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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi..thanks 4 da pm n awesome update. It was sad, Poor Pari. Yash worried abt her! Geet was upset n sad as well. Everyone happy with baby's arrival. Dadi gives Geet a gift. Precap is superb. Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
haa i read it one go dear !!!!!!
yipee me!!!feeling sad for pari ...
ya she gave birth to a aboy!!!!!!
thats cool!!!!!!
aur feeling bad for pari ab uska kya hoga yaar!!!!!
anyways abb naam ki bari hai !!
dekthi thay hain ki kya naam hoga baby ka?😉????
ur amazing fire ji !!!
lage raho
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome updates yaar...
feeling bad for pari...even pari is in sorrow ,she take good care of geet...
pari is really a true friend...n titu ran😆 to see the baby...it was chooo adorable... i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
poor pari
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - LXV


Dadima: ye app keliye...khurana khaandan ko varas dene keliye


Geet is looking at her mom...Rano nodded indicating her to accept the gift..Geet smiled and took the jewellery box from her.


Titu: one more gift for didi

Rano: Titu keep quite


Everybody is overjoyed and having fun with the baby and teasing Geet...baby became uncomfortable as they are exchanging the baby from each and others hands so he started crying.


Rano: Titu give the baby to Geet...i think he is feeling hungry...feed him the milk


Geet looking at her uncomfortably since the room is filled with all the family members. A Nurse came to the room listening to the noise coming from the room.


Nurse: excuse me... patient ke saath itne saare log nahi reh sakte hai..aur aap logon ki vajah se doosri patients ko disturbance ho raha hai...and even the baby feels suffocated if so many people exist in the same room


Yash: we are leaving right now

Nurse: thanq


Nurse left from there and Yash took Pari along with him. Mohindar and others left the room as the baby is crying...Geet took the baby and fed him milk.


Geet: mom he is not drinking the milk...he is licking and biting me


Rano smiled and said "Geet ka bacha aisa nahi toh kaisa behave karega"


Geet: mom plz stop pulling my leg


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Pari: Yash y did u tell them...when i told u not to tell her anything about me

Yash: u mean to say that u would never tell her about our problem

Pari: i didn't mean that ...but this is not the right time


Yash: this is the right time...otherwise see the way they are talking with u..she doesn't know that u can't become a mother so she is teasing u every day and u r suffering unnecessarily...now she knows about u and she would be careful enough and won't hurt u by talking about something which would never happen


He went near Pari and placed his hand on her shoulder


Yash: not only this u will have someone to share ur pain other than me...and i know that both of u love each other very much and treat others problem as urs...she will be there to support u whenever u feel low..i didn't mean to ruin their precious moment ...i don't want them to hurt u...so i told them the truth


Pari: i know yash u have done this for me...but still...

Yash: that's ok she understood why i told them about u...plz don't cry


He wiped off her tears and she hugged him trying to get rid of the never ending pain.


Pari: yash the baby is so cute right?

Yash: yes


Pari: she is very lucky

Yash: Pari plz stop it

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After 11 days @ Khurana Mansion


Rano: Geet make it fast...Pandit has arrived and everything is ready

Geet: ha maa...dekho he is not listening to me..see how he is kicking me with his legs


Rano: don't u know how to change the nappy for ur kid?...i don't know how u r going to manage in my absence...give it to me

Geet: i am scared that i might hurt him


Rano: kuch nahi hoga

Geet: ok then i will try once


Rano: ha like that only

Pari: hi Geet...hi baby

Geet: hi Pari


Rano applied kajal to the baby's eyes and a beauty spot on the cheek.


Rano: now the baby is ready


Pari took the baby into her hands. Titu and Vicky came to the room.


Titu: mom pandit told that baby's name should start with letter 'A'


Vicky: we have selected few names..bhabi select one of them

Maan: oh then u have selected the names also


Titu: jiju we are searching for u...how about 'ARHAN'

Pari: Geet i think 'AARAV' would be nice

Vicky: no bhabi 'AYUSH' sounds nice

Geet and Maan are listening to them ...Geet is looking at Maan asking him to select one name with her eyes...Maan is thinking which one to select...they are whispering to each other


Geet: Maan didn't u select a name for the baby


Maan: ha but pandit said the name should start with 'A' ... i didn't select a name that starts with 'A'


Geet: kya baat kar rahe ho Maan...what are we going to do now..select one name from the names they are suggesting


Rano:Geet they r waiting for ur answer

Geet: ha...mom which name did u like?

