki aap jaante hain hum kis ke bare mai baat kar rahe hain 😳
Saksh: nahi kunvarji humari kuchh samaj main nahi aa raha hai, aap khulke bataye.
Yudi: kal hum rani se mile the. 😳

Saksh could feel the happiness in yudi's voice and he can see the sparkle in yudi's eyes when yudi took rani's name.

Saksh: sach ??hamaara matlab hai kab, kahaa, kaise????
Yudi: are are jara dhire ek saath itne saare sawaal?? Thaheriye hum aap ko sab kuchh batate hai….

Yudi narrate whole incidence that took place yesterday. How he met rani. Rani 's burn and how he got angry on her… all


Rajaji went out to meet panditji.
Rajaji: ayie panditji. Bethiye.
Panditji: pranam Rajaji. Aapne hume yaad kiya . kahiye hum aapki kya seva kar shakte hain.
Rajaji: panditji seva nahi hume aapki salaah ki jaroorat hai.
Panditji: han kahiye hum aapke liye kya kar shakte hai. Hume badi khushi hogi agar hum aapke kuchh kaam aashake

Rajaji told panditji about his decision to take yudi and RB's marriage as soon as possible. He requested panditji to find auspicious muharat . Rajaji asked him to take rest in guest room till RB 's parents come .


In yudi's room:
Saksh: aap kunvarji rani per gussa ho gaye? Humaara matlab ye kya kiya aapne? 😭
Yudi: hum jaante hai saksh kal raat jo tufaan aaya woh hamaari zindagi mai bhi kuchh badlav layaa hai. Hume khed hai ki hum rani per gussa ho gaye. Aur isliye hume oonse milke oonse maafi mangani hai aur sari baat spast(clear) karani hain. Aur hume unka jala huva haath dekh ke tasalli bhi karni hai ki woh jyada to nahi jalaa. Lekin……….. 😭

Saksh: lekin kya?

Saksh was happy for yudi . first time saksh has seen yudi living his life according to his own wish.

Yudi: hum unhe kaise mil shakte hai? Yaha mahel main oonse milna khatre se khali nahi hai. Aur ab to RB aur unke mata pita kisi bhi samay aa shakte hai. Aur hum chahate hai ki kisi bhi prakar ye shaadi ka muharat kuchh mahine tal jaye.

Saksh: baat to aap ki sahi hai kuchh na kuchh rasta jaroor nikaalna hoga. Kya sochaa hai aapne ne? kya karna chah rahe hai….?
Yudi: humari kuchh samaj nahi aa rahaa hai isliye hume aapki madad chaahiye.
Saksh: raniji se milna vo bhi kisi ko pata na chale is tarah….mushkil hai lekin na mumkin nahi…ek raashta hai…
Yudi was desperate to know.jaise baadalo ki gad gadahat more(peacock) ki vyakulta badhati hai …..same way yudi was impatience to hear what saksh had to say …

Yudi: kya rashta hai ??
Saksh: woh humesha BR ke kamare mai hoti hai shayad wahi hume mil jaye ….
Yudi: han baat to sahi hai aapki. Ye to hume khyal hi nahi aaya chaliye fir..
Saksh with teasing smile: are itni kya jaldi hai . lekin woh waha nahi huyi to ?


Yudi did not like this negative thought. Rani's absence was one probability but they had to take chance.
Yudi: baat to aapki sahi hai lekin koshish karne mai kya harz hai….
They went to BR,s room. Yudi was in dilemma …..woh himmat nahi kar paa rahaa thaa darwaza kholneki…..rani ko waha na pane ki soch ooske badhte kadam rok rahi thi….

Saksh was aware of yudi's anxiety so he opened door for him.
Aur darwaje ke khulte hi jaise yudi ki sari tammanaye nirasha ban kar diwaro se takra kar fir laut ayi ho ….ha rani nahi thi waha…. 😭
Yudi could not gather courage to enter but he had to meet his mom and empty his heart in front of her. He took blessing from his mom.

