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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi againhere with next part hope you all will enjoy the way we are enjoying reall drama right now.
Part :11

but saksh and nikki stopped him and shouted his name 😕 .
Nikki: bhaiya kaha chale gaye the aap?
Yudi who was totally lost trying to figure out and what to say
Nikki: bhaiya hum aap se puchh rahe he kaha kho gaye?
Yudi : nahi nahi ha wo kuchh nahi . trying to be normal still his eyes looking for rani who has disappear from his sight
And saksh who was watching very carefully trying to see in the direction yudi was looking for.
saksh seems very upset with something.
Yudi : ham to yahi the .
Nikki: bhaiya ham saman leke aaye to aap yaha nahi the to ham aapko dhundhne lage ' aap kiske pichhe ja rahe the
This question make him more alert as he did not want anyone to know his status of mind.
Yudi: wo hame laga aapko deri ho jayegi so ham darshan ke liye chale gaye . yaha khade rahe isase achha he ham darshan kar aaye. Ye soch ke ham mandir me chale gaye. Ab aap saksh ke sath jake apni puja kar de ham yahi he.
Nikki : ab vapas kahi kho mat jana hum abhi aate he

Saksh and nikki went to temple for their prayer. 😳
And yudi tried to look for that person who was singing prayer he looked near by everywhere but he could not find that person it was like rani might have disappear in thin air. 😭
Saksh was very happy that today he was with nikki 😳 but inside he was burning with some painfull worry for his dear friend. 😭
Nikki to god: hamare bhaiya ko har khushi dena jiske wo hakdar he koi gham unhe chhoobhi na paye. Wo apne pyar ke sath ek nayi jindagi shuru karne wale he to unki ye nayi jindagi khushiyo se bhar dena . 👏

Saksh to god: nikki jo apse mangh rahi he use jaroor dena kyunki wo apne bhai ki khushi hi mang rahi hogi. Or muje ab unkihi chinta ho rahi he. kyunki wo bahut bade tufan ka samna kar rahe he . is tufan se mere yar ko nikalna 👏

After praying both tried to rang bell at same time 😳 . in that they touch eachother fingers that gave spark to both of them. Their hands were on bell and their eyes were lost in each other 😳 . Like bell was ringing and speaking their heart's language 😃 But in blink of time they realized that they are surround by many people and they did not want people to talk anything ill about them as their feeling was as pure as gold. 😕

They went back to yudi as he was waiting for them. Nikki was all the while downcasted trying to conceal her feelings . in car everybody was just sinking with their own thoughts, nikki in her happiness, yudi in his own pain and saksh happiness for himelf 😳 but pain for yudi 😭 .
When they reach palace rb and her family was chating with rajaji , CR, rudra and bavi. CR asked yudi where have he been as RB was waiting for him . as she wants to go back to her home that evening .
Nikki excuse herself greeting all there and told them she is going to meet her mom.

Yudi was not intrested going with RB as he was still thinking about that voice as he could not figure it out as he heard that in village, than in palace and now in temple . and that voice was like healing his wound. but he has no other option but to go with RB and he has to give fair chance to RB to try to understand her 😭 .
He asked RB to get ready as he wants to take her for horse riding and he suggest that saksh will also join us if she has no problem.
RB shook her head in affirmative and went to get ready
Suddenly saksh rememeber that nikki has forgotten her prasad's plate with him so he excuse himelf telling that he is coming back giving this to nikki.
Nikki went to see her mom . she seems very happy
Nikki: pranam ma
Br shooks her head
Nikki: ham mandir gaye the bhaiya ke liye prathna karne.
BR in her mind: har waqt dusro ki khushi ke liye shochogi kabhi to apne bare me socho
Nikki: ham aaj bahut khush he bhaiya ke liye ki wo apni nayi jindagi shuru kar rahe he. 😊
BR can see some different kind of happiness in nikki's voice and her eyes . she was trying to figure out what is there that makes nikki sparkle like star. 😳
And in mean while saksh came and nock on BR's room door for permission to enter.
Seeing saksh there nikki was surprised but happy too, BR was noticing her very carefully , her changing colore .
Nikki: aap yaha
Saksh: aap Prasad ki thali hamare pass bhool gayi thi
Nikki: oh ha shukriya
Saksh: sirf sukkriya Prasad nahi dengi
She gave him Prasad all the while they were looking in eachother's eye . and BR was watching this very carefully , and they were totally unaware about it that br is takingnote of their feelings. And suddenly very rude voice intrupt them 😡
She was bhavi who came behind saksh as she very well know that saksh is trying to find excuse to meet nikki
Bhavi: agar Prasad lena or dena ho gaya ho to saksh aapko bhaiya boola rahe he . wo log jane ke liye taiyar he. 😡
Saksh excused himself looking at nikki. Who felt jolt hearing bhavi. 😭
Bhavi: didi ye sab aapko shobha nahi deta 😡
Nikki: bhavi hamne kuchh nahi kiya.( she was very well aware about what bhavi was talking and she was trying to hold her tears)
Bhavi: ham or aap dono achhi taraha se jante he ham kya kah rahe he. bahetar yahi hoga aap apni maryada me rahe , warna pitaji ye galti kabhi kshama nahi kar payenge. 😡
After telling this hurting word she left the room. But this word brought nikki to fact from her dream land, and fact was she is widow and this heartless world does not have feelings to fulfill her dream. 😡 😭 😭
BR who was watching all this feeling distress seeing her daughter in misery. The moment before her daughter was glowing like full moon and now on the same face she can see new moon's darkness. She was so helpless that she cannot give her daughter warm hug that can console her or take her in her lap and make are free from all suffering. But this pain was giving her determination to try to recover . 🤗
When saksh reached outside yudi and RB was waiting for him. He appologised for his delay and they sat in car to go towards club.

