I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 1 - Page 58

Originally posted by: sldeeps

oh dear, my FF doesn't have negative characters so be cool😃...precap is a bit misleading😆...and advance sry if u guyz don't like my next part...i am a bit scared to post that update it's going to be a silly part

your update's are sooo sweet

u don't need to scare dear am always wid you...

I will keep on loving your part if its negative or positive you are amazing writer

i cant hate your FF at any cause you are characters are so real

especially u choose all your characters very well and using them very well in the story am totally inspired by GEET she's very strong and not only geet all this team is seems to be perfect

I know rohan is also having some good part and also waiting for yash (pari's boyfriend) every one 's having some important role...

(am bit depressed today but GEET's words impressed me a lot thanks a lot )

As usual eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: nishha

your update's are sooo sweet

u don't need to scare dear am always wid you...

I will keep on loving your part if its negative or positive you are amazing writer

i cant hate your FF at any cause you are characters are so real

especially u choose all your characters very well and using them very well in the story am totally inspired by GEET she's very strong and not only geet all this team is seems to be perfect

I know rohan is also having some good part and also waiting for yash (pari's boyfriend) every one 's having some important role...

(am bit depressed today but GEET's words impressed me a lot thanks a lot )

As usual eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: sldeeps

characters are so real - ya they would be real because i have seen each and every character i chose in this FF...Geet very much similar to me so it is very easy to sketch her character...Maan - ofcourse every girl dreams of this perfect guy...Pair she is so sweet and a nice frnd...but truly i don't have such a sweet frnd like Pari...this Geet is very lucky that she has Mohindar, MAAN & Pari in her life...i am J of the character which i have created😆 because i have only dad like Mohindar in my life but no MAAN & Pari

U love my FF as much as i do...thanx a lot for being so sweet😳.

😳Ya i too feel tat her character is similar to mine yaar...i too some time's try to hid my emotions wid anger.so oly i can love your FF as much u do

dont feel dear i too dont have such a wonderful friend like pari and MR.perfect (maan)

you don't feel unlucky am here for you but i cant be chooo sweet as pari 😉

Originally posted by: nishha

😳Ya i too feel tat her character is similar to mine yaar...i too some time's try to hid my emotions wid anger.so oly i can love your FF as much u do

dont feel dear i too dont have such a wonderful friend like pari and MR.perfect (maan)

you don't feel unlucky am here for you but i cant be chooo sweet as pari 😉

Originally posted by: maanhar

Thank god!!! Geet shared her problem with Maan, now time for some "new developments"😉

Originally posted by: sldeeps

oh dear thanx a lot⭐️

Dont be formal dear we are friends now no thanks and sorry between friends

PART - XII

Geet is boiling milk on the stove to prepare coffee for Maan and Pari early in the morning. Maan just finished his work out and came to the kitchen, he saw Geet preparing coffee for them, he grabbed one chair and sat near the dining table reading the news paper.

Pari : good morning Geet, good morning Maan

Geet & Maan: good morning

Pari : It has been 2 weeks since we came here, but we didn't find time to roam about in the city

Geet: I think we can plan something today, the work load is less we can leave early form the office in the evening.

Pari : where shall we go?

Maan : select some nearby place so that we can return early

Geet : ok...but where should we go??...shall we go the ZOO

Maan & Pari : ZOO!!!!??????

Geet : yes we will go to Canberra's National Zoo & Aquarium

Pari : Geet u want to go Zoo...but y?

Geet: i want to see KICHI

Maan & Pari : KICHI!!!!?????

Pari : what is this kichi?

Geet : pari don't u know kichi ' red panda from JUNGLE BOOK

Maan's self thought: she wants to see red panda of JUNGLE BOOK... strange!!

Geet has separated Milk for her in a cup and proceeded with preparing 2 cups of coffee for both of them. She is talking with them and preparing the coffee at the same time.

Geet : yes Pari...not all the zoos have RED PANDA's, it's a rare species. Not only red panda, this zoo consists of White Lions, snow leopard, malayan sun bear and so many other animals. I want to see all these animals; it's having an Aquarium also where varieties of fishes are exhibited. I have got information about this Zoo from the internet. It is one of the best Zoos. The best thing is i am going to see KICHI from one of favourite cartoons, u know what me and Titu used to watch so many cartoon shows together we used to watch BEN10, TIN TIN, ADAM'S FAMILY, X-MEN, SPIDER MAN and my favourite DENNIS d MENACE. I am happy that finally...

She stopped in between when she has seen MAAN and Pari staring at her silently waiting for Geet to stop her non-stop chatter. Then she realised that she is talking without any pause ...she said "SORRY" while giving the coffee cups to both of them.

Maan gave a smile and started sipping his Coffee.

Pari : Geet do i have to come along with u?

Geet : what do u mean by that, r u not interested to come with us

Maan suddenly spat out the coffee which he is drinking listening to Geet.

Maan' self thought : when did i say that i am coming to the Zoo with her

Pari : Geet try to understand i am not interested in ur KICHI, so y don't u guyz carry on

" so u r not coming ...ok then choose some other place" said Geet seriously.

Pari understood Geet is angry.

Pari : it's ok , if both of u guyz r interested then what would i do alone in this big house...i will also come with u

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At the Client's office

M,G&P went to client's office in the afternoon to gather some information. Pari went to despatch section, M& G went to manufacturing unit. The workers are having a union meeting and manufacturing unit is closed so they couldn't get the required details. Geet called Pari to find out whether she needs any help.

