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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

....... Here, in Beena's FF, I get a chance to experience all these emotions, to laugh, to cry, to feel. When I read this FF, I am completely lost, engrossed, involved...when I come to the end I actually feel a jolt as reality hits me. It's the mark of a truly good writer and story, there are very few things that I have been drawn into like this.

Agreed 100%. Thats why i dont get satisfied in only ine reading. i read it over and over again, like i want to absorb the essence in me.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bsingapury

still commenting on all comments but thanks to all as per sadia's wish here is the preview........

aaj aasmaan main uday huva hain ek naya suraj
jiski laali ne kiyaa hain kitne dilo ko prakaasit
kahi aur chali hain khushiyo ki tarnag
kahi oothi hain ulajano ki ghatmaar
koi nayi zindagi ki lahro pe hain savar
to koi apni kiye huve karmo se hain paresaan
koi hain jisne rudra ko vyathit kiya hain
to ye kaun aya hain jisne niSha ke rishte ko ek naya mod dikhaya hain

sooooooooooooooooo much beena di
loved the preveiw



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Posted: 16 years ago
@jen: i know i bet but it's ok let them enjoy i am happy........😳😳 and poetry hmmmm so you are liking them .........
@sweet_shona: that's really sweet of you......and as i said you will ge tmany chance to relax and enjoy this FF😉

Originally posted by: jibi

i too missed you. Love you. 🤗
And the poem,
all credit goes to you, you only inspired me to write this, because i have wriiten these sentiments only after reading parts 68 & 69. It was simply i felt after reading these parts. Now you can understand how impressive and lovely you write, and we really feel it from heart. Love you. 🤗
oh mine mine ..........i am really over the moon thanks kirti........you know what last three weeks i have not even written sngle poem or anything but i have always felt that the moment you write soemthing the inspire me to write ahead............so for me you are inspiration so we are working parellel😳😳 for eachother hand in hand i think
[quote=bsingapury]
kissa jud jaataa hain kahani ban jaati hain
kisi na kisi mod par rah mil jaati hain raastaa ban jaataa hain
chalte chalte kahi naa kahi manzil mil hi jaati hain.......
tera saath na sahi lekin tera kyaal hi sahi
teri muskaan na sahi tere anshu hi sahi( here it means give your pain to me)
teri aankho se chhalkataa pyaar na sahi teri tanhaayi hi sahi
agar mil jaaye to aabad ho jaaye duinya meri...........[/quote]
Wow Beena, now i recollect gulzaar....
Ik raah to vo hogi, tujh tak jo pahunchti ho

kis mod se jaati hain............lovely song😳
and thank you for dedicating this wonderful poem to me........i hope i can write more that will inspire you to write such a beautiful poem ...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yipiee previw's upGr8 preview!!! hmmmmmm 😍 ab kya kahun???
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Posted: 16 years ago

Interesting preview.

Been a while since we heard about Rudr in your FF so looking forward to reading more about his pareshanis.
But as usual, bring on your NiSha track!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Ticket to leli thi lekin dusri jagaha pe beth gayi thi.

Nice part..when shaksham see bangle, he go thru many emotion..Beena i don't have a word to write down.
when i read that time also i kind of emotional. today also after i read again i feel too..
In short when Shaksham tell yudi about Nikki's study that part was best..
Atleast after hearing Nikki might happy..
i want to write many thing but i can't write..
waiting for next part..

thanks payal i wanted you to write more.........but i can understand that you are feeling emotional .and i also want that nikki feel happy when she hear about her study lets see
i am working on next part and almost ready only last scene i have to attend and will try to post by friday if time permitts
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Posted: 16 years ago
PS: hi friends happy holi to all of you..actually i wanted to post this part very long but still working on last scene and have some double thoughts but next week i will not able to post so decided whatever is ready i whould i post now.if i might manage to finish next scene than i will post that part also ......till enjoy this part that is not very fancy but leading story to it's next level.......thanks and ya don't forget to comment😳
Part: 70

Nikki was surprised that who could be at this time on the door, though she composed herself and ask them to come in. she was surprised seeing yudi entering her room followed by saksh. She was wondering that what could have happened that yudi had to come to meet her in her room suddenly. But before she could think more yudi was shocked seeing nikki's swollen and red eyes.

