FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 61

ya nisha that's what i thought to do.........otherwise it is too much work

Part: 55

Subahaa ke paanch bajne main abhi deri thee aur saaraa watavaran khomoshi ki chadar odhe gaheri nindra main karvate le rahaa thaa''''.dheere dheere subahaa ki paheli paheli auns (morning dew) jaise phoolo ki pattiyo aur vruksho ke patto ko gud gudi karke oothaa ne ki khoshish kar rahi thee '''..hava ke halke jhoke''.aur abhi abhi apne ashiyano se nikle pankhi ki char charaahat jaise surya devtaa ki kuchhi palo main aane waali savaari ki ghoshnaa kar rahe the'''.surya devtaa ke saarthi(charioteer) arun bhi jaise aaj badi susti main the '''aur kale chhaye baadlo se lag rahaa thaa ki aaj suryaa devtaa ko woh thodi der ke baad hi leke aayenge''''lekin shahar ke logo ne ooth kar apne nitya karm kaa aarambh kar diyaa thaa'''door door gaanv ki simaao par apne bel lekar jaa rahe khedut'''aur oonke praabhaat ko bulaane waale halke se madhur geet main saath detaa belo ke ghale main pade ghantio ka rankaar'''..mandir main subahaa ki paheli aarti se bhagvaan ko oothaane ki pujariji ki chestaa'.. aur masjido main hoti namaz ki halki aawaaz '''..chaaro aur jaise ''.dheere dheere ''angdaayi lete huve ghaheri need se oothtaa ye khubsurat saa shaher''..abhi bhi suraj ki paheli kiran ne aake apni dastak bhi nahi di thee ''''..lekin charo aur se oothti ye madhur dhvani aur logo kaa josh jaise suraj ko jaldi se aane kaa ahvaan de rahe the''''

In palace, yudi woke up on time or you might say he could not sleep through out the night. Entire night he spent thinking about rani and the more he thought about her the more he felt that without rani his life was incomplete.😳😳

'rani ooske liye aise thee jaise diye ke liye baati, saagar ke liye nadi aur mandir se joodi ghanti'''..jaise ye sab apni apni jagah par theek hain lekin sach maine main oonkaa maan badhtaa hain jab woh ek dusre se joodte hain''jaise ek duje ke purak saathi naa ho..'jaise baati humesaa diye ke liye jalti hain aur oose prakash deti hain''.nadi har mushkilo ko jelati saagar main saamaati hain aur kabhi saagar ko suk ne nahi deti'.aur ghanti se hi to mandir ki shobhaa badhti hain''.

Yudi could not imagine his life without rani she had become ATUT HISSA of his life. Unwillingly, yudi got up from the bed, as he knew that sharp 5 o'clock RB would be waiting for him down stair. After getting ready yudi called to saksh.😕

Constantly saksh's phone was ringing, suddenly after few rings saksh woke up from sound sleep with jerk. Saksh was trying to find his phone anxiously, worried about early morning call and who might be callinghim at this hour, made him more desperate.

Saksh : hello''..

Yudi: kyaa baat hain saksh ghode bech ke so rahe ho?????????kab se ring jaa rahi hain'..?

Saksh was still half-sleepy trying to come to his senses and his head was spinning. It was very surprising and sudden shock for him that yudi was calling him too early in the morning, so many bad thought pass through his mind and when he did not answer.🥱

Yudi: saksh hum hain kunvar Yudhisthir''..kyaa huvaa lagtaa hain badi gaheri neend main the aur salonaa saa sapnaa dekh rahe the''..kshaamaa kijiye hume aapko eetni subahaa oothaanaa padaa leking wajah hi aisi thee'''..aap sun rahe hain naa

Saksh: ji '..haa''.ji hum sun rahe hain''.kyaa baat hain kunvarji sab theek to hain na?

Yudi: are haa sab theek hain lekin aap se ek madad chaahiye thee aur baad main hume samay nahi miltaa eesi wajah se humne eetni jaladi phone karke aapko paresaan kiyaa

Saksh: koi baat nahi kunvarji aap kaam bataayiye''..

