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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena..you don't have to put a net out to catch us...we have already fallen deep into this story!

Waiting for the next instalment 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
PS: hi friends sorry for delay .......and now sotry is moving in other direction here in ek tha raja ek thi rani also now there are many tests for yura and how they over come of all obstacles............
recap: yudi harass RB and made her drink karelaa juice. RB is very angry and CR create perfact situation where rani become victim of RB's anger and that is also infront of yudi...yudi try to protest and save rani but when RS intervern he feel helpless in front of his dad..........
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Grievous, yudi was too lost in his thought that he did not realize that they had reached to office. Saksh opened car door for him and asked him to come out of the car but yudi did not react. Saksh was worried about his dear friend's well being. Yudi's trance broke when saksh pat on his shoulder. He came out his thought with sudden shock.😭😭😭

Yudi: kyaa huva saksh?//

Saksh: yahi to hum aap se puchh rahe hain? Kyaa huva hain kunvarji ………aap subahaa ke haadase ko leke kabse paresaan hain…….kitni gaheri soch main dube huve hain……aise vishaad main ghira huva humne aapko kabhi nahi dekhaa………chaahe kitni bhi badi mushkil kyunaa aayi ho aapne humeshaa honsale se kaam liyaa…….lekin aaj ….pataa nahi hume aapki chinta ho rahi hain……..😭😭

Yudi while getting out of the car he looked at saksh with uneasiness. Yudi's silent was unbearable for saksh.

Saksh: please.kunvarji kuchh to kahiye?/ ees taraha se aap chup mat rahiye ………aap hume bataayiye hum kyaa kar shakte hain? Hum aap ke liye kuchh bhi kar shakte hain………..ek baar aap bataa ke to dekhiye……….

Yudi stared at saksh with puzzlement and started to walk towards main door of office than with confusion he stood in his way, turned towards saksh looked in his worried eyes and said.

Yudi: saksh hum rani se milnaa chaahte hain……..aaj ………..jab hum RB ke saath shopping se wapas aaye ………ooske baad……..😭😭

Saksh: haa lekin………

Yudi: aap kuchh bhi karke nikki ko itlaah kar dijiyegaa ki ………….dinner se pahele rani ko apne kamare main bulaa le………….hum oonse milnaa chahte hain……..hum jab tak oonhe dekhenge nahi aur baat nahi karenge humare dil ko tasalli nahi hogi…😕😕……..kyaa aap humare liye ye kar shakte hain………?

Saksh: ji haa kyun nahi….hum jaroor aapka sandeshaa nikkiji ko bataa denge………aap befikar rahiye aur kaam pe apnaa dhyan kendrit kijiye…………aur RB ke saath jab aap jaayiyegaa tab aisa kuchh naa ho jaaye jis se oonhe kuchh bhi shak ho jaaye……..aur aap ees taraha se vyathit rahenge to raniji par kyaa bitegi…ye shocha hain aapne?

Some how saksh words worked as wonder, yudi felt relived and tried to divert his mind on his office work. Yudi was looking forward to his meeting with rani in night and the thought was giving him peace of his mind. 😳

Desperate and anxious, yudi, the moment he kept his step in palace after spending nonchalant time with RB in shopping mall, was restless to meet rani. yudi stormed upstairs, and quicken his steps towards nikki's room.

CR, who was passing by another corridor, saw yudi impatiently scurrying towards Nikki's room. 😲😲CR was suspicious about Yudi's desperation and did not take long to understand that yudi had planned to meet rani in Nikki's room. Cr smirked and thought about something and rushed towards kitchen.😲😲

Yudi knocked on nikki's door.

Nikki: bhaiya aayiye…….

Yudi look around in the room impatiently ……..but "ooski aankhe niraash hoke wapas laut aayi"

Seeing disappointment on his brother's face.

Nikki: bhaiya aap ander to aayiye …………..

Yudi entered room with heavy heart.

Yudi: nikki, rani nahi aayi?

Nikki: dhiraj rakhiye bhaiya woh aa rahi hogi………….

