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PART - LVI



DAY - 6 still continues😳

Maan is showering kisses on her face. Geet slowly pushed him back and kept her finger on his lips.

Geet: bring the towel


Maan ignored her order and bit her finger with his teeth.

Geet: ouch!!...hey u i said... bring me the towel


He moved forward and hugged her, she got angry and pushed him away

Maan: this is not fair


Geet: mujhe sikhani ki koi jaroori nahi

Maan: no i am not following ur order


He gave a quick peck on her lips...Geet became furious

Geet: ok don't follow my orders...wait a minute...John..John


Maan closed her mouth with his hand

Maan: Geet u have really gone mad


She removed his hand from her mouth and folded her hands

Geet: then do what i say

Maan: tujhe pata bhi hai tum kya kar rahi ho


Geet: ofcourse yes... this is called revenge steam bath for steam inhalation...got it..now don't question me and bring my towel


Maan is left with no other option other than to follow her orders, he brought the towel for her and she asked him to wrap the towel around her without touching her.


Maan's self thought: bus mujhe ek mauka mil jaye...mai tumhe dikhata hu ki Maan singh khurana kya kar sakta hai

Geet: lift me and carry to the bedroom


He has done the same.

Geet: put me down and wear ur dress


She sat infront of the dressing table closing her eyes while Maan wore his dress.


Geet: how much time will u take to wear the dress...i am opening my eyes...Maan...Maan...shall i open my eyes


She didn't get any answer so she is peeping at Maan through the gap between her fingers, she couldn't see Maan there...she opened her eyes to find Maan and then she turned towards the mirror and has seen that he is exactly standing at her back wearing sleeves shirt and shorts then she felt relieved.


Geet: can't u speak?...open the ward robe and choose a dress for me


He opened the ward robe and has seen the black Capri he loves to see Geet in that dress so he chose that dress for her.


Geet: pehanao

Maan smirked and took steps towards her.


Geet: stop...give me that scarf

Maan's self thought: no...not again


He gave the scarf to her and she tied the scarf around his eyes.

Geet: ab pehanao...without touching me


Maan: Geet how is this possible...without seeing and without touching

Geet: it is possible...i will give u the directions


Maan's self thought: kaha mili ho tum mujhe


She removed the towel from her body and placed the brX in his hand, he touched the cloth and understood what it is. She extended her hands towards him and made him wear the brX...she turned her back towards him.


Geet: close the buttons...don't touch my skin...raise ur hands, move towards me..ha now close the buttons


He took the cloth into his hands and placed the hook to the last eye of the last row, making her hard to breath.


Geet: what r u doing?...i couldn't breath...undo the hook and place it to the first eyelet.

Maan(smiled): sorry


Now she gave him the pantXX he has managed to bring the pantXX till her thighs without touching her legs but when he reached her thighs, his fingers traced her thighs, she felt ticklish sensation and without Maan's knowledge he pressed her thighs with his hand...she became numb for a moment blushing for what Maan has done..she pushed him aside and wore the pantXX for herself. He made her wear the top and this time she hesitantly gave the pant to him.


Geet(with a pout): Maan don't touch me

Maan(smirked): i will think of it

Geet: stupid...i will kill u if u touch me


He brought the pant till her thighs and she grabbed the pant from his hand and wore it by herself as he is tracing her legs with his fingers intentionally. She looked at herself in the mirror and sat infront of the dressing table...she has seen that her hair has become a mess so she took the hair dryer to dry her wet hair.


Geet: u can remove the scarf now


Maan opened his eyes and he is staring at her intently remembering how she might be looking when he made her wear the dress. She has seen him staring at her without blinking in the mirror she is trying hard not to blush...she lowered her gaze and thought of something.


Geet: what r u looking at?...take this dryer this is ur task...stop staring at me and finish it off


Maan took the dryer from her hand into his' and took her hair into other hand. It has become difficult for him to manage her long her dryer in one hand and her long messy hair in other hand...he is pulling her hair and he plucked few of her hair strands in this process...Geet became furious the way he is making her hair a big mess and she has seen that he plucked her hair strands she became more angry.


Geet: oh no...my hair!!...Maan stop it...i will do it myself...i am feeling hungry arrange the food

Maan: ok i will ask John to bring the food


Geet: John...then what r u for...go get the food for urself

Maan felt like kicking her...he is looking seriously at her without moving from there


Geet: what?...what r u waiting for...go


He didn't move from there


Geet(pleading): Maan mujhe sachme bhookh lag raha hai...kal shaam se kuch khaya nahi..look at the time...i am feeling tierd i need to eat something...plz stop staring at me and get me something to eat


She is really feeling tiered and exhausted because of the long scheduled... ahem ahem... and Maan's wild behaviour towards her...Maan is completely unaware of her physical weakness but when she reminded him that she is feeling hungry as they didn't eat anything since yesterday evening, he realised that she is feeling weak. She satisfied his hunger bearing his harsh and rough touches...and now she is really feeling weak and tiered.


Maan's self thought: what did i do?...it's 1:30 PM she might be feeling weak because of what i have done...aur vaise bhi kal raat se hum donom...