Yudi explained his plan and hearing yudi's scheme saksh was flabbergasted and was unable to answer. When yudi did not get answer

Yudi: kyaa huva saksh aap ne sunaa humne kyaa kahaa ki abhi tak aap neend main hi hain?😕

Saksh: nahi kunvarji '''..lekin aap jo kah rahe hain''.woh thoda pechida kaam hain''agar kisi ne dekh liya to?

Yudi: dariye mat kuchh nahi hoga'.aur hume aap par pura viswaas hain aap ye kaam ko anzaam jaroor denge''..

Saksh: aapke vishwaas ko hum nahi tod shakte hain theek hain phir aap kaa kaam ho jaayegaa jaise aapne kahaa hain bas waise hi'''..chinta mat kijiye''.

Yudi: shukriya saskh hume maloom thaa ki ek aaphi hain jo humaaraa saath dete hain''abhi hum chalte hain RB aa jaaye ees se pahele '''

Saksh: theek hain''..

After talking to saksh, yudi felt little bit relax and he went down stair hurriedly before RB come down because clock was showing that it was going to be five in one minute.

In her room, RB was cursing yudi, for taking her for jogging that was also very early in the morning. Tired, exhausted and sleepy RB could not sleep whole night in tension, what if she would not able to wake up on time. Entire night she spent looking at clock and constantly reminding herself that not to fall sleep.

To impress yudi she reached to main hall exactly at five o'clock and yudi was already waiting for her. however, yudi would prefer to see rani's face first thing in the morning but today he had no other option. 😕

RB: hume bhi aise hi log achhe lagte hain jo intezaar na karvaaye''.( she thought : samay ke paaband my foot eeski wajah se humari saari raat bekaar huyi ab jaladi se jogging khatam karke hum so jaayenge kuchh bhi bahaanaa banaa kar badi neend aa rahi hain hume)

Yudi: to phir chale?

RB: ji.chaliye'''.

After two hour when yudi and RB returned to palace, RB was tired, deadly exhausted. The moment she enter the palace she throw herself on sofa. She was sweating profusely and breathing heavily. Seeing her too much tired yudi smirked.

Yudi: lagtaa hain aap to bahut hi thak gayi''..

RB: haa''kbhi eetni jogging ki nahi ees wajahaa se'..

Yudi: koi baat nahi aadaat pad jaayegi dhire dhire''..

RB: kya ???///

Yudi with sly smile: jab aap har roj eesi taraha humare saath aayengi to aadat pad hi jaayengi naa?😉😉

RB: har roj'''???????(she was frighten hearing this.. not even in her dream she would have thought about it.)😆😆

Yudi: haa kyun?

RB: kuchh nahi bas aise hi'''.

Yudi: achha chhodiye ab jogging ke baad hum apnaa ek khaash juice pite hain ''..jis se jo bhi shakti ka vyaay huva hain woh phir se sthaapit hone main madad milti hain aur sharir main sfurti ka anubhav hota hain'''.aur aaj aapko bhi humare saath ye juice ko pina padegaa'''aaj ke baad har roj humare saath jogging kar ne kaa baad aap ye juice humare saath piyengi.😉

RB: haa haa jaroo kyun nahi'''( RB was getting anxious she wanted to go back to her room and rest, she was too tired to hold herself anymore and in front of yudi she had to keep her composure right without letting it slip to deteriorated mood. To hide her reality she need to be fresh and on alert all the time but her fatigue was enabling her to think strait'''..and actually yudi wanted same thing that in her debility she behaved adversely in front of king and CR, so they could also experience her fraudulence.😉 )

Yudi called saksh and ask him to do arrangements for his juice. Happy, delighted and flattered, kali entered the main hall with two silver glasses of juice in silver tray; glasses were covered with silver plate. Kali was high as a kite because saksh specially asked her to serve this juice to yudi😉, those were like golden moment for kali that first time in her life she had been assign some important work and that was also related to kunvarji.😃😃

RB was surprised seeing juice in silver glass and seeing her in confusion.

