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Posted: 17 years ago

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When rani came out of the yudi's room she was startled to see nikki standing outside. Rani did not imagine that what would she do now? nikki must be very upset seeing her here.😭

Nikki: rani tum yaha?

Rani: kshaama kar dijiye nikkiji, lekin hum apne aap ko rok nahi paaye. Kunvarji ke haatho main chont lagi thee….aur😳

Nikki: hum jaante hain bhaiya ko chont klagi thee…hum wohi dekhna aaye the ki bhaiya kaise hain.

Rani: woh so rahe hain.lekin humne oonhe davai lagaa di hain…….hume maaf kardijiye humne apnaa waadaa todaa lekin humse oonkaa dard bhi dekhaa naa gayaa…lekin aap chinta mat kijiye oonhe nahi maloom ki hum kamare main aaye the…….woh oothe oos se pahle hum kamare se bahaar chale aaye……….😭

Tears were rolling down from rani's eyes. Nikki wiped those tears with her hand and look at rani who was in pain because yudi was in pain.😳 "chont yudi ko lagi thee lekin saaf dikhai de rahaa thaa ki dard rani ko ho rahaa thaa. Kaisa ye pyaar thaa oon logo ka?"

😭

Nikki: aap chinta mat kijiye. Hum aapse naaraax nahi hain.aue ab rona bandh kijiye hum dekhte hain bhaiya ko.aur aap bhi jaake so jayiye.😳

Rani felt very relaxed hearing those word of sympathy. She went back to her room satisfied.😳

Nikki went inside yudi's room and now yudi was awake because he felt that someone was in his room and he felt that his hand was wet with tiny droplets.

Yudi: kaun hain?

Nikki: bhaiya who hum nikki hain. Aap ko dekhna aaye the ki aap ke haatho ki chont ab kaisi hain.

Yudi: hum theek hain nikki aap jaake so jayiye.

But when yudi saw bandage on his hand he was puzzled.😕

Yudi: ye patti aapne baandhi hai nikki.

Nikki fumble on this question but she answer in affirmative though yudi could nto understand why he was feeling rani's presence there.

Yudi: thanks..ab hum theek hai aap jayiye.😭

Nikki left the room leaving puzzled yudi behind. Yudi could sense those water droplets on his hand and wondering how those came on his hand. His heart was telling that those were tears and he could feel rani's soft and caring touch. He took his hand near " jaise woh oon aanshuo se puchh rahaa ho ki kau si aankho se ooska dard dekh kar chir pade the. Oos kaa dil kah rahaa thaa ki saare mahal main sirf ek hi vyakti hai jo oos ke dard main ro shkataa hain. Aur woh rani hain lekin aaj who dard to oosi ne hi diyaa thaa…..aur ab marhum lagaake gayi hain…kya hai ye? Pahele dard do phir davayi do………jaroor koi baat hain……….ab muje kuchh karnaa padegaa………ab dekho rani mai kya kartaa hoo…..aurto ki kamzori hai,…………woh kisi bhi baat ko sah legi lekin apne pyaar ko kisi aur ki baaho main nahi sah paayegi…………..ab dekhtaa hoo tum kaise humse door raheti ho…….main ab woh hathiyaar istmaal karoonga jo sadiyo se aurto ko kamzor banaataa aaya hai……..aur who hai..oonki dusri aurat ke prati jalan"😉

Deciding that yudi had very satisfied smile on his face and he had got chance to harass rani , as rani has make yudi run after her a lot so now this was small game for rani from yudi. Yudi thought now rani will understand how painful it is when your loved once ignore you and play with your emotions. 😕

Next day yudi was getting ready in his room and saksh came to give him message that CR has given him to passed to yudi.

Saksh: kunvarji.woh cCRJI ne…………(but when he saw bandage on yudi's hand he stopped in middle and cange his question)……are ye aap ke haath ko kya huva.

Yudi looked at his hand and touch that bandage.