Saksh was just there to take care of his friend as he was very well aware that his friend is right now as weak as water . can flow in any direction .
In car while going to club
Yudi: rb aap kaisi he? kal bahut thak gayi hongi?
RB: nahi ham thik he hame bahar gumna fresh kar deta he
Yudi:Aap ko gode savari ka shokh to he na? ke hamari vajah se aap ko ana pad raha he aisa to nahi hena
RB: gode savari aap puchh rahe he to bata rahe he hame badi boring lagti he .
Yudi: oh lekin hame bada shokh he , koi bat nahi aapko kya achha lagta he?

He was trying to know more about her and trying to concentrate on her. They reach to club . saksh who was with them listening their convo .
RB: hame car drive karma or wo bhi full speed bahut achha lagta . it feels trilling . fast car, and that is also under your control
Yudi: lekin ye to bahut dangerous bhi ho shakata he
RB : hame khatro se khellna pasand he. or agar jindagi me speed na ho to kya maza he. hame bahar ghumna , club jana, dosto ke sath maza karma bahut achha lagta he.

Yudi : oh I see
RB : hame lagta he aap bahut kam bolte he .
Yudi: nahi aisi bat nahi ham to bas apko janne ki koshish kar rahe he.

RB: hamara to simple funda he ki" you have only one life so enjoy it "

After roaming around and chatting for awhile they decided to go back to palace asRB has to get ready and go back to her house also .

All the while saksh ,who was watching them and listening them ,was thinking this two are like poll apart as yudi is always feel happy in other's happiness and she only believe in her own happiness. And living for herself. How yudi will adjust himself with her. 😕
They are back to palace and yudi was in hurry to go back to his room so he can figure out the scenario that has been happening around him . he can put things together and think more carefully and peacefully. As soon as he entered his room . saksh came following him. Yudi who used to enjoy saksh company was feeling annoyed because of his present now 😕 and desperately wishing that saskh leave him alone but saksh does not seems that he will leave yudi byhimself.
Saksh: ham kal se apko dekh rahe he or puchh rahe he ki kya bat he jo aap ko pareshan kar rahi he
Yudi: aap vapas wo hi bat leke beth gaye aap kyo samaj nahi rahe he ki ham akele rehana cha ha rahe he, so please leave me alone. 😡 😭
Saksh: aap ham apko akela chhod denge pahele hamare ek sawal ka jawab dijiye
Yudi: puchhiye
Saksh: kya aap RB ko pasand karte he hamara matlab he kya aap unhe chahte he. 😕
yudi: ye kesa betuka sawal aap hame kar rahe he???????????? 😡
saksh: kshama kare lekin hame hamari maryada ka ulangan nahi karma chahiye lekin apki or hamari jo dosti he unka lihaj rakhke ham aapko puchh rahe he?
yudi(with hesitant) : ha
saksh: konsi RB ko.???????
yudi was shocked hearing this 😲
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
nice part beena..yudi already find out about bhoomi..nikki shak ke sathe khush hai..bhav 😡 do kaske lagana..shaksham ko 🤗..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
i also feel like slapping bhav do kaske 😉 have to do it 😆
yudi has to understand that bhoomi is not his type of girl for him only our rani is best 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aahhhh Beena, that was an excellent part and the awesome dialog by Saksham in the end!!! That was too good 😃
You did a great job of hiding the fact that Saksham read the letter till the end....you gave only one indication!!! Excellent Beena!