As per instruction kali hand over those glasses to respective person.

The moment RB removed the plate from glass she felt exasperated by the sight of yukky juice, she looked at yudi with strange feeling , but yudi was happily enjoying his juice and experiencing his fondness for this juice, RB's vexation was increasing. Seeing her not drinking her juice''😕😕

Yudi: are app kyun le nahi rahi hain ''.lijiye naa chaliye '''..koi bahaanaa nahi '..lagtaa hain aap apni sehat ka koi khayaal nahi rakhti''..ab hum ye jimma apne oopar lete hain'''.ek baar shaadi ho jaane dijiye hum kyaa karte hain''😉😉😉

RB with confusion: kyaa matlab'..

Yudi: matlab .kuchh nahi aap juice lijiye '''..apne liye nahi to humare khaatir''😕😕😕

RB felt like throwing out she could not tolerate the smell how would she able to drink it. But the way yudi was forcing her , RB did not have any other option she had to drink. RB held her breath and drank one sip but she could not swallow that gulp but yudi was constantly looking at her. with great effort RB took few gulp but again yudi forced her to drink more'''..

Yudi at once finished his juice.

Yudi: wah mazaa aa gayaa''..kaliji kyaa ye juice aapne banaayaa hain'''

Fatuous, kali reply in affirmative thinking she would able to impress yudi unknowing she was going to be trapped. 😆😆

Yudi: hume ye mix fruit juice bahut hi pasand hain'''orange , pineapple, carrot and apple vaividhya purna mishrataa ''''.😳

Hearing about fruit juice RB felt jolt'''..😲😲

RB: kyaa kahaa aapne mix fruit juice?

Yudi pretending innocent: haa kyun?😉

RB: lekin..humaraa'

Yudi stopped her : lekin 'wekin kuchh nahi''baate baad main pahele sehat ''.aap baato main hume ooljaa kar juice nahi le rahi hain''😆

RB: lekin😕

Yudi: phir se lekin'''.aap leti hain ki hum naaraaz ho jaaye..phir kahiye gaa mat 'hum kab se eetne pyaar se kah rahe hain aur aap''😉😉

RB had to force her self to drink few more gulp and she was cursing kali and yudi at same time ''''😆😆

Yudi: chaliye aap jaldi se khatam kar dijiye hum ek mahtvaa kaa phone kar ke abhi aate hain'''.

Yudi could not control his laugh the moment he went to the other side of corridor where saksh was waiting for him'😆😆😆'..both of them were laughing uncontrollably ''the spot they were standing only they could see RB and kali but those two could not see them''.😉

Yudi: hum se humari hasi ruk nahi rahi thee'

Saksh: kunvarji aap bhi kamala hain sambhaliye apne aap ko kisi ne dekh liyaa to gazab ho jaayegaa..kitni mushkil se hum ne sab sambhaalaa hain'..abhi Rajaji aur CR kaa aane kaa samay ho hi gayaa hain'..

Yudi: haa dekhte hain ab kaliji kaa kyaa haal hotaa hain''''😉😉

The moment yudi left the sight RB's anger burst like trapped fire''😡

RB: ye juice aap ne banaayaa hain..kyun?

Kali stutter, she could not understand the anger behind those words as she was clueless about what was actually happening, because she did not make juice it was saksh, who gave her to pass those glasses to yudi and RB. In fact, kali had no idea who prepared it.😕😕

RB: tumhaari himmat kaise huyi humare saath aisa karne ki?

Kali: ji RBji humne kuchh nahi kiya?😕😕

RB: kuchh nahi kiya to phir ye kyaa hain'''bewkoof naukraani'..😆😆

Yudi and saksh was enjoying this verbal accusation between RB and kali.

RB; hume to lagtaa hain tumne jaan buj kar aisa kiyaa hain''''ganvaar kahi ki ab ye juice tumhe hi pina padegaa'''😲😲

Kali: hume ''lekin''.

