FF:ek tha raja ek thi rani VOL 1 - Page 3

awsome parts Beena..both parts you convey nikki's pain..ma and beti convo so good..you don't have to tell they understand themself...shaksham even gonna try to say nikki that he care for her..when yudi find out about rani..
waiting for next part!!!

awww, i really like mother daughter convo 👏 ...it was really sweet...also flashback scene was a good twist as to how she got paralyzed...no wonder king doesn't talk to his daughter...but that's still sad... 😭 can't wait till next part where we'll see yudi sees right RB...or not? 😉

Part7
When she left the room she was thinking what to do that can divert her mind from kunvarji and that letter in that thought she slipped and spill the lep on floor so she was cleaning there and in that process she heard the heart wrenching nikki's story. 😭
At the same moment she promised herself that she is going to become reason behind kunvarji's pain , she cannot change that destiny but she promised herself that she will try to bring happiness in nikkiji's life 😊 and her happiness can come if BR get well soon she will work hard for that will try all her knowledge about healing her and curing her and do seva with all devotion, 👏 and that is going to be her repent for the sin she has done . 😕
the sin she was thinking actually going to change so many lives around her she did not have slightest idea about it 😉 , the act she was thinking is sin, is actually going to become boon for many around her, as one lamp while burning give light to many around her without even realizing that how noble work it is doing . rani is being such a lamp going to give light to many around her.
Time has been passing very fast and guard bring news that RB and her family has arrived . they have been warmly welcomed by all the member of raj parivar. They did initial exchange of greetings.
In short time other guest also started arriving . the function hall has been decorated very beautifully, white and light pink roses were giving compliment to each other and silver ribbon was enhancing their beauty.. fresh flower's fragrance was increasing the charm of that evening . in one corner royal musician's were playing very melodious tune and all guest were enjoying with company of other lovely people.
Rajaji also could not hide his happiness today he was meeting all the guest and sharing his happiness. He was feeling proud father of yudi singing all glory story of yudi in front 😃 😃 of his friends.
He was feeling so proud on his son.who was always there to support him. He has never turn down his order. For rajvansh pride he has always stand with great courage . so his father has only good things to say about him. And in the moment kunvar and bhoomi arrive accompany by CR, rudra, bhavi. Saksh. And bhoomi's parents.
Both of them were looking stunning yudi who was wearing red shervani with golden jamevar brocket print with standing collar . and with white pant. That was giving compliment with white duppata and white pearl necklace. And bhoomi was wearing cream color ghagra choli with red beautiful stone and bead work , they were looking awsome. all the while bhoomi's head was cover with duppata.
They greet all guest and having casual talk . yudi's eyes were following where ever bhoomi was going his eyes has stuck on her . jaise kisi nishanbaz ki nazar nishan per jud jati he 😆 . Wo apni nazr apni honewali kismet se hata hi nahi paa raha tha 😉 , use ek ek bathta uva pal becheni de raha tha. Uski pyasi nazar bhoomi ke ek didar ke liye taras rahi thi.. jane barsat se phle pyasi dharti ki halat hoti he. Jaise more(peacock) barsat ke agman ki pratiksha karta he usi prakar yudi bhoomi ko ek nazar dekhna chah raha tha.
Sara sansar use sirf bhoomi me simat gaya lagta tha. Wo bahut hi khush tha ushki khushi ki koi sima nahi thi , jaisi uski kalpna thi vaisa hi uska pyar tha or wo pyar aaj uski jindagi ka sath banne jar aha tha. Uski duniya indradhanush(rainbow) ke sat rango se bhar jane wali thi. 😳 😕
Lekin usko kya maloom tha ki ushki har tammnaa ek sapne ki tarah tut jane wali he 😭 . Sapna aakhir sapna hi hota he. Jo ankhe khulte tut jata he. or uske tutne ki koi aavaj bhi nahi hoti leking uska dard nashur ki tarah hota he. in sab se anjan yudi bus apne hi sapno me khoya bhoomi ko apnea aaspas pake chahek raha tha.
Outside rani was trying to peep in to the hall and see the yudi's reaction her pulses are getting higher and higher as any moment lava can erupt. And looking her all nervous kali who catch her got idea " aaj isko me bada maza chakhati hu. Kitne dino se bach rahi he lekin aaj ise kon bachayega. Me isko function hall me sab ki seva me bhejati hu tab jub kunvarji isko denkhenge to rani ki badi beijjati hogi . or mere dil ko bada sukun milega tab jake."
Thinking that she asked rani to go inside and serv drinks to guest , rani was hesitant to go inside she tried her best but kali was amendment . rani was shivering with fear like little lamb. As kali was threatening her that if she does nto listen to her than she will call bhanu and she is like terror , she has no other option but to listen to kali.
She was about to enter the hall one dominating male voice came " kya ho raha he yaha"
Kali and rani both were shocked to their death listening this voice. " ab kya hoga"
He was nun other than kukhiyaji " kali kya bat he ? kya ho rahe idhar. Kyu rani ko dant rahi ho?"
Kali: wo to hum use sab maheman ka dhyan rakhne ko kah rahe he
Kushiyaji:ishki koi jaroort nahi he tum apne kam se kam rakho , dushroki bat me dakhal na do to tumhare liye achha rahega.
Than sykhiyaji asked rani that she has come to ask about BR right? And asked her to bring BR to function hall as per CR's instruction. Rani was relieved for time being as she got saved from kali thanks to sukhiyaji but what will happen when she will enter in function with br no body will able to save her as all will come to meet BR, and yudi will also come to take blessing from her mom so what will she do now?????