Rano: it's ur baby Geet


Geet: i like all the names...u suggest one name please

Rano: 'AMANDEEP'


Geet: Maan y don't u say anything...choose one name

Maan: y don't u choose

Geet: Maan u decide one name...it's confusing for me

Dadima: 'ARYAMAAN'


Maan: dadima ...aap kab agaye


Dadima: when u people started fighting to decide the name


Dadima took the baby from Pari's hands


Dadima: he is the first boy in the house...i want to name him as ARYAMAAN means 'best of the best'


Titu(whispered to Pari): didi ek aur Maan

Pari: Titu... chup raho

Titu: ok


Maan said "ARYAMAAN " looking at Geet...she blinked her eyes indicating she loved the name.


Vicky: finally the name has been decided...dadima u made our task easier


Dadima smiled listening to Vicky.


Maan: i think we have to go ... pandit is waiting for us


Everybody reached the hall where a small mandap is arranged. The baby is placed in Maan's lap and the priest offered prayers to all the gods, to Agni the god of fire and the purifying factor, the five elements(water, fire, air , earth and sky), and the spirits of the fore-fathers inorder to entreat them to bless and protect the child. The priest placed the sheet on which the child's horoscope is written, in front of the image of the deity to seek the blessings.


Maan leaned towards the baby's right ear, he took a betel leaf into his hand to direct the words towards the baby's ear ...he then whispered the name "ARYAMAAN SINGH KHURANA".


After the naming ritual has finished Dadima, Mohindar and Rano touched the baby's lips with honey and blessed the child. Yash and Pari, Vicky and Titu also followed them.


Titu: baby lick...no no he has got a name now...Aryamaan..no Arya ...ya this is fine...Arya lick the honey...didi he is licking my fingers along with honey


Geet smiled listening to Titu and she whispered to baby "Arya". Everybody started calling the baby Arya when Titu addressed him as Arya.


All the friends and relatives who have attended the ceremony blessed the baby and they also touched the baby's lips with honey.

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After few Days


Geet placed the baby in the cradle and moved it gently...she slowly removed her hands away from the cradle and sat on the bed. She rested her back on to the pillow and closed her eyes.


Maan: Arya papa is here


Shouted Maan even before he entered the room...Arya started crying with high volume and Geet snapped her eyes open...she felt like crying along with the baby...Maan came inside and has seen that Geet is staring at him seriously.


Maan: what happened?


Geet didn't answer him and took Arya from the cradle and placed him in Maan's hands.


Geet: i don't know what u r going to do...make him sleep

Maan: what?


Geet: yes he is crying form 1 hour...i somehow managed to make him sleep... u came and ruined all my effort...what is the need to announce that u have arrived...see he started crying again


Maan is looking at the kid and trying ways to make him stop crying.


Maan: Arya..plz don't cry...papa is here ...look at this toy this is nice...see how the girl is dancing


Arya didn't stop crying..he increased the pitch of his voice


Geet: it's not working...try something else

Maan placed him in the cradle and moved it ...it didn't help him


Maan: did u feed him milk?

Geet: his tummy is full...but still he is crying

Maan: Arya what's wrong with u ...y r u crying?


Geet is laughing looking at Maan's misery...Maan got angry for laughing at him...he gave a deathly glare to Geet and took Arya into his hands...he went to the balcony and the baby stopped crying as the fresh air touched his skin...Maan felt happy when he stopped crying ...he started playing with Arya. Geet has seen this and felt surprised.


Geet: OMG!!...Maan he is smiling


Maan: that's the magic of Papa...right Arya...he is feeling suffocated in the closed room..that's y he is crying...Arya mom is not good enough to take care of u...don't worry papa is there for u...


Geet: abhi se Arya ko mere bare me suna rahe ho


Maan: thank god i got someone with whom i can share the tortures that i am facing because of the Demon


Geet: Maan ...tum na...give me my son


She is trying to take Arya from him forcibly.


Maan: Geet stop it...let him enjoy the weather

Geet: ok


Maan sat in the chair and Geet leaned onto his shoulder... she is playing with Arya's cheeks while continuing the fight with Maan.


PRECAP: Pari y don't u adopt a child


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge



PART - LXVI

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved it !!! aryamaan .. name is so good ...
precap sounds interesting ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Arya name is good
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh lovely...their moments with baby is breath taking...babies bring an aura of innocence around them...

Aryamaan Singh Khurana...wow...it is very thoughtful of Geet to respect Daadi's wish to name him such...I loved it

thanx for pm Deeps
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!😃 Fantastic update! And I agree with all the others, Arya is such a cute name!
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Posted: 13 years ago
can only say one thing about the update...So very cute...Loved the last bit...Baby is cho chweet...and what a sweet father Maan is...😊...Precap seems interesting..Wonder what will be Pari's reply...Pls continue soon...Thanx for the pm.
Edited by Mehek25 - 13 years ago

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