Yudi: aap ne oonse baat ki? Woh kaisi hain? Woh…….ro to nahi rahi thee naa humare jaane ke baad…………?

Nikki:bhaiya aap chinta mat kijiye…………woh bilkul hi theek hain………

Approaching footsteps increased yudi's elation and hurriedly he rushed to open the door. But he was disappointed not finding rani there, instead saksh was at the door.😕😕

Saksh: kyaa huva kunvarji aap paresaan lag rahe hain?

Yudi disappointed: rani abhi tak nahi aayi..aur…….

Saksh: hum aaye to aapko lagaa ki woh……hongi………achha aap chinta mat kijiye hum dekh ke aate hain….kyaa baat hain……..aap aaraam se bethiye……….

Saksh proceed towards kitchen to look after rani. on his way, he spotted rani, coming towards his direction. Saksh was delighted seeing rani but before he could call rani he saw CR calling rani from other direction. Saksh rooted to the place he was because from the spot he was standing he could see CR and rani but they could not see them. Saksh decided to wait till CR finished her words with rani and than he could go along with rani to nikki's room. He could imagine how much yudi would be rejoice seeing rani after long and restless wait. 😳😳😳

But his happiness was short lived.

CR: rani………..

Rani: ji CRji………pranam….

CR: aap eetni jaldi main kahaa jaa rahi hain?

Rani was perturbed by this question: ji woh……….hume ……nikkiji ne bulwaayaa hain……..hum oonke kamare main jaa rahe hain…onse milne……..

CR: kyun koi khaas wajah…….

The truth rani could not reveal……….she knew that yudi was anxiously waiting for her………she was already late.😳😳

Rani: ji ……….hume nahi maloom……

CR; theek hain………..aapne BRji ko khaanaa diya?😕😕

Rani: ji……ji nahi….abhi thodi der hain oonke khane ke samay main………

CR: nahi rani ..aap aaj oonhe jaraa jaldi khaanaa de dijiye..kyunki abhi RS aate honge aur woh oonhe milnaa chahte hain…………to aap bhi jayiye aur BRji ko khaanaa de dijiye…….😡😡

Rani was in dilemma : ji …….abhi????😭

CR: kyun koi paresani hain…..?

Rani: nahi ……..lekin…woh…….nikkiji humaaraa intzaar kar rahi hogi…………

CR: aap oos baat ki chinta mat kijiye hum kisi aur naukar ko kah kar oonhe sandeshaa bhijvaa dete hain……….ab aap jayiye………😡😡

Rani was rooted to the place, indecisive about what to do next. CR looked at rani incredulously.

CR: kyaa baat hain? Aap abhi tak yahi khadi hain jayiye………..

Rani with heavy heart: ji ………CRji

Rani went into the direction of kitchen to collect BR's dinner. Her despondency was obvious with her every step. 😭😭

Saksh was disturbed by the fact that now yudi would not able to meet rani today. He knew that yudi would be in despair the moment he would get this information. How would he give this dreadful news to yudi, but he had to. Saksh was solicitous about yudi's emotions.😭

Distressed, saksh entered Nikki's room where, yudi was apprehensively waiting for him. Seeing dejected saksh, yudi understood the situation.

Yudi: kyaa huva woh …nahi aa rahi hain?

Saksh: ji……kunvarji………woh….eesi taraf aa rahi thee ki CRji ne oonhe BRji ko khaanaa dene ke liye bhej diya…………

Yudi: hum oonhe maa ke kamare main jaa ke milte hain………

Nikki: bhaiya aisa gazab mat kijiye……..aap sambhaliye apne aap ko aur ……….jald baazi main agar kuchh galat ho gayaa to oonki paresaani aur badh jaayegi…….aap apne saath saath oonki vidambnaa mat badhaayiye………

Yudi was incoherent with his grief, unable to decide anything. He banged his hand with anger. Saksh and nikki was disturb seeing yudi in pain.

Yudi went near the door than stopped in his way turned and rooted to the place for a while.😕😕😕

Yudi: nikki aapke paas ek kaagaz hoga……….agar hain to hume dijiye please

Nikki was confused but she hand over paper and pen to yudi.