Yudi: woh humari raniji hai naa…oonki hi meharbaani hain…….

Saksh was confused hearing this as he knew that rani was ignoring yudi so something might have happen between two of them but yudi did not sound that sad either so what might have happen? Might be rani met him? did rani broke her promise that she gave to nikki? There were many questions so saksh was looking at ydi with confusion.

Yudi: are kuchh nahi lagtaa hain raniji ne hume paresaan karne ke liye kuchh naya tarikaa dhundh liya hain.pahele chont do phir aake marham do.

Saksh: lekin kya huva who batlaayenge aap?

Yudi: woh kitne dino se humse mili nahi jab humne oonse kal poochha to kuchh pataa nahi kya bol ne lagi…….humaari samaj main kuchh nahi aaya.

Saksh: kya kahaa oonhone?

Yudi: yahi ki agar sab ko pataa chalegaa to log oon par ongliyaa othaayenge. Hume to koi kuchh nahi kahegaa. Oonke chartitra par daag lagegaa😕

Saksh: baat to sahi hai oonki……….agar ek aur se dekhaa jaaye to.

Yudi: hum jaante hainlekin woh baat humse aachhe se milke bhi ho shakti thee naa….pahele hume bahut cussa aaya..hum dhukhi bhi huve aur wahi gusse main humare haanth par chont lagi…………achha huva hume pataa to chala woh hume kitna chaahti hain………😳

Saksh: woh kaise?

Yudi: woh raat ko chupke se aake marham lagaake chali gayi oonhe lagaa hume pataa nahi chalegaa lekin oonke aanshoo ne oonki chori hume bataa di jo oonki aankho se humare haatho par ghir gaye……….kher chhodiye .oonhe to hum ab achhaasa sabak shikhlaayenge………(yudi had mischievous smile on yudi's face)………….ab aap bataaye aap kyaa kah rahe the.😉

Saksh: haa who CR ne aapko oon ke kamare main boolaayaa hain..lagtaa hain aaj woh RB aane waali hain naa oonke baare main hi kuchh hogaa.

Yudi: oh aaj oho aane waali hain oonke saath to hume bahut saari baate karnihain….gumne jaanaa hai………😆

Saksh: kya? Ye kya kah rahe hain.kya ho gayaa hain aapko ?😃

Yudi: haa bhai humari shaadi jo home waali hain oonse…😆

Saksh: aap ki koi baat humari samaj main nahi aa rahi lagataa hain aap bhi.kuchh plan banaa rahe hainrani ko sataane kaa😃

Both of them laughed on that.😆

Yudi: kuchh aisa hi samaj lijiye..lekin saksh ..hum saaraa din RB ke saath nahi rah shakte warnaa hum hi paagal ho jaayenge..😆oonke saath……dopahar tak kuchh na kuchh bahaana karnaa hoga………aur yaha se gaayab hona hoga………….aap kuchh soch lijiye…….chaliye hum jaate hain aur pitaji aur CR se mil lete hain.

In CR's room where king was also there with CR.

Yudi: pranam chhoti maa.

CR: aayiye kunvar……hum aap kaa hi intzaar kar rahe the.

Yudi: kahiye CR hum kyaa kar shakte hain aapke liye.

CR: aapko to maloom hi hain aaj RB aane waali hain………

Yudi: ji ……….(in his mind he was thinking"kaise bhool shakte hain oonhi se bhaagne ka program soch rahe hain")😉

CR: to hum chahte hain aap oonke saath jyaa waqt bitaaye….aap office naa jaaye aaj.

Yudi: lekin chhoti maa……….