RB: agar jaraa saa bhi lekin wekin kiyaa to hum tumhe CRji se kah kar sajaa kar waayenge'.ab chupchaap ye pilo''..😲😲

RB passed that glass of juice to kali and kali was dreadful by the look of the juice.😆😆😆

Kali puked out the moment she took first sip'''..

Kali: are ye to karelaa aur neem kaa juice hain''😆'.kitna kadvaa hain''

RB: yahi to hum kah rahe hain'.ganvaar naukraani ''..jaahil aurat tumhaari wajah se hume ye pinaa padaa tumhe to hum bakshenge nahi'..

Yudi and saksh had few entertaining moment seeing them''..but suddenly they saw CR and king approaching main hall'''

CR; ye kyaa ho rahaa hain RBji

RBji: dekhiye naa''''ye'

Before RB could finish her sentence yudi interrupted.

Yudi: pranam pitaaji pranam chhoti maa ''..woh hum 'RB ke saath aaj jogging par gaye the aur hume badaa achha lagaa kyun'''RBji?😉

RB was still fuming but in front of RS, she had to get control over her rage.

She gave faint smile'...though CR was suspicious about Yudi's behavior. CR had been observing yudi very carefully, the way yudi was giving too much attention to RB, and spending time with her, CR was feeling furious that Yudi was leading up the garden's path. However, right now she could she that RB was very angry about something and before she misbehaved in front of RS, it was advisable to send her from here. 😕😕

CR: kunvar aur RB ji aap jayiye fresh ho kar breakfast table par aayiye'''

Yudi: theek hain.chaliye RBji''''

CR decided to strike while the iron was still hot and she ordered kali '.😕😕

CR: kali''.rani ko kaho pani le kar RB ke kamare main jaaye'''.

Kali who was still fuming with bitter mouth felt the salt on wound'''.and CR knew that.😡😡

Rani was on her way to RB's room, the moment she met with RB and yudi, rani was delighted seeing yudi, and her attention was on yudi, suddenly kali who was walking beside her put her foot forward so rani stumbled and all water fell on RB. Exasperated and indignant, RB could not keep her hair cool''.and she screamed hysterically'' 😡😡😡

RB: bevkoof ladki''''.aankhe hain yaa button''..dekh ke nahi chalti.............saare kapde kharaab kar diye''''..

Yudi's unblinking eyes flashed with anger the moment he heard RB's insulting words for rani''''..and rani's heart started to pound at an amazing speed''.rani's body stiffen thinking about yudi's reaction '''.because her all attention was on yudi rather than on RB's anger'''rani nervously replied''😭😭

Rani: hume maaf kar dijiye RBji ''..humne jaan buj kar aisa nahi kiya'''

RB: jaan buj kar karbhi kaise shakti ho''tumhaaraa dhayaan hi kahi aur hota hain''.apne kaam ke alaavaa''''batmiz ladki''jab dekho tab humaaraa mood kharaab karne ke liye aa jaati ho''''jaao dafaa ho jaao yaha se aur kahi aur jaake apnaa muh kaalaa karo'''..lekin humare saamne mat aapnaa''..😡

That was the limit yudi could hold himself''''..the last statement hurt him immensely '''..that was the blow on last straw '..his growing irritation was obvious. It was beyond imagination that he could endure rani's insult. 😡

Yudi (his words were charged with exasperation ): bas RBJI''..😡😡

Both rani and RB was shocked hearing yudi''.RB was surprised and rani was scared because of any adverse situation could arise.😭😭

Yudi: bahut ho chuka''sirf paani to giraa hain'''.koi aasmaan nahi ghir padaa'.aur oonhone aapse maafi bhi maang li hain phir'''kyun aap oonko be wajahaa apmaanit kar rahe hain''''?😭😭

Tears rushed to rani's eyes'her heart skipped the beat ''painfully she looked in yudi's eyes where she could experience suffering for her''she shook her head helplessly'''she tried to give hint to yudi not to over react''.at that was not right time'''

RB; kunvarji aap ye do take ki naukraani ki wajah se hum par gussa ho rahe hain''..aur ees naukraani ke saampne hume apmaanit kar rahe hain'..humne sapne main bhi nahi sochaa thaa''..ki😡😡😡

Rani: kunvarji galti humari hain''.hume maaf kar dijiye''.aap khaamkhaa RBji par gussa mat hoyiye'😭😭''

RB: chup raho''..be adab'itni bhi tamiz nahi hain tum me ki jab malik baat kar rahe ho to bich main nahi bolte'''apni hesiyat mat bhulo''..

