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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



Mohinder loves his daughter a lot & can't bear to see her in pain but it feels like going overboard - u r right...mohindar will get to know about this and try to correct himself

o.k then waiting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
do con soon
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent update...
continue soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
poor geet she cant go to maan also now as she is very weak n she is not talking to maan i think as she didnt pick his call n so i think humare maan babu came running to meet her
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!! loved geet and maan's conversation... pari ko kya hua?!?!
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Posted: 13 years ago

REALLY LOVE BOTHER PARTS...

pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!
geet with the baby bump must be looking cute... and titu when he said kick ur mom baby this is the right time i just cracked up🤣!!
so maan came to take her along... continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

evening now !! waiting



sry dear almost finished i will give the update within an hour
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - LXI


Last night


Mohindar: don't be stubborn ...u need someone to take care of u there...Maan would be busy with his work so it would be better if u stay with us


Geet placed her head on Mohindar's shoulder

Geet: but i miss him


Mohindar didn't understand what to do and how to convince her...he patted her and made her sleep.


Mohindar left the room and entered the hall.He sat in the couch thinking about what Geet said. He didn't understand what to do he is worried about her but didn't mean to separate them...he understood that Maan and Geet are inseparable...he understood that Geet has her own life now...he is being a caring father but Geet needs Maan more than him. It has become hard for him to digest the fact but finally he accepted the truth. He is worried about who would take of her at Bangalore...he thought of discussing the same with Maan.


*****************


Today


Mohindar thought of talking with Maan about Geet's condition. He made a call to Maan and waited for him to attend the call. Servant came to his room and informed that Maan has come...he came to the hall to receive Maan.


Mohindar: Maan beta kaise ho

Maan: ji... i am fine


Mohindar called Geet and they sat on the couch discussing something. Geet has seen her father talking with some one ...she came near her father and got surprised looking at the Maan. Her happiness knew no bounds her eyes became moist..Mohindar has seen the change in her. Maan stood up when he has seen Geet.


Driver: sir someone has sent this courier


Mohindar went near him and took the courier. He has signed on the sheet and gave it to his driver...but the driver instead of taking the sheet he opened his mouth wide open looking at something. Mohindar didn't understand what's wrong with him.


Mohindar: what r u looking at?...take this sheet


Driver didn't respond to him...Mohindar turned towards the direction at which the driver is staring at. He got surprised along with the driver...he cleared his throat and scolded the driver.


Mohindar: tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha...leave from here


He smiled to himself and he also left from there as he thought of giving privacy to Maan and Geet.


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Geet has seen Maan and her happiness knew no bounds, her eyes became moist and she is about to weep. Maan got up and thought of taking her into his arms...both of them stood facing each other counting the seconds listening to their heart beats...they are trying hard not to nullify the gap between...they are aware that Mohindar is present there so they are stopping themselves from showing the other person how much they missed him/her. The tension is obvious in each others eyes..they are struggling hard to get out of the situation...then the driver called Mohindar and he went near the entrance to collect the courier.


Geet is waiting for this... she hugged him tightly and closed her eyes. Maan though got surprised immediately reacted and hugged her back. They became completely oblivious to the surroundings and didn't notice that Mohindar has seen them.


Mohindar has seen them and thought of giving them privacy so he left from there leaving them alone.


They hugged each other and remained in the same state until the pace of their heart beat became normal. They broke off the hug and Geet has seen that they were in the hall and Mohindar left from there...she understood what might have happened and felt embarrassed for her own behaviour...she thought of talking with Maan so she got hold of his hand and took him to her bed room ...she closed the door and turned back towards Maan.


Geet: Maan when did u...


Before she could say anything Maan pinned her on to the door and kissed her on her lips. He kissed her passionately expressing her how much he missed her. She got startled for the unexpected kiss and slowly started responding to him...they took pauses and continued to fulfil their thirst. Maan cupped her face with his hands.


