I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 1 - Page 71

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Posted: 14 years ago
cutie update love...
sorry 4 commenting late...ws nt well...
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great going . interesting and hot precap.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lolz at maan and geet, dubble lolz to pari
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really sweet update... waiting 4 next update...
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wow wow wow super awesome update loved it
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great update dear
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amazing part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow awesome luved it
Superbb n lured cutie very much
N d way richards took away geets 1st kiss
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Posted: 14 years ago


PART - XIII

PART - XIV


"ha papa everything is fine"

"We went to the zoo yesterday, i have seen KICHI over there."

"Pari is busy with some work so she didn't come with us."

"i bought a teddy yesterday, it's so cute i have named it CUTIE"

"ok papa, i am getting late...i will call mom tomorrow"

"bye"


Geet is getting ready to leave for the office. Pari is standing at entrance of her room.


Pari : Geet shall we go?

Geet : ya i am coming...just a moment

Geet is not looking at Pari she is placing her laptop in the bag while answering Pari.

Geet : ha ... let's go now


Geet turned towards Pari, she got surprised looking at Pari. Pari is wearing a sleeveless and short dress flaunting her sexy legs and thighs.




Geet : Is there anything special today?...Yash is not there here right, then y did u wear this dress...kiski hosh udane koshish chal rahi hai


Pari's selfthought : aur kiski tumhari honevali boyfriend ki...today's plan is to flirt with MK so that u get jealous of me and understand ur feelings for him...i am going to utilise the most famous, popular and OLD 'J' technique...OLD is always GOLD and i am going to succeed for sure...Geet... get ready for my 'J' treatment.


Pari : just like that, i want to feel special today...agar mujhe aise dekhke kisiki hosh ud gayi toh isme meri koyi galti nahi hai


Maan : If ur busy international business discussions have completed shall we go


Pari came close to Maan placed her hand on his shoulder.

"ofcourse yes... MK" she said with a sexy voice.


Maan observed the change in Pari's behaviour, he thought she is being mischievous. He ignored her mischief by giving a faint smile. Pari is checking for Geet's reaction, to her surprise Geet didn't mind her being close to Maan.


Pari's selfthought : what is this? Geet is not even paying attention towards what i am doing...hmmm noprobs i will try another idea


They have reached the office. Pari occupied Geet's place which is next to Maan.


Pari : Geet i have some issues which i need to verify with MK and get the things clarified...will u plz exchange ur seat with mine

Geet : ok


Pari's self thought: now it's time to distract MK's attention and make sure that Geet sees both of us together


She sat in the chair cross legged and placed the lap top in her lap. She tilted her chair towards Maan's direction and moved her chair close to his chair intentionally. Maan is busy with his work. Pari is thinking of an excuse to start a silly chatter with Maan...but before she thought of an excuse...


Geet : Maan did u check the mail which i have sent to u


Geet said this to Maan moving Pari's chair back so that she could see Maan. Maan turned towards Geet and said "ya i am checking the same... i will talk with u after reading the details completely". Geet moved her chair back to her original place and Pari also moved her chair to the front. Maan continued with his work.


(i have represented the direction in which Geet is moving Pari's chair to talk with Maan...hope it is clear for those who got confused with my explanation)





Within 2 seconds

Geet again moved back Pari's chair

Geet : Maan did u see what Mr.Chopra mentioned, maybe we need to change our plan

Maan: ya u r right, we have completed most of the designing part making changes at this point means redoing the entire task ...it takes a lot of time

Geet : ya


Geet again moved back to her place and Pari adjusted her chair cursing the wheel chairs they are provided with. Because of these wheel chairs Geet is easily pushing,pulling,grabbing and dragging Pari's chair according to her wish without even asking Pari's permission and without thinking whether she is disturbing her or not.


10 seconds later

Maan called Geet. Geet again pushed away Pari's chair which is coming in between her and Maan.

Geet : yes Maan

Maan : i think we need to discuss with Rohan and Chopra about the changes that have to be made.

Geet : Ok

They again moved back to their places.


5 seconds later.

Geet again pushed back Pari's chair calling Maan. Pari got irritated by now ...they are neither allowing her to flirt with Maan nor allowing her to do her office work.

Geet : Maan i think...


Pari : enough u both ... u r not letting me to concentrate on my work, y r u guyz disturbing me like this...Geet plz come back to ur place and let me work peacefully.


Geet and Maan exchanged looks, Geet silently exchanged her place with Pari.


Pari is feeling frustrated at the same time angry because her plan became an utter flop. Neither Maan is interested in her sexy legs nor Geet is jealous of her closeness with Maan. She remembered what she thought about her plan in the morning


"i am going to utilise the most famous, popular and OLD 'J' technique...OLD is always GOLD and i am going to succeed for sure...Geet... get ready for my 'J'- treatment"


Pari' self thought: 'J'- treatment ...my foot!!!. All these stupid ideas work only in movies and daily soaps not in real life. I don't think there is anything between them...look at them they r so busy with their discussions.


Is that so necessary to talk about each and every single word mentioned in the mail? Can't they live without talking with each other for few seconds? They didn't even allow me to login to my web page they disturbed me for every 2 seconds, disgusting...suddenly she realised something...wait a minute!!!


