FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 7

thanks
manpreet you like the way i have explain yudi's pain but i also felt the same pain when i was writing it 😭
and because of all of you i got inspiration to write something .
and pop you are right saksh is too sweet i just want him to bring yudi on right track as yudi can divedrt his mind from his love to his dad's parampara. and once yudi will be on right trach than he has determination to take action by himself without anybody's help
as i think sometimes you lost your way as you are unable to think proparly so you need some one to show you right path
and whom yudi saw is going to reveal in short while 😉

kyare next part update karvani chu..mane lage che tare everyday one part update karvo joiye.. 😉

ya trying to do the same but when i started i felt it is very easy but now it is very intreting so trying to get more detail 😉 😉 but working on that .posting another in few minutes

ok here is the another part actually in few parts i wanted to go on yura meeting but i thought need some propar arrangement for that so yudi has to work bit hard to find rani 😉 "mahenat na far mitha" this is idion in gujarati means "hard work fruit taste sweeter" something like that so enjoy


Part 13
That CR was starring at him 😕 as by the time he started walking towards them CR has finished talking to rani so rani went to BR's room that was in other direction. Seeing yudi there CR was confused and as she was asking him ,what are you doing here? Yudi was looking for the person and when CR asked him again he was in confusion but by the time he tell something saksham came to his rescue 😃 that you are looking for me here and I was there waiting for you so lets go as rajaji is waiting for us.
Yudi has to go with saksh to meet rajaji as he was waiting for them to attend meeting eventhough he was unable to concentrate 😭 he had to join them. but that day they finished their work very late and by the time they reach home he was very tired and saksham has other things to look after so they did not get chance to continue their discussion.
Next day yudi could not stop himself so he asked saksham to go with him for walk 😳 so they can discuss this matter without any disturbance and without anybody come tto know about it.
Yudi: aap kal kah rahe the ki jo bhi woh he wo mahel me hi he aap itne yakin se kaise kah sakte he????



Saksh : dekhiye woh aapke samne RB banke ayi jab waha par RB khud bhi aas paas thi or vapas apke jaane ke baad woh apne libaas me vaapas aa gayi hogi. Phir aap ke kamare me jake aapko sachaayi bataane ki koshish karnaa. 😭 Aapke kamare me khat chhod na. agar koi bahaar kaa he to mahel me daakhil hona mushkil hi nahi namumkin he.

Yudi: aap ki baat to sahi lag rahi he hame. Lekin unhone hamaare saath aisa kyun kiya. Itna badaa dhokha kyun diya unhone. Hamaare dil ko todte huve ek bar bhi nahi socha 😭 .
Saksh: agar aapka dil ees taraaha tutaa he to sochiye unke dil par kyaa gujar rahi hogi 😭
Yudi could not take what saksh told him just now

Yudi: unke dil pe kya gujarani he woh to khush ho rahi hogi kahi pe hamari ye haalat dekh ke. 😕

Saksh: nahi kunvarji woh aapse jyaada dukhi hogi kyunki hame lagtaa he ki unko aapki fikar he warna woh aapko sachaai bataaneki koshish na karti.
😭
Yudi was utterly in disbelief .he has no word to argue further.
Saksh: unki haalat to dugani behaal hogi ek to aapko dukhi dekh kar or dushre apne aap ka dil tutne ki wajah se. or aapke pass to ham he aapka sath dene ke liye pata nahi unke pass koi hoga ya nahi.or rahi aapke savalo ki bat to uska jawab to sirf wo hi de shakti he ❓
He was trying to come on term with his grief and was trying to fight back his tear .he was feeling lumps in his throat. 😭
Yudi: hame nahi jan na ab iske baare me..
Saksh: lekin kyun? 😕
Yudi: insab baato se koi faayda nahi bus sirf dukh hi milega. Hum ye sab baat bhulake ek nayi sharuat karna chahte he. 😭

Saksh :kya aap ye sab itni aasani se bhul paayenge?
Yudi: ye itna aasan nahi he ham jante he lekin namumkin bhi nahi he . or ham aisa khuchh bhi nahi karnaa chahenge jinse maataa or pitaaji ko dukh ho
Saksh: or aapke dukh ka kya.?? 😭 Sahi kah rahe he aap ki sabko bhula denge lekin ham daave ke sath kah sakte he ye jo sawaal he aapke dil me ki unhone aap ke sath aisa kyun kiya ? wo aap ko kabhi chen se jine nahi degaa. Abbhi deri nahi hui he is waqt agar is sawal ka jawaab nahi dhundhe ge to ye sawaal aapko shanty se jine nahi dega or aapka dukh badhaayega or kyaa aapko dhukhi dekh kar rajaji or BR or CR khush rahenge??? 👏
Yudi was in dilemma what to do 😕 as if he try to solve this mystery than that can creat more problem but if he does not try than this question will not let him live peacefully. He was unable to decide what to do. 😭


