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Posted: 17 years ago

Part:33

Rani was shocked to hear Yudi's voice just behind her back😲, first she thought that she was imagining his voice but when yudi kept his hand on her shoulder, a tingling sensation ran down Rani's spine.😳

" dar ke mare rani ke rongte khade ho gaye. Apne khayaalo main bhi rani ne nahi sochaa thaa ki woh yudi ke saath kamare main akeli 😳, tanhaa ees taraha milengi aur achaanak yudi ke ees tarah se aa jaane par jaise rani ke honsh kho gaye"😳

Yudi turned rani towards him, rani was in dazed and unable to move. Rani was dumbfounded by Yudi's sudden presence. Yudi was staring in her eyes and waiting for his answer.

Yudi: kahaa kho gayi aap ? kahiye kyun aap humse naaraaz nahi ho shakti.

Rani ( stammered as her voice trailed of, while answering him) : kunvarji aap? Yaha?

Yudi: han hum yaha lekin ye hamaari baat kaa jawaab nahi hain.😳 kahiye naa hum bhi to sune aapke dil ki baat….aise to aap kuchh batlaati nahi…😳chhupti raheti hain humse lekin aaj …bachna mushkil hain 😆 (yudi ki aavaz main masti thee aur rani woh masti ko samaj nahi paaye itni nasamaj nahi thee😉….sharm se aankhe juk gayi ooski…..badan kamp ne lagaa aur hayaa ki laali oobhar aayi ooske chahere pe. Woh sharmaa ke waha se chalne lagi tabhi yudi ne ooske haath ko pakad kar oose rokta)

Yudi: itni mushkil se to yaha bulaaya hain aapko to itni aasani se jaane nahi denge hum aapko…😆(rani understood that yudi and saksh had done this drama) 😳

Rani ki aankhe dekhti rah gayi yudi ko jaise oolahnaa de rahiho ki aapbhi kamaal hain.😳

Yudi: kitni pyaari lag rani hain aap ….😳 Aapko kyaa malum kitne bechen the hum aapko dekhna ke liye…. 😳Eesiliye humne ye bahaana kiyaa aapko humare paas bulaane kaa aur koi chaara nahi thaa humare paas 😉, mahel main kahi aapse akele main mil bhi nahi shakte aur aapse hum baat bhi nahi kar shakte kitni bandishe hain humare pyaar main…😭aur ek hum hain ki aap ko dekhe bina ab ji bhi nahi shakte…😳aur ek aap hain ki hum se milne ki koi koshish bhi nahi karti….😉 (he let go of rani's hand and he was pretending to be angry, he turned to otherside😉. Rani hold his hand now and asked him to turn towards her)

Rani: to aap kyaa ye samaj te hain ki hum aapko dekhe bina ji shakte hain…😳(rani ki ankhe sharm se juk rahi thee lekin woh apne pritam ko dukhi bhi nahi dekh shakti thee. Woh samaj ti thee ki oonke pyaar mai bahut si baadhaaye aayengi)………hum bhi to tadap rahe the aapko dekh ne ke liye lekin kya karte ….kaam bhi to thaa hume. majboor the hum bhi…😳

Yudi: rani ji…mashroof hona achhi baat hain , lekin mashroofi main apne pyaar ko bhoolanaa jyaadti hain…….😳

Rani: kunvarji….pyaar main tadap na achhi baat hain lekin apne pyaar pe yun galat ilzaam lagaana bhi naainsaafi hain….😳

Yudi was surprised to see rani's this avtar😎. He held rani's both hand and pulled her towards him. Yudi had come out of the bathroom-wearing pant and on top of that, he wore bathrobe 😳as he had forgotten his shirt outside. His bare chest was visible from bathrobe 😉and waterdroplet had formed there after shower…. 😛Water was also dropping from his freashly shampooed hair……😳

"yudi ke badan ki khoosboo rani ke man ko mahekaa rahi thi to yudi ke tan ki bhinaas rani ke tan ko bhi bhigo rahi thee…😳..dono ek duje ki aankho main aise kho gaye the jaise chaan chaakor ek duje main kho gaye ho"

Rani: humne aapko bahut bechen kiya?

