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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

That was an action packed update(all thanks to Geet😆) though all of us suspected him, the way you brought the truth out was outstanding, Maan is finding it difficult to control his sherni's anger!!!

Now what's up with Daadi and Mumbai???



That was an action packed update(all thanks to Geet😆) - ya 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating frnz

this is going to be small part, can't help it
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XLIX


Pari and Geet came to Maan's cabin and have seen Police taking Rajendran along with them. Maan pulled Geet towards himself after the police left from there.


Maan: what do u think of urself...don't forget that u r a woman...what might have happened if he reverts on u


Maan is holding Geet's shoulders tightly he is hurting her without his knowledge, anger in his voice and concern in his eyes are evident.


Geet(seriously): would u remain silent if anyone dares to do something to me infront of u?


Maan: what do u mean by that...forget about doing something to u, i will kill the person if he dares to come near u


Geet: Maan u r my strength...ur presence around me gives the confidence to do anything...i know that u will be there for me in whatever i do


Maan loosened the grip on her shoulders listening to what she said. His anger melted away and he felt happy that she believes that he is her strength and whatever she does is because of the trust on him.


Maan: that doesn't mean that u invite the trouble unnecessarily ... don't repeat this again


Maan hugged her to ease her and he tried to lighten the situation.


Maan: vaise Geet ur idea of showing our engagement CD to the client is mind blowing


She understood that he is pulling her leg, she hit him on his chest.


Maan: seriously Geet...the way u managed to do the changes within few hours is brilliant...thanx a lot


Geet: don't thank me...both of us should thank Pari...she helped me a lot, otherwise i wouldn't be able to do it


Maan and Geet turned towards Pari. Maan signalled her to come near him.


Maan: thanq Pari


Pari: that's my duty...vaise Maan mujhe lagta hai ki Geet is not using the anger-management CD gifted by u...today she has become a real DEMON


Maan laughed listening to Pari


Geet: Pari stop it

Pari: anyways...thank god it's over


Geet: ya it's over and we were able to handle the situation infront of the clients


Maan: well!!... we are the perfect team

Geet: yes a perfect team of good friends


M,G and P had a group hug and broke off from the hug but still Pari and Geet are placing their hands on Maan's shoulders and Maan placed his hands on both Pari and Geet's waists, they are still talking about something and completely ignored Yash's presence in the cabin. Yash looked at the way Pari is being close to Maan and he is trying for an excuse to take away Pari from there.


Yash went near them he took Pari's hand into his' and slowly pulled her towards himself and felt relieved.

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After 3 days @ Khurana Mansion


Geet: Maan what's wrong ...with whom r u talking?

Maan: dadima ne call kiya


Geet: how is she?...is everything fine?

Maan: we have to go to Mumabi...there is some problem over there Dadima needs us


Geet: dadima toh thik hena?

Maan: ya she is fine..but we have go there immediately


Geet: when r we going?

Maan: pack the things we are leaving today itself...may be we have to stay there for 2 days

Geet: Ok...then i have to hurry up


Geet started packing the luggage hurriedly, Maan smiled to himself looking at her.


@ Airport


Maan: the flight has arrived let's go

Geet: there is still some time


Maan: no the flight has arrived...we are getting late come with me

Geet: Maan the flight is not for Mumbai...where r we going?


Maan: we are going to swiss

Geet: what?

Maan: first come with me...i will explain u everything later


Geet followed Maan reluctantly cursing him for not informing her y he has suddenly changed the plan. They have entered the plane and occupied their seats, Geet remained silent waiting for Maan to explain...but she didn't get any answer from Maan.


Geet: will u tell me y are we going to Switzerland suddenly? Y did u lie to me that we are going to Mumbai...y did u change the plan...do u know how much u scared me?...u have said that Dadima has some problem in Mumbai and i thought we...


Maan closed her mouth


Maan: don't worry ...everything is fine at Mumbai. We are going to swiss for our Honey Moon... i wanted to give u surprise so i didn't tell u before...is everything clear now


Maan removed his hand from her mouth. Geet made her eyes big she really got surprised listening to the word HONEY MOON...she didn't react for few seconds


Maan: Geet ...Geet... i am talking with u


Geet: what is this Maan...y didn't u inform me before...how many days r we staying there?...and what's the need to go for Honey Moon after 2 and half months of our marriage


Maan: Geet i thought u would jump out of happiness...but u would never fail to surprise me...see i was unable to take u anywhere because of the project, now everything has finished and i want to spend quality time with my wife...we are going to spend a week in Switzerland only u and me, no work and no disturbance...got it


Geet: one week? ...but u i have packed the luggage just for 2 days ...what about...

Maan: Geet stop it...we will do shopping over there and just stop ur non-stop interrogation


Geet made a pout and remained silent looking straight into his eyes. Maan leaned forward he touched her forehead with his' and whispered on her lips.


Maan: from this second on wards u have to think only about ur honey...don't dare to think about anything else...i want all ur thoughts to roam around me and only me ...one whole week in swiss only u and me


Geet blushed and pecked on Maan's nose.


Geet: stupid..i hate u

Maan: thanq very much for hating me

Geet (pulling Maan's cheeks): u r so sweeettt


Maan kissed Geet's hand and both of them got lost in each of others eyes


PRECAP: Maaneet alone @ SWISS😉☺️


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.




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thought of sharing this line with u guyz don't know who wrote this line

The best relation is one in which yesterday's fight doesn't stop today's communication


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Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yar because i was busy last 4,5 updates i was not reading ..and now i got really bored with studies and thought read something ..ooo and what i got ...thank god ..i havent read last 2, 3 days and raed it all in one go ..otherwise suspense se meim mar hee jatheee...wowww

superb action drama...and finally ..

i think i complained in my comment about this kanjoos singh khurana and honey moon...lol...so finally...

now sab ko fursath mileee lolll

ps: emoticons vrs leliye ...because of my updates and exams...

Originally posted by: sldeeps

Inka Kya Hoga ...😕...maaki choose khurana honeymoon ke liye kyun nahee lejathee apney wife ko...

honeymoon - hmmm sochna padega...i will ask Maan to free his work schedule


lol so u answered me ... now only seen ...thank you ..will be waiting ...

hayee swtz and ..hi hi ..Geet packed for Mumbai ..so ...that means ...no warm cloths ...and ...not to worry ...lol we have hot maan ...me lubbing it ... chee chee shame on you kaisa aisa waisa sochtha hi...maan blanket ...wow wish i could get ...chee chee u are spoiling us ..dirty deeps ...chee chee...

Ha do char din ke baad hee shopping karna thab thak geet baby ko enjoy karney dena ..lol

Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update .i am loving ur captions at the end . it is so informative and true to life .
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear maan planned honeymoon without the knowledge of geet great surprise
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!
Precap ☺️
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting to read the nxt part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

Cant believe that i guess that Maan was plaaning for their HM without Geet knowledge... wah... am just so happy about my predication...😃

Loved the update... Maan's concern due to Geet's behavior and Geet's secured feeling... wow... it was really amazing... all i could sense was their love in these sequences...

Yash trying to take pari off seeing her close to maan...😆

HM in switzerland... wow... dreamy... and the surprise factor... superb...

Precap is 😉😳... 😃... waiting eagerly for the next one...

This one was smaller... chalega... hope to get a long update tomorrow


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Awww love ther friendship
Can't wait for honeymoon
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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