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hmm...nice😍...
looking fwd...

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writing!!!😆
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PART - XLI


Finally Maan and Geet became Maaneet they became one traditionally with the blessings of their elders. After the marriage ceremony completed, it's time for Vidaai, Mohindar and Rano got busy in making arrangements for Vidaai. They got few minutes of time in between Titu took the pics of Maaneet meanwhile.


Unmarried friends of Geet came near her and Geet showered Kaleere which are hanging down her chuda, Kaleere fell over the head of one of the girls.



Yash: Pari did u remember that ur hubby is also present along with u

Pari: common Yash...it's time to have fun, i got Maan's shoes with me...wait a minute


Yash's self thought: she forgets everything if it comes to the matter of Geet


Pari came to Maan demanding money inorder to get his shoes back. Vicky is bargaining with Pari, Maan remained silent looking at them.


Pari: this is not fair

Vicky: i have to say this

Maan: Vicky that's ok


Maan gave a cover to Pari in exchange of his shoes. Pari opened the cover and found a cheque and one letter, she opened the letter and found that she is promoted as TEAM LEADER. She didn't understand anything, she thought of talking with Maan about the band increment.


Pari : Maan what is this?...band increment in return for shoes

Maan: i have decided this earlier but gave the promotion letter now

Pari: but Maan...


Mohindar came and took Maan and Geet along with them before Pari could speak anything.


Geet: thanq Maan

Maan(winked): anything for my sexy

Geet: Oh hello! Mr.Khurana...u r not doing me any favour, she deserves it


Maan smiled because he knows that he couldn't argue with her.

Maan: agreed Mrs.Khurana


Vidaai Ceremony at the exit of Handa Mansion


Geet threw back handful of puffed rice back at the main exit of her father's home as a token of her father's prosperity and good luck. She looked back at the home where she has grown up now she is leaving her home, her family, her parents, and her brother forever. Maan wiped off the tears flwoing from her eyes which she is unaware of. A new life is waiting for her, new relations, new family and new home everything would be new from the very next moment. Maaneet boarded a car which is beautifully decorated with flowers and Geet headed her way towards her new home. Mohindar and Rano looked at her daughter who is leaving them, they wished her a happy and beautiful life whole heartedly.


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At Groom's house


Maaneet came to the entrance of groom's house, Savitri Devi and Pari are present at the other side of the entrance welcoming them. Geet is welcomed by putting the sarson ka tel (mustard oil) on both the sides of the entrance door. Then Pari took traditional aarti of both the bride and the groom. Dadima took them to the pooja room to seek the blessings of God.

Maan and Geet are made to sit opposite to each other and a massive plate stuffed with milk and driniking water is placed between them. Pari is suppossd to drop her ring in that plate as they considered Pari to be Geet's sister in each and every ritual they have perfomed. Titu, Vicky, Yash , Pari and few other friends are eagerly wating for the "Kangna" game to begin.


Pari : listen up guyz i will drop this ring in the plate 3 times, the one who picks up the ring for the maximum number of times will dominate the other for the rest of their married life...ok here i go 1...2...3


Maan and Geet placed their hands in the plate to get hold of the ring.


Titu: juju...commom on...u have to win

Vicky: bhabi u should win


Pari: Maan defeat this little Demon

Geet has seen seriously at Pari

Pari: i mean..Geet has to win


Geet smiled and got busy fighting with Maan to find out the ring. As pari said she is the Demon she pinched on Maan's hand when Maan withdrew his hand and she got hold of the ring. Maan got furious as Geet cheated him to win.


Pari: hmm Geet won...the score is 1-0

She dropped the ring for the second time in the plate.


This time Maan moved closed to Geet and blew air near her ear, Geet felt ticklish sensation and looked at Maan. Maan winked at her and she forgot about the ring and started staring at him...obviously Maan won this time. This time Geet became angry on him and Maan smirked at her.


Pari: the score is 1-1


She dropped the ring for the third time and every one became curious this time, because this is the last chance which decides the winner. They are eagerly waiting to know the result but nobody is picking up the ring the time is passing but they are still fighting.


Titu: juju how much time will u take...plz make it fast

Vicky: bhabi don't lose this chance...u have to win


But the fact is, they are playing with each others hands instead of searching the ring. Geet wants Maan to win and Maan want Geet to win...they are passing the time just by moving their hands in the plate. Pari got frustrated and lifted Maan's hand from the plate every body got surprised looking at his hand and later bursted into laughter. Geet's hand also came out of the plate when Pari lifed Maan's hand as Maan is holding Geet's hand with his'. Geet felt embarrassed at Maan's mischief.


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Geet: Pari mujhe sach me dar lag raha hai...mujhe Maan ke paas nahi jana hai


Pari got shocked listening to Geet


Pari: am i dreaming?...did u say that u r afraid to be with Maan...Demon herself is telling that she is scared of someone, i couldn't believe my ears...actually Maan should get scared to be with u all alone the whole night...bechara MK


Geet: Pari stop kidding...i am really scared


Pari: hmmm Geet..u r talking as if Maan is a stranger...u both r good friends before becoming life partners...which thing is bothering u...vaise u both can't stay away from each other for few minutes right...then y r talking like this now


Geet: that is different...but today...suhaag raat ka matlab toh tum jaante hona...that very word is scaring me to death...i don't know how to behave infront of him, it is not that we have never been close to each other...but still i am feeling scared, if i do anything stupid and hurt him...u know about my bad temper right...i will become angry for silly things if i behave stupidly with him...i don't know what he is expecting from me..i am thinking of this since yesterday when i have seen that stupid lingerie..i know that we are wife and husband now...but i don't think i am ready for all this


Pari: Geet u r really stupid...every girl dreams of this day, it is not that they are bold ofcourse they do get scared...but think once, u want to spoil the dream of Maan..do u want to disappoint him?...u want him to wait when he has every right to make u his'...remove all the inhibitions from ur over smart brain...he is waiting for u outside


Geet: but Pari...


Pari : no if's and but's...stop thinking foolishly...u know that u also want this to happen but ur stupidity is dominating ur thoughts...


Someone knocked on the door asking Pari to come outside


Pari: relax...everthing would be fine


She kissed on Geet's forehead and left from there. Geet is still feeling nervous but she is left with no other option other than to face her HONEY. She heard the creaking sound of the door, she covered her face with the ghoongat, sat at the center of the bed and her head bent down just like a typical blushing Indian bride.

PRECAP: both of them laid on the bed with their backs facing each other( i know that u guyz r angry on me...but the DEMON in me wants this PRECAP to happen😈...common guyz let us start the fight, i am ready to get bashed🤣)


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.


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⭐️Happy Independence Day frnz⭐️


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PART - XLII

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome yaar ... seems like the demon gonna wake up !! 😆
i dont think maan ll leave any chance to irritate her ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
what happened b/w them in precap 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...precape is interesting...cont soon...
Edited by priya.shilpa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely n awesome part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. finally maaneet r in km and geet is scared of maan. yeh ulti ganga kaise beh rahi hai. omg precap is scary yaar. i know u want to do it. it will make it interesting. seee now every one is more interested in precap than update itself.😆😆😆😆

pls pla try to update fast. and thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part
Deeps no bashing we believes in tomorrows😆😆
thanks for pm

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