Yudi: han……..apke bina ek pal bhi hume jina gavaraa nahi hain….😳

Rani: hume kshamaa kar dijiye aage se hum khayaal rakhenge,,,,ees baar humse bhool ho gayi(dhire se rani ne kahaa)…….😳

(masti bhari nigaho se dekhte huve aur yudi ke haath rani ke haatho par sarkte huve rani ki komal garden tak pahunch gaye….rani ke chahere ko apni hatheli main lekar )

Yudi: agar galti huyi hain …….to phir saja jaroor milegi…😉…….(all the time yudi's eyes were stuck on rani)

Yudi ki aankho ki masti rani ki dhadkano ko aur badhaa rahi thee……..jaise gunjan kartaa bhanvraa kali ko madhonsh karta hain oosi tarah yudi ke muh se nikalne wala har ek shabd rani ke rom rom me tarang peda kar rahaa thaa………☺️

Rani: aap jo bhi sajaa denge woh hume hanjoor hogi……🤗.(rani ki aankhe baar baar jook rahi thee saamnaa nahi kar paa rahi thee yudi ki mad bhari nigaho kaa.)😳

Yudi ko jaise rani ko paresaan karnekaa bahaana mil gayaa ho . yudi ne rani ke chahere ko aur apne karib lake ooski kaan ki boot ke niche apne honth lejake dhire se ooske kaano main kahaa😳

Yudi: soch lijiye agare ek baar aapne bina sune sajaa kabool karli phir mukar nahi shakti.😉

Yudi ki sanso ki garmi rani ke badan ko pigla rahi thee jaise kisi ne ooske kaano main madhuras daal diya ho aur ek Mohini si chhaa gayi hon. 😳oose lag rahaa thaa woh bah rahi hai yudi ki aahosh main…….😳.dilo dimag par jaise yudi ke pyaar kaa nashaa chhaa rahaa thaa…………..ooski jabaan hil rahi thee lekin rani ko khud ko honsh nahi thaa who kyaa kah rahi thee…..😳

Rani: aap jo sajaa denge woh hume manjoor hogi…….

Yudi: to phir ….aap hume………😉

Rani ki dhadkan har ek lafj par aur joro se dhadak rahi thee……rani ki badhti becheni…… dekh……… yudi…..ki masti aur badh rahi thee…….

Yudi: to phir aap hume ……………hamaara shirt pahenaa dijiye……………😆🤣😆

Rani actually could not believe her eares and was looking at yudi with surprised

Yudi: haan hume hamaara shirt pahenaa dijiye…….kya lagaa aapko hum aapse kyaa mangege😉(yudi ki aavaz main itni masti thee rani ne pahele kabhi yudi ko aise mood main nahi dekhaa)😳😉

She lowered her eyes, visibly embarrassed and she turned away from yudi, and avaoided the stares yudi was giving her with all the affection. She broke into a wide smile and buried her face in her palm……………😳

Yudi: chaliye ab sajaa kaa paalan kijiye hum khade hain yaha….😆

Rani: kunvarji aapbhi ye kyaa mazaak hain…😉

Yudi: are ye mazaak nahi hain….hum sahi kah rahe hain…😳dekhiye idhar gumiye aur hume dekhiye bina shirt ke hum khade hain aur hume thand lag rahi hain…..agar aapne hume shirt nahi pahenayi to phir humare paas aur bhi raashte hain …..😉thand ko door karne ke……..agar chaahe to hum woh rashtaa bhi le shakte hain…😃.phir ye mat kahenaa ki aap ko aitraaz hain…….😉.(yudi was standing shirtless behind rani and he wrapped his hand around rani , rani was blushing furiously ………….the touch of his bare skin was increasing rani's anxiety ……………jaise garmi se tapti dharti ko barish ki paheli paheli bunde oonmaad se bhardeti hain…..oosi taraha rani apne pahele pahele pyaar ki ees atkheliyo ko mahesoos kar rahi thee.)

