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Posted: 17 years ago
Beena tu kya chu..ketla diwas thi tu online nathi aavthi..for raja you going the way drama going..raja love BR more than Cr..yudi ko kuy abhi dukhi karti hai..rani ka chahera to dekhne de..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi leo thank you very much you liked my FF it's very nice of you..

and payal i am also missing all of you but as i said my brother's maily is here so busy with them shopping, sight seeing and all chattings with them... my story about CR and BR and king came out to be like original one luckily i posted before they showed 😆 😆
and yudi is going to meet rani but with bang with some suspence and love 😳 😳 so for that we have to wait 😳
staying away from RKAB forum seems very difficult now.miss you all and see you soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
when are you planning to update next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
i will post it by tomorrow as i am webbing story around more character as back drop and yudi and rani's love story as main plot so arranging in proper sequence
sorry for delay but will come with something very intresting.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Beena very beautiful part yaar 👏

i can feel yudi pain ..jab uss raja ji marriage News de rahe hai 😭....and love yaar ..jis tarah tumne chand aur yudi ke dard ko likha !!

so ab kya hoga aage ??..yaar koi dhamaka karne se pehle ek love scene dedo 😉

am wating yaar ..jaldi likhna 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmm love scene lagta hai ab to jald hi likhna padegaa ... have to come in mood first 😆 😆
and as i said chand and flower are my favourit so you will ream more simlies about them
and thanks you loved it...
and i am also happy that rajaji is in hurry for yudi's marraige " woh apni shadi kay liye bhi itne utavle nahi huye honge 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part: 22

As soon as rudra came out of the bathroom he stood in front of full size mirror,that was placed exactly opposite his bathroom. It was his hobby to admire himself standing in front of mirror. He had this misunderstanding that he is the most handsome guy among all his friends 😆 😆 . He had style to impress girls. He knew how to flirt with chicks and trap them. He had nothing else to do besides roaming around with friends. Drink, dance, girls, parties, outing only these things give him pleasure. Lekin oose nahi maalum tha ki jab tak paise ka jor tha ooske pass tab tak hi ye maya jaal hogi uske paas jis din paisa nahi hoga ye sab bhi nahi hoga…..koin samjaaye aise naphikro ko……..
Rudra was in hurry to reach somewhere. He knew that today is very important for his family but he does not care about that. He had to meet someone very special today so he could not waste his day for his family.
HE gel his hair. He took out his most favorite dark maroon shirt with light colored strips all over it from cupboard. material's smoothness was giving very comfortable feeling. Black pant in combination was giving handsome look to rudra. He kept two front buttons open so his well built bicep can be visible. His armany perfume fill room with exotic fragrance. He was ready to kill gals with this hunk look…………….
He was about to step out his father shouted…………..
Rajaji: kunvar rudra…………. subahaa subahaa kahaa jaa rahe hon?

Jaise billi ne rasta kaat liyaa ho uska mood kharaab ho gayaa.

He knew that if anybody will see him going out than it will be difficult for him to step out of the palace. That's what the reason he tried to slip out of the palace silently.

Jaise kisi ne armano par thanda paani daal diya ho……

Rajaji: aap ne jawaab nahi diyaa?? Itni jaldi jaldi kidhar ja rahe ho.
Rudra: woh pitaji hume bahut jaroori kaam se bahaar jaana hai.
Rajaji: oh to ab aapko bhi jaroori kaam aan pade hai….. jaan ke khushi hui ki aap bhi kuchh kaam karte hai…. Ab jaraa itna bhi bataa ne ki takleef kijiye ki aisa kaun sa kaam hai jo itna jarooti hai ki aab subahaa subahaa itne saj dhaj kar bhaag rahe hai………

He did not like his inquiry master dad……….

Rudra: woh pitaji humaare sab dost ramgadh jaa rahe hai ek din ke liye.
Rajaji: hum jaante the ki aapka to avaraagardi ka hi kaam hoga. Warna itne jaldi taiyar hoke kahi janaa mano aaj " suraj poorb se nahi lekin paschim se nikal ne jaisi baat hai"

Rudra: aap hamesa hume kyun ulta sidha sunate rahate hain.

