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Originally posted by: sukklover

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PART - XXIX



Maan: Geet as soon as we reach India we will discuss with ur father and convince him for our marriage


Geet smiled to Maan as reply. Maan took her hand into his and is lost in his thoughts planning how he should convince her father. Geet is trying hard to hide her tears from both Maan and Pari. They have reached the Bangalore airport.


Geet: bye Pari...bye Maan


Maan: Geet where r u going?

Geet: away from ur life


Maan is shocked listening to Geet

Pari: Geet what r u talking?

Geet: Pari maine Maan ko kho diya...ab mai tumhe bhi nahi khona chahti hu

Maan: tum kya baat kar rahi ho...what's wrong with u


Maan moved forward and raised his hand to wipe Geet's tears. Gent bent down her head and raised her hand to stop him from touching her.


Geet: don't touch me... i am no more urs


Maan felt as if bullets are piercing through his heart, he couldn't speak anything as he got surprised by the sudden change in her voice, she is not looking into his eyes. Her voice is so confident though pain is evident. Pari tried to stop Geet from leaving them, Maan stopped Pari by holding her hand.


Pari: Maan let me stop her...she is acting foolishly...she is going to repent for her own decision

Maan: she chose her father...let her go

Pari: what is this?...how can u do this? U know that she loves u...y r u not stopping her?


Geet listened to Maan but didn't turn back, she left form there leaving Maan behind trying to erase all the memories of him though she knows it is impossible to forget him.


Pari: Maan she is thinking that she is cheating her dad...but she is cheating herself...we have to stop her from ruining her life Maan


Maan: i know Pari, i know that she loves me...but she loves her father more than me...if she talks with me for 50 minutes she talks about her father for 47 minutes in those 50 minutes...i know y she chose her father...she keeps on blabbering her father's name even when she sleeps ...i know the importance of her father in her life


Pari: Maan ...i don't understand how i should react...u r also supporting her...what should i do know


Pari is very much frustrated by Geet's decision, she turned away from Maan and took two steps away from Maan. Maan stopped Pari by holding her hand then Pari turned towards Maan.


Maan: Pari kya tum sirf Geet ki dost ho...mujhe laga ki tum mera bhi dost ho

Pari: ofcourse Maan u r also my friend ...y r u asking...

Maan: then y r u leaving without consoling me


Maan hugged Pari and Pari got shocked at Maan's sudden outburst of emotion. Tears are coming out of Maan's eyes without his knowledge. Pari is trying to console Maan, but she is unable to find words to pacify him.


Pari: stupid Geet...sab ko rona sikhati hai...i am sry Maan...i have tried a lot to make her realise what she is going to miss in her life...but she is such a stupid...sry Maan..i am sry for u


Pari is crying looking at Maan and scolding Geet's stupidity, now Pari has become out of control and crying out her heart. Yash came to airport to receive Pari. He has seen Pari crying hugging Maan, he didn't understand what's wrong with her.


Yash: pari...r u ok?...is everything fine?


Pari broke off the hug and ran towards Yash, hugged him and started crying. Yash didn't understand y Pari is crying but still, he tried to console her. Maan felt alone, he turned towards the direction where Geet has gone.


Geet's father is waiting for Geet at the airport, he is thinking about his conversation with Rano last night.

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Rano: did u call Geet?

Mohindar: hmmm


Mohindar is reading a business journal while Rano is talking with him. He is answering her without looking at Rano and showing least interest to talk with her. He is avoiding Rano from so many days whenever she tried to talk with him about Geet's marriage.


Rano: did u tell her that u have selected a guy for her?

Mohindar: hmmm


Rano: did u inform her that he is also coming along with u to receive her?

Mohindar: hmmm


Rano: did she ask anything about the guy?

Mohindar: no


Rano: kya mai uss ladka ke bareme pooch sakti hu?

Mohindar remained silent and didn't answer her for few seconds


Mohindar: jab Geet ko koi problem nahi hai toh tumhe kya problem hai

Rano: aap bhi jante hai ki Geet ne uss ladke ke bare me kyu baat nahi kar rahi hai


Mohindar: Rano what r u trying to tell me?

Rano: y don't u think once again about Geet's marriage? Y don't u ask her about Maan?


Mohindar: poochne ki koi jarrori nahi hai...voh meri haat se nikal gayi ...badi hogayi hai..khud apni jindagi ki phesle lene shuru kardi...she loves Maan and she knows that she loves Maan...uss Maan ki vajah se Geet mujhe bhool gayi...bilkul badal gayi...can u believe this Rano she forgot me...din me dus bar phone karti hai mujhe


apni class teacher ki burai karne keliye

apni dost ki nayi dress ke barem batane keliye

to tell me about the guy who is irritationg her


she shares everything with me...now she doesn't even call me once in a month, even if she calls me she takes Maan's name in each and every single line of her conversation with me...now she doesn't need me...she got Maan in her life to share everything, he is replacing my love with his'...she cares less for me now...u know Rano i started loving my daughter before she started breathing air, before u gave birth to her...i started loving her before she took proper shape in ur womb...aur voh ladka...he has changed her within the time span of just 6 months...just 6 months


Mohindar's eyes became moist, Rano understand his pain and tried to console him.