Yudi: RBji ''aap had paar kar rahi hain'''

Hearing this commotion, CR and RS rushed to there''''😲😲😲

RS: kyaa ho rahaa hain ye sab'..kunvar''..

RB started to sob seeing RS and CR there'''.and rani was startled seeing situation was going out of control. Rani prayed god to help them out in this difficult situation.

Yudi: kuchh nahi pitaaji woh''.eense RB par galti se paani ghir gayaa''aur''

RS: ek naukraani ki ye jurarat'''.dekh kar nahi kaam kar shakti'..aur aap '.ees naukraani ko kuchh kahne ke bajaay RBji ko kyun gussaa ho rahe hain''..😲😲😲

CR was extremely happy witnessing the entire scenario, because she would have thought exact same output from this situation'''.😡😡😡

Yudi: lekin.pitaaji''

RS: bas kunvar bahut ho chukaa''''aap kaa vyavhaar aapko shobhaa nahi detaa'..ek naukrani ke liye'apni honewaali patni se koi ees tarah vartaav kare ye bilkul anuchit hain'''😡😡😡

Yudi was devastated hearing RS's statement, though it was the truth but yudi had never accepted it. Yudi could not meet his eyes with rani he was feeling remorseful. Yudi was abhorrent to his inability to protect rani's dignity.😭

Yudi: hume maaf kardijiye'''''

Rani felt the pain behind those words, the misery she could feel in those words, nobody else surrounding them could experience. Rani understood those words meant for her but she could not reply in any desire way, she was helpless because she could not even lift her eyes and look into yudi's eyes.

Yudi: hume eetnaa utejit nahi hona chaahiye thaa'''

RS; theek hain kunvarji ayindaa se dhayaan rakhiye gaa'''..

CR was little disappointed but her arrow did not miss the target fully'.it did had done damage though carefully at the last moment yudi had salvage the situation.

CR: rani ab aap khadi kyun hain yaha par jayiye ''aur aap sab bhi jayiye yaha se '''.apnaa kaam kariye'''..aur kunvar'''.aap bhi vyatheet na hoyiye''.aisa ho jaataa hain'''..aur RB aap bhi apnaa gusaa chhod dijiye'''

RS: CRji theek kah rahi hain'''..

CR: achha kunvar ''.ab ees galti ke liye hum aapko RB ko manaane ke liye ek sujaav dete hain'''.aap oonko shaam ko shopping par le jayiye aur ek khubsurat shaam saath main bitaayiye''.😕

Yudi did not have any choice but to accept the suggestion.

Yudi: jo aagyaa chhoti maa'''.RBji aap shaam ko taiyaar rahiye gaa hum aap kaa intzaar karenge''..ab hum chalte hain hume pahele se hi bahut deri ho chuki hain'..warnaa shaam ko hum samay par nahi aa paayenge'''..

Yudi left the place dishearten and disappointed. CR was very delighted seeing yudi in despair. RB left to her room leaving RS and CR alone pondering on the yudi's state of mind.

RS: pataa nahi kunvar ko kyaa ho gayaa hain''..kabhi oonho ne aisa wartaav nahi kiyaa phir aaj achanak '''

CR: hume dukh ho rahaa hain aapko kahete huve lekin hum pichhli kuchh dino se dekh rahe hain''.kunvar kuchh badle badle se lag rahe hain''.

RS: hume bhi aisa hi lagtaa hain '''..hume baat karni hogi kunvar se'''.