Yudi: ma hume aaj aapke ashirwad ki bahut jaroorat hai….
BR could sense his son's restlessness. Yudi ka chahera ek khuli kitab ki taraha ooske dil ka haal bayaan kar raha ho. Aur BR jo apne bachho ko bhali bhti janti thi woh samaj shakti thi ki aaj ooska baccha ma se kuchh maangne aaya hai.

Yudi: maa humne humari zindagi ke liye kuchh faisle kiye hai. Aur hume yakin hai ki aap humara sath dengi…
It was visible that BR wanted to know what was there that was bothering yudi.
Yudi: hum abhi kuchh jyadaa nahi bata shakte lekin samay aane par hum aapko jaroor sab bataa denge …. Bas hume aashirwaad dijiye ki jo humne nirnay liya hai wo hum poora kar shake……

BR assured that she is with him. While going out saksh took permission from yudi to go ahead as he had to handover something to nikki….

In panditji's room one shadow sneak in the room, taking care that nobody could see him…..

Panditji: aap
Shadow: ha hume aap se jaroori baat karni hai…
Panditji: kiske bare mai?
That shadow hand over lots of money to panditji and ask him to follow his instruction. He asked panditji to do whatever he has been asked to do. Panditji was not willing to follow the instruction. Than shadow told him something that left panditji in thought….

Yudi was getting ready to attend RB and her family, he knew that they will be here any time. He had decided to give chance to his feeling for rani but the same time he had to take care of his relation with bhoomi. If before the time, someone will get any clue regarding his feeling for rani than it can create problems. He has to control his feeling and anxiety till he meets rani and know about her feeling. His thought disturbed by the knock on door.

Yudi: aajaiye
RB was on door and yudi was surprised to see her there. It was beyond his imagination that she will come to meet him.

Yudi: aap?? 😕
RB: ha hum kyu hume dekh ke aap ko khooshi nahi huyi?
Yudi: nahi ye baat nahi hai . woh aap achaanak yaha ….hamara matlab humne khwab mai bhi nahi sochaathaa ki………

RB: hum aapse aise milne chale aayenge? Right?
Yudi: han woh hum abhi niche hi aa rahe the..
RB: hum pitaji aur choti ma se permission lekar aapko bulane ke liye aaye hai ki sab aapki raah dekh rahe hai…..
Yudi : to chaliye…
RB :itni jaldi bhi kya hai….
Yudi : matlab? …………..RB's alluring behavior was making yudi uncomfortable. 😕 He can sense that she is trying to come near to him and he was least interested to do so….. 🤢
RB: kya matlab ??? aap to hamesha hum se door bhag ne ke bahaane dhundhte rahte hai. Aisi bhi kya berookhi apni hone wali patni se…… 😕

Yudi did not like RB's mansion about future wife. yudi's heart has given that place to rani. His heart was not ready to keep any kind of relation with RB. He has no other option but to bear all this and if possible keep distance from RB, as much as possible.

RB tried to go near yudi. He tried to stop her.
Yudi: nahi aysi koi baat nahi hai woh to sab humari raah dekh rahe hai isliye hume lagataa hai hume chalna chaahiye….

RB was not in mood to listen yudi. She hold his hand tried to pull him near her….yudi tried to push her gently but RB crossed her arms around his neck and rested her face on his broad chest……yudi's heart was beating hard . he put his hands on her shoulder to push her away.

Yudi: aap ye kya kar rahi hai….ye sab

But before he could finished his sentence, someone opened the door and he was perturbed to see the person………………….he had least expected that person to be there . at least at this time ………………….


aye mohhobaat aaj tere anjam pe rona aaya
jaane kyun aaj tere naam pe ronaa aayaa
yun to ha shaam ummidon main gujarati jaati thee
aaj kuchh baat hain jo shaam pe ronaa aaya
jab huva zikra zamaane mai muhabbat ka "SHAKIL"
mujko apne dil-e naakaam pe rona aaya

PS this shayari was written by shakil

Beena finally yudi told shaksham..about wht he to rani..door pe rani aayi hai na..
waiting for next part..

