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Posted: 17 years ago

thank you rakhie and thanks pinstripedshirt for your love through your lovely comments..........

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Part: 44

The way nikki and saksh's car was speeding towards temple their thoughts were also trying to reach it's destination, that they also did not know.

Oonke beech ki gaheri khaamoshi aaj oonke dil ke bandh darwaaje khol rahi thee. Jo kaam hilte labo ne na kiya woh bandh juban karne ki koshish kar rahi thee.

In the farm house:

After talking to nikki , yudi who was constantly gazing rani ,searched her face in an attempt to read her thoughts. And rani who could not take the heat of this gaze was trying to steal look from the corner of her eyes'''''silence was killing them but they were waiting for each other to break this silence''''..

From nikki's talk yudi understood the reason behind rani's apprehensive behavior and his heart filled with more respect and love towards her, as rani who alone endure all the pain to fulfill the word she gave to yudi's sister. If rani could have wished she would have broken all the promise to get her love yudi but rani did not do that, instead she sacrificed all her happiness for yudi and his family.

The silence was killing them but nobody did any attempt to break it, however without talking their eyes were revealing their emotions. Yudi was standing very near to rani, and their eyes were stuck on each other''''when their silence became unbearable both spoke at same time''..

Rani: kunvarji ''''.and : yudi:rani'''''.

Both smiled and stopped in midway , yudi signed rani, raising his eyebrow, to go ahead with whatever she wanted to say.

Rani: kunvarji''.hume kshamaa kijiye''..

She stopped to see yudi's reaction but yudi signed her to continue.

Rani: humne aap ke dil ko bahut dukhaya'''oos din humne aapke saath bahut hi bura vyavhaar(behave) kiya''''aur hume bahut bura lag rahaa hain ki humari vajah se aapke dil ko thes pahunchi'''..

Yudi gently wrapped his left arm around Rani's waist and pulled her towards him, while caressing her cheek with right hand.

Yudi: ye achchhi rit hain aapki pahele zakham do phir kshamaa kaa marham lagao'''badi jaalim adaa apnaayi hai app hurjaayi ne.

Rani: lekin'''..

Yudi kept her finger on her lips while tightening the grip on her soft waist.

Yudi: itna kuchh saheti rahi akeli?...........aapne to hume paraaya kar diya aisa karke'''.shaayad aapko hum par bharosa nahi hain ya humare pyaar par vishwaas nahi hain''..

Rani: nahi kunvarji''''..

Yudi: agar aisi baat nahi hain to ek baar humse aake kaheti apni majboori ke baare main'''

While talking to rani yudi's finger was traveling on rani's various body part it took the root from cheeks to neck ,neck to shoulder and going from arm to its last destination rani's soft long fingers. Yudi while keeping his grip on Rani's waist took Rani's left hand's fingers in his right palm and squeezed it with deep passion. His longing for rani's unconditional love was deeply visible in his thirsty eyes.

Yudi: kyaa hum nahi samajte aapki majboori ''.kyaa humaara pyaar itna kamzor hai ki hum aapka saath nahi dete'''abhi to kitni saari kasautiya aayengi humare pyaar main''''hum saari musibato kaa saamnaa aapka haath humare haath main rakh kar karnaa chaahte hain''''

Yudi brought rani's right hand near his face and placed the gentle kiss on her palm. Unable to bear increasing closeness between them rani moved her head and closed her eyes in anticipation to get hold of her uncontrollably pounding heart. Yudi slowly lift her head towards him and looking directly in her eyes asked her.

Yudi: jaanti hain kisi bhi rishte ki pratham(first) sidi(step) kyaa hoti hain.

Rani(with soft but clear tone) : ji

Yudi: kya?

Rani(keeping her voice very low and keeping eye contact with yudi): vishwas(trust)

Yudi: phir bhi aapne hum par vishwaas karnaa jaroori nahi samajaa ''''

Rani lowered her eyes ''''..

Yudi: hum aapse shikaayat nahi kar rahe hain'''.hum jaante hain.aap hume dukhi nahi dekh shakati eesi wajah se aap ne humse kuchchh nahi kahaa''''lekin kyaa aap jaanti hain aap humari saanso main, yado mai, khwaabo main, man , aatmaa aur eeraado main basi huyi hain'''''aur aise main agar aap humse bina koi kaaran doori badhati hain''to humaara to jina dushwaar hain'''..to hum aise bhi dukhi hote hain'''.jaanti hain aapke bina hum apne jeevan ki kalpana bhi nahi kar shakte''''.