CR: kyaa baat hain kunvar aap kuchh kahenaa chaahte hain

Sakks: who CRJI aaj kunvarji ki bahut important meeting hain …….jis project pe woh kaam kar rahe hain oonke sil sile main……….aur aaj oonhe praajaa ko bhi milnaa hain dopahar ko kuchh samsyaa hai jinke baare main apnaa sujaav denaa hai,…………

CR: to ye sab aap kal bhi kar shakte hain………

Yudi: lekin .humaare client kal tak nahi rahenge badi mushkil se aaj ki appointment mili hain…………apni niji zindagi ke liye hum company kaa nukshaan nahi kar shakte . aur prajaa kaa bhi problem hame solve karnaa hainwoh bichaare humari wajah se kyun mushkil main rahe………😉…ohir hum jaldi se ye sab nibtaa kar poori shaam bhoomi ke saath rahenge…….to dono ka kaam ho jaayegaa…….agar aap theek samaje……

King: shaabash kunvar………….hume aap pe naaaz hain..aap apni niji zindagi ke saath apne praajaa aur company ke prati apni ..farz nahi bhoole………..hume ye soon kar achhaa lagaa……….CR..ek achhe raja home ki yahi nisaani hoti hain ki apni khwayisho ko puri karne ke liye woh apne farz ko nazar andaaz nahi kare…………👏

Aur jis tarah se kunvar aap dono ko balance kar rahe hain hum bahut khushi hui👏

CR: (with disappointing smile) haa Rajaji ……hume bhi bahut khushihuyi ,,,,,ki kunvar apnaa kartavya bhalibhati samajte hain.

Rajaji: jaiye kunvar apnaa kaam kijiye aur baad main RB ko bhi samay dijiy..jite rahiye…..

Yudi: achhaa hum chalte hain abhi…….

Nikki was worried that still saksh had not given her proofs and now it had become very difficult to handle yudi and rani………..whatever happened yesterday had made nikki think carefully before taking any action and that was the reason she was desperately waiting for those proofs………..

She could very well see that rani was very caring and loving towards her brother and rani was taking good care of her mother and rani was helping each and everyone with smile. When Nikki heard that RB had arrived, so she decided to spend some time with RB, in that way Nikki could understand what kind of person RB is.

RB was going towards yudi's room to meet him and on her way to yudi's room niki met RB.

Nikki: bhabhi kaisi hai aap?

RB: hum theek hain . aap kaise hain?

Nikki: hum bhi theek hain. Aap bhaiya se milne jaa rahi thee?

RB: aur kis se milne ki hume itni jaldi ho shakti hai(she smiled)

Nikki: ha ye bhi baat sahi hain.lekin

RB: lekin kya?

Nikki: bhaiya kamare main nahi hain…..woh office chale gaye.

RB: kya? (she did not like this and it was visible from her face that she was annoyed hearing this ).aise kaise kar shakte hain who humare saath?

Nikki: koi jaroori meeting thee oonki lekin waadaa kar ke gaye hain ki jaldi hi aaa jaayenge.

RB: humse bhi jaroori kyaa ho shktaa hain oonke jivan main………..hume nahi achha lagaa….hum oonki hone waali patni hain.aur humse jyaada who apne kaam ko mahtvaa de rahe hain.ye koi baat hoyi………😕

Nikki did not like RB's possessive attitude. More ever RB's authoritive tone also disturbed nikki.🤢

Nikki: haa aap ki baat to sahi hain …oonhe aapko samay denaa chaahiye …eesiliye woh jaldi aa rahe hain…….

RB: oh to jaise ahesaan kar rahe hain hum par…….kher hum apne kamare main chalte hain……

And when RB turned to go to her room she did nto realized that dinukaka was standing behind them carrying glasses in tray………and was going to give her but before dinukaka could do something RB turned and her hand touched to tray and water fell on floor and little on RB's saree. Already upset RB was more irritated by this .😡

RB: ye kyaa batmizi hain……..dikhai nahi de rahaa hai aapko…….

Dinukaka: kshamaa kijiye RBji hum se bhool ho gayi.😭

RB: bhool humari saaree kharaab ho gayi aur agar kaam nahi hota hai to dafaa ho jayiye yaha se.

Nikki did not like the way RB was talking to dinukaka.