Rani (yudi ke haatho ko dhire se door karti huyi rani ne yudi ki aankho main dekhkar): hume sharm aati hain…….

Yudi: achhaji oos raat ko humaara shirt nikaalte huve aapko sharm nahi aayi……

Rani: lekin oos raat ko aap behonsh the……

Yudi (rani ke hantho se khelte huve): honsh to hame aaj bhi nahi hain……aapke pyaar main hum sub honsh kho bethe hain….

Rani: kunvarji…..oos din aap gayal bhi the aapko marham bhi to lagaana thaa……..

Yudi: gaayal to hum aaj bhi hain…….kyaa apne apni kaatil nazro se hame ghaaayal nahi kiya?....😳..ab bahaane mat banayi ye warnaa hum ab dusri sajaa apne aap le lenge……😉

(rani ke karib jaate huve oosne kahaa…..rani bhi sift se waha se hat gayi aur yudi ka shirt haath main le liya)😆

Rani: chaliye hum taiyaar hain sajaa ke liye…..apse to bahesh main hum jit nahi shakte aur…….bahaar hume bahut kaam hain……

Rani made him wear his shirt though yudi was making it difficult for her ….but rani somehow manage …and she was putting buttons in holes while doing so her soft fingers were giving tickeling sensation to yudi. Yudi was taking advantage of their closeness and pulling rani more towards him… .now only last button had left 😳

and suddenly they felt that some one was outside their room and about to open door……😲…..and someone opened door with one hard push… .rani and yudi was startled……😕.by this intruder who disturbed their ……romantic union………😕.that was kali 😡who had come there to look after rani….and she was petrified seeing scene inside the room…….

PS: hi friends as i have said before romance is something very difficult for me though i have tried to write about it....😃........so please do leave you comments so i can understand where and how i can improve

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Beena................remember me??? 😆
Just stopped by to say hello. After a long gap I came back to RKAB! 😳

I will read all your parts and update over the weekend!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Beena................remember me??? 😆
Just stopped by to say hello. After a long gap I came back to RKAB! 😳

I will read all your parts and update over the weekend!! 😃

yes yaar i do remember you . somehow i don't forget friends that easily......it's so nice of you to stopped by........after many days i saw you........keep coming and i will wait for your comment take your time no hurry......as you know your comments are very valuable ......like all other.....take care

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Beena................remember me??? 😆
Just stopped by to say hello. After a long gap I came back to RKAB! 😳

I will read all your parts and update over the weekend!! 😃

prags how you feeling? wht happen to you.. you are not feeling good?

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Posted: 17 years ago
beena awsome part..you really write good romantice part.. 👏 👏 shayri kya baat hai..maybe your FF keep me RKAB forums..only demand you everyday one part..
i really love your writing..Bhadhi rakhe che.. 😃
kali kaha se aa gayi..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

beena awsome part..you really write good romantice part.. 👏 👏 shayri kya baat hai..maybe your FF keep me RKAB forums..only demand you everyday one part..
i really love your writing..Bhadhi rakhe che.. 😃
kali kaha se aa gayi..
waiting for next part..

thanks dear that is really very touching comments😳....i was really very anxiouse to know how you find it? and shayari yep i love shayaris😳

yes from next week i m ight able to post very frequently

aur ye kali kaha se tapak gayi😡 yaar har baar galat samay par galat jagah par hoti hain lekin kaam sahi karti hain😳😉

darnaa mat oosko bagaa denge😆

thanks yaar

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part: 34

Kali was horrified seeing yudi standing in the room wearing his bathrobe. Yudi's back was towards the door and only his back was visible to kali. Seeing yudi there kali was immobilized with fear, her blood ran cold and beads of perspiration formed on her forehead……."ooski avaaz ooske gale main hi atak gayi"

Actually, what had happen that the moment yudi heard movement outside his room, he picked up his bathrobe with speed of lightening and he covered it around him and rani. Yudi pulled rani towards him, squeeze her against him, and covered them with bathrobe. Therefore, from the point where kali was standing only Yudi's back was visible to kali she could not see rani.