After hearing saksh yudi was feeling light hearted. Don't know why but saksh 's talk was working as medicine for his wounded heart. He seems optimistic. He wanted to meet her once and wanted to know why she did this to him???? As this question was killing him from within but now he can see ray of light in darkness around him.
Yudi: lekin ham unhe kaise dhundhe ge 😕 , ye itna aasan nahi he , agar mahel me kisi ko pataa chal bhi gayaa to tufaan khadaa ho shaktaa he .

Saksh: ham jante he lekin ye kaam hame badi saawdhani se karnaa padegaa. Or unhe khud hi saamne anaa pade aisa kuchh karna padega.
Yudi: lekin ham to unkaa naam tak nahi jaante or kuchh bhi nahi pahechaante to ye kaise hogaa. Sirf ek tasvir si basi he woh hamaare dil me 😳 . to fir kaise ye mumkin hogaa 😕
Saksh: hame koi aisi chiz dhundhni padegi jo unki khaasiyat ho or unki adat ho aisa kuchh special ho unke baare me , kuchh bhi aap apni yaad daast pe jor dijiye or yaad karne ki koshish kijiye

Yudi after some time thinking very hard he remembered rani telling him about her keen intrest in aryuved and about she can make lep and, it worked that night like wonder. And he felt very excited remembering that.
Yudi: ek baat he unke bare me shayad aap ko lage inse hame kuchh madad ho shakti he. unhe aryuved kaa shokh he or woh lap bahut hi asardaar banaati he shaayad is baat se koi madad mil jaye.

Saksh: excellent (he was happy to hear this and was happy that yudi still wants to meet her as he still has feeling for her and he will help his friend in this )
🤗
Saksh: to hame kuchh aisa karnaa padegaa ki woh lep banaake le aaye or phir aap unhe dekh ke pahechan paaye, kuchh pakkaa plan banaa ne ke liye hame poori tarah se shochna padega or is ke liye hame thoda samay dijiye or aap bhi sochiye . jaroor kuchh rastaa mil jaayega.
even though they were trying to come up with some solid plan, they had their doubts as it was not as easy as they were thinking ,as this cannot work the way they were hoping for but at least they had to try in some direction by that they might get some clue that can lead them to yudi's destination 😳

nice part..shaksham know how to help yudi..mahenat to yudi ne karvi padse..toj rani hath ma aavshe..shaksham kya plan karega ke rani samne aaye..yudi don't gonna hurt himself right..
waiting for next part..

Part 12.......Description of Yudi's reaction to Saksham's statement was excellently written! 👏 👏 I could really feel his confusion and later his anger at being duped!!! But thank god Saksham is with him!!! He is a very sensible person and he has helped Yudi to think in the right direction....nahi toh Yudi would have jumped to his conclusion and would have hated Rani!!!
And the letter was perfect....just adequate but expressed Rani's anguish very well!!! 👏 👏 👏

Part 13 : 😲 😲 😲 I was first shocked that Yudi was thinking of giving up!!!! 😡........but thank god once again Saksham gave him some sense of direction!!!! 👏 Beena......you are very smart....I love the direction you took the FF, finding something that is unique to Rani was a brilliant idea.....absolutely brilliant!! 👏 👏 😃 Totally love Saksham 😆

I am really looking forward for this now.....lets see where this goes!!! 😃

pop yudi is not gona hurt but they can pretend right 😉 😆


and ya prag i was feeling same as once you have wrong feeling about some body you need some clear vision and sometime your true friends give it you. that's why we say that friend in need is friend indeed 😃

here rani has not only hurt him but cheat him too but real reason only rani knows but for yudi it is simply cheating.

actually in reall show i thought they will give some logical explanation to find rani but yudi took his photo somehow i was not comfortable with that i felt it was last moment addition . but i love this show as they have very cute scenes and different angles so far

with another new part for all of you lovely people please after reading do not forget to comment

Part 14

Rani was totally unaware of this new development; trying her best to stay away from yudi's sight😭. But her heart was not ready to follow her decision. She felt like main usse door se dekhoon😕. She wanted to see how is he dealing with his dard. Is he alright?😭 lekin that was very difficult for her as she needed some excuse. She was feeling ekdum lonely this time and missing her family as she wanted to run away from this palace as it was very difficult for her to stay away from yudi but it was more difficult to go near him too. 😭
Yudi and saksh were looking for some bahana that can encourage rani to come forward and saksh got an idea😉. He went to meet yudi to discuss this idea.

