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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XXXIV


Maan couldn't sleep recollecting what Geet's father told before taking Geet with him.


"she has been away from us for 2 years and now she is getting married soon...this is the only time left for us to spend with Geet...we are taking her also along with us"


Maan's self thought: what does he mean by that? Does it imply that i couldn't meet Geet till we get married...this is ridiculous!!...we didn't discuss anything about when the marriage should happen...that means Geet won't come to Bangalore before marriage...think Maan, think how to eliminate the distance between u and Geet


Plan 1: Ok i will go to her place to meet her - but how would i go to her place without any reason


Plan 2: i will ask her to come to Bangalore on the excuse of some work - no her father won't send her, even if he sends her she has to leave again within few days


Plan 3: i will ask dadima to fix the marriage date as soon as possible - no Maan u got engaged today itself and u r going to ask dadima about the marriage tomorrow... stop it Maan she is aware of when and how to do the marriage, if dadima agreed for the engagement suddenly that doesn't mean that she will rush for the marriage also


Oh Man!! What the hell is this?...how could she leave me and just go along with her father...stupid pata nahi ab kya kar rahi hogi


Then he received a message form Geet "gud night honey... uummahhh", Maan read the message and smiled to himself. He thought of wishing her back but thought of something and didn't wish her back...he again received a message from her after 5 mins


"Idiot did u go to bed early without wishing me...call me early morning tomorrow and wish me back"


He smiled looking at the message but didn't wish her back, he is enjoying the way Geet is becoming restless because of his silent treatment. Then suddenly he came up with an idea.


Maan's self thought: she messaged me again because i didn't wish her back, if i had wished her back she would have slept peacefully...now i got it, i know how to bring u back...i am not going to answer any of ur calls and messages, then u will come to Bangalore by urself...hmmm idea seems to be nice without any effort from my side DEMON will appear infront of me...SILENT TREATMENT great Maan...i will start counting the days, let me see how many days u can stay away from me... would be Mrs.GEET KHURANA


As per the plan he didn't answer her calls and messages. Geet for the first few days got busy with her friends so she thought that Maan might be busy and didn't try to find out his intention behind ignoring her calls...but as the days passed she didn't get reply for a single message so she got irritated and frustrated by Maan's SILENT TREATMENT, she is missing Maan and his mischief. On the other side Maan is looking at her messages and controlling himself from answering back, he intentionally kept himself busy with the work. He used to read the messages again and again whenever he felt that he is missing her non-stop chatter.


One week passed like this Maan wondered how many days will Geet bear this silence from him. He laid on his bed took his cell phone and opened INBOX to check messages from Geet before sleeping.


"hi honey r u busy with ur work...it's ok call me when u r free"

"y r u not calling me...sry honey if i have hurt u...call me once plz"


He smiled looking at her pleading messages


"u IDIOT i hate u...don't u find 5 minutes of free time to call me"

"text me a message..indicating that u r alive...u stupid"


Maan laughed looking at the angry messages


"if u don't call me MR.KHURANA...i will...i will cancel our engagement"


Maan: ab yahi baaki hai...u have pleaded me, scolded me and now threatening me...IDIOT come to me stop sending these messages


"Mr.Khurana...do u think Rohan and me would make a nice pair?"


Maan: what the hell is this?...when did she send this message...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, ye Geet uss Rohan ko nahi bhoolne vali...stupid girl


He thought of breaking the cell phone looking at Rohan's name, but these messages are relieving him and soothing him from his pain of staying away from Geet...so he couldn't break the cell phone, he deleted that message and threw the phone aside on the bed...then a new message came..he took his cell phone to check the message... it's from Geet


"plz call me sexy once...plz honey"


Maan felt like running to her room and kissing her if she were sleeping beside his room as they used to be in Australia.


Maan: enough of this torture... Geet plz come to me...i don't know what excuse u r going to give ur father but i want u to be infornt of me as soon as possible...stupid think of it and stop sending these messages


He hugged his pillow and went to sleep with great difficulty dreaming about Geet.


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Mohindar: Geet do u want me to talk with Maan once

Geet: that's ok dad...may be u r right he might be busy


Mohindar: ok...as u wish

Geet: dad...u do one thing call him once from ur mobile..let's find out he is busy or not


Mohindar(laughed): ok...u want me talk with him or will u talk with him

Geet: i will talk with him...no no dad u talk with him...no i think i should talk with him


Mohindar: Geet decide fast

Geet: i don't know


Mohindar: Ok i will call him and ask him to talk with u

Geet: ok


Maan's cell phone is ringing when he is about to leave for the office, he has seen that Mohindar is calling him.