Nikki: bhabhi aap aise dinukaka se baat na kijiye…who mahal ke sabse buzurg sadsya hain.

RB: buzurg ………agar budhhe ho gaye hain aur kaam nahi hota to apne ghar jaake bethe….kyun yaha aake muft ki rotiyaa todte hain.

Nikki: bhabhi aap ye kya kah rahi hain

RB: hum theek kah rahe hain..aie log ko hum achhi tarah se pahechaante ahin……kaam hota nahi aur sympathy ki wajaha se hum log aise logo ko nikaalte nahi …..ooskaa hi ye log faaydaa othaa te hain.lekin humare aane ki deri hai ees mahal main hum sab badal denge………

RB to dinukaka: ab kya yahi humare sar par hi khade rahenge……..saaf kijiye ye sab….aur apni shakl mat dikhaayie hume……

Telling those hurting word RB left ……….disappointed nikki asked forgiveness from dinukaka behalf of RB. ………..when nikki was going she heard rani's voice she as talking to dinukaka so nikki stopped in her way to see.

Rani: dinukaka, aap theek to hain na?

Dkaka: ha bitiya hum theek hain…..

Rani: aap jayiye hum saaf kar dete hain.

Dkaka: nahi bitiya….hum kar denge(dkaka had tear in his eyes ……..as no one had talked to him in this insulting manner in this palace)

Rani: kaka apni bitiya ki baat nahi maanege……….aapki tabiyet bhi theek nahi hai aap jaake aaraam kijiye hum sab saaf kardenge….haaa aur…..dookhi mat hoyiye………woh kunvarji RB se mile bina chale gaye na eesi wajah se who thoda dookhi hain…eesi liye who gussa ho gayi…………aap baat dil se mat lagayiyega…………

Dkaka: bitiya………….tum humesa sab ki madad karti ho ……….kisi main bhi tumhe koi burai nazar nahi aati…tumhaaraa dil jal ki taraha saaf aur nirmal hain…bhagvan tumhe jaroor ooska phal degaa😳

Rani smiled on that and started to clean floor, and looking at her Nikki was also pleased………..she was feeling proud on her brother's choice. 😳Now Nikki understood that his brother had found gem as life partner who was exactly like yudi, he was also very loving and caring towards all, yudi also could not see anyone in pain. However, RB's behavior had feel nikki's mind with bitterness.

Yudi came from the office after lunch and mentally he was prepared with the plan to made rani jealous so rani also could taste the medicine rani had given to yudi. However it was difficult for yudi to behave that way going out of his character but he had to do this, otherwise he knew that rani would not open her mouth. 😉

The moment he entered the palace , he found bhoomi waiting for him anxiously though it was odd yudi went to her and apologized to RB, but Yudi's eyes was looking for rani so he could start his drama. Yudi knew that rani must be there any moment as he was aware of Rani's nature that rani always keep eye on yudi by hiding. 😆Hiding was Rani's favorite game and by doing that rani had tortured yudi, a lot in past and right now also she is playing the same game, but now yudi had also started to learn how to find her.

And yes yudi was right about rani, the moment rani hear that yudi had come back from office she came running to see him. Actually she wanted to have look weather yudi is all right or not, because yesterday yudi was hurt and in pain. Rani wanted to see Yudi's hand also and thinking that she would only have a look from behind the curtain that yudi is doing well or not and than she would go back to her work. Since morning, she was desperate to see yudi, as she was worried about him a lot; because the way yudi was choked with emotion yesterday, it was painful for rani too.😳

Yudi's eyes were looking around the living room and all the curtain, he knew that rani loved to hidi behind curtain and that was the reason he was looking very carefully but when RB saw him doing so.

RB: kise dhoondh rahe hai aao?

Yudi: nahi kisi ko nahi.

RB: to idhar oodhar kyaa dekh rahe hain aap?