His father's query was making him uncomfortable. His friends were waiting for him outside palace and today one new chick is also supposed to come in their company. He was excited to meet her.
Rajaji: oh to ab aapko hamaara batain bhi ulti sidhi lag rahi hai……
Rudra: pitaji hume deri ho rahi hai hum chalate hai hum baad mai baat karenge…..

Rajaji: aap kahi nahi jaa rahe hai … aap bhul gaye hai ki aaj RB aur ooski family aa rahi hai yahaa par kunvar yudhisthir ki shaadi ki taarikh tai hone waali hai…….
Rudra: lekin pitaji ……in sab mai hamaara kya kaam….

Before king says something more CR came to rescue rudra. She was very well aware that rudra is not going to listen anything and today she did not want to create any scene.

CR: kya baat hai …….??
Rajaji: aap apne ladle lo samjayiye jaraa aaj bhi woh dosto ke saath avaaragardi kar ne ke liye bahaar jaana chaahti hai.
CR: aap chinta na kare hum unse baat karte hai aapke naaste ka samay ho gayaa hai. Sab aapki raah dekh rahe hai.
King left disappointed.
CR: rudra ye sab kya hai humne kitni baar aapko kahaa hai ki aap apna tarika badliye warna badi mushkil mai aa jaayenge
Rudra: mom please…. Aap bhi bhaasan shuru mat karnaa abhi hume deri ho rahi hai …..hum chalte hai….
No body could stop him and he left to enjoy his carefree life with his astray friends.

King was desperate to share his happiness with BR, regarding yudi's marriage. He went to meet her accompanied by CR. Rani was there feeding BR her breakfast.
Rajaji: kayisi hai aap??? Hum kal raat ko bhi aaye the aapko khush khabar dene kai liye.
By expression BR was asking him about khush khabari
Rajaji: aap ko jaan kar khushi hogi ki hum logo ne kunvar yudhisthir aur RB ki shadi jald se jald lene kaa faisla liya hai….
Rajaji's hurry to take yudi's marriage as soon as possible did not give any happiness to BR. She did not show any expression.
Rajaji: aap khush to hai na….

She had faint smile . Indicating she is ok with his decision. But something was not right with her.
Rani was disconcert hearing this piece of news from rajaji…she was worried about yudi's desperation.

Their conversation was interrupted by servant. He was there to inform about panditji's arrival.
Rajaji: BR hum chalte hai aur jaise hi RB ke mata pita aate hai hum aapko bulaane ka sandesh bhejenge… CR aap kisi ko bol dijiyega.
CR: ji Rajaji… aap chaliye hum abhi aate hain…

CR told rani to bring BR out once instruction has been given. While going out she gave sly smile indicating few more new plotting against BR and her children. If it would have been possible to read someone's mind than BR and all could have come to know this scam ,CR had in her mind………….she was thinking about"meri pyari behena , jaise maine tumhare suhaag par kabjaa kiyaa, tumhe bistar par lita kar sub kuchh apne kabje me kiya usi taraha ab mai ek bahut badaa khel khelne ja rahi hoon, jo sabki zindagi mai bhuchal la dega, aur khush kismati dekhiye meri ,aapko bachaane wala bhi koi nahi."

Unaware from the fact that " ki jo doosaro ke liye jaal boonta hai woh khud hi oosi main fas ke rahetaa hain."
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part..all about CR 😡 and Rudra 🤢
BR not happy with news..rani don't like news either..
this for only yudi: in gajarrati..


yudi ne Jivan maa JAS nathi,
Rani vina Prem maa RAS nathi;
Dhandha maa KAS nathi,
Javu chhe swarg maa,
pan eni koi BUS nathi ane sath nathi..
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow payal shu waat chhe must lakhyu chhe and ekdam waat sachi chhe. 👏 👏 👏

for yudi to rani this one

sumsaam jivan ni dagar par
be kadam sang chaalvaa ni aash chhe.
mazdhare chhodi bhale chaali gayya
saame kinaare pahonchvaani aansh chhe.
aam to nindar loontayi gayi chhe
deeva swapna jota raheva ni aash chhe.
virah ni aag maa bhad bhad barya
bas ek mulaakaat ni aash chhe. 😭

and that Mulakaat is not far and that will be with more passion and love . as they will meet after long seperation and tough test so meeting will be more intresting 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
so sad but good..let see when you planning update to see mushkarat on yudis face.. next part tonight or tomorrow..
Edited by pop77 - 17 years ago

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