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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww im ROFL like pari 🤣 🤣 🤣
CHAMELEON
CRY BABY
FM RADIO
SEXY BAR DANCER
DEMON
WILD TIGRESS
so what next
n loved all the gifts he sent

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Posted: 13 years ago
Deeps 🤗...u rock my dear ..awwwesome update.👍🏼...absolutely hilarious ...the gifts were lovely...but the names 😆...Chameleon, Cry baby, FM radio, SRB, Demon and Wild Tigress...the confusion of the courier guy...no wonder Pari was all ROFL 😆...the last part was so cute...i will make your life hell after marriage...and the reply...i will make your life heaven...sighhh 😍...simply love this Maaneet of yours...plz continue...TC 😊.


Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

eagerly waiting for the next update ... 😍




PRECAP: i feel happy if i win but i feel much more happy if u win...if u win over me

precap for u buddy..till i give the update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Will be waiting 😊

Interesting Precap

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

Will be waiting 😊

Interesting Precap



almost done...editing ...will post within no time
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... am so excited !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps




PRECAP: i feel happy if i win but i feel much more happy if u win...if u win over me

precap for u buddy..till i give the update😉


awesome and thanks... reading your devil geet... i think iam becoming one... and full time pestering you... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago


🤣 🤣 🤣

Omg !!! seems like Maan took inspiration from Geet 🤣
Honestly that was really something !! 😆

Awesome update 👏 👏
Loved it 👍🏼
Thanks for pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XL



Day before the Wedding


Handa's Mansion is beautifully decorated with flowers all around and the house is filled with relatives and guests by the evening. Young and pretty girls started dancing for different songs.Pari is applying mehandi to Geet's hands.


Pari: Geet kya soch rahi ho

Geet is deeply thinking about something and didn't respond to Pari

Pari: Geet i am talking to u


Pari moved Geet by touching her shoulders

Geet: ya Pari


Pari: stop day dreaming about Maan...there is no need to dream about him any longer he is present right here


Pari pointed towards the direction where Mohindar is receiving Maan who is coming inside along with Vicky and Savitri Devi. He is wearing a sherwani and he appeared like a prince for her eyes. They came near Geet, Titu made Maan to sit beside Geet.


Vicky came to Geet's side

Vicky(whispered): bhabi u r looking beautiful in this lehanga

Geet smiled as reply


Titu: jiju chaliye find out ur name on didi's hands

Pari: ha Maan u have to find out ur names


Maan's self thought: names?... what did they plan now...hope they won't embarrass me infront of everyone


Vicky: names?

Pari: ha 3 names of Maan are present in this mehandi design


Geet extended her hands towards Maan. Maan is trying to findout the names...he easily found out MAAN, MK and MSK in that complicated lines of mehandi in her palm and at the back side of her palm.He has seen some letters 'H', 'O','M' and trying to find out what exactly it refers to... he has seen two more letters 'C','A' and said out loud "MACHO"


Pari giggled and Geet controlled her laughter as Dadima and other elders are also present there. Maan became furious but couldn't say anything.


Titu: MACHO?

Maan: nothing


As per Kwar Dhoti ritual Rano gave a dry fruit to Geet to eat, she ate half of the fruit and Maan ate the remaining half. After finishing this ritual the elders left from there and the gang (M,G,P,V,T) got some time to have fun.


Maan and Geet started whispering to each other, Pari thought of giving them some privacy and engaged Vicky and Titu in some conversation.


Maan: Pari said only 3 right?... then from where did this MACHO come from?

Geet: Maan actually there are 5 but u found out only 4 so...i won...i am the one who will rule the house after marriage


Maan: what 5?...show me ur hands i will find out the other one also

Geet: aha...it's not so easy...it is not present on the hands


Maan: what?... did u write my name on ur legs?

Geet(laughed): no


Maan: then where did u write?

Geet: find out Mr.Khurana i am not going to help u

Maan: Geet this is not fair


Geet smirked as reply. Maan got up from there and took Titu along with him. Geet is looking at them with confused face. They left from there and after few minutes Titu came back and whispered something in Pari's ear. Pari left from there she came back after few minutes she gave some excuse to the relatives present over there and took Geet to the terrace.


Geet: what happened Pari...y did u bring me here?

Pari: issshhh...some one is waiting for u


Pari left from there when Geet has seen Maan.


Geet: what is this Maan?...this is not time to play pranks...


Maan closed her mouth and silenced her. When Geet became dumb he removed his hand from her mouth and pulled her towards himself he stretched Geet's hands so that her arms are wide opened. She didn't push him as mehandi is applied to her hands. Maan kept his hands on both sides of her bare waist and moved forward narrowing the distance between them. Geet is looking straight into his eyes.


Maan: ab batao where did u write my name?