Beena kuay dusro ki nind bigad rahi hai..kal tak wait karna hoga..i really like your dailog wht rani thninking..

nahi yar aram se sona kal ka bade dhamake dar part he

thanks for appreciation, working very hard to improve as this is my first time effort to write something like this

Part 4 : Man...I was getting so tensed when Rauni and Yudi were walking towards each other!!!! Bahut badiya ssupsens buil kiyaa tumne Beena!!! It was great!

Part 5 : Ahhh, I feel for Nikki and Saksham. You have written this beautifully! I could feel Nikki and Saksham's pain!!! 😭 😭 Poor guys......and I love that Saksham tries to lighten the painful situations!!!

Part 6: Ahhhh Beena that was fantastic!!! That mother-duaghter convo was excellent!!!! And how I wish the creatives learn from you about BR talking in her mind!!!!!! They always show BR sitting there and simply talking with her eyes but why can't they show her feeling like she is talking in her mind??? That was an excellent idea!!!
And thanks for the flashback and what a logical explanation to BR getting a paralytic attck because of what happened to Niharika! 👏
Totally loved it!!

Part 7 : You explained Yudi's state beautifully!!! IIts really nice to see im sooo much in love with Bhoomi!!! But also sad to think what will become of this love the moment he knows Rani's truth!!!
Jaldi likhiye Beena, bahut suspense build kiyaa hai aapne!


Sorry Beena..........I have'ne been able to come to this section for the past 3 days, hence just catchin up today! 😊

thanks prag
i can understand we all arevery busy with our life but for me i always come to IF and mostly RKAB to wind up myself .
i also wanted them to show BR thinking something as right now we have no clue what is her character about like only expression is not explaining anything

i really like saksham and nikki pair hope they show somethig more about them than bhali(bhanu and kali)
thanks again to all of you.

hey beena, really great part 👏 ...esp. the way you wrote yudi's feelings toward bhoomi 😳 ...very well written...i guess it's true what they say Love hurts 😭 ...and its yudi who will be hurt most cuz he was entangled with this mess with no intention...hope he decides to share the shock coming his way with someone...otherwise knowing him, he'll be all bold as how king should be....let's see what happens.. 😉