Rani was shivering with fear and had closed her eyes as she knew that if kali would see rani with yudi than hell would break on her….. "Rani aise yudi se lipti huyi thee jaise bail vruksh se lipat gayi ho" yudi wrapped his armed around rani and had hide her in his arm. They were like to body but one soul very close to each other.

Yudi had no time to treasure this closeness but "kali ko waha se bhaganaa thaa…eeske pahele woh rani ko yudi ke saath dekh le"…yudi shouted on kali on top of his voice.

Yudi: ye kaun badtamiz hain? Jo bina darwaaje par dastak diye yaha humare kamare main aagaya.

Kali(stammered) : kunvarji hum kali hain…

Yudi: tumhaari jurarat kaise huyi humare kamare main aane ki?

Kali: kunvarji hume maaf kardijiye…hume maloom nahi thaa ki aap kamare main hain.

Yudi: hum kamare main hain ke nahi ees se aapko koi matlab anhi honaa chaahiye. Aapko maaloom nahi ke humare kamare main aanaa manaa hain.

Kali: kunvarji hum to rani ko dhundhne aaye the.

Every passing moment was increasing rani and Yudi's anxiety as if kali will sense any thing about Rani's presents in room than kali could create problem. Yudi had to do something very fast.

Yudi: rani yaha kyun aayegi aur aap yaha abhi tak khadi hain jaatihain yaha se warna CR se kah kar hum aapko bahut badi sajaa dilvaa denge

Kali: nahi kunvarji hum abhi jaate hain aap hamaari shikaayat mat kijiyegaa

Yudi: theek hain abhi ke abhi jao yaha se ee se pahele ki hum jyaadaa gussa ho jaaye .

Kali: hum jaate hain….kshamaa kijiye hume.

Yudi: aur haa jaate waqt darwaajaa bandh kar dijiyegaa.😉😆

Kali: theek hain kunvarji

And kali ran out of the room as fast as possible, she was angry on rani as because of rani kali got scolding from kunvarji and kali decided to find rani and scold her. Kali went towards BR's room to look for rani.😕

Rani was still cling to yudi and had closed her eyes, yudi was enjoying this closeness, and in his mind he was thanking kali because of kali, rani was in his arm right now.

Rani's heart was beating very fast and "dono ke dil ki dhadkan jaise ek duje main ghul rahi thee. Rani ke jism ki garmi yudi ke tan ko pigla rahi thee. Rani ko bahon main bharke woh duniya ko bhulaane lagaa thaa. Yudi ke haath rani ko saraah rahe the. Ye dono ki nazdiki jaise miloke fansle taiy karke aayi hon dono bas ek duje main lin the."😳😳

Suddenly rani got aware of her surrounding and she felt very awkward she tried to go away from yudi but painful scream came out from her mouth that brought yudi in present also.

Yudi: kya huva rani? (with concern)😳

Rani: kunvarji humare baal aapke button main atak gaye hain….please humari madad kijiye inhe nikaal ne main.

Yudi smiled slyly on rani's helplessness.😃

Yudi: lagtaa hain ye nahi chaahte ki aap humse door jaaye.😉

Rani: kripa karke humari madad kijiye warna who kaliji hume har jagah par dhundh rahi hogi agar hume nahi mile to pura mahel sar par ootha lengi.😭

yudi: achhaa aap chinta mat kijiye hum madad karte hain aapko.