Yudi note down something in the paper and, than hand over the paper and bag he was carrying with him to nikki.

Nikki: bhaiya ye kyaa hain?

Yudi: aap ye bag aur ye patr rani ko de dijiyegaa………….hum ooke liye taufa laaye the…..oonhe kah dijiyegaa ki kal hum oonhe ye libaas main dekhna chaahte hain…….sirf oonhe dekh lenge oos se bhi humare dil ko thoda sakun mil jaayegaa………nikki kyaa aap humaaraa etnaa kaam karengi.?😳😳

Nikki with lots of affection for her brother, her voice moisten: bhaiya aap vyathit mat hoyiye hum …aapka sandeshaa aur ye taufa rani tak pahunchaa denge…………😳

Yudi: shukriya……….

Vulnerable to break down emotionally in front of saksh and Nikki, yudi left the room at once.

Saksh tried to go after him but nikki stopped him.

Nikki: oonhe akelaa chhod dijiye..saksh……….kyunki jab kisi kaa dil rotaa hain to oose oon aanshuo ke saath akelaa chhod denaa chaahiye kyunki woh……oonhi aanshuo ko apnaa sahaaraa banaake………apne aapko sambhaal ne ki shakti praapt kar detaa hain…..

Saksh looked at Nikki in disbelief; he was stunned by Nikki's simple but very heart wrenching words. Saksh understood Nikki was actually telling her own experience. Saksh could not lift his eyes from Nikki. Nikki could not hold his penetrating gaze; she lowered her eyes in anticipation to hide her emotions. But was she successful in her try? No, saksh could feel her agony more than anything else could, but he did not want to embarrass her so quietly he left the room. 😳😳

Yudi wanted to go to his room and console his distress heart in his solitude but on his way, he met with RB who asked him to join her for dinner. However, he was unwilling to join her and rest of the family for the dinner he had to follow her against his will.

In BR's room rani was feeding BR her dinner but rani was lost in her thoughts. Rani's dismal face was telling the story of her misery. BR could understand that something was hurting rani very badly and if rani was grieving here that means yudi might be suffering also. BR's instinct was indicating about major problem approaching toward these two PREMI.😭😭😕 BR was feeling helpless and suffocated because of her inability to help her son out.😭

BR was still thinking about yura and suddenly nikki entered the room. Nikki looked at rani and passed the bag to rani, that yudi had given her.

Rani puzzled: ye kyaa hain?

Nikki: aapke liye………hain………hum jaante hain aap bahut hi paresaan hain……..shaayad ye aapki paresaani thodi kam karde……..

Rani: lekin………..ye….

Nikki: aap jayiye ……hum maa ke pass bethte hain aur baaki khaanaa hum khila denge……..aap apne kamare main jayiye………aur eese dekh lijiye……..

BR understood that yudi had sent that bag for rani and nikki was aware of yura's misery somehow Br was happy that if not she at least her daughter was there to support her son. Rani looked at BR who indicated rani to go ahead.

Rani was desperate to have a look in the bag and exited to see the gift yudi had sent for her.

After entering the room rani opened the bag and she was delighted to see beautiful light pink Punjabi dress for her. It was very simple chiffon dress with plain dupataa and round neckline with silver line of sequence. Rani was adoring yudi's choice of simple yet elegant dress. The moment she took out the dress one letter fell out. Rani picked up the letter and started to read what yudi wanted to tell her.

Rani,

Ye taufa hum khud aapko denaa chaahte the aur aapke chahere ki khushi ko apni aankho main bhar lenaa chahte the…….lekin ye mumkin ho naa shakaa lekin ………kahte hain eechhaao kaa koi ant nahi hota….agar ek eechha apnaa dam tod deti hain to oos main se dusri eechhaa janam leti hain aur humari ..eechhao ko purti mil jaayegi agar aap kal ye dress pahen kar humare saamne aa jaayegi.