He hugged her from the back

Maan: Geet r u ok?...did i hurt u?

Geet: no Maan i am fine...i am feeling hungry...that's it


Maan: r u sure?

Geet: yes...bring something for me...plz go fast


Maan(with a smile): give me 5 minutes...princess

She smiled in return hearing to princess from him.


After 15 minutes


Geet laid on the bed holding her stomach

Geet: what r u doing in the kitchen...Maan come fast...i am dying out of hunger


Maan: lunch is ready ur highness

Geet: thank god


He brought the trolley of food near the bed. He placed the food in the plate and placed the fork near her mouth.


Maan: common now have this yummy noodles

Geet: Maan remove the fork and feed me with ur hand


Maan: noodles haath se...Geet stop it now and have some food..u r looking weak

Geet: no...just do what i say


Maan: tum bahot jiddi ban gayi ho


He tried to feed noodles with his hand but the noodles are slipping from his hand and it is becoming difficult to handle the long thread like food with his fingers. She is laughing looking at Maan's misery.


Maan: Geet u r such a Demon

Geet: make it fast ...i am waiting


He somehow managed to feed her with his hand..she is teasing him by licking his fingers and biting them to bring him to his senses whenever she see him drooling over her lips while feeding her. She took the fork and offered food to him..he smiled at her.


Maan: y r u using the fork...u r also feed me with ur hands then u will understand how difficult it is


Geet: hello Mr.SLAVE don't forget that u don't have the right to order me...chalo ab chup chap khana khalo


Finally they have finished their lunch and Geet pushed the trolley away and laid in Maan's lap and closed her eyes. Maan placed his hand on her cheeks and softly traced her cheeks.


Geet: Maan i am feeling sleepy ...plz sing a song for me

Maan's self thought: OH NO!!...phir se shuru hogaye


Geet: Maan i am waiting

Maan: Geet dekho i am not an expert in singing...and usually i don't sing, so plz don't ask me to...


Geet: John ...John

Maan: hmmm...bulao...common bulao John ko


Geet opened her eyes listening to him.


Geet's self thought: what happened to him suddenly...y is he not getting scared listening to John's name


Maan: itna sochne vali koi baat nahi hai...i have fired him


Geet got shocked listening to him...but she is Geet within 2 seconds she sat beside him and started laughing at Maan


Maan: what happened?...have u gone mad?

Geet: very good that u have fired John...ab se kitchen ka saara kaam bhi tum karoge


Maan: OMG!!!! what did i do?

Geet: vaise Maan tum pasta bahot acha banate ho..so i want tomato soup, pasta, French fries and...


She started giving the list of what she wants to eat for dinner now itself.


Maan's self thought: y did i tell u that i know how to cook...god save me from this DEMON...to hell with cooking...i am not going to cook for u


Geet: ok ab gaana shuru karo

Maan: what...phir se gaana


She made him lean on the pillow and again laid on his lap.

Geet: just relax ...and now start singing

Maan: Geet ..ye tum kya...


Geet: Maan tum mere saamne gaana gane keliye itna sharma rahe ho...common don't be a spoil sport...plz honey..plz sing for me...mai kisise nahi bataungi ki u r a bad singer...deal ok now go ahead


Maan: uffoo Geet...thik hai...i am starting

Geet: hmm...i am listening


Maan is thinking what to sing and how to sing...he cleared his throat to sing the song

Maan: Jaane..Jaane tu...excuse me...


Geet opened her eyes noticing the way he is struggling to start the song

Geet's self thought: i think i have invited the trouble


She slowly moved her fingers towards her ears to escape from the song...Maan has seen this and stopped singing


Geet: sry...carry on


Maan: Jaane tu mera kya hai, jaane tu mera kya tha,

Tu hi mera har pal, tu hi har lamha tha..

Jaane kaisi kashish hai, jaane kaisi khalish hai,

Kyu yeh saans thami hai, aankhon mein kyu nami hai..

Geet rose to sitting posture looking at the way he got involved in singing the song

Hai dosti humko yakeen tha, dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha,

Hai kaisa yeh dard naya sa, kyu dil lagta tuta tuta sa,

Janaa dil jaana, kaise maine naa jaana,

Ki pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa..

Janaa dil jaana, kaise tune naa jaana,

yeh pyaar yahi hai, haan jaane tu ya jaane naa..

she got surprised when she realised that he is enjoying while singing the song, she is staring at him without blinking her eyes with a smile on her lips...she is hearing to him by placing hand under her chin...Maan stopped the song after a while as he forgot the lyrics...Geet is still staring at him expecting him to sing the entire song


Geet: ha iske baad

Maan: kya

Geet: iske baad kya hai Maan...


Maan: do u think this is a story?...i don't know the next lines of the song


She clapped for the song just like a small kid and kissed him on his cheek


Geet: Maan it's too good...superb...vaise ek baat poochu...do u miss Meera?


asked Geet remembering the line kyu dil lagta tuta tuta sa


Maan: what?