The similes you write are excellent.....the way you were comparing Nikki with New moon and Full moon!!! And their hands touching when ringing the bell..... 😳 😳 very good idea!! 😉 😆
Poor Yudi 😭 I feel so bad for him.
Atleast RB is telling him the truth about herself instead of lying! And they are too different! But its wonderful to see Yudi make an effort to know and understand her too! 👏 👏

Waiting to see Yudi's reaction, update quickly! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Last dialog was too good dear.
Its better for Yudi to understand fact that he and Rb are poles apart. So instead of wasting time by trying to undertand her, he has to start searching rani.
Please post next part soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
thanks all of you
my poor yudi dear has to understand that RB is not his kind for him our rani is best and somebody we need to make him realize that 😉
so here is our dear saksh will provok his feelings as sometimes we need somebody to ignite fire and i think our saksh will do that 😉
so search is goingto begine and our hero will find our rani for sure 😆 😆
i want to try give RB some new direction new character than our usuall vamp
as i believe " admi bura nahi hota lekin uske as pas ke halat sometimes bure hote he jo use bura bana deta he"
so lets see 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
prag i love using simlies as i feel they explain situation very well without many words, so i am trying to use them thanks you liked them
and moon and flowers are my favourite one so will have more 😆 😆
and ya i gaev one hint about letter that how it reach to saksh and good catch you had 😆 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 12


Yudi who was extremely shocked hearing this.
Yudi: aap kya bakvas kar rahe he konsi RB, hamara matlab he ek hi to he wo. 😕
Saksh: kyu heran ho gaye hamari bat sun kar 😕 , ham poochhte he kon si RB jisko aap kal tak ghunghat udhne se pahele pahechante the or us RB ko jo aapko ghunghat uthne ke bad dekhne ko mili. Wo jisko dekh te hi aap ke dil ne use pahechan liya ya wo jisko aap jan ne ki khoshish kar rahe he. wo jiska sath ho to samay jaise hath me se ret ki tarah nikla lagta tha or aap chahte the ki wo tham jay ya wo jiske sath ek pal bhi aap ko sadiya jaisi lambi lagti he

Listening all this from saksh has given biggest shock to yudi 😲 , he was wondering how he came to know about all, as only I was aware about this and paheli nobody else know what has happen . he could not figure out . 😕

Saksh: soch rahe he na ki hame kaise pata chala aapne to hame is kabil nahi samaja ki apne dil ki bat hamse kare , hamse apna dard bata kar apna dil halka kare itna paraya kar diya aapne hame. Lekin bhagvan ke pass aj gaye the na shikayat kar ne ke liye to usne sunli aapki bat………..
Yudi was still could not understand what is happening, what has happen in temple that has brought truth in front of saksh. 😭
That time saksh took out yudi's wallet from his pocket.
Saksh: ye aap ne hame diya tha paise den eke liye puja ka saman lene ke liye.

Yudi remember that he gave wallet to him but what was there and by the time he scratch his memory saksh took out the letter written by rani. 😭

Seeing that letter yudi was jolted and now he remembered that , that day he was reading letter and when saksh came he kept that letter in his wallet so nobody can get hold of it as he did not even read that
Saksh: aap ne ye khat nahi padha tha pura?????????? 😭
Hamne padh liya to hame pata chal gaya ki aapki mayushi ka karan kya he.

Yudi took letter from his hand and started to read though it was too late 😭 but he wanted to know why she cheated him 😭 and what excuse she has to justify herself. 😡

adarniy kunvarji

hum apse bahut jaroori bat batana chahte he . ye padh ke ap shayad dukhi honge lekin hamara irada apko dukhi karana kateyi hi nahi tha par ap hamari bat samajneki koshish karenge. ho shake to hame maf kar dijiyega .
aap jise RB samaj rahe he wo RB nahi ham he. samay samay par takdir ne hamko aap ke samne RB banake pes kiya , paheli bar aap hame RB samaje or ham aap ko sachhai batate us se pahele aap chale gaye. Or bad me hame majboori se RB banke aap ke samne aana pada , bahot bar hamne kosshish ki ke ham aapko sachai bata de lekin moka nahi mila.
Ek bar himmat kar ke aapke kamare me bhi aye aapko bata ne ke liye lekin jub hamne bata di bat to pata laga waha aap nahi the.
Is liye ye khat ke dvara aap ko ham ye hakkikat bata rahe he.taki jab aap asli RB ko dekhe to apko dukh na ho or aap is hakikat se vakif ho.
Ho shake to hame samaj ne ki koshish kare . ham jante he hamara gunha mafi ke layak nahi he lekin hame maf karne ki koshish jaroor kare.
Apki gunhegar
😭
After reading letter yudi was feeling upset 😭 . And looking at saksh. He was totally at loss of word what to say . saksh was looking at him like he was asking still do you want to hide everyting from me , trust me I will do whatever in my hand to help you out from this mess.
Yudi could not control himself and he opened his heart infront of saksh he told him about each and every detail and moment he spend with paheli. 😳
Yudi: hame samaj nahi aa raha he ,kaun thi wo kaha se aayi thi or usne hamare sath itna bada chhal kyun kiya. Kya mila unko hamare dil ke sath khelke.
Saksh: aap ki bate sunke or ye khat padh ke hame kyu eaisa lag raha he ki usne aapke sath koi chhal nahi kiya 😳
Yudi was all surprised to listen that 😕
Yudi: aap sab sunane ke bad bhi aisa keise kah sakte he agar wo chahati to usi rat ko wo hame bata deti kitne samay ham sath me the.