She started searching answers for the questions running in her mind


"look at them they r so busy with their discussions." - means

Yes they r so deeply engrossed in their discussion that they didn't even notice that i am there in between them


"Is that so necessary to talk about each and every single word mentioned in the mail? Can't they live without talking with each other for few seconds?" - means

They r just searching for an excuse to talk with each other


"They didn't even allow me to login to my web page they disturbed me for every 2 seconds" - means

They r completely lost in each other and they need the other persons company very badly


Yes, yes, yes...i got it. I am successful, i found it ...i found it... THEY R IN LOVE - ofcourse may be they are at the starting stage. That's the magic of love - pyaar karne valon se pehle unhe dekhne valon ko ye baat pata chal jata hai . I am so happy for them. Though my J-plan didn't work, somehow i got to know that SOMETHING (pyar ka chakkar) is going on between them. What should i do know? With whom should i share this good new?... Yes Yash!!!


Pari called Yash and told him that Geet is in Love with Maan and she is so happy for both of them. Pari's excitement wondered Yash and then he understood that Pari is very much attached to Geet.


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At night in their house


Maan (speaking with Mr.Chopra on his phone): yes Mr.Chopra finalise the deal, i have seen the deal agreement everything is ok. Go with it and don't give me any excuses this deal is very important not even a single mistake should creep into it. Update me about the progress promptly...


Maan heard a big sound coming from the room beside his own. The sound is from the music player, songs are played on high volume which is disturbing him as well as Pari.


Pari : Geet y don't u sleep...stop disturbing my sleep with ur stupid songs...it's very much annoying


Pari placed a pillow on her ears to escape from loud noise created by the songs which are being played by Geet. Maan didn't know who is playing the songs at this time of night. He ended his conversation with Mr.Chopra and came out of his room to check from where this noise is coming. He moved in the direction from where the sound is coming and stopped infront of Geet's room.


Geet is struggling to sleep, she took out the earphones from her ear and got off from the bed. She switched on the CD player, a song started playing with a high volume as soon as she turned on the CD player. She rushed for the remote to decrease the volume as she is aware that this sound would disturb the sleep of Maan and Pari.


Maan knocked on Geet's door to ask her to reduce the volume. Geet didn't hear the knock on the door because of the loud music. Maan went near the window and moved the curtain aside so that he could call Geet. When he tried to call Geet, she is reducing the volume on the remote. When the sound decreased Maan turned his legs towards the direction of his room. But he didn't move looking at what Geet is doing.


After reducing the volume Geet stiffened her body removed her hair band and encircled the hair band around her hand just like a bracelet, undid the zip of her sweat shirt and threw it on the bed ' the sweat shirt fell on CUTIE's face closing her(cutie's) eyes. She started opening her shirt buttons one by one and threw her shirt also aside. She is now wearing a black night pant and a maroon colour thin strapped inner wear which is complimenting her white skin. The slip is having a deep cleavage though the slip is decent enough covering her waist, it is flaunting each and every curve of her body making her look sexy enough to grab Maan's attention. She started walking towards the mirror present at the dressing table like a model walking on the ramp placing her hands on both sides of her waist.


Then she started moving her waist slowly according to the music beats as the song Zara Zara touch me touch me is being played

All I Seee
I n Hersszzz
Touch
Wats D Fun ?
Ah Ah
Do
U Know Wht I Mean It Isz ?

Mmm
Sup SupOoo
Can I Get Ya
Ooo
Can I Touch YaOoo
Can I Get Ya
Ooo
Can I Touch Ya

She started enacting according to the lyrics of the song. She is looking at herself in the mirror while she is dancing to the song. Her waist is swinging back and forth. She gave a seducing look while her eyes are filled with desire. Her hair is floating in the air and falling on her eyes and lips as she is rotating her head.

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara .. Ooo Ooo Ooo


Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

She is moving her fingers slowly and smoothly on her skin - from her hand, arms, shoulder, neck then her fingers took a turn and now her fingers travelled through her cleavage proceeded towards her stomach and ended on her waist.

Ah Zara Zara

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara

Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara

Ooo Ooo Ooo

She parted her lips in a way as if she is inviting someone to kiss her. She got lost in the song, she is enjoying herself and completely got engrossed into the beats of the music. She didn't notice that Maan is watching her seductive dance moves. She continued to dance until she got tired and exhausted. She blew a flying kiss to herself in the mirror and stopped the CD player. She is sweating by now, she wiped off her sweat removed the sweatshirt form CUTIE's face, took CUTIE into her arms, hugged her tightly and kissed Cutie on her nose. She said gud night to cutie and turned off the lights in her room.


Maan is shocked and completely taken back by watching this new facet of Geet. It is not that he has never seen beautiful girls dancing half naked in movies, but he never thought that Geet could be so bold, sexy and seductive. He has seen her blushing, showing anger, being sweet, crying out in pain, being emotional but he never imagined her to be bold and sexy - the way she is dancing it's very much seducing - her eyes, her lips, the way she is moving her waist, the attitude on her face - she is dancing with full of confidence, her expressions are marvellous. She is even giving lip sync to the song without any kind of hesitation. Maan remained in a frozen state watching the entire LIVE DANCE SHOW going on before him. Geet's final touch (flying kiss) made him go crazy. Even though she switched off the lights, he remained there for 10 minutes replaying the whole song in his mind again and again.


He took steps towards his room in a trance, he entered his room and landed on his bed with a thud. He buried his head into the pillow and whispered to himself "SEXY... BAR... DANCER".


PRECAP: she opened the top button of her shirt and removed the scarf, his eyes got fixed on her cleavage.


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PART - XV

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago

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