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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Drama ki kami tum puri kar dena ..romantic FF likh ke..

yaar wahi karnaa padegaa............but for that i also need one filling part ........as i have send yura to palace and have to take care of few things as yudi also have many questions and when he will see bhoomi's photos what action he will take ..........will he go to meet king directly or something happen that will stop him
and i want to go ahead with my fav charater rudra also😳😳😳
but will give soem romantic part
too as my confidence is increasing in writing romance😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

ya yudi has to clear some Q..

Rudra ki story bhi aage badhani hai..

when are you told us about that guy..but we need more YURA romance..

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Posted: 17 years ago
yes rudra is going to be veyr important so i have to forward his story and by next part i will reveal that person's identity.........as whn yudi will try to find answers he will find that person also
and yes than yura romance will blossom on it's next level
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice parts..i really enjoy reading your FF..kash creative take idea from you..atleast we don't watch all bakwas..
nice to see you..
Edited by aksn - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks dear i am really very happy to see you here after so long.........so keep paying visit to your old friends.............
and happy that you like reading my FF.............
thank you very much
and ya i also want creative to take some idea from all the post we are giving here regarding yura as all our friends have excellent idea than this creative....................if they start copying thos eidea i can bet that RKAB will be o first no on TRP chart..............
and as in drama there are enough bakwaas people to harrase our yura so i am trying not to give them as much importance to them because i don't want to torture reader and my friends the was creative are torturing us...............i think with all the different emotions all the different character's are feeling that can be very intresting to portrait
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part : 46

"thud ……..thud….thud" the noise of somebody's approaching footstep towards terrace garden, separated yudi and rani with jerk. Both of them were surprised and embarrassed seeing Nikki entering through door. They tried to straiten themselves and rani arranged her pallu properly, yudi also wipe his face in anticipation to hide his over powered emotions. ……..they were trying to sound normal but their increasing heart beat was making it difficult for them…….😳

When nikki saw them…….she happily came to them..

Yudi: nikki aap log aa gaye mandir se……..itni jaldi?😆

Nikki: itni jaldi?........are hume deri ho gayi……….(winking her eye)..haan hum samaj shakte hain……😆

Yudi: are nahi .hume aisa lagaa.

Nikki: chalo ye sab baat chhodiye ……aap log yaha hain………. Aur hum har jagah par aapko dhundh chuke….lekin………jab aap kahi nahi mile to hum samaj gaye ki aap yahi aapki man pasand jagah par hi honge……….humne aawaaz lagaayi aapko taki aap ki privacy main hum disturb naa kare………….par jab hume lagaa ki aap dono aise sun ne waale nahi tab hume aanaa padaa………..

Yudi: pataa nahi hume to aapki koi aavaaz nahi sunayi di…….😉

Nikki: haa ……..kaise sunayi degi ….ek duje main khoye jo honge……..ab chaliye aap niche aayiye…..hum jaake saksh ko dhundhte hain woh bhi aapko dhundh rahe hain……….😆

Yudi: haa aap chaliye hum abhi aate hain…….

While going out of the door nikki turned and sign both of them………

Nikki: ab jyaadaa der mat kijiyegaa……..😆

Rani was unable to lift her eyes, standing there listening brother and sister's convo…….but as soon as nikki went out yudi looked at her mischievously , he hold her hand and pulled her towards him………..

Rani: kunvarji ab chaliye…………der ho rahi hain………. (She was downcast) 😳

Yudi: achha ab jaldi hain jaane ki………aur kuchh der pahele to hume hamaara inaam lene ke liye kah rahi thee……..ab?😉

Rani: (staring into his eyes): aur ab…kuchh nahi……..nikkiji humari raah dekh rahi hain….😆

Yudi: are wah aise thodi hota hain……..hume to humaaraa inaam chaahiye….aise hum nahi jaane denge aapko……….😉

Rani pleaded: kunvarji…..koi aa jaayegaa kripa karke chaliye……

Yudi was teasing her and he was enjoying Rani's anxiousness : hum to nahi jaane denge…..kyun ki aap aasani se humare haath main aati nahi…….😃

"After holding her hand and taking her hand behind his back he pretended to go near her"

Rani by forced released herself and ran away towards the door……..she stopped near door and turned to face yudi, who was standing still at that place smiling on rani"

Rani" aapka ye inaam hum par udhar rahaa…..phir kabhi chukaa denge…..😳

She ran away down stair………..leaving happy, mesmerized yudi behind her.