Maan: y didn't u tell me that u r not feeling well...every time when i ask u to come back u gave me stupid excuses and didn't tell me anything about y u r not coming back...don't u know that i have the right to know everything about u?...u brought my baby along with u...have u any idea of how much i am craving to be with u...i want to see u with the baby bump..i want to tease u when u gain weight ...i want to see how my baby troubles u while trying to enter into this world to meet her dad...Geet do u understand what i am saying


Geet remained silent as tears are flowing through her eyes listening to his sudden outburst of feelings.


Maan: Geet u owe me an answer


Geet: i hate u...i thought of coming back to u yesterday itself...but ur baby is troubling me a lot...she is not allowing me to eat anything...i hate u and ur baby...whenever i make an excuse to come to u something or the other happens and my dad won't allow me to leave from here...r u the only one who is missing me...i am also missing u here...y didn't u come here to take ur baby with u...itni der kyu laga di tumne...i am dying to melt in ur arms...i am not the one who has to answer...tell me y didn't u come to take me away with u when u know that u have every right on me...tell me Maan


She is hitting him demanding for an answer...and slowly hugged him as she got tired of shouting at him. He wiped off her tears and hugged her back.


Maan: very good...then i am the one who is at fault


Geet smiled while hugging him...Maan is trying to break the hug to look at her but she is not allowing him to break the hug.


Maan: will u stop ur mischief...Geet i want to talk with baby...leave me now


Geet reluctantly broke the hug ...Maan went on his knees and moved her saree aside...he noticed the baby and smiled looking at the bump...he softly kissed the baby.


Maan: hi baby...can u hear me papa came to meet u...how r u? Is ur mom taking care of u?.. r u troubling ur mom?...is she shouting at u?...tell me if she says anything to u...i came for u... now u r coming along with me


He kissed on her stomach again


Geet: Maan kya kar rahe ho...stop it..baby got to know what u r saying..stop it now


Maan got up and sat on the bed...he made her sit on his lap and hugged her placing his head on her chest...Geet embraced his head with her hands.


Maan: Geet i miss u

Geet: Cutie would answer u better than me

Maan: what?


Geet: because she is the only one who knows how much i missed u...Maan i don't want cutie ... i want u


She kissed on his forehead and Maan kissed on her throat...she blushed for his mischief and whispered in his ears


Geet: Maan...u have spoiled me a lot

Maan: again i am the one who is at fault

Geet: yes..u r the culprit


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Maan: hum ja rahe hai

Mohindar: r u taking Geet also along with u


Maan: yes she is coming with me...i know that u r worried about her health condition..but plz don't worry about her i will take care of her and we have better hospitals there


Mohindar felt relieved when Maan assured that he himself will take care of her. So he didn't want to stop Geet looking at the glow on her face after Maan came...infact he is feeling happy for both of them. They were about to leave and Titu came from the college and has seen them.


Titu: hi jiju r u taking didi also with u

Maan: yes


Titu went near Geet

Titu: what didi y u r taking away the baby with u...wait a minute i got something for the baby


He bent on his knees and took something out of his pocket.


Titu: baby this chocolate is for u...eat this one and kick ur mom...don't forget to kick her on behalf of me also...she always fights with me plz help me to take revenge on her


Every one smiled at Titu and Geet took the chocolate from him and patted on his cheek. She thought of teasing her little bro.


Geet: Titu bye...baby say bye to mama ji...ji jarrori hai kya...chalo thoda respect toh dena padega...bye mama... ji


He got angry listening to Geet

Titu: didi kya sikha rahe ho baby ko...let the baby come to this world we are not giving to leave u


Geet: ha ...ha...make ur own plans i won't get scared for ur threatening

Titu: tum kyu daroge ...tum toh darate ho


Geet: Titu mai tumhe...

Maan: i think we are getting late


Maan intervened and pacified both of them.


Precap: can i work from home?...i mean from ur home?


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


PART - LXII

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved it yaar ...
tito is so so sweet ..
precap sounds interesting ...is it from pari part??wat happened to her ...

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