Aaj subha jo bhi huva oos galti ke maafi ke hakdaar to nahi hain hum….lekin har waqt dil se ek hi aawaaz aa rahi hain………

"aapki aankho ke dariyaa main dub jaane ko ji kartaa hain,

Aaj apne aap ko aapka mujrim karaar karne ko ji kartaa hain,

Aapki aankho se gire har ek aanshuo ke karzdaar hain hum,

Aaj aap par har ek khushi nyochhaavar kar ke kangaal ho jaane ko ji kartaa hain,

Aapke khile huve chahere par achanak se dikh gaye gam ke kale baadalo ko dekh,

Aaj pyaar ki rimzim barsaat bankar baras ne ko ji kartaa hain,

Kaanpate hotho par dard ki siskaario ko siskate dekh,

Har waqt aapke hotho par muskuraahat bankar bas jaane ko ji kartaa hain,

Apni aankho ke saamne apni muhhaabat ko rushvaayi milte dekh,

Aaj ees bedard jaamaane se bagaavat kar jaane ko ji kartaa hain……….."

Yudhisthir

Rani read that letter repeatedly but she was not satisfied, the more she read the more her craving to be with yudi was increasing. She clung that dress to her chest and tears rushed to her eyes, overwhelmed by self-pity, she started to weep. Softly she kissed the letter as she could feel Yudi's anguished state of mind.

After dinner, RB wanted to go out but yudi politely refused her by giving excuse of his tiredness because of long and busy day.

Yudi was standing near his window looking out in dark night were everything was very quiet and the luminous crescent moon was playing hide and sick with playful clouds.

" thandi haavaa ooske udvigan man ko shitaltaa dene ki vyarth koshish kar rahi thee. Shunyamanask woh……….chaand aur baadal ke khel ko dekh rahaa thaa. Yakaa yak oose kahi pe padhaa huva ek phikraa yaad aa gayaa…………

Jab bhagvaan suraj-prakash aur chand-raat ke bich phoolo ka batvaaraa kar rahe hain the…………tab bhagvaan ne puchhaa har ek phoolo ko ki woh kis ke saath jaanaa pasand karenge…….har ek phool suraj aur prakash ke saath jaanaa chahtaa thaa……..jaise kamal, surajmukhi ………har koi aur jo thode se the woh dono ke saath jaanaa chahte the………..lekin ek bhi aisa phool nahi thaa jo sirf aur sirf chand- raat ki jodi ko apnaa saath denaa chahtaa thaa…………har kisi kaa kahenaa thaa raat ko kaun hume dekhegaa ……..kaun hume saraahegaa……..andhere main humari khubsoorti kise nazar aayegi……………..tab jaake sharmaataa………..lajjaataa ek naazuk saa phool aage aaya…………oosne khudaa se kahaa main saath doongi chand aur raat kaa…….

Chand chakit rah gayaa…….aur baaki sab phool bhi ooski yah murkhtaa bhari baato par hans ne lage ki kaun tumahaari kadar karegaa raat ke andhere main

Tab woh phool bola main apni maadak khushbu se saare vatawaran ko khushnuma banadungi………aur khubsoorti zahan main honi chaahiye………dhikhaave main nahi…………..

Aur jab chand ne oose poochaa ki kyaa milegaa tumhe mera saath de kar? Kyun de rahi ho tumm mera saath………main khud suraj ke oopar aashrit hoo……….dhire se kahaa oos phool ne…………suraj ke paas jo hain woh…………dusro ko woh…….detaa hain………tum dusre se lekar bhi apne main se dusro ko deto ho………..aur khud ushnataa ko le kar apne main samaahit karke …….sabko shitaltaa dete ho……..ye koi chhoti baat nahi hain……….jab tum sabke liye eetnaa kar shakte ho…… to main kyun tumhaaraa saath nahi de shakti………?