Geet(with a husky voice): check for urself...it's not there on my hands and legs...find out without touching my skin


Maan took it as a challenge he removed his hands from her waist and moved backwards. He looked at her from to bottom, she is wearing a lehanga with bare waist, dupatta is covering her chest and waist modestly and her hair is left open. She is wearing a simple necklace, ear rings, tika and a thin waistband. He used his finger to move the dupatta aside without touching her skin, this exposed her bare waist and the cleavage of her chest. He removed her dupatta completely from her body and it fell on the ground. The cool breeze created tickling sensation on her exposed parts, she closed her eyes without her knowledge, her hands are still wide open inviting him to hug her. Maan's eyes are focused on her cleavage searching for his name, he lowered his gaze to find out his name on her stomach and waist but he didn't find there. He placed his finger on the thin waist band and pressed it while he went to the back side of Geet, he is teasing her without actually touching her skin. He didn't find his name at the back side of her waist. He moved her opened hair by his finger to one side of Geet's neck, she felt a ticklish sensation on her nape. Maan observed her nape and lowered his gaze, he found the mehandi design on her back just above the blouse. He leaned forward and his warm breaths are falling on her skin.


Maan: it's here

Geet: what's written in the design?

Maan: HONEY


Geet smiled and opened her eyes

Geet: u won Mr.Khurana

Maan: so u accept the defeat


Geet: no...i feel happy if i win but i feel much more happy if u win...if u win over me


Maan kissed on her back where his name is written, she leaned backwards such that her back is touching his chest. Maan hugged her from back, he placed kisses on her nape, neck and half exposed shoulders softly and smoothly.


Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm

Geet: stop it

Maan: y


Geet: i don't know y...i want to be with u when u r not present with me, but when u r present so close to me..i don't know what happens to me, i will forget everything...ur presence drives me crazy it makes me forget myself and i don't know what i am doing...i lose control on myself...leave me, stay away from me...i can't bear this torture


Maan: staying away from u tortures me a lot...i don't want to stay away from u


Geet turned back to face Maan she moved forward such that his lips would touch her forehead. Maan's cell phone started ringing bringing them back to their senses. They moved apart and he took out the phone from his pocket, he has seen a message from Pari. He took the dupatta laying on the floor and draped on her chest as it is present previously. They came back to the function and joined the family, Mohindar introduced his son-in-law to all the guests.


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On the Wedding day


At Handa's Mansion


Chuda ceremony started as pandit performed puja, all the elders touched the chuda and gave their blessings and the priest tied mauli to Geet's wrist. Geet is made to sit infront of the four diyas such that the glow from diyas fall on her face, her friends applied the paste of haldi on her cheeks, arms, hands, neck, shoulders and legs. She is made to bathe with the holy water brought from the temple by Titu as per the Ghare Ghardoli ritual. She wore the wedding dress brought by her maternal uncle.


At Groom's place


Vicky applied haldi to Maan and Ghara Ghardoli ritual is followed at Maan's place as well.He got dressed in his wedding attire and Vicky tied Sehra and placed a pink turban on his head.Ghodi chanda and Varna rituals are perfomed after which Maan sat on a white horse. Now Maan is ready to go to his bride's place.


At Handa's Mansion


Every body is waiting for Maan's arrival. Some one informed that baraat has arrived all her friends left from there leaving Geet and Pari in her room. Geet made a pout as she is unable to run like her friends to have a glance at Maan sitting on the white horse like dulhe raja.


Pari received a MMS to her mobile from Vicky, she has seen the MMS and gave the mobile to Geet. A smile appeared on Geet's face looking at the MMS, Vicky has sent the MMS where Maan is sitting on the white horse wearing sehra and the pink turban. After few minutes Geet received a message from Maan.


"i have fulfilled ur dream and now it's ur turn"


Mohindar along with his relatives welcomed the barat and gave shagun to the groom's close relatives. Every body entered inside the house where the mandap is arranged at the center of the big hall. Rano, Pari and some friends brought Geet to the mandap. Geet and Maan exchanged garlands, priest performed puja for the groom, in which Maan is asked to chant the first few mantras. Pari's focus in on the shoes which he left near the mandap Vicky is having an eye on the sohoes, she managed Vicky by starting a conversation with him and Titu when both of them got engrossed in their discussion Pari slowly took the shoes and hided them. It's too late and Vicky noticed that the shoes are missing.


Mohindar has done Kanyadaan by placing Geet's hand in Maan's hand. Mohindar felt happy that he was able to find right person for Geet who would make her forget her dad, his eyes became moist out of happiness for his princess. They took Mangalpheras in front of the sacred fire, Maan applied Sindoor on Geet's hair partition.He tied the Mangalsutra around her neck. Geet is looking stratight into Maan's eyes promising him silently that from now onwards her life belongs to him, Maan promised to himself that he would never break her trust on him. Maan and Geet touched the feet of Dadima, Mohindar and Rano to seek their blessings to have a happy married life. Savitri Devi is happy that her grand son got married to a girl who belongs to a well cultured family.

PRECAP: mujhe sach me dar lag raha hai...mujhe Maan ke paas nahi jana hai



P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.



Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Me First

Hey Deeps,

Lovely Update.

Maan found his 5 names at last but yes it's win win for them. Does not matter who rules as they are one. 😊

So Sweet of Maan to fulfill Geet's dream.

Intelligent Pari got the shoes 😆

Precap... hmm, let's see 😛😉

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago

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