Geet: ha tum ga rahe the na kyu dil lagta tuta tuta sa...did u reject Meera? or Meera rejected u?


Maan(with anger): Geet...tumhena...Museum me rakhni chahiye

Geet: museum me???


Maan: ha saari duniya me tumhari jaisi insaan sirf ek hi ho sakta hai isliye


He really became angry and he is shouting at her.

Geet: sry


He got up from the bed...Geet stopped him holding his hand and made him sit on the bed..she held her ears by her hand and pleaded him "sry honey...plz forgive me..i won't repeat this again..plz honey"


Maan: agar tum phir se Meera ke bareme baat kiya toh dekhlena...

She kept her finger on her mouth

Geet: no...i won't talk about her again...seriuosly i won't repeat this again


Maan became silent accepting her apolozy and Geet felt relieved.


Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm

Geet: can i give order to my slave now


He turned towards Geet and he started at her without talking anything


Geet: aisa kyu dekh rahe ho...don't forget that u r my slave...i won't get scared if u look seriously with your big red eyes at me


Maan: i know that u won't get scared...tum toh darate hona..itni aasani se tum kyu daroge...batao kya karna hai


Geet: i am feeling sleepy...turn on the CD player...play some melodious song...bring the moisturiser


Maan turned on the CD player and gave the moisturiser to Geet


Geet: oh hello!!!...mujhe kyu de rahe ho...apply it to me


He looked at the bottle and at Geet, she is pointing towards her feet and signalling him to massage her legs with the moisturiser...he smiled to himself and took the lotion into his hands..Geet sat on the bed leaning on to the pillow stretched her legs towards Maan and closed her eyes as the song started playing from the CD player.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tu8_S4G8E-U[/YOUTUBE]


Khilli re , khilli re...

Khilli re , khilli re...

Raat ki rani

Choomo sawariya

Phir se bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

She smiled listening to the song and started tapping her fingers on her hand, Maan applied the cream on her legs and started massaging smoothly without disturbing her she felt his feather like touches and felt very much relaxed

Honton se,phoonka re,

Bheena badan mora

Bheena, bheena hai badan

Mora, aaja piya aaja...

He kissed on her feet and rubbed the lotion on her feet too she is feeling ticklish sensation all the while he played with her feet she moved her feet towards herself to avoid his naughtiness.

Haathon se, choo na re,

Surila badan mora,

Surila,surila badan mora

Aaja piya,aaja

He got hold of her legs and stretched them towards his side and started massaging other leg..she is enjoying his mischief without opening her eyes and giving lip sync to the lyrics of the song.

Khilli re , khilli re...

Khilli re , khilli re...

Raat ki rani

Choomo sawariya

Phir se bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

Piyra re, piya re-piya more-aa...

Raat ki daari kab se

Jhoor rahi hai re

Daariyon ki godhi bhar jaa

Saari raat meheki hai

Saari raat mehekegi

Sej suhani kar ja

He finished massaging her legs and took her right hand into his left hand and pulled her towards himself...she got startled at his sudden pull and opened her eyes. He placed kisses on her fingers,hand and arms smoothly.

Hoton pe rakh ke

Phoonk bansuriya

Tan barthan bhar jaa

Aaja re, aaja,samay ahi hai

Kohre mein thehra hua

Khilli re , khilli re...

Khilli re , khilli re...

Raat ki rani

Choomo sawariya

Phir se bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

She slowly moved him away and placed the bottle in his hand he smiled and contined to apply the lotion on her hands and massaging her hands all the while kissing her cheeks and lips in between


Khilli re , khilli re...

Khilli re , khilli re...

Raat ki rani

Choomo sawariya

Phir se bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

Geet is singing the lyrics while trying to avoid his lips to meet hers'...she kissed his forehead and hugged him tightly.

Aadhi raat,jaagi re

Tan ke sur, sun ke

Sun sun ke

Sun sunke

Aaja piya-piya aaja

Aaja re, meheki main

Saans ki dhun sun ke

Sun sunke dhun sunke

Aaja piya piya aaja

She removed her hair band and opened her hair...she made him lay on her lap and lowered her head such that her hair falls on his face...she threw her hair on his face such that her hair plays with his eyes, nose and lips...she touched his cheeks with her hair. Maan closed his eyes and smiled as her hair is causing him ticklish sensation.

Khilli re, khilli re...khilli re,

Khilli re...raat ki rani

Choomo sawariya

Phir se bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

Bheeni bansuriya

Maan kept the bottle aside and placed kisses on her neck and collar bone and proceeded towards her cleavage..she hugged his head and enjoyed his sweet mischief. He hugged her back and kissed her smoothly ... she made him lay on the bed and placed her head on his chest ...she kissed on his chest and closed her eyes. Maan kissed on her forehead and entwined his fingers with hers'. She is patting with her hand on his chest to make him sleep still singing the lyrics of the song and smiling to herself.

PRECAP: r we going outside?


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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thanx to 18mypride for suggesting me to write an FF and igniting the spark in me to present this cute love story to all of u...thanx to all those who supported me and encouraged me with ur comments and likes ...185 likes - love u all guyz


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