He took her face in her both palm and gazing those two beautiful brown innocent eyes .

Yudi: aap jaanti hain humara dil aapka naam leke dhadakataa hain''.har ek dhadkan aapka naam pukaarti hain'..sunanaa chahegi'''''? Humaaraa dil kyaa kaheta hain?

He slowly kept rani's head on his chest. She buried her face in his broad chest'..rani lost herself for a while keeping rhythm with his heart beat''''.'jaise oon dono ke dil taal se taal mila rahe ho aur pyaar ka madhur geet sunaa rahe ho'

Yudi: chaliye ab hum sunanaa chahte hain aap kaa dil kya kaheta hain.kya woh bhi humaara naam leke dhadaktaa hain'''''..

He tried to keep his head on her heart but rani 'sharmaa ke paas khade khambe se apnaa sir tikaa kar apne aap main simat gayi'

Yudi came near her and stood behind her. Rani felt his nearness as his breath was touching her bare skin. Yudi from behind locked his finger with rani's and wrap their hands in front of rani's body crossing against her body, he slowly rested his chin on her shoulder and she leaning back rest her head on his chest. Both were facing same direction. Their cheeks were touching each other's , yudi rub his cheek slowly with rani's soft cheek and that friction send the strong sensational feeling through out her body. The passing current through rani's body was also making yudi's hormones go wild'..the heat was crossing it's limit that both of them could take it'''.they were melting in that passionate embrance.

they were lost in their own dream world yudi turned rani slowly towards him ,placing his hand on her neck .rani could see the thirst of love in his eyes, unable to fightback the emotions that have taken control over them , rani lowered her eyes , ready to surender herself in yudi's arm. but yudi was sensible enough to understand that not to cross any undesirable limit. tried to control his all senses those were going haywired he tried to shift his attention '''somewhere else and his eyes fell on the gift that nikki had kept for rani.

Yudi: rani

Rani: hmmmmmmm

Yudi: dekhte hain nikki ne aapke liye kyaa tohfaa rakhaa hain''..

Yudi slowly lead rani towards the sofa where in pink plastic bag nicely wrapped packet had been kept. Yudi made rani sit on sofa and ask her to open that box.

Rani was fascinated seeing that beautifully packed box. She slowly opened that box and in her eyes wide opened when she saw beautiful light orange saree with silver embroidery and silver sequence border on it. When she took out, she was surprised to see matching elegant kundan necklace with long earrings placed in one box. Nikki had kept matching bangles and payal also with all other accessories.

Yudi: rani aaj humare dil main ek tamaanaa ooth rani hain ye tohfaa dekh kar'.kyaa aap puri karengi'''

Rani raised her eyebrows and asked him what his desire was.

Yudi: hum aap ko aaj ees pure shrigaar main sajaa huvaa dekhna chaahte hain'''..kyunki''.ye mahal main sambhav nahi hain..pataa nahi aaj humaaraa man aapko '''.ek dulhan ki taraha shringaar kiya huva dekhna ki liye bechen ho raha hain'''.kyaa aap humari ichchhaa puri karenge?🥰

PS:ok friends i know i am not good at all writing romance .....but even though i have taken risk so please tell me how is it , as i am trying to improve but need your suggestions for that .thanks...........
Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Beena what are you saying???!!! not good at romance???!!!
It's fantastic!!!! I could imagine the whole thing in my mind when I was reading it...too good!!!!!Thumbs%20Up👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks dear but i think you have to read it again as i have little bit edited in last part as i felt it was to sudden shift of their attention and i myself was not happy so i changed a bit
thanks for those lovely compliment i am really thankful but whenever i try to write romance it takes my lots of time to put down things but really i am trying hard to learn
thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
wooow you done a great job beena , i loved it really , keep going
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank you very much dear for loving it,,,i hope you all have enjoyed it the way i have enjoy while writing it and as for that i have to imagine situation and the way i have conect myself with our dear yura i hope some how i might have able to conect you people to at some extent not full though
thank you very much
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Beena! it was fantastic! keep it going! good work!!
thankss!!
bsingapury thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks you very much dear i was nervous when i posted it but thanks to all of you for liking it
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Posted: 17 years ago
Beena (I hope you don't mind me calling you that)....wow!! I was just flicking up the page and read a couple of lines which caught my attention... 😜 🥰
So now my mission for the weekend has diverted to reading this...it will keep me busy! (and if the couple of lines I read are anything to go by, I will be daydreaming a lot...🥰 🥰
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Posted: 17 years ago
beena after i read edit my comment..as usaual going be awsome part..

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