Yudi: woh …….woh to hum soch rahe the ki koi nahi hain mahal …..koi dikhayi nahi de rahaa hain…….😉

RB: kyun hum hain naa aap ke paas .

Yudi: haa who to hai…lekinCR, nikki…….sab koi dikhayi nahi diya eesliye

RB: woh CRji kuchh kaam se bahaar gayi hain aur niki apne kamare mainhain………hum apne kamare main bore ho rahe the eesi wajah se aap kaa yaha intzaar kar rahe the…….

Yudi thought " achhaa huvaa aap yahi thee, aapne humaara kaam aashaan kar diya"

Suddenly yudi saw the curtain moving near corridor and carefull he looked towards there he could see rani's hand as yudi could identify rani's bangles very well and her soft hand too.😳

Yudi: aap humaara intzaar kar rahi thee?

RB: nahi to kyaa aap ke bina ees mahal main humaara dil nahi lagtaa.

Yudi: aapke bagair humaaraa bhi dil kahaa lagtaa hai…..ees mahal main……😕

Rani was going back to BR"S room when she saw yudi with RB but when she heard yudi's those word for RB she could not stop herself but to listen more………😉it felt strange to rani why yudiis behaving like this. Allof sudden what had happen to yudi as he looked more compose and fine not the way rani had imagine that he should be,………..seeing rani evedropping their conversation yudi was feeling very happy that his plan was working. There fore he started for more.😆

RB: kyaa aap sach kah rahe hain…

Yudi: ha..hum sach kaha rahe hain……….suna suna lagtaa hain ye mahal aap ke bina.

RB: (she was flatter to hear those word from yudi's mouth abd surprised also as she did not even her dream thought that yudi would talked to her like this) hume yakin nahi hota humare kano par…………….to phir aisa hain tp aap humse mile bina subha office kyun chale gaye(with fake anger)

Yudi: kyaa kare majboor the kaam jo nibtaanaa thaa…………..warnaa humaaraa to man hi nahi thaa office jaane kaaa

RB: sach? …………..to nahi jaate

Yudi: agar nahi jaate to sab ko lagtaa hum aap ke pyaar main pagal ho rahe hain…….deevaane ho rahe hain………(yudi hold RB's hand he was feeling uncomfortable doing this but he was watching rani also from corner of his eyes and he could sense that rani was getting distress by his behavior)😉

RB: hume yakin nahi ho rahaa apne kano par achanak……….

Yudi: yakin to hume bhi nahi ho raha ki hume kya ho gayaa hain. Jabse aap gayi hain sirf aapke baare main hi soch rahe the………..aap ke jaane ke baad hume pataa chalaa hum aapko kitna miss karte hain……..

RB: hum bhi aapko kitna miss karrahe the……….(she tried to go near to yudi but yudi cleverly kept her bit away from him)😆………….lekin aapne hum eek phone bhi nahi kiya

Yudi: to aap phone kar shakti thee…….apne bhi nahi kiya(he thought thank god you also did not call as I am not interested to talk to you but he was taking care of his expression)😉

RB: aapke bagair hum to apne jivan ki kalpana bhi nahi kar shakte………

Yudi: hum bhi………aap nahi jaanti kitne khush hain hum kal se ki aap aaj aane waali thee…….khushi ke mare hum so bhi nahi paaye……….aur office mani bhi poora samay humaara man yaha aapke paas hi thaa………hum tan se bhale hi office main the lekin man se hum yahi aapke paas the…………..

Yudi could see, while listening all this rani was very angry and hurt. Rani was pulling curtain and twisting it with her hand……… Yudi was enjoying Rani's frustration as yesterday rani had tortured him a lot………….so it was paying back time for her…..however yudi was also feeling sad that he had to hurt rani that way but rani had not kept any option open for him…………. rani always keep taking exam of Yudi's patience . yudi knew that when rani would see him flurting with RB she would definetly feel jealous and come to meet him.😉

RB: are kunvarji ye aap ke haatho ko kyaa huvaa? Aapki baato main humaaraa to dhyan hi nahi rahaa ki aap ko haath par chont lagi hain.