Maan's self thought: Geet's dad...y is he calling me? Is Geet calling me from his cell phone? But what if her dad wants to talk with me about the marriage...i think i have to attend this call


Maan answered the call but didn't speak anything


Mohindar: hello Maan beta


Maan responded after listening to Mohindar's voice


Maan: ya Uncle, how r u?

Mohindar: i am fine...seems u have become busy with ur work


Maan: ya a little bit

Mohindar: ek minute beta...i got another call...talk with Geet till then


Maan: it's ok uncle call me when u r free, i have to go to the office...bye uncle


Maan ended the call without waiting for the reply from Mohindar.


Mohindar: but Maan beta...hmm phone kaat diya...Geet i think he is really busy


Geet: no dad i think he is doing this intentionally, if he is really busy he shouldn't attend ur call also right...when u said that i will talk with him, he has ended the call...i know he is avoiding me intentionally

Mohindar: Geet don't come to conclusions


Geet: no dad..aap Maan ke bareme nahi jaante ho...his one and only aim in life is to tease GEET and to irritate GEET...i know how to deal with him...dad do u know the phone number of VICKY

Mohindar: yes ...but what r u going to do with VICKY's phone number


Geet: don't worry dad...i am not going to KILL Maan...but i am going to show him HELL when he is alive itself

Mohindar: Geet stop it...don't do anything that would make him angry


Geet: oh yeah angry... he can avoid me, tease me and irritate me but i shouldn't do anything...dad aap apna damaad ke bareme itna mat sochiyega voh koyi chota sa bacha nahi hai


Mohindar: oh god...save Maan from Geet

Geet: and dad don't tell anything to Maan that i am planning against him ...ok

Mohindar: ok


Mohindar gave Vicky's phone number to Geet and went to office worrying what she is going to do to Maan.


Geet: MAAN SINGH KHURANA...ab dekho kaise mai tumhara band bajati hu

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Maan received a message from Geet that night.


"sleep this night peacefully honey...from tomorrow onwards u can't sleep...because i am going to make ur life HELL"


Maan: Oh No!!..what is she upto? What is she going to do now? y did she become violent suddenly..i didn't do anything right, then y is she threatening me...how would she make my life hell without coming here...hmmm let's see

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Next Morning


Maan came to his room after finishing his work out to take bath, he has seen coffee ready for him at the table. He sat in the chair and took the cup into his hand, he has seen a letter in the tray beside the coffee cup.


"Hi Honey... Good morning...this coffee is from ur sexy"


Maan got thrilled looking at the letter and felt happy as well, he thought Geet came back to Bangalore looking at the message on the paper. The message is not hand written it is in printed format, he went outside the room to check whether Geet is somewhere near his room. He didn't find the sign of Geet anywhere, he came inside and took a sip from the coffee. He spat out the coffee shouting "GEEET...". Someone added chilli powder instead of sugar in the coffee.


Maan's self thought: aisi harkate sirf Geet hi kar sakti hai..but where is she, did she come here or does some else is helping her


He called Nakul (the head servant of the house) to come to his room.


Maan: who prepared this coffee?

Nakul: i have prepared this coffee sir

Maan: did u bring this coffee here

Nakul: yes sir

Maan: did any guest come to the house yesterday or today

Nakul: no sir

Maan: ok u can leave now


Maan's self thought: If Geet didn't come here who is helping her

PRECAP: Geet i will call u after 15 minutes maybe i could help u in giving an excuse to ur father to come to Bangalore


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.


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⭐️Happy Friend Ship day frnz⭐️


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PART - XXXV

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god , awsome yaar ...i jst cant stop laughing ...coffee with chili ..nice combination ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh so that was it Maan wanted to meet Geet..uff i got worried with the last post...jjee sweet revenge now from geet...please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the awesome update!
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Posted: 13 years ago


arey ab tho learn kar learn kar ..ye hi friendship ..


.vicky is helping ? how dare he ? Bachu pitney wala hi ..buree tharah se...lol u should have kept the suspense e ...


Edited by an.anit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Haha luving maans teasing but now he has to face geet handas wrath!!
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!
Loved it!!!
Thx for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
so maan is giving geet "silent treatment".
lol!...poor maan!...god save him from geet!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...👏
Maan slient treatment was nice...😆
Now its geet turn...Poor maan what is going to do😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update yaar
u r a awesome writer

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