Saksh: hame ek bahut badhiya raasta mila hain unko samne lane ka 😃
Yudi: sach!! kya??? 😳
Saksh: sabar rakhiye itni jaldi bhi kya hain? 😆
He was enjoying yudi's desperation

Yudi: aap hamare sath mazaak kar rahe hain?? 😃
Saksh: nahi aisa nahi hain is plan ko amal me rakhne ke liye aap ko girna padega??? 😆
Yudi: girna ?? kya matlab he aapka ? khulke bataiye hamari kuchh samaj me nahi aa raha hain. 😉

Saksh: hamara matlab hain hum club jayenge or vaapas aake sabko batayenge ki aap ghodey savari karte gir pade hain or aapko chont aayi hain. to fir lape to chont per lagana hi padega or hame pakka yakin hain ye bat jab unko maloom padegi wo jaroor apne aapko rok nahi payengi.

Yudi: to ab hame girna bhi padega unke liye . 😆
But Yudi has his doubt about this plan.
Yudi: lekin agar wo nahi ayi to??? 😕
Saksh after thinking for a while, as kunvar's doubt has some valid point. then what will they do ???
Yudi trying to pacify himself: may be she won't come but what if she prepares and sends the marham for my chont. We can inquire who made it and may be find her name that way and it will be easier to find the person once we know the name. 😳
And he has no other option but to try in some way "andhere me sahi teer to chalana hi padega " 😉
Thinking god knows what else I have to do to bujaho this paheli. 😭

Somehow he felt this is just the beginning of the play and to reach climax he has to play many more roles. 😆
They decided to put their plan in action the agle din. They both were thrilled to think of the coming day. Hopefully god will grant their wish.
At night in his room yudi was thinking about their plan. Still he was having doubts about the success of this plan. So many questions were still floating in his worried mind: kya woh aayegi?😕 kya woh abhi tak mahal mein hain? Kya uska dil bhi mere liye utna hi dhadak raha hain jitna mera dil uske liye dard kar raha hain?😳 If nothing will happen the way they are thinking, then what will he do? 😕There were so many questions but only she has all answers. Aur sochte sochte he drifted into a deep slumber.
It was a pleasant morning but yudi and saksh were anxious. Jaane aajke din kya hoga?? But they were determind to go ahead with their chalaak plan. 😆
As planned they came back from the club pretending that he is hurt 😆and as they thought CR and rajaji were worried about him and CR gave instruction to prepare malam for yudi and ask yudi to take rest in his room.
As soon as they reach yudi's kamara, saksh ask yudi to lie down as anybody could come achanak into the room and this moment they cannot risk that anybody doubt them. Saksh asked him to rest while he goes out for a while. After saksh left yudi passed few moments being betaab. He heard a knock on the door. Thinking saksham is back, he said "andar aa jaao!!" and he closed his eyes.
Yudi: saksh….
When he did not get answer he again called his name
Yudi: saksh, kya hua?

Now he heard a very soft but sureeli awaaz
She: woh ham hain.
Yudi's dhadkan missed a beat,😳 he felt this is the same familiar voice he wanted to hear but he could not believe his ears. Kya meere kaan baj rahe hain?? that's why he asked again. 😳

Yudi: kaun
She: wo ham malam leke aye hain. 😳
Now he was very sure that this is not his imagination but absolute reality. Usko yakeen nahin ho raha tha!! Was she really here? So he opened his eyes very slowly and he was delighted that his dream has come true. And this is not imagination but fact that she is standing there in front of him.

Woh hi thi samne marham hatho me liye huay bhay se kaapti or sharam se ankhe jhuki hui, jaise sangemarmar ki koi murti khadi na ho……. 😳
Uski ankhe juki hui thi fir bhi, woh kunvar ki ankhe jo usay dekh rahi thi, usko mahsoos kar rahi thi or lag raha tha maano woh garmi use barf ki tarah pigla rahi ho. Jaise uske jism ko garmahat de rahi thi or woh ye seh nahi pa rahi thi 😳

She(with full of pain and fear in her voice): 😭woh jab hamne suna ki aapko chot lagi hain to ham aapne aapko rok nahi paaye aur aapke liye ye malam laye hain.