Yudi was concerned : nikki…..kyaa huvaa aap ro rahi thee……….

Saksh's heart ached seeing that.

Nikki stuttered: nahi bhaiya ……who kal raat hum soye nahi eesi wajah se humaari aankhe laal ho gayi hain…….aap chinta mat kijiye aap bataayiye kaise aana huva

All the while she was purposely trying to avoid looking at saksh and saksh was desperately waiting that nikki at least look at him from corner of her eyes.

Yudi: humaare paas aap ke liye prastaav hain.

Nikki: prastaav????? Kaisa prastaav bhaiya?

Yudi: dekhiye hume abhi abhi maloom pada hain ki rani ki exams ek mahine main hain aur aap ko hume rani ki padhaayi main madad karni padegi to……kyhun naa aapki bhi padhaayi shuru karvaa di jaay saath main?????

Nikki looked at yudi in bewilderment she could not trust her ears.: kyaa? 😲

Yudi: haa kyun naa aap bhi rani ke saath saath apni padhaayi kare aapkaa bhi dil lagaa rahegaa aur rani ko bhi company mil jaayegi……..aap kaa kyaa vichaar hain ees baaare main?

Nikki's eyes sparked with delight but the moment she remember her situation and his dead's stand for values and custom of the family her face dropped with disappointment.

Nikki: bhaiya humaare vichar se kyaa hota hain …….pitaji kabhi raji nahi honge ees baat se

Yudi: lekin kisi ko kuchh bataa ne ki kyaa jaroorat hain jaise rani ki baat sab se chhipaayi jaa rahi hain oosi prakaar ye baat bhi sab se chhipi rahegi aap chaahe to maa ko bataa sakte hain who kitnaa khoosh hogi ………sochiye aap……kyaa aap padhaayi karnaa chahti hain??????/

Nikki was overwhelmed by emotions she felt words chocking in her throat she could not control herself and she hug to yudi.

Tear rushed to yudi's eyes also seeing nikki's happiness and saksh also silently wiped the tear that was about to drop his eyes……..

Nikki: bhaiya……..bhaiya…..aap kaa shukriyaa hum kaise kare……

Yudi: nikki aapki khushi main hi humaare khushi hain ……….aur shukriyaa adaa karnaa hi hain to aap saksh kaa kijiye kyunki ye vichar oonke dimaag ki pedaish hain….ye prastaav oonho ne sujaayaa hain…

Nikki straiten herself and looked at saksh with appreciation, her eyes were revealing her emotions.

Nikki: shukriya sakshji aap kaa……

Saksh: ek shart par hum aapkaa shukriyaa svikaar karenge …….agar aap ek achhi si muskaan de de to…..ab eetni khushi ki baat kunvarji ne kahi hain aur apnaa sahyog diyaa hain aur aap roye ye achha nahi lagtaa..kyaa kahete hain kunvarji….

Yudi: baat to sahi kahi saksh ne.chaliye ab ek achhi si muskaan de dijiye hume…….aur lag jayiye kaam par………hum aapko humeshaa khush dekhnaa chahte hain

Nikki : bhaiya aap nahi jaante aap ne humaare jivan ko aaj ek nayi rah di hain. Aur jine ki ek wajaah di hain bhaiya…….

Yudi: nikki hum sharmindaa hain ki aaj tak hum aapke liye kuchh nahi kar paaye aur hum shukra gujaar hain saksh ke jinho ne hume ye raashta dikhayaa aur sahi maayne main ees kaa saraa shrey saksh ko hi jaataa hain…….

Before yudi say something more his mobile rang…..he excused himself for a while and talked with that person and after disconnecting phone he get back to nikki.