Rani's left side hair was stuck in Yudi's first button so rani was facing right side and her right palm was on Yudi's left side chest, so she could feel Yudi's fast heart beat. " jaise yudi ke dil ki dhadkan yudi ke dil ki becheni bayaan kar rahi ho"" yudi ka haath dhire rani ki kamar par sarkane lagaa"😳

Rani: kunvarji ye aap …(but before she could say something more yudi kept his finger on rani's nose and ask her not to say anything)😳

Jaise rani ka dil yudi ki dil ki bhaashaa samaj rahaa hon 😳


"na jaane kyaa huva jo tune chhoo liya

Khilaa gulaab ki taraha mera badan

nikhar nikhar gayi , savar savar gayi

Banaake ayinaa tumhe jaane man

Najaane kyaa huva jo tune chhoo liyaa

bikhraa hain kaajal fiza main

bhigi bhigi hain shaame

bundo ki rimzim se jaage aag thandi havaa main

aajaa sanam ye hanshi raant hum le dil main basaa

najaane kya huva jo tune chhoo liya

Aanchal kahaa main kahaa hun

Ye muje honsh kyaa hain

Ye bekhudi tune di hain pyaar ka hi nashaa hain

sun le jaraa saaz dil gaa rhaa hain nagmaa teraa

Najaane kya ahuva jo tune chhoo liya

Kaliyo ki ye sez maheke pyaas jaage milan ki

Kho jaaye dhadkan main teri dhadkane mere man ki

aa paas aa teri har saans main main jaaoo samaa

Najaane kya huva jo tune chhoo liya"

Rani looked at yudi with lots of affection in her eyes, her desired to be with him was visible in her pyaar bhari nigaahe. It felt like yudi had heard rain's wish he was also looking at her with passionately. Their eyes were talking their dil ki baat.

Yudi ka haath dhire se rani ki kamar se sarktaa huva ooski baaho ko chhoota ooski gardan par rook gaya. Rani ki aankhe jaise sawaal kar rahi thee ki kyaa karan hain? Aur yudi ki aankhe jaise jawab de rahi thee ki kuchh aur pal ka saath. Phir dhire se yudi ki oongliya rani ke hotho ko chhooti huyi jaise apni pyaas ki kahaani kah rahi thee. Lekin rani ki jookti nazar jaise abhi aur raah dekhneke binti kar rahi thee….yudi ki oongliya jaise rani ki binti kaa sanmaan karte huve dheere se rani ki aankho ko chhooti huvi ooske baalo tak pahunch gayi.

Though rani's left side of hair was stuck yudi untied rani's right side of hair.

😳

Rani: kunvarji…😳

However, yudi knew what he was doing, he only expressed his feeling with his eyes and rani stopped her sentence half way. Yudi untie her right side of hair and his finger was playing with her beautiful soft locks. Than slowly, he untied her left side of her and untangled them from his button and his fingers kept playing with Rani's beautiful hair.

Rani: hume jaana hoga kunvarji😭

Yudi: itni jaldi..thodi der aur ruk jayiye..pataanahi ab kab itni shaanti se mil shake?😳

Rani: hum samjte hain aapki baat lekin hum majboor hain humare kartavya se.😭

Yudi pulled her face very near to his and looking into her eye, very softly he told rani

Yudi: hume ye hanshi lamhe yaad karke baaki kaa waqt bita denge.lekin ab hume itna mat tadapayiyega ki hum apnaa sabra kho bethe.

Rani only lowered her eyes in affirmative.

Rani: hum bhi inhi lamho ko ji kar aapke paas hone kaa ahesaas kar lenge..apnaa khyaal rakhiyega hum chalte hain.

Rani started to walk slowly towards door with heavy heart but with lots of love and lots of memorable moment collecting in her heart. Suddenly yudi hold her hand again…..

Rani only expressed her feelings with her eyes it was like "now what?"