==Nishi==

yes agree love is the feeling thatis like rolar coaster 😉 it has it's highs and lows and it hurts though we are aware of this truth we don't get afraid to take this pain 😆
thanks dear

engagement will it take place??
Part 8

Rani was with BR . she was pushing her wheelchair and going towards function hall. She was totally dazed .her mind was not giving her support . she was unable to think anything . the moment she was about to enter function hall CR stopped her and told her to go and give food to nikki as she will take BR to function hall.
Jaisi kisi ne hiran ko shikari ke chungal se bacha liya ho. Rani ko apne kano pe yaki nahi ho raha tha. Use laga jese aaj bhagban ne CR ke roop me aake use yudi ki nafrat bhari nigaho se bacha liyahe. 😭
Jaise CR apne sath BR ko leke hall me aayi sab BR se milne gaye . yudi bhi apni ma ka arshiward lene ke liya gaya .
Ab wo pal nazdik thi jiska yudi ko kitni beechen rato or dino se intzar tha 😳 😳 or ab ye intzar uske bas ke bahar tha. 😆
Saksh yudi ki becheni ko dekh raha tha mehesoos kar raha tha. Kyunki kahi na kahi wo bhi to bechen that ki nikki is khushi ke moke pe yaha nahi he or wo khud yaha is khushi ka aanand le raha tha or waha woe akeli apne dookh par ro rahi hongi
Raja ji ne deri na karte yudi or bhoomi ke engagement ki announcement ki

Raja: me aaj bahut khush hu ke hamara beta aaj apni ek nayi duniya basa ne ja rahe he. Aaj tak usne bete , bhai , kunvar hone ka farz ada kiya he or hame pakka yakin he ki wo jivan sathi ka farz bhi bakhubi nibhayega
CR gave ring to yudi . yudi was all happy or uski ankhe jaise kahe rahi ho abhi to sapno ki rani aapna chahera dikha do jis ke liye hum taras rahe he.
Uska chahera jai se uski juba bol raha ho .CR ko uski dil ki aavaz pahonch gayi.

CR: thahariye pahele is chand ko to badal se bahar aane do. Kab se hamare kunvar chand ko dekhne ke liye taras rahe he. 😳
Hall feeled with laughter and yudi has no word to say anything 😳

Uski to dil ki murad puri ho rahi thi 😍 . Jaise sara aasman uske dil me simat gaya tha . jaise phoolo se khila chaman uske dil ko maheka raha ho. Uske dil ki dhadkan jai se bekabu ho rahi thi. Chand ko dekhne ke liye jaise chakor betab na ho raha ho or jal ke bager jaise machhali tadp na rahi ho . aisa hal yudi ka tha. 😳
CR ne jab bhoomi ka ghungat uthaya ………………
😭 😭 😭 …yudi was shocked out of his death. Jaise ek dhadam se bijli giri ho uske dil pe 💔 or ankho ke samne andhera na chha gaya ho. He was crestfallen😭. Sari duniya uske aspas gol gol phir rahi thi. Use apni ankho pe yakin na ho raha tha ki wo kya dekh raha tha😭. Wo aiesa boot sa khada tha jaise kissine usme se jan na nikal di ho. Sara shama use dhundhla sa lag raha tha. Wo apne aap ko simat ne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki use pata tha sari nazre us per jami hui he.

Lekin kya karta wo?. Yaki nahi ho raha tha ki jis chahere ko dekhne ke liye wo puri tarah kitni rate so nahi paya kyoki wo chahera samne se hat nahi raha tha. Uska dil joro se dhadkne laga ke ye koi mazak ho raha he ushke sath.. Ek sundar sa sapna tut rahaho apne ankho ke samne.🥺 Koi khanzar chala raha ho dil pe or jo dard nikalta he or chikh bhi nahi pa raha tha. Uski nighahe dhundh rahi thi jise wo kahi nahi thi uske samne. Or jo thi wo badi anjani si thi.

Honsh na tha yudi ke dil or dimag ke bich me jaise jung chhid gayatha or dimag jai se soon sa ho gaya tha. Samaj sath nahi de rahi thi ki kya kare.
Sab log dekh rahe the use lekin uske dil me jo tufan umad raha tha useka kisi ko andaza bhi na tha.

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CR: lagta he bhoomi ki khoobsurti dekh ke kunvarji to jaise duniya ko bhool gaye.ab aap sirf unko dekhte hi rahenge ya anghuthi bhi pahnayenge.

ab is pal kya karta wo he was as dead as doornail.he was just rooted to the spot.he was feeling knife of pain and betrayal. but he has to act fast before it's too late and ...............

P.S. :hope you will also feel the pain yudi is going through , as i felt it while writing😭

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