Har premi, kavi tumhaaraa intazaar karte hain, tum par kavitaaye likhte hain……..tumhaare aane se sabko aaraam miltaa hain….socho agar saaraa waqt sirf suraj hi rahetaa to kyaa avdashaa hoti ees sansaar ki……….aur main sirf apni sugandh se tumhaari sundartaa ki purti karnaa chaahti hoo……

Aadar se jook gayaa chand aur pyaar se pukaar liyaa oos phool ko …..RAAT KI RAANI

Don't know why but when yudi remembered this para from the book he felt very contented. In the morning, he was feeling worthless in front of his dad's personality but right now he felt he has his own identity so what he was over shadowed by his dad but he has his own qualities and the way RAAT KI RAANI supported chand he was sure his rani was always supporting him.

suddenly he realized that he was too lost in his thought that he did not hear that somebody was knocking on his room door.

PS: hi friends........hope you all will like it...enjoy.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Woo...you posted already....printing if off to read on the way to work...

What a way to start Friday 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow very very nice beena.. I loved the last para wherein you put the story of raat raani very well....Wasnt RS Sun, Yudi moon and Rani RaatRani here..👏Very nice beena..Loved his letter to her.. it should definitely comfort her.. Eak aur part likho na... 😛 plz plz 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
beena nice part..yudi put his heart in the letter..nikki & shak try best to help YURA..
CR ka to kuch abhi hone wala lagta nahi hai..
RB ko kaise palace se nikalni hai..
wow yudi kaunsi kitab read kar raha tha..
RAat ki rani..apni khusboo se sare phiza me khosboo biklati hai..
last part was awsome..
i thought YURA ka milan hoga..
lekin tum itni kathor dil ki kuyn ho..
darwaje pe rani to nahi hai😛
waiting for next part...
monu ki request man lena..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena, you ⭐️!!!
Only yesterday I was asking Nisha if you had updated recently, and this morning I see that you have 😃
Thank you...
...and as usual, words fail me...it's superb!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great Awesome!!
Yaar un dono ko milaya hi nahi.....
Stupid CR!!!!
Arrggghhh!!
But yaar just purr-fect!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beena I started reading this so many times today and kept being interrupted 🤔 but I am so glad I waited till I could focus on it 100% to read. It's brilliant. Fabulous. Perfect. Life isn't always fun and happiness..but seeing them together in soul even if not in body is exactly what I want to see.

You portray them so well, the pain of their separation makes me 😭

Originally posted by: bsingapury

She clung that dress to her chest and tears rushed to her eyes, overwhelmed by self-pity, she started to weep. Softly she kissed the letter as she could feel Yudi's anguished state of mind.



👏 👏
Edited by Nisha_07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow Beena, just too good yaar, infact not good but the best. Brilliant story of sun, moon and raat ki rani. Wow what comparison Yudi - moon and Rani - flower. It has such a deep and profound meaning. Even I felt contended like Yudi after reading this story. Its sad that YuRa did not meet physically in this part, but the fact that they are mentally one is enough for me. You potray their relationship so beautifully. Must say, not 1 indian serial I have watched so far that comes even 1% close to your beautiful story, not even RKAB.

Even loved the letter Yudi wrote to Rani. The words in the letter are worth reading a million times. Seriously, Beena too good.

Now I am all anxious to know who is at the door, Nikki, Saks, CR, or I am wishing: Rani. 😉 So hoping, that it is Rani who has played hide and seek with everyone in the palace, specially CR, to meet the person she loves the most, who is desperately waiting to get 1 glimpse of her, whose sad night will become heaven as soon as he sees her. And the best part would be is if she is wearing the same dress Yudi gifted her. Wow, Beena now desperately waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
i am surprised beena how are you able to write so beautifully, especially the use of hindi words. Seriously there are no words to admire you. Your writing gives us food for thought. You wont believe but whenever i read your piece i literally get lost in it. Without getting interrupted by any other feeling i just get involved in it that and at the end will be shocked to know that its over. For few moments i would be stunned and sit still thinking only about what i have read just now. Then i read it again to understand it more deeply.
The way you connected the morning thought of surja-chand with chand-raatrani is just superb. Especially because here yudi clearly depicts chaand in the sense that his character matches exactly with that of moon, he is not selfish and whatever he has he loves to share with others, he will take all the pain to himself but will try to give happiness to others. And rani is raatrani in true sense.
Beena, you are a real write.
Edited by jibi - 16 years ago

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