In the moment yudi joined rani, nikki and saksh down stair, they were waiting for him to come down…….nikki was happy seeing her brother happy after many days…😳

Nikki: bhaiya……….ab aap jayiye aur thodi der main hum aur rani bhi chale jaayenge mahal wapas………kyun ki pahele se bahut deri ho chuki hain aur waha sab humaaraa intzaar kar rahe honge………

Yudi was still starring at rani; he was wishing that he could stay forever with rani they don't have to spend time secretly as after all meeting it was very painful for him to leave rani. Separation was making his heart drench with pain but he always tried to console that they would meet again very soon.😳

Nikki: bhaiya hum aap se kah rahe hain……….lagtaa hain itna samay bhi aapko kaam lagaa hain ……..jaraa waha se nazar hataye aur humari aur dhyan de……….😆😆

Rani was embarrassed so she lowered her eyes.

Yudi: haa haa to hum chalte hain…..aap mahal pahonchiye hum raat ko milte hain…….

Nikki: aap raat ko kis se milte hain..humse ya rani se…….😆😆

Yudi: aap se kyunki aap se hume bahut saari baate karni hain……..

Nikki: achha bhaiya jaane se pahele ye Prasad rani ko khila dijiye aur ye maataa ji kaa kumkum se oonko tilak kar dijiye….kyunki pichhli baar to aapne chori se kiya thaa aaj hak se kijiye………😲…(nikki was smiling slyly)

Yudi was in disbelief hearing those words about the incident took place in temple, he was under wrong impression that nobody had seen them but Nikki knew everything about them.

Nikki: ab ees taraha se hume kyaa dekh rahe hain…hume sab maloom hain.ab samay mat barbaad kijiye jaldi kijiye……….

Saksh: haan kunvarji warnaa hume bhi deri ho jaayegi aur phir raja ji ko jawaab dene main mushkil ho jaayegi…….😳

Rani covered her head with pallu and yudi feed her Prasad and did tika oh her forehead……rani was over whelmed by rushing emotions. 😳

Yudi and saksh left for their office and nikki ask rani to change her cloths but not to tie her hair………

Nikki: aap apne baal khule hi rakhiye………..bhaiya ne yahi kahaa thaa naa aapko……..😳

Rani ran away from there feeling shy or she felt she would start crying if she would stand there any longer.😳

In car, yudi was lost in those precious moments he had spent with rani. Yudi was very happy today as he had somebody by his side from his own family to support his relation with rani and that feeling had boosted his confidence. Yudi thought to talk to his mom also about his feelings for rani and he had trust that his mom would be the happiest person as BR's happiness resided in her children's happiness. ……….yudi was too lost in his own world that he did not realized that saksh was also thinking something but he seemed very sad and discontented. …………..hearing nikki's thought about parmparaa and maryaadaa he some how felt that indirectly nikki was giving him indication that they should not even in their dream think about keeping any kind of relations. ………..however, so far saksh had always maintain appropriate distance from Nikki but from last few days seeing yudi and Rani's blossoming relation, his emotions were also going haywire. 😭

Rani and Nikki were also going back to palace. In their car also totally opposite emotions had taken control over two different people. One side rani, who was sitting on front seat of the car, was very happy and delighted😳, but other side Nikki, who was sitting rear seat of the car, was feeling disturbed by whatever she had witnessed on terrace. 😲

Actually, when Nikki did not find yura down stair she thought that yudi might have taken rani to terrace garden as, she knew that her brother was fond of that garden, and yudi might love to spend some quality time with his love in presence of nature. However, the thing Nikki did not realized that, she might end up witnessing yura's intimacy.😲

Seeing there closeness, she was rooted on the place. In her dream, also she did not think that she would end up in this kind of awkward situation. However, she gained her awareness and suddenly she tried to go back but this time Nikki's footstep made noise that divert yura's attention towards door. 😕

The young dream girl within her had awakened by that, though she was widow but Nikki had not lived her any dream as young woman. 😭First, she had to sacrifice all her dreams for sake of parmparaa, but she consoled herself that time, that she would learn to live life and try to find love from her husband. Nikki had prepared herself to surrender fully to the man she had not even seen😕. Even though whenever she tried to imagine about her future husband all the time saksh's face used to came in front of her eyes😭. However, she promised herself that she would not let come her feelings, on her way of new life and she would fill her husband's life with all love and happiness that he deserve, but before her any dreams become reality, those desire had been ruined by cruel nature. 😭 …………Nikki's all fantasies; hopes had been burned with his husband's death pyre😭. Ruthless nature did not give her a single chance to live hers', not only hers', but also any newly wed bride has most desired dreams.😭