Yudi: kuchhnahi mamulisa jakham hain…………who hum aap ke khayaalo mai itne khoye huve the ki paas padaa vase hum enazar hinahi aaya.

RB: kunvarji(with lots of affection RB kissed his hand though yudi felt uncomfortable with RB's this gesture…………but when he saw rani came out behind the curtain and was very distress, yudi thought his plan was working the way he wanted it.)😕

Rani was furiouse seeing all this and her face was etched with sorrow when RB kissed yudi's hand. Rani's eyes reddened and turned moist. Rani could not understand what had happened to yudi and why suddenly he was behaving like this. 😕In her dream, rani had not imagine that yudi could do this to her. So what she was not talking to him and not meeting to him. how could yudi change over night and romantically talking to RB. Rani could not bare to see yudi with other woman, so what he was engaged to RB, but yudi loved rani…so according to rani yudi should not say or behave like this with RB.

RB: are kunvarji aap achanak kahaa kho gaye….chaliye hum aapke kamare main jaake baat karte hai,

Yudi: nahi nahi…..kamare main nahi(yudi did not want to be alone with RB though he was pretending right now to be in deep love with RB. He could not take risk as RB could get more personal if they are alone in room and he did nto want that to happen that could put him in any embarrassment situation)🤢

RB: to kyaa yahi khade rah kar humare saath ishq ladaane kaa khayaal hain.

Yudi:(thought in his mind"aapse ishq ladaane kaa hume koi shokh nahi hain.humaari majboori hain):😆 nahi hum aaj long drive par jaayenge aur phir……….kisi restaurante main candle light dinner karenge kyaa khayaal hain?

RB was on top of the world hearing Yudi's proposal. RB got all the happiness she did not even dream about. Immediately she accepted that wonderful offer and asked yudi to wait for her while she could go and get ready.

Now this was the last straw to fall, rani could not bear anymore, she ran from there crying……..yudi got restless when he saw tear in Rani's eyes he was hurt that he had to do that with rani……😭……..

Nikki who was watching all this drama from balcony could not understand weather she should laugh on yudi and Rani's this play or she should cry that she was the reason behind their suffering. Now Nikki was getting very angry on saksh that he could not even finish one work on time……………..and saksh had not met Nikki after that day. Nikki was not restlessly waiting for saksh and wanted to go on some decision, as she could not see her brother in pain.😭

In the evening when saksh got all the proof against RB, he was happy that now he could hand over to Nikki and hopefully Nikki after seeing those photographs realized that rani is more suitable to yudi than RB.

When saksh hand over those photographs to Nikki, she was disgusted seeing RB carrying alcohol glass in one hand and another hand was cigarette. In other photographs, RB was dancing with other boys very indecently. Nikki was heart broken seeing all those RB's photographs. Whatever happened in the morning with Dinukaka, nikki was already upset with that and now after seeing those photographs she was sure that RB was nothing but spoilt brat and if she would come to Yudi's life , than Yudi's life would be miserable. This was the last thing Nikki could see happening in his brother's life.

Nikki could not understand what she should do as if yudi go ahead with rani that could destroy their pride and if yudi go ahead with RB than Yudi's whole life would be with lots of pain.

Saksh: kyaa soch rahi hain ? kya ab bhi aap ko lagtaa hain rani juth bol rahi hain.

Nikki: nahi ………..hum bahut dookhi huve ye sab dekh kar…..rani ek achchhi ladaki hain aur bhaiya oos ke saath bahut khush rahenge……..lekin

Saksh: lekin kya………..kyaa karnaa chaahti hain ab aap

Nikki: lekin ranike saath kaise bhiya ka sambandh ho shkta hain?