Yudi: hume abhi office jaana hoga kuchh client humaari rah dekh rahe hain…….saksh hum ees bare main aur deri nahi karnaa chahte aap abhi nikki se saare jaroori kargjaat le kar college jaayiye aur oonka admission jald se jald karvaa lijiye…hum phir baad main aapko milte hain….( and looking at nikki) …..ab hum chalte hain ho sake to rani se mil kar oon kaa haal chaal hume bataa dijiyegaa aur oone kahiye gaa hum oon se mauka milte hi milne aayenge…..

Yudi left the room leaving NiSha alone. Saksh was overjoyed and contented seeing smile on nikki's innocent face.

Saksh asked nikki to hand over him her school certificates and other important document that he might need for admission. Nikki opened her drawer and took out those papers she was overwhelmed by emotions because many times in past whenever she had touched these papers she had always felt that these are useless papers and she might not use them in future but today those papers had become door to open her destiny and future that was written with golden sign. She gently caress them, all the while saksh was ardently looking at her back and was experiencing her emotions within himself.

Nikki hand over those papers to saksh and nikki's happiness was spread on her face seeing that saksh thought……….

Jaise dharti har kasht saheti hain kabhi oof tak nahi karti……….chaahe garmi ho barf ho bahaad aaye yaa koi bhi tufaan aaye……..saare dukh sah kar bhi dharti wapas sambhal jaati hain aur sab ko nayaa jan jivaan dene main jood jaati hain………..sab kaa khayaal rakhti hain aur khushi deti hain….lekin apne dard ko chhipaati hain….phir bhi jab garmi se trast ho jaati hain dharti to barsaat ki ek boond bhi kaafi hoti hain oose mahekaa ne ke liye………..aaj nikki ke chahere ki khushi bhi kuchh yahi nazaaraa bayaan kar rahi thee…….kaise maayush thee nikki aur ek khush khabari ne jaise mahekaa diyaa thaa oose nav jivan baksh diya thaa……….

When nikki could not take saksh's penetrating glances she called his name that broke saksh's trance and pulled him out from his thoughts, his happiness was also clearly visible on his face.

Nikki: ye lijiye..sakshji…….

Saksh: ji………ab aap ki computer ki padhaayi aur ye padhaayi jald se jalad shuru karni padegi……….abhi aaraam kijiye hum chalte hain aur jo bhi jaroori karyvaahi hain who sampurn karnte hain…..aur aap aaraam kijiye…….aap sach main bahut thaki huyi lag rahi hain

Saksh started to walk towards door and nikki rooted there looking at his back, contented and gratified. Saksh stopped in his way turned to nikki and looking deep into her eyes.

Saksh: nikkiji …….humaaraa aap se ek anurodh hain…….

Nikki: ji kahiye

Saksh: bas eesi tarah muskurati rahiye………aap…..( he wanted to tell her that jab aap muskurati hain to bilkul aisi lagti hain jaise chaman main koi tazaa khilaa phool naa ho……….but he did not want her to feel embarrassed so after saying those words he left the room)

And when he left room nikki could not refuse saksh's request and she smiled to herself, she could feel everything was changing inside and outside her. she was beaming with happiness and outside weather was changing too, hot sun was hiding behind white clouds and cool breeze was blowing soothing nikki's mind and body. Nikki lied to her bed and thinking about her bright future. ……….aur apne sunhare bhavishya ki kalpnaa karte karte kab ooski aankhe lag gayi oose pataa bhi nahi chala…

Saksh was walking towards main hall and he saw Rudra approaching from opposite direction lost in his thoughts. Saksh did not want to face him because he was carrying all documents so he changed his way and took another route to reach car park.

Rudra was passing by bhavi's room when he heard giggling sound. His curiosity increased when few words fell on his ears, he went near door and tried to figure out what bhavi was talking and with whom she was talking. From few sentences he heard he understood that bhavi was talking with some guy and she was talking about going to pub that night. Understanding, that situation he could not stop himself and he opened the door with one push and enter bhavi's room.