Tears were rolling down her eyes, she was trying to control her emotions but her heart had been torn in so many pieces. Today she was feeling that instead of princess it would have been better if she had been only normal citizen. Being princess had become curse for her, and her wish to live simple and normal life. Her birth in royal family had deprived her of many wishes, such as today she wanted to start her life afresh with her love but she had to suppress all her emotions and feelings to just fulfill her duty towards her family pride. 😭

Today, yura's togetherness had ignited her hunger for the warmth of somebody's arm. Nikki was craving to find some comfort in some strong embrace. Today she was truly feeling herself very lonely, so far, she had always tried to console herself that she had everyone like siblings, parents, but at this moment, her desolateness had become the cause of her agony.

In the temple, she was feeling vulnerable to lost herself in saksh arm but in pretence of supporting maryaadaa and parmparaa, she stopped herself. However, now yura's blossoming relations was digging her buried desires, dreams to come on surface.

The way Nikki had bear yudi out in his decision to keep relation with rani, would yudi able to do it if he come to know about Nikki's feelings for saksh? 😕

In their thoughts, they did not realize when they reached the palace. Rani went to her room and nikki to her room. The moment she enter her room, nikki could not stop herself and she cried her heart out.

Some one outside playing song that was reflecting her destiny and life word to word.

"naa koi umang hain naa koi tarang hain

meri jindagi hain kyaa ek kati patang hain

lag ke gale se apne babul ke main naa roi

doli oothi ho jaise arthi oothi ho koi

yahi dukh kaa aaj bhi rang sang hain.....meri jindagi hai kya?

sapno ke devtaa kyaa tujko karu main arpan

patzad ki mai hu chhayaa aanshuo kaa darpan

yahi mera rup hain yahi mera rang hain

meri jindagi hain kyaa ek kati patang hain"😭

It was too late and yudi and saksh had return from office and yudi wanted to talk with Nikki as he was desperate to know detail from Nikki, so many questions were hovering Yudi's mind but only one person could answers those questions and the moment he finished his dinner he decided to talk with Nikki.

nikki did not realize how long she had been crying till the moment somebody knocked on her door. 😭…………nikki was startled with that knock as this moment she did not want to face anybody, because her eyes had been swollen after continues crying and she knew that if her brother would see her in this condition than he could ask many questions. …………nikki was in puzzle what she should do to avoid yudi she had no other way but to open door……….as she was sure that yudi might be on door. 😭

As soon as nikki opened the door, yudi rushed into the room.

Yudi: nikki ……kyaa kar rahi thee aap hum kabse darwaaje par dustak de rahe the…..

Nikki did not face him but tried to avoid facing him.

Yudi: humne kahaa thaan na hum aapse milne aayenge………..phir bhee aap so gayi

Nikki: woh bhaiya hum bahut thak gaye the…..aur ees main humari galti nahi hain…….aap ki chinta main hume kitne dine se neend nahi aayi …………aur aaj jab sab kuchh theek ho gayaa hain aisa lagaa to hume aaraam se neend aagayi.😕

Yudi: aap kitni achhi hain humari bahen ……….aap nahi jaante aaj hum kitne khush hain……….aur hume ye khushi aaj aapne di hain…………sahi maine main to ek bhai kaa farz hota hain apni bahen ko har khushi dena lekin hum ne aapke liye kuchh nahi kiyaa…………lekin hum waada karte hain kabhi bhi aapko humari jaroorat huyi hum aapka jarur saath denge aur humse ho pade who karenge aapki khushi ke liye………..😳

Now yudi looked at nikki properly and he felt that nikki's eyes were red.

Yudi: kya huva nikki aap ki aankhe kyun laal ho gayi hain………aap ro rahi thee..

Nikki tried to conceal her pain and tried to divert topic in other direction…..

Nikki: nahi bhaiya …….hum kyun rone lage haalaaki um to bahut khush hain……kyunki humaaraa bhai jo aaj khush hain……….aur kyun kaise achhe se samay gujar gayaa aapka rani ke saath………….(she winked her eyes)😉

Yudi was blushing.

Yudi: ye kyaa aap bhi humari khichayi karne beth gayi ……..aap ye sab chhodiye aur hum sab bataayiye………….ki aap ko sab kaise maloom padaa………..