Yudi: ab apne baal yuhi khule rakhiyegaa…aap bhut khubsoorat dikhti hain…..apni khubsoorti ko yu baloko bandh kar mat chhoopayiye……

Apnaa haath dhire se chhoodaakar anpi dok hila har jaise oosne eesaare se kahaa ki ab woh apne baal khule hi rankhegi…..😳

She left the room after closing door behind her and looking around that nobody is watching her. The situation she was right now she did not want anyone to see her otherwise anybody could understand that something was wrong with her. Rani's face was blushing and her hair was massy, her dupataa also had come out and she herself was trying to straiten herself. Rani wanted to go to her room and make herself comfortable, actually, she wanted to cherish the moment she had spent with yudi and wanted to live all the memorable moment she had spent with yudi. 😳

Before she could enter her room, kali who was looking for her everywhere, shouted for her.😡

Kali: rani …😡

Rani was scared hearing kali's voice. Rani's blood went cold and her palm started sweating.😭

Rani: ji kaliji….(rani's voice stammered nervously)

Kali: kahaa thi maharani…..aur kyaa kar rahi thee(she asked with her acid tongue)

Rani: hum ….hum..😭

Kali: hume saffayi dene ki koi jaroorat nahi tumhe to buva hee thik karegi chal mere saath……

She started pulling her in the direction of kitchen. Rani pleaded to kali to let her go of but kali was not in mood to listen a single word from rani, as because of rani, kali had gotten scolding from yudi.😭

Rani: hume chhod dijiy kali ji …humne kuchh nahi kiya😭…

Bhanu seeing their commotion shouted on them.😡

Bhanu: kali ye kya ho raha hain?

Kali: buva aap humse nahi ees rani se puchhiye …ki who kahaa thee

Bhanu: ye kya hain kali who to kunvarji ka room saaf karne gayi thee na?

Kali: buva jaana to oose kunvarji kaa room saaf karne hi lekin who wahaa nahi thee

(kali narrated whole incident took place in ydui's room when she went there and raniw as not ther but yudi was there and than kali got scolding from yudi)

Bhanu: kyun maharani kya kar rahi thee tum..kaamchor kahi ki.😡

Kali: buva ye aaram se apne kamare main saj savar rahi thee…dekhiye to sahi ooske baal kaise khule hain….

Rani was crying and tears were rolling down her eyes. She was helpless as she could not reveal the truth but she was aware that this bhanu and kali would make her life miserable if they would not get satisfying answer. Rani was disheartened by her helplessness, and silently crying god to help her.😭

Bhanu: are maharani ….ab kya aise hi khadi rahegi yaa jawab bhi degi ….kya kar rahi thee…tu aur kahaa thee……😡

Rani: woh hum ……….woh hum😭

Bhanu: woh kya????????????😡

Voice: woh humare saath thee…….(this voice thunder across the kitchen and everyone present there froze hearing this voice.)😲

Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsome and romantic part..i like the song..kitchen me kaun aaya..niki or shaksham..
ab wait mat karana..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

awsome and romantic part..i like the song..kitchen me kaun aaya..niki or shaksham..
ab wait mat karana..

thanks payal and that one is my all time favourit song the it is very soothing and romantic when you hear it😳

aur kitchen main kaun aayaa hain your guess is right it is nikki ...but is she there to save rani or rani ke liye aur koi imtihaan😕 will come to know....

sorry for the delayes in updating but helpless.....i will try to update as soon as possible

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Posted: 17 years ago
hi sorry for delay was busy

both part awsome...as i told you you can write romantic parts see..i was true..... 😉 👏

i was laughing when yudi asked rani to make him wear shirt that was funny...but was on toe when kali enter the room but yudi did great job scolding her 😆 😆 poor kali

loved the last part also yudi was fantastic and by the way when i read that someone came to rescue rani i thought about nikki and see i was right 😉 .
loved the song and shayari weldone 👏

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