Bhavi was shocked seeing Rudra there, she informed her friend that she will talk to him later

Bhavi with frustration and anger: bhaiya ye kyaa hain aap ees tarah humaare kamare main…………..

Rudra snapped : aap kis se baat kar rahi thee abhi?

Bhavi: bhaiya kyaa baat hain aap…….

Rudra: hum ne aapse kuchh puchhaa hain bhavi …….aap kis se phone par baate kar rahi thee

Bhavi: bhaiya…..aap hum se ees tarah baat nahi kar sakte…….aur rahi baat hum kis se baat har rahe the to who bum apni saheli se baat kar rahe the….

Rudra: saheli se yaa koi ladke se??????

Bhavi shook her head with frustration but try to calm herself : bhaiya ye kyaa ho gayaa hain aapko????? Oos din bhi humne aap se kaha thaa……accident ke baat aap ajib saa vyavhaar kar rahe hain……aur

Rudra cut her short and very sternly: aur humne bhi aapko kaha thaa ki aap apne dosto ke saath pub main nahi jaayengi……phirbhi

Bhavi with disappointment: bhaiya…….common aap bhi shuru mat ho jaayiye gaa please……..i did not expect this at least from you…….humne sochaa thaa aap to humraaraa saath denge ……aap samjenge ki ees mahal ki chaar divaaro ke bahaar ek bahut hi khubsurat aur rangin duniyaa hain …….jaha koi bandish nahi hain…bas aazaadi hain……….kyunki aap kaa bhi yahi maan naa hain;…….lekin aap bhi yudi bhaiya aur pitaji ki bhaashaa bol ne lage……..please bhaiya don't do that……

Rudra: bhavi……tum abhi naadaan ho bahaar ki rangin duniyaa kitni maayaavi aur phisalan waali hain ooska tumhe andaazaa nahi hain…..aur rahi baat humaari hum ladke hain……..

Bhavi: .achha to aap ladke hain eesi liye aap kuchh bhi kar sakte hain aur hume bandisho main rahenaa padegaa ye hume manjoor nahi hain…….aur hum apnaa dhyaan rakh sakte hain…..bure bhale ki pahechaan hain hume……….aur humaare saare dost bahut hi achhe hain……..

Rudra: samaj ne ki koshish karo bhavi……sab jaise dikhvaa karte hain dar asal aise hote nahi……bahot saare log ander se kuchh aur …..bahaar se kuchh aur hote hain aur phir masoom ladkiyo kaa faayadaa oothaate hain…….

Bhavi with very sharp tone: achhaa……….aap to aise bol rahe hain jaise …….aapne aisa hi kiyaa hoga kisi ladki ke saath

Rudra's face suffused with anger and he shouted: bhavi…….( jaise kisi ne dukhati rag par haath rakh diyaa ho……anjaane main hi sahi bhavi ne sahi baat ki thee….rudra ne jo dusri ladkiyo ke saath kiyaa thaa ab oose dar lag rahaa thaa koi ooski bahen ke saath na kare……..aur wahi dar oose lagaataar daraa rahaa thaa……kyunki who bhavi ke samay ke saath badlte roop ko dekh rahaa thaa………aur ye rup kitne khatarnaa maud par le jaa saktaa hain oose andaazaa thaa ees baat kaa…….)

Bhavi: chilaayiye mat….bhaiyaa hum aap kaa aadar karte hain aur …..sab se jyaadaa pyaar bhi hum aap se hi karte hain…..lekin hum kuchh dino se dekh rahe hain aap ko pataa nahi kyaa ho gayaa hain…..please bhaiya aap humaare personal matter se door hi rahiye……..this is my request to you……..

Rudra: personal matter bhavi…….aur rahi baat pub main jaane ki to mom app ko kabhi permission nahi dengi…….