He was seeing her but not hearing what she said. Suddenly he realized that she was speaking to him. 😳

Achanak…he got up from his bed and started walking towards her.

Yudi: hamare jism ki chont ke liye aap ye marham layi hain lekin jo chont hamare dil pe lagi hain uspar kya lagaogi???? 😭
Tab jake usne apni ankhe utha kar yudi ki aankhon mein dekha or jaise puchh na rahi ho"ki sirf aapka dil chhali hua hain Aur hamara nahi???" 😭
Yudi uski ankho me chhalkte huay dard ko pehchanta tha kyunki woh bhi to vahi kashti mein savaar tha😭 (he could understand her pain as he was also sailing in same boat)
He could not stop himself staring at her beautiful eyes. At last he asked the question that has stolen the sleep from his eyes.
Yudi: kyun kiya aapne hamare sath itna bada chhal? Kya mila aapko yeh kar ke? 😭
She did not have any answers for all these questions. Her tears were telling the story of her pain and yudi could not bear to see the tears in her eyes.
Yudi: aap roiye mat! ham bardasht nahi kar payenge agar ek bhi aur aansu aapki aankh se baha to. 😭
He held her hand and took her with him near his bed and made her sit beside him. He took the bowl of marham from her hand, kept it on the side table nearby. He held her roota hua noorani chehra and turned it towards him.
Yudi: kyun aap hame akela yu tanha chhod kar chali gayi? Jara sa bhi hamara khayal nahi aya
She: woh ham majboor the, hamne jaan buj kar kuchh bhi nahi kiya . ham bhi samaj nahi pa rahe the ki ye sab kaise ho gaya? 😕
Yudi, who was staring at her, afraid to close his eyes, thinking to himself, what if I blink my eyes aur who mere nazro ke saamne se gaayab ho jayegi!!! 😳
Yudi: ham apke bina nahi jee payenge, ab tak ka ek ek lamha hamne badi mushkil se kaata hain. Aur woh bhi ek asha thi ki aap hame jaroor milengi. Ab hame chhod ke mat jaiyega 😳

Hearing this, she stood up suddenly.😭

She: aisa mat kahiye kyunki ye namumkin hain . Ab aap kisi aur ke ho chuke hain or ham to sirf ek juth hain. Galti se apki zindagi se jud gaye hain. 😭
Yudi: nahi aap jo bhi hain bas ab aap hamari jindagi hain, hamare dil ki dhadkan hain, agar aap hamse bichhad gayi to ham ji nahi payenge. 😭

Hearin g this she kept her hand covering his mouth indicating please don't say such ashubh baatein. 😳
She: aisa kabhi mat sochiye, aapki jindagi bahut keemti hain, usey ees tarah jaya karneki sochiyega bhi mat. Warna ham apne aapko kabhi maaf na kar payenge.

Ye sunte hi yudi ne use gale se laga liya, use apni baho me aise sama liya jaise sagar nadi(river) ko apne me sama leta he, aur uske sparsh se jaise wo apne atrupt man ko trupt kar raha ho. Or wo bhi uski baho me jaise pigal rahithi. 😳
at the same moment somebody shouted yudi's name" bhaiya bhaiya……….." 😡😕

how do you find this?????????😃

i have one song for rani though i could not keep it any where in between story soi am just writing it here

movie hero

"bichhde abhi to bas hum kal parson
jiungi me kaise ees haal me barson

maut naa aayi teri yaad kyun aayi haaaye
lambi judai char dino da pyaar hoy rabba badi lambi judayi lumbi judayi

ek to sajan mere paas nahi way
dooje milan di koi aas nahi way
oos pe ye saawan aaya pyaas lagaayi
haaye lambi judai

baag ujad gaye khilne se pahele
panchhi bichhad gaye milane se pahele
koyal ki koo kahi door lagaayi
hai lambi judayi

tute jamaane tere haath nigode
haath nigode
dil se dil ko tume shishe tode shishe tode
hijari ki unchi diwar banaayi
hai lambi judai

char dinoda pyar hoye rabba badi lambi judayi
lambi judayi"

we know this judai will not last very long and their milan is near by
hope you like this new part 14 i am really looking forward for your lovely comment

Beena yudi ko itna bechan kyun bana diya..har jaga par rani dikhai de rahi hai..i hope shakshm ka plan kam kar jaye..
lambi judayi" that my fav songs..

payal