who else can be?
yes yudi is now more clear about his feelign and that is good news

Hey Beena ..both parts are awesome yaar 👏

hey Bhoomi toh bahut hi gandi hai 🤢..kesse yudi ko chipak rahi hai 😕...and kaun aaya hai darwaje par ..rani??...nahi beena ..please ..pyar shuru hone se pehle hi na problem ho jaaye 😭...and parchayi kaun thi ..jisne pandit ji ko Money di ??...kahi yee sab shakham ne toh nahi kiya shadi ka mahurat deer se karne ke liye ??....

and last meh jo sher likha hai ..Waha beena waha 👏..lagta hai tumhe shayari bahu pasnad hai 😳

Beena tumne bahut suspence par aa kar rok diya yaar ..i can't wait ...jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii karoooooooooooooo😳

Manpreet

Part - 15 : O man, so it was a dream!! I knew it, itni jaldi kahaan raaz khulega!!! 😆 😆 Lekin phir bhi, I was hoping.......😃
Yudi's disappointment at finding that it was only a dream was very well written Beena 👏 👏

Part - 16 : Awesome part, Beena!!! I love what you are doing to the story 👏 👏 👏 You are letting Yudi know about her little by little, that is too good! And I was laughing at what Saksham was saying that her name HAD to be Rani!!! 😆 😆
And that poem is too beautiful!! 😳

Part - 17 : Oh God Beena......this part was just toooo good! Very beautiful and it really touched my heart!!!! 😭 😭
You wrote the emotions so wonderfully!!! Yudi understanding the blank paper and also observing the tears was really touching!! Great job Beena 👏 👏 👏
And what you said about waiting being the most difficult thing in the world sepcially when you want something, is very very true!!!! 😊

Part-18 (part 1) : Firstly, the last line was too cute 🤣 🤣 🤣 No, it was not the phone's fault, it is our fault that we cannot control our anger!!!
I wonder why you did not Yudi's meeting be successful, seems like you have something in your mind! And this si a good twist, now Yudi will have to search for Rani, harder! And Jagjit Singh ji is my favorite too!!! 😳


Part-18 (part 2) : Oh that was too good Beena!!!! The similis you have used in this part are just mindblowing!!! 👏 👏 👏 The way you were describing the stormy atmostphere outside with the emotions in their hearts was fantastic!!! 👏 👏 👏 And wow........the last part was too good, can't wait to read the next part!!!

Part-19 : Oh man, yeh Yudi bhi na!!! 😡 But I can understand his anger......actually it is not anger, it is his frustration!! But Beena, full points to you for making them meet in such a beautiful manner!!! 👏 👏 Bahut mazaa aaya!!! And the way he was holding her hand throughout was very romantic!! 😳

I love that ghunghroo ke tarah song.........its one of my all time favorites!!! 😊

OK Beena.............I spent am hour and a half already catching up, I will have to come back and read the rest! 😃

mannu ye bhoomi to sach main badi gandi hai kya jaroor thi oose yudi ko chipakne ki....lekin kya kare yaar woh hai hi itna hot no body can control 😉

aur darwaaze par to shaayad lagaata hai rani hi honi chaahiye ....aur ye mithi takraar pyar badhaati hain 😉
and about that shadow that is very deep secret will open near to end 😉
and yes aapne theek kahaa muje shaayari ka bahoot shokh hai bachpaan se ...i used to collect....after coming singapore i lost touch but i must thankful to all of you it revise my hobby 😳

and next part coming it is on way 😊

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Part - 15 : O man, so it was a dream!! I knew it, itni jaldi kahaan raaz khulega!!! 😆 😆 Lekin phir bhi, I was hoping.......😃
Yudi's disappointment at finding that it was only a dream was very well written Beena 👏 👏

haa yaar itni jaldi mienge to mazaa nahi ayga thoda tadap na thoda tadpaanaa yehi to pyaar hai😆