Bhavi: bhaiya aap hume challenge kar rahe hain ………aur mom se kaise permission leni hain who hume aataa hain…….

Rudra: hum dekhte hain mom aap ko kaise permission deti hain………

Bhavi: aur hum dekhte hain…….kaun hume permission lene se rokta hain……..

Before their argument reach on nasty mode CR enter bhavi's room….

CR: kyaa baat hain kyaa ho raha hain bhai aur bahen ke bich……….

Before Rudra could reply bhavi took chance and started to play her cards the way she wanted.

Bhavi: kuchh nahi mom……bas hum to humaare pyaare bhaiya ko apni college ki kahaaniyaa sunaa rahe the…..kyun bhaiya?

Bhavi put her hands on rudra's shoulder showing her affection for him but while facing him she smirked……….rudra was amused by bhavi's behaviour.

Rudra: nahi mom who…..

Bhavi cut his sentence and snapped: are bhaiya hum bataa te hain na mom ko……..mom who hum bhaiya ka shukriya adaa kar rahe the ki oonho ne humaraa eetni achhi college me daakhila karwayaa……

CR: ji bhavi aapke bhaiya ne bahut mahenat ki hain aapke admission ke liye……..aur ees baat ke liye oon he daad deni chaahiye ki jab bhi aap ki baat aati hain who koi bhi samjota nahi karate…..ji jaan lagaa dete hain

Bhavi looked at fuming Rudra : haa mom hum jaante hain humaare bhaiya hume kitnaa chaahte hain aur hum bhi oon he eetnaa hi chaahte hain ….eesi liye hum oonhe kah rahe the ki ab who humaare chintaa kam kare aur apne bare main bhi sochnaa shooru kare……

She indirectly told Rudra to mind his own business. Rudra gave bhavi cold stares..

Rudra: lekin mom baat ye hi ki……..woh …

Bhavi: bhaiya hume bataa ne dijiye naa………..mom ………bhaiya kahete hain ki humaare saare dost hain naa bade boring hain…… bhaiya kah rahe hain ki hume apne dosto ke saath pubs main bar main……( bhavi paused for a while and looked at his brother and winked)

Confusion was written all over rudra's face because the shade of bhavi's nature he was witnessing right now was completely new for him and he could not imagine that his innocent little sister could manipulate things according to her choice.

Bhavi continued: jaanaa chaahiye…..ye humaare mauj masti kar ne ki umar hain….

CR upon hearing this raised her eyebrows and looked at Rudra with disappointment.

Bhavi: lekin mom humaare sab dost aur hum aisa nahi maante…( she made very innocent face )…..hum samajte hain humaare sanskaar aur maan maryaadaa aisaa sab karne main nahi hain. Humaare culture ko jivit rakh ne ki jimmedaari hum young generation ki hain;;;;;;;aur dekhiye naa……aaj humaare ek saheli ke yaha mata kaa jagraataa hain aur hum jaanaa chahte hain to bhaiya hume tok rahe hain………..

Bhavi made sad face…turned towards Rudra who was visibly shocked ……and then turned towards CR and looked at CR in anticipation….

CR: kyun Rudra aap oon he mana kar rahe hain……

Rudra: lekin mom hum ne aisa…..

Bhavi again snapped in between she was purposely not letting Rudra speak a single word in his defence: mom bhaiya kahete hain ki young generation kaa ees tarah puja path main time waste karnaa uchit nahi hain…….woh sab kaam budhdhe logo kaa hain…ab aap hi kahiye……kyaa hum aur humaare dost kuchh galat kar rahe hain?

CR: nahi bte……hume to naaz hain aap sab par…aur RS sunege to who bhi bahut khush honge

Bhavi pretending to be ecstatic : mom ..shukryiyaa ………to eeskaa matalab hain hum aaj humaare saheli ke yaha jagraataa main jaa sakte hain…..correct

CR: haha kyun nahi bte……..aap jaroor jaa sakti hain

Bhavi looked at Rudra with triumphant smile.

