Originally posted by: ramita_nayal
Hey Deeps sorry yaar am lit late...actually read all the parts today only and must tell you ...an awesome update👏 plz continue and dont forget to PM😛
thanx for encouraging me dear 😊
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Originally posted by: ramita_nayal
Hey Deeps sorry yaar am lit late...actually read all the parts today only and must tell you ...an awesome update👏 plz continue and dont forget to PM😛
Originally posted by: paponecon
oh i m alreading loving this ff...really new theme...
Originally posted by: khushi_4ever
Loved the conversation between Geet and her father...there are a very few people who share such an easy rapport with their parents, iam blessedly one of them and can go through what u have written easily. Loved it,
See ur pm inbox
i am also blessed with frndly parents like u, sometimes they too make mischief along with me😃 😆
She hugged PARI very tightly and smiled heartily. PARI and MK are shocked to see GEET's reaction. She never behaved like this before.
GEET : PARI u know what!!!... my dad accepted to send me Australia along with u guyz. Can u believe this? Initially i am very much scared that he won't allow me to go to a foreign country all by myself. But now he accepted and i am very happy that i am going to give u a treat today.
PARI : what?... is that so?...great whatever the reason might be, i am going to get a treat because of ur dad. THANQ UNCLE ji she said with a big smile.
MK is looking strangely at both of them. He doesn't want to intervene in between, but he got lost in GEET's sparkling eyes this is the first time he has seen her laughing whole heartedly and expressing her happiness so openly. He wanted to see her smiling all the time. Suddenly he snapped out of his thoughts and questioned himself "what ???? i want to see her smiling all the time??? What the hell what am i thinking about??? MAAN have u gone crazy just stop thinking about her. She is not of ur type. Vaise voh tumhari taraf dekti tak nahi aur dekho sirf PARI ko treat de rahi hai meri taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha and u r dreaming about her ...just stop it, stop thinking about her u deserve some one better than her"
PARI hugged GEET and whispered in GEET's ear "GEET invite MK as well we are going to work together for 6 months in an entirely new place u need to treat him also as ur frnd don't think now u don't have any other option common now invite him." Saying so she broke her hug. GEET is left with no other option as PARI said they have to work together so she took a deep breath and decided to invite him.
GEET : MK y don't u join us?
"MK" he is surprised whether his ears are deceiving him???... she is talking with him, she is inviting him for lunch with her. "Oh god i guess this is not a dream, she doesn't even greet me and now she is suddenly behaving friendly with me. Wait MAAN itna excite hone ki koi baat nahi hai isme she is just celebrating her happiness that's it"
GEET : MAAN we will finish the filing part of this designing and will go to celebrate what do u say?
MK : ya sure
"What did she call me just now MAAN" he smiled and whispered to himself "MAAN" at first he thought of making an excuse and avoid lunch with them but when she called him "MAAN" he didn't realise why he said YES to her. No one called him MAAN at his office everyone calls him as Mr.MK, Mr.MSK and he often heard PARI referring to him as DD he is not sure what she meant by calling him so but he never cared of what DD actually refers to, he is least bothered about PARI's nick name.
They went to the nearby restaurant as they have reached the entrance of the restaurant MAAN's cell began to vibrate he signalled them to go inside and he will come after attending the call. Pari opened the glass door at the entrance and headed forward GEET is next to PARI, pari released the handle of the door without noticing that it would hit GEET, GEET stretched her hand to stop the door from hitting her forehead but before she could respond MAAN reacted immediately and stopped the door from hitting GEET's forehead with his free hand. GEET turned back and faced MAAN they are so close to each other that the tip of GEET's nose is touching his nose. Time seemed to freeze as if it doesn't want to move for both of them. MAAN is looking straight into her eyes.
Geet's cheeks turned red she doesn't want to know what he is feeling right now about her this moment, she closed her eyes and bent her head down so that he couldn't read her mind. She is very bad at hiding emotions so always covers up her emotions under the mask of anger. She straightened herself moved few inches away from him said "THANQ" without raising her head. She didn't wait for his response and took few steps forward, suddenly she felt a pull on her shoulder as if someone is pulling her dupatta to stop her.