Part - 16 : Awesome part, Beena!!! I love what you are doing to the story 👏 👏 👏 You are letting Yudi know about her little by little, that is too good! And I was laughing at what Saksham was saying that her name HAD to be Rani!!! 😆 😆
And that poem is too beautiful!! 😳

thanks yar this saksham sometimes very funny keeps pulling our yudi's leg😆

Part - 17 : Oh God Beena......this part was just toooo good! Very beautiful and it really touched my heart!!!! 😭 😭
You wrote the emotions so wonderfully!!! Yudi understanding the blank paper and also observing the tears was really touching!! Great job Beena 👏 👏 👏
And what you said about waiting being the most difficult thing in the world sepcially when you want something, is very very true!!!! 😊

i love writing about hurt ,sad and unhappy emotion let me see if i can portrait romance well or not as it is also one kind of emotion😳

and it is true life is like blank paper and than our life's story had been written on it.....step by step

Part-18 (part 1) : Firstly, the last line was too cute 🤣 🤣 🤣 No, it was not the phone's fault, it is our fault that we cannot control our anger!!!
I wonder why you did not Yudi's meeting be successful, seems like you have something in your mind! And this si a good twist, now Yudi will have to search for Rani, harder! And Jagjit Singh ji is my favorite too!!! 😳

ye baat sahi kahi tumne bechari aas paas ki nirjiv cheeze hum oonpe gussa hote rahete hai...and you are right i have one nice scenerio for their lovely meeting that's why i did not let them meet😆

and i love jagjitsingji's gazaal they are awesome

Part-18 (part 2) : Oh that was too good Beena!!!! The similis you have used in this part are just mindblowing!!! 👏 👏 👏 The way you were describing the stormy atmostphere outside with the emotions in their hearts was fantastic!!! 👏 👏 👏 And wow........the last part was too good, can't wait to read the next part!!!

Part-19 : Oh man, yeh Yudi bhi na!!! 😡 But I can understand his anger......actually it is not anger, it is his frustration!! But Beena, full points to you for making them meet in such a beautiful manner!!! 👏 👏 Bahut mazaa aaya!!! And the way he was holding her hand throughout was very romantic!! 😳

he was showing his caring and loving feeling by his action but by word he hurt her....but the fact is action speaks louder than words...right

I love that ghunghroo ke tarah song.........its one of my all time favorites!!! 😊

OK Beena.............I spent am hour and a half already catching up, I will have to come back and read the rest! 😃

thanks dear for your precious time i really appriciat that.....and i am happy that you all liked it.... as this is my first time that i am writing something like this after exam papers 😆

aur last exam ko diye huve 12 saal ho gaye

Part - 20 : Ahhh that was very good Beena!!!! I think your husband must have helped you in this part too, because I see different words being used here! 😊
The flow of the story is just beautiful....and Yudi's emotions and struggles were portrayed so well!!! I felt very very bad for him!
So true..........how can he expect his family to accept Rani, a naukrani?? Its a very tough decision for him!
And its fantastic that nikky is so tuned to her brother that she can understand his sentiments and emotions!! Loved her character here!!! 👏 👏 👏

Part - 21 : The last statement of this part is leaving me with a lot of hope!!! 😳
I am very happy Yudi got the contract and that part was written very well by you!!! 👏 And Beena...I wish you made the 'nazdeek' muhurat, after 3-4 months!!! 😆 😆
And the shayari is just awesome and the moon-gazing they were doing, was so imaginable!!! Very well written!

Part - 22 : You described Rudr very well! It creates an instant dislike for him 😆 😆 😆 Such an irresponsible guy!!! But I wonder what you will do with him in the future.......
CR is horrible and I am really worried about what might happen to BR
But I know she is not helpless.......I hope that probably Rani will save her!!! 😃

Part - 23 : Oh man!!! Misunderstanding even before coming close to each other!!!! Yaar.............aisa mat kar!!!
Pehle donon mei baat toh ho jaaye! But good twist in the story! And I think it is Saksham that has bribed Panditji!
And it was good to see the mother-son rapport and hopefully things will work out for Yudi! Poor guy!!!

Oh and Beena, is Rani still wearing those pigtails??? 😆 😆