Rudra: lekin mom aap kaise oon he raat ko bahaar jaane de sakte hain?pitaji gusaa honge

CR: aap ooski chintaa mat kijiye Rudra hum RS se khud baat karenge aur hume yakin hain who bhi bahut khush honge…..

Rudra: aap ye galat kar rahi hain mom…ees tarah se oonhe bahaar jaane………

CR: Rudra kyaa galat hain kyaa sahi who aap hume mat samjaayiye aur….kyaa ho gayaa hain aap ko ek taraf aap hain ki oon he pub aur bar main jaane ki salah dete hain.aur who nahi jaanaa chahte aur puja main jana chahte hain to aapko paresani hain….kyaa .baat hain….??????? Humaari to kuchh samaj main nahi aa rahaa hain…….

Bhavi again tried to be innocent and pretend that she was hurt by rudra's words: humaare bhi kuchh samaj main nahi aa raha hain mom ……….hum do tin din se dekh rahe hain bhaiya kuchh ajib saa vyavhaar kar rahe hain……

CR: aap chintaa mat kijiye aap aaram kijiye raat ko aap ko jagnaa hain na?????? aur rahi baat Rudra ki who to hum bhi dekh rahe hain pichhale kuchh dino se hume bhi lag raha hain ki who kuchh ajib saa vyavhaar kar rahe hain ……….chaliye Rudra bhavi ko aaraam kar ne dijiye aur aap bhi apne kamare main jaa ke aaraam kijiye….shaayad aap kaa man thikaane pe aa jaaye….

Bhavi hugged Rudra and show her fake concerned and whispered in his ear: dekhaa bhaiya humne kaha thaa naa hum izzazat le lenge???/

Rudra had disgusted look on his face he was still amused seeing his little sister's change of behaviour. He could see the path see was walking and somewhere deep down he was feeling guilty about it…………but why he was feeling guilty?????was he seeing the face of other girls whom he had deceived in past and made them walk on the same path right now his sister was walking? Or his own sin was coming in front of him in disguised of her sister's behaviour. He shook his head in disappointment and restlessness. Before he could think more CR held his hand and pulled him outside the room……..

CR: kyaa ho rahaa hain aap ko Rudra……humaari to samaj main nahi aa rahaa hain.jab bhavi pub main nahi jaanaa chahti aap oon he bhej rahe hain aur puja main jana chaahti hain to rok rahe hain

Rudra: mom ……..aap baat ko samaj nahi rahi hain….bhavi natak kar rahi hain……aur rahi baat pub main jaane ki to hum oon he ooksaa nahi rahe the hum oonhe rok rahe the……

Cr and Rudra were walking towards rudra's room………..

CR: kyaa kah rahe hain aap rok rahe the lekin bhavi…

Rudra: wahi to humkabse aap ko kah ne ki koshish kar rahe hain..woh jooth bol rahihain who jagraataa main nahi pub main jaa rahi hain apne dosto ke saath ……aur.

CR: rahene dijiye Rudra………jaise aap humse jooth bol kar aaj tak aiyaasiyaa karte aa rahe hain .aap ko lag raha hain har koi aisa hi karegaa……….lekin hum bhavi ko jaante hain who abhi bahut naadaan hain aise petre who nahi kar sakti,,,,,,,

Rudra was frustrated his voice raised with his anger: hum bhi yahi samajte the ki bhavi nadan hain lekin aaj dekh liyaa who kitni badal rahi hain……..mom.

CR: bas kijiye……..aap sab ko apne najariye se dekh rahe hain aur rahi baat bhavi ki ooski chintaa chhodiye aur apni chintaa kijiye………who yudi…..humaare saare waar ko naakaam kar raha hain,,,.woh humaari problem banaa bethaa hain ….humaaraa dimaag kaam nahi kar raha hain ki kal who kaise bach gayaa humne kitnaa acchaa plan banayaa thaa lekin who saaf bach gayaa aur who naukrani ne bhi baat sambhaal li….ek hume oonki chintaa hain aur aap hain ki madad kar ne ki bajay humaari uljane badhaa rahe hain…….