She got puzzled for a second then immediately gained her composure and turned with a dreadfully angry look on her face anticipating that MAAN intentionally stopped her by grabbing her dupatta. When she turned back she realised that her dupatta got struck on the handle where MAAN placed his hand to stop the door from hitting GEET. After realising that it's just an accident she changed the expression on her face moved close to MAAN, placed her hand on MAAN's hand, removed his hand from the handle and released her dupatta from the handle. Without uttering a single word, not even looking once at his face she went inside the restaurant.
MAAN felt the world remained still before him when his nose touched hers' he has seen the pink shade on her cheeks, he is trying to find out the reason behind the appearance of pink colour on her cheeks the immediate question that came to his thought is "Is she blushing? Is she blushing because of the proximity between us? Does she really feel for me? " so many questions are running through his mind, he could feel her breaths on his face he could hear her heart racing like a horse he gained his senses when she said "THANQ". He again questioned himself "why doesn't she look into my eyes?" he is lost in his thoughts and didn't realise that he is holding her dupatta on the handle. When she turned back with anger on her face he noticed that her eyes are red, he is puzzled about the immediate change in her expression from gratitude to anger. He watched her coming forward and placed her hand on his while trying to remove her dupatta he is looking at her wanting her eyes to meet his for once but she didn't look into his eyes.
Geet ordered - 1 blaze burger with hot pepper and pepper jack cheese ,1 fruit bowl and 1 butterscotch ice cream with choco chips, Pari ordered for a Pizza and orange juice, MAAN ordered for Pasta and coke.
Geet doesn't have the habit of sharing her food with anyone she won't eat from others plate and let anyone eat from her plate. She is very much strict regarding this. This rule applies for her family members as well. Whenever there arises a situation of sharing food with her family her mom gives her the first bite then others would share the food. Her brother Titu often complains to her mom about this "y would u always give her the first bite, i feel like we are eating the PRASAD left by her".
Pari is aware of this RULE of Geet but MAAN is unaware of this. Pari asked MAAN whether he would like to have bite from the Pizza which she has ordered for herself, MAAN took a bite and offered his pasta to PARI she tasted a spoon and said "wow yummy i should also have ordered pasta it's too good". MAAN said "no probs if u like it then we will share". Both of them started sharing their food GEET looked at the way they are eating - it is very difficult to identify who is eating from whose plate, she is looking at MAAN furiously. "Can't he eat from his plate what's the need to share with PARI". She couldn't take it anymore she said "PARI if u really like PASTA then we will order one more plate for u, if u share from MAAN he might feel hungry later"
MAAN : oh that's not a problem, it's ok
PARI : no MAAN GEET is right i will have my PIZZA u continue with ur food
MAAN : oh common PARI i said it's ok
GEET (said angrily): enough u both... PARI u r eating PASTA and MAAN u r going to eat from my FRUIT BOWL that's it we are not kids to fight over mere PASTA
PARI is shocked that GEET is ready to share her food with MAAN.
MAAN (self thought) : how could she decide on what i am going to eat? This is ridiculous i am not going to eat from her fruit bowl
GEET moved her fruit bowl towards MAAN and said with a stern voice "MAAN have this"
MAAN looked at her angry eyes once and without uttering a single word started eating from her fruit bowl.
Geet started eating her Ice cream she is enjoying the chillness of the ice cream and taste of the choco chips in between. Maan's eyes are focused on her lips when she is licking the ice cream. She is licking and biting her lips as well while eating the ice cream. Maan is wondering at the way - the colour of her lips turned form pink to red when she is biting her lips. Her eyes, cheeks and lips keep on changing colours according to the situation just like CHAMELEON changes her colour according to its surroundings, he smiled repeating the word "CHAMELEON" inside his mind.
Geet has seen him looking at her lips without blinking his eyes, he raised his eyes from her lips to eyes and realised that she caught him. He patted himself inwardly "MAAN don't get scared nothing is going to happen give her some excuse and divert her attention"
MAAN : Geet ur lips
GEET couldn't understand what he meant by this she is staring at him with confusion
MAAN took a tissue and wiped away the drops of melting ice cream dripping from the edge of her lips.
MAAN : ur ice cream it's dripping
GEET couldn't say anything other than staring at him.
PARI is completely confused about the things happening infront of her.
They have finished their lunch and returned the office. Everyone got engrossed in their work.
PARI : GEET , MK ... Mr.Chopra wants to meet us in his cabin right now.
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