In yudi's room:

Saksh was waiting for yudi in yudi's room, as he knew yudi must be very dejected and grief-stricken. Saksh did not want to leave yudi in that state of mind so he was waiting for yudi to return to his room.

Yudi entered his room, seeing saksh he could not control his grief.

Yudi: dekhaa aapne kis batmizzi se woh RBji , rani ke saath pes aa rahi thee'''.hum oonhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge oonki ye gustaakhi ke liye''..😡😡😡

Saksh: shaant ho jayiye kunvarji''.aaj agar aap baat ko mod nahi dete to gajab ho jaataa''

Yudi: saksh kabhi kabhi hume lagtaa hain''.hum chup rah kar 'aur apne rishte ko duniya se chhipaa kar rani ke saath naainsaafi kar rahe hain😭😭'''.kyunki har koi oonkaa apmaan kar deta hain.hum ye bardaast nahi kar shakte''..😭😭😭

Saksh: hum samajte hain aapki bhavnaao ko'''.lekin''samajdaari eesi main hain ki ees waqt sahi samay kaa intzaar kiyaa jaaye'

Yudi: lekin rani kyaa soch rahi hogi '.hum kuchh nahi kar paa rahe hain''.

Saksh: aap aisa mat sochiye kunvarji'..raniji bahut hi samajdaar hain'''who bakhubi jaanti hain ki aapke haath bandhe huve hain''..

Yudi: saksh ''.aaj oonki aankho main aanshu dekh kar ''humare dil main jaise davaanal jal rahaa thaa''..hum oonse milnaa chaahte hain..oonse baat karnaa chaahte hain''..saksh'''.oonse poochhnaa chaahte hain ki woh theek to hain naaaaa?😭😭😭

Saksh: kunvarji josh main mat aayiye'abhi josh kaa nahi honsh se kaam lene kaa waqt hain'''ees waqt raniji se milnaa maano'..musibat ko daavat denaa hain..aap dheeraj rakhiye ..hum kuchh naa kuchh sochte hain ees baare main''..ab aap taiyaar ho jayiye hum aapko niche milte hain''aur aap chinta mat kijiye'''sambhaliye apne aapko''..

In rani's room

Crestfallen and remorseful, rani rushed to her room. She was sobbing uncontrollably. She was agonized seeing yudi distress and helpless. The way yudi said 'hume maaf kar dijiye' she could very well understood he was asking forgiveness from her not from RS. Rani knew that in his room yudi must be going through trauma and because of her; he had to suffer all the misery. If she would have been careful, today yudi would not have reacted that way'...but it was useless crying on spilt milk. It was too late now but right now only one desire burning inside her was, to be with yudi and share his grief.

Lost in his deep thoughts, yudi was though sitting in the car with saksh, was too lost that it seems that he was in the other part of the world''''.saksh could feel yudi's distress but he did not think it was wise to disturb him more, so he kept quite leaving yudi alone with his own confusion.

Yudi soch rahaa thaa''''.aaj jo bhi kuchh huva mahal main ooske baare main'aur jitnaa jyaadaa woh soch rahaa thaa ootnaa hi woh apne aap main lagutam hone ki anubhuti kar rahaa thaa''''.kuchh nahi kar paayaa woh'rani ko beiijaat hote sirf dekhtaa rah gayaa..koshish bhi ki to pitaaji ke saamne woh'''..aise vivash ho gayaa jaise'''..suraj ke saamne chand'''.haaannnn'..aisa chand jo gurv se phoola nahi samaataa apni chaandni ko lekar''..aaj oose ahesaas ho rahaa thaa jise woh apni chaandni kah rahaa thaa dar asal woh to suraj ki oos par ki gayi huyi kripa thee'''.suraj ki woh aabhaa thee'''.ooskaa khudkaa kyaa thaa kuchh nahi..mautaaj thaa woh''''..suraj kaa''''.aur suraj ki man maani ke aage kahaa ooski chalti thee'''''.jab chaahaa suraj ne apni roshni dedi'..aur man huvaa to leli''''.aur jab suraj apni roshni chand se le letaa hain to''apne mithyaa abhimaan ko badhaavaa detaa huva gurv se apne aap ko amaas kaa chand banaa letaa hain'..'.