Rudra: hum aap ki uljan badhaa rahe hain…….?

they reached near rudra's room, and Rudra flung the door open. Rudra was boiling with anger and he stared angrily at CR.

CR was also upset with rudra's behaviour and her defeat that she was getting from yura .

CR: aur nahi to kyaa……….humaare paas kitnaa kaam pada hain hur waqt hum sochte rahete hain ki yudi ko kaise faasaa jaaye aur RS ki nazaro se ghiraayaa jaaye aur……

Rudra fumed: mom……kabhi kabhi hume lagtaa hain aap hume bhi nafarat karti shaayad eesi bahane humaare liye sochti to sahi!!!!!!!!...........jitnaa aap yudi ke bare main sochti hain agar oon se thoda bhi humaare liye sochti to aaj shayad hum kahi aur hote ……….aap se bahas nahi kar rahe hote…….

He banged his hand on near by table.

CR raged hearing rudra's words: hum aapke bare main nahi sochte??????to ye sab hum kis ke liye kar rahe hain?????/aap ke liye to kar rahe hain………..aap ko raja banaa ne ke liye to kar rahe hain……..

Rudra smiled mockingly: mom you know…….kabhi kabhi hume lagtaa hain aap ye sab hume raajaa bana ne keliye nahi apne ego ke liye kar rahi hain………apkaa jo abhimaan chur chur huva hain naa aapki bahen ke haatho ooska badlaa lene ke liye kar rahi hain…….hume raja banaa naa to sirf ek bahana hain……..

CR lost her temper and raised her hand to slap rudra but she stopped in middle seeing rising anger in rudra's eyes…….

Rudra: kyun? Kyaa huva ? kyun ruk gayi? Sach baat kadavi lagi………humaari baat chhodiye bhavi ke bare main sochiye agar laa parvaahi dikhaayi to phir pachhtaave ke alaavaa kuchh nahi haath aayegaa……raj sinhasan to door ki baat hain samaji aap…..

CR was shocked seeing Rudra's new avatar; in her dream also she did not think that Rudra could say those words to her. Rudra has always supported her in her all plan and she was doing all this for her only son whom she loved like precious stone and today that son doubted her intention putting the entire allegation on her. She stared at Rudra in bewilderment. In her utter dismay Rudra was still standing there like rock and she could see that his veins on his forehead were ready to burst.

CR: bhavi sahi kah rahi thee…….kuchh dino se aapkaa dimaag thikaane par nahi hain.kuchh bhi anap sanap bak rahe hain aap ..ye bhi honsh nahi hain aap kis se aur kaise baat kar rahe hain…….

And after telling those words CR just stormed out of the room visibly hurt and disappointed by rudra's behaviour.

Rudra could see the anger bile rising in her mom's throat and distress in her voice. He was frustrated with his own behaviour what was happening with him? how could he behave with his mom like that? How could he say such words to his mom? His head was spinning and he felt that entire room was revolving around him. CR and bhavi's words were echoing in his mind and somehow he also felt that they were right " he was behaving strangely since last few days. Why suddenly he was over reacting on all small matter. So what bhavi goes to pub ? he also loves going to pub and though his father is against his all this habit he had always find excuses to entertain himself. Why he got distress the moment he heard bhavi's desire to spend time with her friends in pub and bar? So many thoughts had captured his mind and the name pop up in his mind "tamanna" ya she was the root of all this……..he clinched his fist in anger. He realised because of tamanna's words he had become over anxious for bhavi and started to behave over protective……tamanna was the one who had created all this confusion in his mind. she was the one who had generated all this turmoil in his peaceful life……in his rage he turned and he saw tamanaa's reflection in mirror……..he was puzzled, he rubbed his eyes when he saw that tamanna was mocking at him from mirror. ……..he heard her melodious voice laughing on him…….his face turned red with anger……and his eyes were flurry