Rano: agar Geet Maan se pyaar kar rahi hai...toh iska matlab ye nahi ki voh aapko aur aapki pyaar ko bhoolne lagi...she loves u too...beti hai voh...ek na ek din ham se door jaana hai usko...y don't u agree the fact that Geet has to leave us one day


Mohindar: i know Rano..i know...isliye maine haar maanliya...ha Rano...uss ladka ne mujhe hara diya...he won my daughter...he won my daughter's love...but voh jitna bhi koshish kare Geet loves me more than him...she is my daughter...she is ready to meet the guy whom i chose for her


Rano: aap kya baat kar rahe ho...aap Geet ko kisse milne vale ho

Mohindar: Maan se

Rano: kya ??...Maan se?

Mohindar: ha

Rano: did u choose Maan for Geet

Mohindar: yes


Rano: par aap ne toh kaha ki...he is just an employee and we don't know about him and his family...


Mohindar: Rano...Maan ka sabse bada qualification ye hai ki Geet ne use pasand karli...he has won Geet's trust...i know about Geet, she won't trust anyone just like that. She is very choosy even while selecting her friends then how would she love a guy if he is not trust worthy. I have seen Maan, i understood that he is a nice guy then and there itself...about his family, hmm we will find out. He might be an employee, but no problem after marriage he will take care of our business...Rano all these are not problems, we can deal with these things later...the best thing is I am going to give surprise to Geet tomorrow by telling my decision to her...by showing her my choice is none other than Maan...Geet feels very happy after listening to my decision right...what do u say?


"baap aur beti donom ek team me ho...bekar me mujhe pareshan kardi aapne" said Rano wiping her tears

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Geet: hi papa


Mohindar came out of his thoughts when he heard Geet calling him. He has seen Geet, though she has plastered a smile on her face,her eyes are reflecting her pain. She is trying hard to be normal infront of him.


Mohindar said "hi" and hugged Geet.

Mohindar: so Geet i think u r very much excited to meet ur fiance

Geet just smiled as response

Mohindar: lo beta he is waiting for u there


Mohindar placed his hands on Geet's shoulders and turned her towards the direction where Yash, Pari and Maan are there. She didn't lift her head and look at whom Mohindar is pointing.


Mohindar: Geet do u like him?...doesn't he looking hot?

Geet: yes dad...he is nice


She said without looking at him...Mohindar has seen that Geet is not looking at him. He raised Geet's head by touching her chin.


Mohindar: beta thik se dhek ke batao...pasand aya ki nahi?


Geet has seen that Mohindar is pointing towards YASH, Pari and Maan. She didn't understand about whom Mohindar is talking about.


Geet: papa aap kiske bareme baat kar rahe ho...kahi aap Yash ki bareme toh nahi baat kar rahe ho...voh toh Pari ka boy friend hai...she will kill me...if i say yes


Mohindar laughed at Geet and said "Geet i thought of giving u surprise and u r testing my patience...vaha Yash ke alava tumhe koi aur ladka nahi dikh raha hai"


Geet: papa vaha Yash ke alava sirf Maan hai ...mujhe aur koi ladka nahi dikh raha hai


Mohindar: pagli i have chosen Maan for u


Geet is shocked listening to Mohindar for few seconds she thought she is dreaming, she pinched herself to check whether she is dreaming.


Geet: Ouch!!!...this is not a dream...dad what did u say just now


Mohindar got frustrated "uff Geet i know that u like Maan and u love Maan...i chose Maan for u and don't ask me that if i am kidding".


Geet hugged his dad tightly and kissed him "thanq very much dad...u r the best...u r the best dad in the world"


Mohindar: and u r the best daughter in the world

Geet: papa kya mai Maan se ye baat bolu


Mohindar smiled as he said "go ahead meri bachi" and patted on her head. Geet smiled and ran towards Maan. Pari has seen Geet running towards them with a big smile on her face.


Pari: Maan...Geet!!!


Maan turned towards the direction where Pari is pointing and got surprised at what he has seen. Geet came running towards them and hugged Pari.

PRECAP: no need of any precap for this part šŸ˜†


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.



PART - XXX

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was Fantasticā­ļø

lovely ...awesome part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
sooo sweet of u like geet dad
loved it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
1st of all...
sorry for not replying on the prev update
was super busy wid college admissions!!!


OMG...OMG...OMG...
i just can't believe he chose maan...😲
he is not so bad afterall u knw...
i was sooo sad tht geet will
get married leaving maan all alone...
but i guess...
u completely surprised us!!!šŸ˜†
superb update...šŸ‘
pls pls pls update the next part today itself...
can't wait...plsss pretty plsss!!!
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Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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this was a real sweet pa- daughter realtion
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Posted: 14 years ago
whoever is this. you are fabulous yaar. great update.

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