Geet : Pari here the manufacturing unit is closed they have workers union meet, shall we come there?

Pari suddenly got an idea to escape from visiting the ZOO

Pari : it's ok Geet i will manage, vaise i just need to wait for manager so that i would collect the necessary information from him...nothing much. I think u guyz r free right then y don't u go to the Zoo

Geet : but Pari u will be alone right

Pari : no problem, i will manage ...u guyz carry on

Geet: ok

Geet: Maan...Pari has some work, she asked us to go to the ZOO

Maan' self thought: oh NO!...Pari has escaped nicely...What am i supposed to do now?

Geet : Maan shall we go?

Maan said "ok" as he couldn't think of any excuse.

As Geet said Canberra's National Zoo & Aquarium is one of the biggest Zoos. It consists of various kinds of animals

AFRICAN LION SUMATRAN TIGER BENGAL TIGER Cougar

Cheetah Snow leopard Malayan sun bear European brown bear

Dingo ' Koala Giraffe Meerkat The common eland

Zebra Primates Oriental small-clawed otter

reptiles & Amphibians - Olive Python, Boa Constrictor, Blood Python, Corn Snake, Reticulated Python, Taiwan Beauty Snake, Shingleback Lizard, Green & Crested Iguana, Rhinoceros Iguana, Veiled Chameleon plus a family of Alligators. Also Common and Magnificent Tree Frogs.

They are looking at list of animals present in the ZOO. Geet is eagerly searching for the information about KICHI.

Geet : there it is ...KICHI

Geet is busy taking the pictures of the animals present over there. Firstly Maan felt as if he has entered an alien place, but after looking at Geet's excitement and how she is enjoying, he also started enjoying the ambience and observing the animals present over there.

They reached the Aquarium where varieties of fishes are there ranging from small size to bigger sizes.

Geet is looking at the SHARK in between so many fishes.

Geet: Maan y did they keep the SHARK along with these small fishes, Does this Shark won't eat those small fishes?

Maan : Geet if they have kept all those fishes together then it is obvious that SHARKS won't eat these small fishes.

Geet: ya u r right

Suddenly they heard a small boy crying who is standing beside them.

Geet went near the boy to find out the reason y he is crying.

Geet : y r u crying?

The boy didn't answer any thing.

Geet : what's ur name?

He remained silent... he stopped crying and started staring at Geet.

Geet: where r u parents? What are u doing alone here?...Maan i think he got lost, we need to find his parents.

Boy: i am not lost... my girl friend, all m y class mates and my teacher are missing.

Geet opened her mouth listening to the word girl friend.

Geet: Maan look at him, he is such a small kid and he is talking about his girl friend

Maan smiled and went near the boy.

Maan : ok tell me where is ur girl friend?

Boy : i don't know we came here on SCIENCE TOUR along with our classmates, i am watching that small GOLD FISH and now when i turned to find SANDRA she is missing.

Geet : SANDRA

MAAN : that is his girl friend's name...what's ur name?

BOY: Richard

Geet : ok Maan let us find the teacher and hand over this boy to her.

They have searched for his teacher and finally they found her at the Reptiles corner. Before sending the boy Geet bent down on her knees so that she is facing him. She took out a chocolate from her hand bag.

"Richard this is for u" saying so she gave him the chocolate and kissed him on his cheek.

Richard took the chocolate from Geet's hand gave a quick peck on her lips and ran away towards his girlfriend shouting "SANDRA, i got a chocolate for u"

Maan is shocked at what he has seen, he is looking at Geet's lips. Geet remained still trying to understand what has just happened.

Geet said without thinking "Maan that's my FIRST KISS!!!!" making her eyes big.

Maan is surprised at her reaction and blurted out laughing as he said "Geet ... he is just a small kid"

Geet realised what she told and felt embarrassed her cheeks turned red and she is blushing touching her lips.

Maan couldn't control his laughter anymore looking at the changing colours on Geet's face, he is laughing out loud. Geet became angry looking at his laughter, now her eyes turned red.

Geet : Maan stop laughing...it is so irritating

Maan : Geet ur eyes,cheeks and lips they keep on changing colours just like the CHAMELEON

Saying so he pointed towards the CHAMELEON present there.

Geet got furious listening to the word CHAMELEON

Geet : YUCK!!! I hate these lizard kind of species don't compare me with them, i hate them to the core

She said this showing utmost disgust on her face. Maan has seen her raising temper and said "SORRY"

Geet : let's go from here ... i am no more interested in this place

Maan smiled to himself and followed her.

When they came outside slight snow fall started and the weather became so cold. Geet started shivering. Maan saw her shivering and hugging herself.

Maan: Geet we will go inside that shop for some time they will be having room heaters inside.

Geet : OK, let's go

It's a soft toys shop filled with different toys, teddy bears ranging in various sizes, soft toys made of different animals like tortoise, rabbit... red panda as well. Maan is watching the snow fall looking outside through the window. She is feeling better now and she suddenly said

"Today on wards u r going to accompany me with the tight hug of urs on my bed everynight"

Maan's body stiffened after listening to what Geet said. He is completely confused at what he just heard. What does she mean by that?

Geet : what do u say MAAN?

Maan's self thought : that means - She wants to...she wants to sleep with me????

PRECAP : kuch toh hua hai...kuch ho raha hai

PART - XIII

omg u update next part you are so sweet ...👏

am first today.. .😍