Tamanna: kyun……..mr. kunvar hume yaad kar rahe the?.........kyun eetne paresaan hain? Apni bahen ko leke??????..... ……….jis raaste par kitni maasoom ladkiyo ko aap ne chalaayaa hain ……….kyun aaj apni bahen ko oos raashte pe chalke dekh aapke pero tale se jamin khisk gayi?.........apne gunnaho ko ees rup main aapne saamne aate dekh dar lag raha hain??????.........kyun oos waqt kadam nahi dag magaaye jab kisi aur ki bahen aur beti o ke saath aapne aaiyashi ki? Aaj jab koi aur aap ki bahen ke saath aisa kar saktaa hain ye soch kar dar gaye??????mr. kunvar humne oos din bhi aap ko kaha thaa aavaara bhanvre ……pahonch hi jaate hain massom phoolo par mandraane ke liye who nahi dekhte hain who phool kis bagiyaa kaa hain……..woh aap ki bahan bhi ho sakti hain……….

Rudra felt stinging blow in his heart,he shook her fists and bared her teath in an ugly snarl. In his anger he took the vase from near by table and throw it on mirror shattering mirror in small pieces of glass. ……………the glass shattered with loud noise and hearing that loud noise RS and CR who was passing by his room rushed to rudra's room………..

CR was scarred seeing rudra's situation but RS was very angry……Rudra was rooted there like stone oblivious to the things happening around him……..CR shook him and Rudra stared at her blankly…….

RS: ye kyaa batmizi hain kunvar Rudra……….ye kaach kyun tod diyaa…CR lagtaa hain kunvar din ba din jyaa daa bigdte jaa rahe hain……..koi kaam kaaj hain nahi oon he.bas aiyasiya kar ni hain aur.aise ( he point towards shattered glass) kaarnaame karne hain.,,,,,,,,dekhiye ek aur apne bade bhai ko kitni mahenat kar rahe hain humaare business ko badhaa ne ke liye aur ek aap hain….yaha bethe bethe ………aisi wahiyaat chize kar rahe hain…..sharm aati hain hume…..

CR was upset with RS's words but she was more upset with Rudra for his irresponsible behaviour. She gave Rudra disappointed glance and bringing concern in her voice told to RS: RS aap gusaa mat hoyiye hum Rudra ko samajaa denge……who bhi apne bhai ko business main madad karne ke liye utsuk hain bas oon ki tabiyet theek ho jaaye…….

RS: tabiyet theek ,,,,,,,?????? Hume to who bhale change lag rahe hain.,…lagtaa hain hume hi kuchh karnaa padegaa

And he stormed out of the room followed by frustrated CR.

Rudra was fuming he looked around and realised that whatever he saw in mirror was his imagination , he had only saw tamanaa's reflection but why?????? Why she is bothering him in his thoughts? he thought it was all tamanaa';s fault that his life was in mess and he was determined to balance his score with her. he made firm decision that the moment he will be alright and gain his strength he will teach tamanna lesson, and he mean it, he will do that no matter what length he has to go. No matter what trick he had to use but this time will be his last attack on tamanna and he will detroy her ego………at any cost …….

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Posted: 16 years ago
What a pleasant surprise early morning. Thanks.
Love you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
such a nice parft....loved the saksh-nikki part
soo gd that rudr is finally realising his wrongs!
thanks for looong update beena xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow great update with so much hindi. I love and understand hindi but it takes me forever to read and write.
like brother like sister. Why is rudra so surprised at bhavi? he should look at himself in mirror and CR should have one look at herself.
with her sanskar no wonder rudra and bhavi are like this.
keep up the good work.👏
waah mandir pooja ke naam pe pub. ye sirf CR ke children hi kar sakte hai.
The title Aaina is very appropriate for this episode.👏👏👏
Edited by ramas - 16 years ago

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