Nikki: bhaiya kya hum …………….

But before she finished her sentence saksh who was looking for yudi enter nikki's room.

Saksh: hum bataate hain aapko…………ye nikkijiko jaasoosi ka shokh huva oos main oonhone aapki jaasusi kar di………..sahi hain naa humari baat nikkiji…………

Nikki could not face saksh, she did not expect him to be there, as the way she had been going through emotional turmoil nikki wanted to avoid saksh. By avoiding him nikki wanted to gain control over her restlessness. She stutter to reply of his questions.😭

Yudi: jaasusi?

Saksh: ji haa kyunki oos din jab rani andhere main aap ko mili thee oosi din nikkiji ko shak ho gayaa phir oonho ne kuchh aisi saajise ki ki aap dono pakde gaye,……….aur oos din jab rani ko aapne bahaane se apne kamare main bulaaya thaa oos din nikkiji ne rani ko pakad liya aur saari baate puchh li………lekin nikki ji ne rani se waadaa liya thaa ki woh aapse nahi mile ………….

Yudi:lekin kyun?

Nikki did no utter a single word but saksh was giving all the answer behalf of her but somehow she was feeling relieved as right now she was not in mood to explain anything.

Yudi: (when nikki did not say anything): lekin kyun nikki aapne rani ko humse milne ke liye kyun manaa kiyaa………

Nikki: kyunki…………..kyunki……….

When saksh realized that nikki was having problem telling truth he came to her rescue.

Saksh: hum bataate hain……….nikkiji ko lagaa ki aap raaj parivaar ki maryaadaa ke saath khilwaad kar rahe hain……….aur agar ees tarah se aap RB ke saath bhi anyaay kar rahe hain……..

Yudi: to phir aaj aap hume …………..lekin ek minute ……..saksh aapko ye sabkaise maloom hain…………?

Saksh: wahi hum kahene jaa rahe the………..jab nikkiji ko ya sab maloom padaa oonho ne humse madad maangi ……

Yudi: to aap ye sab jaante the phir bhi aap ne hum enahi bataayaa…….aap jaante the ki rani se mile bagar humaara kyaa haal hota hain phir bhi aap chup rahe kyun saksh aap ne humare saath aisa kyun kiya?

Nikki: humne oonhe manaa kiyaa thaa………..humne vachan liyaa thaa oosme saksh ki koi galti nahi hain bhaiya saara dosh humaara hain………..

Yudi: lekin phir wahi sawaal pe hum phir aate hain ………aaj aap hume ranis e milne kyun legayi ………agar aap ye sochati hain ki hum galat kar rahe hain to?

Nikki: kyunki humne saksh ki jab humne saksh ke saath baat ki to hume pataa chalaa RB aap ke liye achhi ladaki nahi hain………to phir humne………………woh ….woh

Yudi: woh kya nikki aap kuchh kahenaa chaahti hain………..

Saksh: woh ……nikkiji ne humari madad se kuchh aise sabut ektha kiye jinse oonhe maloom ho gayaa ki RB achhi ladki nahi hain……

Yudi: kyaa???????aap ye kyaa kah rahe hain?..........itnaa sab kuchh ho gayaa aur kisi ko hume bataane ki bhi jaroorat mahesoos nahi huyi?

Nikki: bhaiya hume kshamaa kardo humari wajah se aap ko taklif huyi ho to.

Yudi: woh sabut hum dekh naa chahenge……………..

Yudi was disgusted seeing RB's photo graphs, as so far he thought that she might be going out with friends and drinking but it was common with this generation's youngster but seeing her indecently involve with other guys, yudi felt outraged. 😡

Yudi: dhrina ho rahi hain hume ye photos dekh kar………kaisi ladki se humari sagaayi ho gayi hain……sochiye agar rani humari jindagi main nahi aati to humari to jindagi barbaad ho jaati……………….lekin hum aap log se naaraaz hain jo apne hume italah kiye bina itna badaa kadam oothaayaa.

Nikki: lekin hum kyaa karte humari samaj main nahi aaya aur hum aapko dukh nahi pahuchaanaa chahte the…..

Yudi: lekin aapne ye karke hume bahut dukh pahuchaayaa hain…………lekin hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aap ne ye sab humare liye kiya………aapka humare taraf pyaar thaa jiski wajah se aap ye kadam oothaane ke liye majboor ho gayi……….kher ab ye bataayiye aage kyaa sochaa hain.?

