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Posted: 13 years ago
deeps ek ghanta ho gaya since u post the msg that u hv started typing... how much more time will u take? am waiting eagerly... 😛😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mesmerizing update Deeps.😍..can't wait for Maaneet's HM.😳.
Edited by bobby13rocks - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

deeps ek ghanta ho gaya since u post the msg that u hv started typing... how much more time will u take? am waiting eagerly... 😛😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
hey deeps awesome part atlast u granted my wish now they r out on honeymoon so no work...will be waiting 4 nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i believe in same line for my self!
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Posted: 13 years ago

d update is awsomee...

maan surprised me tooo

i think dere is some prblm in mumbai...

but all izz welll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

have a nyc ☺️honeymoon😳 MAANEET😳☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - L



DAY - 1 @ SWISS


Maaneet arrived at Zurich and took train to reach Lucerne. Lucerne was voted the fifth most popular tourism destination in the world in 2010,it has so many tourist attractions over there. Maan has planeed the tour accordingly to present Geet the most precious and romantic moments of life.



Geet got lost in admiring the scenic beauty through the window of the train. The cold climate started it's spell on Geet. She started shivering and moved close to Maan and hugged him tightly without her knowledge. Maan hugged her and started enjoying the romantic ambiance.


Geet: the first thing we have to do immediately after reaching the city is...

Maan: what r u talking about?


Geet: we have to go for shopping and purchase some warm clothes...OMG!! i can't bear this cold climate...y didn't u tell me before i would have brought cutie also along with us...i think i have to buy one more teddy


Maan: what?... one more cutie?...iski koi jaarori nahi hai

Geet: Maan ...i am serious,the climate is too cool...see how my hands are shivering


Maan entwined his fingers with hers' to give her the warmth of his body.


Maan(whispered): how do u feel now?

Geet(with fake anger) : Maan...i never thought u r such a ...stupid


She scolded him but couldn't stop herself from cuddling him.


They have reached Lucerne, Maan has booked a Villa for one week. Geet got thrilled looking at the Villa, it is luxurious having all the facilities and the view from the bedroom's balcony is splendid.




She entered the bedroom and dropped the luggage and rushed towards the balcony. She opened her mouth wide open looking at the trees covered with snow and the view of the entire city, she felt as if she is seeing some beautiful sketch of God's creation. She got lost in admiring the beauty of the city a tender smile appeared on her lips and her eyes are not blinking trying to drink the beauty of the nature. Maan came to her and hugged her from the back looking at the houses covered with snow.


Maan: how is the city sexy?

Geet : excellent honey...i love this place...superb selection...Maan u r really such a cutie pie


She pulled his cheeks

Maan: cutie pie???...what kind of comparision is that?


She turned towards him and placed her hands on his shoulder.

Geet: oh mera MACHO...thanq very much for selecting such a wonderful place


She bit his nose and thanked him.

Maan: Geet tum sudharne vali nahi ho


He smiled and kissed on her cheek.


They went to the shopping as Geet insisted, they roamed around the OLD TOWN of Lucerne wondering the way all the buildings have been ornately decorated on the outside. Geet preferred to walk so that they could enjoy the chillness they spent hours together for shopping and they have seen the world's famous CHAPEL BRIDGE which is glowing with the lights in the dusk.

CHAPEL BRIDGE





Now both of them got exhausted and tiered as they walked number of kms without their knowledge so they thought of taking a cab to return. But the snow fall blocked the road and they couldn't take a cab cursing their bad luck they walked to the villa carrying the shopping bags with them.


Geet laid on the bed with a thud as soon as they reached the Villa.


Geet: OMG!!! i am completely exhausted i thought of enjoying the climate but see now what has happened my legs are paining

Maan: ya i am also feeling tired..wait a minute i will check whether the chef has prepared something for us


After half an hour the chef served them the food in the bedroom itself. They laid on the bed chatting about the how the day went on.


Geet: Maan how many shops u made us visit to buy a single shirt...ufff i thougth only girls spend hours together for shopping...u will be checking for the color, durability, quality, comfort what not...jindagi bhar ek hi shirt pehen loge kya?


Maan: tum meri majak uda rahe ho?...i am checking for all these qualities because i know what the shirt has to undergo because of u

Geet: becaue of me?...what did i do?


Maan: what did u do?...my wardrobe became empty because of the tigress...u tore all my shirts and now u r making an innocent face as if u don't know any thing


Geet smiled listening to him.They are playing with their hands all throughout their conversation.


Geet: Oh God!!...my legs are still paining...if the snow fall blocks the roads tomorrow also, i am not going anywhere...i am happy staying inside the villa...oh it's so painful


Maan: kya hua abhi bhi dard ho raha hai

Geet: ya Maan


Maan sat on the bed and placed Geet's legs into his lap. He is pressing her legs to reduce the pain, Geet got shocked looking at what he is doing.


Geet: hey what r u doing?...that's ok...leave my legs...plz Maan i am fine


She tried to take away her legs from his grip and raise to a sitting posture but Maan didn't allow her to sit.