Aaj oose ahesaas ho rahaa thaa ki ooske pitaaji ke vyaktitva ke aage ooska koi vajood nahi thaa'''.agar aaj woh rani kaa saath nahi de paayaa kal ko jab rani kaa haath thaamne ki baari aayegi to'''woh kyaa'''amaas ke chand ke bhanti'.andhere main chhip jaayegaa ''''''??????????????😕

Beena 😆 you make me laugh in the morning..RB's ragging, Kali's joy and Saksh punishment(for being a deewana guy's frd).. All in all great.. Loved the way you ended it with Yudi thinking of his own individuality as opposed to his royal status..RS ...hateful as ever.. RB will always be as she is..Lovely..do continue..😊

Hey Beena,

Once again, excellent part!

Loved the way Yudi was irritating Bhoomi. Bichari Bhoomi ke paas aur koi raasta bhi nahin tha, she had to do what Yudi wanted her to do. And then, Bhoomi scolding Kali, LOL.

Also loved the end part, the way you have written about sun and moon and Yudi comparing his situation with the moon. Really loved it.

Also loved to see how well YuRa understand each other. Yudi cannot bear even a word of insult against Rani, and Rani, my god, the way you potray her character, just love it. She knows Yudi so well that she understood that Yudi was asking for forgiveness from her and not RS. Seriously, you so clearly show that how they are one from mind and soul. Just loved it. It is these small gestures that shows how much they love each other and how true their love is. Personally even I love these small gestures as oppose to big gifts and big surprises, which are mainly to show off. So I am just loving how ideally you are potraying YuRa and their love.

I am so glad that we have such creatives writers like you in this forum. Keep up the good work Beena! 👏

nice part..kali to satva aasman pe chal rahi thu..RB nim or karela ka juice😆.wobhi kali ke hatho se..the way yudi say sorry to rani that really touching heart..

Originally posted by: monu1101

Beena 😆 you make me laugh in the morning..RB's ragging, Kali's joy and Saksh punishment(for being a deewana guy's frd).. All in all great.. Loved the way you ended it with Yudi thinking of his own individuality as opposed to his royal status..RS ...hateful as ever.. RB will always be as she is..Lovely..do continue..😊

Beena you have a new part!! Excellent...this will make my morning 😃

If you hadn't posted in it just now I would have missed it..so many threads to go through these days!

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Hey Beena,

Once again, excellent part!

Loved the way Yudi was irritating Bhoomi. Bichari Bhoomi ke paas aur koi raasta bhi nahin tha, she had to do what Yudi wanted her to do. And then, Bhoomi scolding Kali, LOL.

Also loved the end part, the way you have written about sun and moon and Yudi comparing his situation with the moon. Really loved it.

Also loved to see how well YuRa understand each other. Yudi cannot bear even a word of insult against Rani, and Rani, my god, the way you potray her character, just love it. She knows Yudi so well that she understood that Yudi was asking for forgiveness from her and not RS. Seriously, you so clearly show that how they are one from mind and soul. Just loved it. It is these small gestures that shows how much they love each other and how true their love is. Personally even I love these small gestures as oppose to big gifts and big surprises, which are mainly to show off. So I am just loving how ideally you are potraying YuRa and their love.

I am so glad that we have such creatives writers like you in this forum. Keep up the good work Beena! 👏

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Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Beena you have a new part!! Excellent...this will make my morning 😃

If you hadn't posted in it just now I would have missed it..so many threads to go through these days!

Originally posted by: pop77

nice part..kali to satva aasman pe chal rahi thu..RB nim or karela ka juice😆.wobhi kali ke hatho se..the way yudi say sorry to rani that really touching heart..

yudi & rani both worry eachother..i really like the way U decribed chand & suraj..Rani yudi ke liye suraj ki sakti hai..i still thinking how yudi convey Rs aboout his relation with rani.. i hope shaksham make arrange meeting for both..

waiting for next part..