Saksh: kyun ? ….kyunki woh ek naukrani hai eesliye? Lekin kshamaa kijiye……….jeevan vyatit karne ke liye ek achchhe aur samajdaar jeevan saathi ki jaroorat hoti hain……….kisi raaj kumaar ya raaj kumaariki nahi…………….woh sambandh hi kyaa jisme pyaar naa ho.😳

"jaise saksh apne dil ki baat bataa rahaa ho"

Nikki: aap ki baat sahi hain….lekinhum kyaa kare woh humari samaj main nahi aa rahaa hain………..

Saksh: hum to eetnaa hi kahenge ki do pyaar karne waalo ke bidh main deevaar mat baniye………….jisko apnaa pyaar nahi miltaa oonke dil par kyaa gujarti hain aap humse poochiye……………..😭

Nikki looked at him………….saksh realized that he had blurt out his pain indirectly and some how he personally feeling very sad seeing yudi in pain as he had been the same been and still saksh was going through pain. And saksh did nnot want yudi to go through same pain and saksh had decided to do whatever in his hand to do to unite yura.

Nikki: ye sab photographs dekh kar aur aapki baat sun kar……………aur eetni dino se jo hum dekh rahe hain samaj rahe hain……eeske baad hum ye natije pe pahunche hain ki hum jaake ye photos pitaaji ko dikhaate hain aur oonse sab saaf baate karte hain…………phir oonhe jo theek lagegaa woh , woh karenge…humare dhyan se yahi theek rahegaa……………..

Saksh was petrified hearing this , he did not even think that nikki would directly go to king to solve this matter and saksh knew how complicated this matter would turned out if kind would come to know about this yura's affair…………….😲

PS: i tried to update first after doing that my net went down so thsi si second time i am doing...............ok friends this is the longest part i have even written.........tell me how do you find yudi?😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
woww!!! fantastic part Beena!!! And the longest as you said!!!! Yudii... 😃
Keep it up! And THANKS A LOT!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was great. i didn't want it to end. please update soon, i'll be anxiously waiting. 👏 👏 😃
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Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

woww!!! fantastic part Beena!!! And the longest as you said!!!! Yudii... 😃
Keep it up! And THANKS A LOT!!!

thanks dear...our yudi is changing ........love always .improve people😉

and yes it took four hours to type it down yesterday.........it was like on the spot.......part..i have ever done........but i am happy you all liked it

Originally posted by rani101

that was great. i didn't want it to end. please update soon, i'll be anxiously waiting. 👏 👏 😃

thanks you dear.......i was delayed in posting part so it was the longest i have ever written and i am happy you liked it............next part is going to be very romantic one..............just revealing suspence😉...............

Edited by bsingapury - 15 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awsome part..i read today morning..before i write comment i want to one more time..yudi ko aye shararat kaise dimag me aaya..rani rone lagi..wo sachme samaj na le ke yudi RB ka na ho jay..
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Posted: 17 years ago
yudi knows that rani loves her alot but sometimes to sacrifice rani behave very strangely
so first she told him all hurting words and when in night yudi saw tears on his hand he realised that rani is hiding so sometimes "ghee sidhi oongli se naa nikle to oongli tedi karni padati hain" 😉

and men knows how to tackle women 😆
ya now rani must be scared..........but she trust yudi a lot ............but that is women's nature they cannot take it when their men flirt with someone else 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
yudi already knwos rani hiding somrthing..thus he playing game with her..now he scared..
when are you update next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
ya yudi now understand rani very well as their love is very deep .......and he does not want to loos her now....their path of love is not smooth sailing he knows but for that they have to open up to each other without hiding things
next part might be by sunday........as i am taking part in dance so migh tbe busy with practice 😳 on saturdays
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Posted: 17 years ago
Excellent Beena 👏 👏 👏

Loved it!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks rakhi....i am very happy to see you here.....you all are doing excellent job with your creativity.....and loving the way you all are taking part......in all activity.....thanks to all of you.as we all are having fun in this forum...and rakhi i loved your creative post...it was too romantic 😳

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