Maan: isshhh..lay down

Geet: Maan that's ok i am fine...leave my legs...Maan i am feeling ticklish sensation plz leave me


Maan: don't give me excuses

Geet: sachme mujhe...

Maan: shut up


Geet remained silent for few seconds and imagined something and started laughing.


Maan: y r u laughing?

Geet: i feel as if i am Lord Vishnu and ur Goddess Laskshmi and this bed is Adi Shesha


Maan got angry as she is teasing him and pinched on her feet. Geet screamed and raised to sitting posture, she clutched his collar and pulled him towards her.


Geet: enought stop it right now...i said i am ok...u are looking tierd, lay down

Maan: but Geet


She kept her finger on his lips and pushed him slowly backwards and made him lay on the bed.


Geet: now it's time for u to do the duty of my CUTIE


Maan smiled and wrapped his arms around her, she placed her head on his chest and closed her eyes her finger is still on Maan's lips.


Maan: gud night sexy


Maan kissed her finger as he wished her. Geet smiled and kissed on his shirt as she said "gud night honey"


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DAY - 2 @ Lucerne


Geet is waiting for Maan at the hall in the Villa


Geet: Maan where have u gone?


Maan came to her after half an hour


Geet: where did u go?...i have been waiting for u since1 hour...what made u take such a long time...


Maan closed her eyes and took her outside the villa


Geet: where r we going?

Maan: just come with me


He has removed the hands when they came outside. Geet looked in the direction Maan pointed she has seen two white horses running in the snow towards their direction, when the horses came near her then she has seen that it a horse driven luxurious cart and opened her mouth wide open.





Two white horses tied to the luxurious cart, the coach man are waiting for them to board the cart. Maan extended his hand and helped Geet to sit in the cart and then he sat beside her.


Geet: Maan what's all this?

Maan: u said ur legs are paining and u can't walk...so

Geet: so?

Maan: the roads are blocked today also

Geet: so?

Maan: we can't use cars in this snow and i don't want to strain my princess...so i thought of this alternative


Maan winked at Geet and Geet clutched his shoulder with her hands as she rested her head on his shoulder and smiled.


Geet: u r my darling


Maan smiled and took her free hand into his' and placed it in his lap. Geet felt a bit embarrassed the way they are roaming in the city like prince and princess but she is enjoying as if one of her dreams came true ' she used to dream that her prince charming came to her and eloped her to some dream land in a horse driven cart that would fly in the sky...but this is reality right so this cart can't fly ...sry Geet plz don't dream too much...Maan is just a human being not a GENIE to fulfil all ur wishes exactly the way u dreamt of.


LION MONUMENT



Lucerne is famous for churches, they have visited Jesuit Church and Collegial Church of SrLeodgar Hofkirche. They have seen the Lion Monument which is one of the most iconic monuments in Switzerland.

PRECAP: 5 more days in SWISS😳


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.



PART - LI


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thought of sharing this line with u guyz don't know who wrote this line

Never leave a true relation for few faults...nobody is perfect, nobody is correct and at the end Affection is always greater than Perfection

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Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved it !!!! !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
yar ...disappointed ...i want my bare😳Maan Blanket ..u know what i mean , my last comment...

what are they doing in their honeymoon ..this can be done later ...chee chee baabji...

and why you booked open carriage tell maan to book a half closed ...

chee cheee ...

yar honeymoon means full of chee chees ...

hope next five days this stupid maan wont disappoint geet

but agree its damn romantic ...and i think they have to do it after 2 three days spending their time in villa and tigress complain ..then ...go for site view ..

wink wink ...this is usually happens in honeymoon ..lol ..in most cases ...
huby intentions to show you villa/hotel room only , different rooms ... bathroom .tub .etc etc ...wink wink ..

then finally exhausted no more energy left wife complain ... whats the use of coming such location then half hearted-ly most husbands decide to roam around city ...but the secret is wife do enjoy huby;s stupidity ..lol
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make ur tigress to tell MAAN STOP ACTING LIKE A BOYFRIEND .... ACT LIKE HUSBAND ..😳..waiting the remaining rocking blushing 5 days ...kanjoos singh khurana only 5 days ..
AND DONT FORGET TO USE / WEAR MAAN"S SPECIAL GIFT ..WINK WINK THE PICTURE YOU HAVENT POSTED on chapter wait.

Originally posted by: sldeeps




PART - XXXIX

"to tame the wild tigress in my sexy"

She has seen lingerie in the box and opened her mouth wide open. Pari took the letter from geet's hand and laughed like hell looking at the lingerie


"to my chameleon... who keeps on changing the colours just like the colours of these roses"

"Miss.CRY BABY have some Chocolates and play with this KICHI...u kiddy always crying unnecessarily"

"this is to turn off the speaker of my FM RADIO"

"to TURN ON my SBD through this music"

"to cool the bad temper of the DEMON in u"

so ...
Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Maaneet romantic scene superb...⭐️
Continue soon😊

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