Nikki: hum to ye photo lekar pitaji ke paas jaanaa chahte the aur onhe sab sachhayi bataa naa chahte the………lekin

Yudi: lekin kya?

Nikki: sakshji ne kahaa ki ye aapki jindagi kaa maamlaa hain aur aap ko hi tay karnaa chaahiye……..ab aap hi kahiye aap kyaa karnaa chaahte hain………..

Yudi: hume bhi lagtaa hain ki hume pitaaji se baat karni chaahiye………hum ees baat main deri nahi karnaa chaahte…………lekin oos se pahele hume rani se baat karna chahte hain kyunki ye oonki bhi jindagi kaa sawaal hain…..saksh aap abhi ghar jayiye….hum kal subha milenge…….yahi par …………aur nikki aap rani ko bulaa dijiye ga yaha par ………phir oonse baat karne ke baad hum pitaaji se milne jaayenge……kyunki hum jaante hain ek baar pitaaji ko humaaare aur rani ke baare main pataa chalaa to woh bahut hi gussa honge………eesi wajah se rani se pahele baat karnaa bahut jaroori hain………………..

Nikki: theek hain bhaiya aap jaisa thik samaje………hum rani ko bulalenge aap abhi jaake shaanti se so jayiye……..hume vishwaas hain sab theek ho jaayegaa.

Deciding that yudi and saksh left the room leaving nikki alone in her room. While saksh was going out he looked at nikki from corner of his eyes but she did not even look at saksh as she had decided to stay away from him as much as possible but was it possible the more she was stopping herself not to think about him the more actually she was thinking about him. ………..only time had remedy for many wounds. ……as the shadow who had heard everything was desperate to stop yudi meeting to king as he knew that, by telling king yudi was about to put his leg in deep mud from where there was no way of escaping.😕

PS:hi friends hope you all will enjoy this part also the way you all had last all parts.........as for nikki i am feeling sad as girls like nikki had to suffer a lot and sacrifice their happiness as we all know all girls have dream and nikki had not been able to live a single dream of her life..........hope you all will feel the same the way i felt as you comments are valuable so please let me know.....about this young widow..........as in our society we have man of them
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This was very touching beena.. and for the moment the focus was only on Nikki which i loved completely..you have actually written it very nicely to show her situation which is very sad.. I think there is a lot to this story and hope creatives too explore it..as much as we do on forum..
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice & touching part..person is nikki..i really sorry for her..the way she hide her feeling shak..after seeing yudi & rani. for her so much difficult..that good yudi find out about RB and now also he know nikki stop rani to don't see yudi..
yudi promise niiki, i help you when you need..
i hope yudi find out that nikki love shak & he try hide that
nikki get her love..
are you gonna tell us about who's person..he don't want yudi
tell raja about RB..
waiting for next -part..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monu1101

This was very touching beena.. and for the moment the focus was only on Nikki which i loved completely..you have actually written it very nicely to show her situation which is very sad.. I think there is a lot to this story and hope creatives too explore it..as much as we do on forum..

thanks monu for liking it.....and ya poor nikki she is to mcuh pain and our creative has no time to show anythign about her and they keep showing all sutidity about kali and bhanu...........
Originally posted by pop77

nice & touching part..person is nikki..i really sorry for her..the way she hide her feeling shak..after seeing yudi & rani. for her so much difficult..that good yudi find out about RB and now also he know nikki stop rani to don't see yudi..
yudi promise niiki, i help you when you need..
i hope yudi find out that nikki love shak & he try hide that
nikki get her love..
are you gonna tell us about who's person..he don't want yudi
tell raja about RB..
waiting for next -part..
yes dear nikki is goign through lots of misery and pain and especially seeing yura together her dreams also getting wings but she herself has to cut down those wings as she is very sensible and know the consequencies if she take any wrong step..........
but it is very difficult to control those emotions.............especially seeing other couple inlove and their clossness..........hope fully the way yudi had promised today in his happiness to nikki he remember those words when time come and does not react opposite way.........
yes i think i might disclose the identity of that person who wants to stop yudi but there is still more deep secret behind that person that will come in light during end...............
and thanks for liking it and ya it is very touching and sensitive
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

thanks monu for liking it.....and ya poor nikki she is to mcuh pain and our creative has no time to show anythign about her and they keep showing all sutidity about kali and bhanu...........

Actually these two bhanu and kalli are the most unwanted in the serial now.. they should end their track ..or maybe CR still requires bhanu to be her next bali ka bakra..😉

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