Saksh: hame lagta he ki koi majboori thi wo bat chhoopa ne ki us waqt , warna wo aapko ye khat likh kar kyu bata dena chahti. Baki ke sawalo ke jawab to sirf wohi de sakti he . lekin jis tarah se aap dukhi he hame yanki he wo bhi buri tarah se jakhmi he.
Yudi was unable to trust what he was listening.

Yudi: aap ye kaise kah shakte he.
Saksh: iska sabut ye khat he aagar unko aap ki parva na hoti to aap ko sab bat se agah karke dukh se bachane ki koshish na karti. Or hame laga ra ha he, nahi pakka yakin he wo jo bhi he wo isi mahel me he.
Yudi was shocked to hear this
Yudi : kya ??? is mahel me he wo??? 😲
The same moment CR enter yudi's room asking : kaun he is mahel me??? 😲 😡

Yudi and saksh was scared out of their death as they are worried that CR might have listen their conversation ??? so they could not think what they should do but suddenly

saksh : wo to ham kuchh nahi wo sirf kunvarji ha to 🤔
CR: aap kya kah rahe he hamari koi samaj me nahi aa raha he aap khul ke bataye.

Saksh: wo to kunvarji kah rahe the ki RB ko mahel me hona chahiye tha ha ha wahi hum bat kar rahe the

Listening that CR gave meaningful smile to yudi. And yudi was like where the hell I was telling about RB???? 😕
But he also tried to look normal as he was relived that CR has not listen their conversations
CR: ham jante the ki kunvarji ko RB ka jana achha nahi laga. Lekin wo vada karke gayi he ki jaldi hi vapas ayengi. Or agar aap unko itna he miss kare to phone pe bhi bat kar shakte he . kyun??? And she was laughing . 🤢
Than she remember why she came here actually.
CR: oh ham jis kam ke liye aye the wo to batana hi bhul gaye . rajaji apki rah dekh rahe he koi meeting me jane ke liye to aap ko bulaya he.
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Though they did not want to go but have no other option their discussion they had to stop in halfway. With heavy heart they went to see rajaji.

Yudi: ham pitaji ke pass jate he aap studyroom se file leke waha pohnchiye
Saksh: thik he
Rani was in kitchen though her hand was working but she was totally lost in thought thinking about yudi 😭 that what he must be thinking about her. She was worried that he must be thinking that she has cheated him 😭 . Rani was so lost that she did not even realize that instead of sweaping floor she is just standing in middle 😕 . to see her lost bhanu get very annoyed and start her usual shouting 😡 .
poor rani already she was very hurt 💔 has to bare all this brunt of bhanu 😡 also. She asked rani to go and give food to BR. While rani was going towards BR's room somebody called her name it was CR she was asking her about BR. while rani was talking to CR yudi was going towards his dad's room from otherside. 😕

but from there only CR was visible as rani was behind wall . but yudi can hear their voice 😳 and somehow he felt that it is very familiar voice he stopped on his way and looked in the direction but he can see only CR but not the person with whom she was talking to but he was anxious to see that person as that voice was very familiar for him but he was hesitant as it is not suitable for him to go and see that person though he could not stopped himself and start walking towards that direction and when he reached there he was shocked …………………. To see……….
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG Beena ...wow dear ....u done a great job 👏

abhi maine 6,7,8,9 parts read kiye hai ...very well written 👏

Jis tarah tumne Yudi ki pain ko explain kiya hai ...is very touchy 😭..Really i have No words ..u are good writter😳👏

Rest i read later 😳...and leave my comment 😃

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part..shaksham so sweet..he already know wht he think..i read like him when he take side for rani..now yudi going to search in his house instead of outside..last me yudi ne kisko dekha..wo chok gaya..
jaldi thi next part update kar..

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