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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Sweet birthday celebs😊 Maan aaj kal bahut naughty hogaya hai, kuch na kuch bahana karke kiss le raha hai😉 aur yeh Geet ki secrets are also incresing, hmm... daal main bahut kuch kaala hai😉😉



Geet ki secrets are also incresing - yup!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii awesum upd dear
amazing
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago
Beutiful.👏👏waiting 4 the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART - XXIII


Geet couldn't sleep that night. She is sharing her feelings about Maan with cutie. She remained awake the whole night...she went into sleep during the early hours of morning. Maan didn't see Geet from the morning, he thought of waking her up but waited if she would wake up herself.


Pari: Maan did u see Geet?

Maan : no Pari...she didn't wake up yet

Pari: wait i will wake her up


Maan also went along with Pari to wake up Geet. Geet didn't lock the door so Pari and Maan both went inside her room. Geet has covered herself and cutie completely with the blanket.


Pari : Geet wake up its 8 o' clock...don't u want to go to office


Pari tried to wake her up by moving her slightly. Geet didn't respond...Pari removed the blanket from Geet's face...Geet is holding the blanket tightly and is in no mood to answer them though she is aware that Pari is trying to wake her up.


Pari : Geet wake up

Geet: plz pari let me sleep...i am feeling sleepy

Pari: wake up Geet...it's getting late

Geet: i don't want to come to office today

Pari: y what happened?

Geet: i am not feeling well

Maan : Geet what happened...r u alright?

Geet: i think i have fever

Maan and Pari : fever???

Geet: if not fever, i am having head ache

Maan and Pari : head ache??

Geet: ok then i have typhoid


Maan and Pari got confused by now...Maan placed his hand on Geet's forehead to check if she is having fever or not...but her body temperature is normal.


Pari: Geet what are u talking

Geet: if u guyz r not convinced then i have malaria...now leave me ...let me sleep...u and ur stupid questions...mujhe aaj office nahi jana hai


Maan and Pari didn't understand whether to laugh at her or become angry on her.


Pari : stop being childish and wake up

Maan: Pari that's ok, u prepare the breakfast for her...i will wake her up


Pari smiled and left the room.


Maan sat beside Geet on the bed and whispered slowly in her ears.


Maan: Geet ...stop ur mischief and wake up now


Geet kept fingers in her ears. Maan tried to remove her fingers but she didn't give him any chance. Maan grabbed cutie from Geet's hug. Geet opened her eyes.


Geet: Maan give me my cutie back...y r u disturbing me...i didn't sleep the whole night, i am feeling sleepy now...i don't feel like coming to the office today...i am taking leave today...just go ...let me sleep


Maan: Geet we sleep during nights and work during the day...u want to take leave just to sleep...what did u do the whole night without sleeping?

Geet: i couldn't sleep because of u


Geet spat out without thinking but soon realised what she said. Maan didn't understand what she is talking about.


Maan: what ? ..u couldn't sleep because of me...what did i do?

Geet: nothing...ok i am coming to the office


She removed her blanket, got off the bed, went near the shelf took a towel and went inside the bathroom without looking at Maan. She forgot that she is not wearing her shirt, Maan froze at what he has seen again. Maan after coming to his senses left from Geet's room closing the door, Geet heard this sound and assumed that Maan left the room.


Geet looked at herself in the mirror present at the wash basin.

Geet : Maan tumne mujhe phir se aise dekhliya...ab mai kya karu


Maan came to Geet's bedroom while Geet is still inside the bath room, he came to collect a file from her. He has seen a file on the table beside the bed, he went near the table and took the file stood there itself checking the contents of the file.


Geet came out of the shower with a towel and her face is covered with her open hair, she didn't see that Maan is present in her room. She went near the wardrobe, opened the door and stood in between the opened doors selecting which dress she has to wear that day. The wardrobe is present on one side of the bed and the table is present on the other side of the bed where Maan is standing. Maan tried to move from his place to go away from the bed room but his legs are not cooperating with him. He tried to warn Geet that he is also in the same room but his lips are unable to speak as if he forgot how to speak. His heart is beating faster, his brain is quick enough to imagine what is about to happen. He is trying hard to move from there but he couldn't move an inch from his position. He is facing Geet's back. Geet finally decided what she is going to wear. She wore her panXX, pant without removing the towel, she wore her bXX , slip over the bXX and then threw the towel aside on the bed. She wore her shirt closed the ward robe door and went to the balcony without noticing Maan's presence in her room.


Maan is standing still, unaware of what to do and how to react. Geet after few minutes came inside the room from the balcony, she took the comb on the dressing table and has seen the image of Maan holding a file in his hand in the mirror. She turned towards Maan and went near him.


Geet : Maan do u want this file?


Maan didn't respond to her. Geet touched his hand and said "Maan i am talking with u...do u want this file?"


Maan came to his senses and left the room with the file in his hand without answering Geet. Geet didn't understand y he didn't answer her.


Maan came to his room threw the file on his bed, removed his tie and opened his shirt buttons. He doesn't know what's wrong he is trying to figure out what's happening to him.


Maan's self thought: what does she think of herself, how could she change infront of me? Doesn't she know that i am present there? Can't she see me? What's wrong with her, she is oozing me and behaving as if she doesn't know anything...she is behaving very casually with me...what kind of a feeling is this...this feeling is burning me...doesn't she feel the same...she is playing with my feelings...no doubt there is some problem with her hormones...and i am going to correct her problem for sure


Maan is moving left and right in his room with anger and frustration thinking how to deal with Geet's stupidity. Geet became ready and came to Maan's room.


Geet : shall we go Maan

Maan is fuming with anger and didn't answer her.

Geet : Maan i am talking to u

Maan: i am not going to the office today

Geet: really... but y?


Maan's self thought: to correct ur hormonal imbalance


Geet sat on Maan's bed "that's ok...i also don't feel like going to the office today...ok then what's the plan where shall we go" she said with great excitement on her face.


Maan's self thought: i don't want to go anywhere with u... what's the use even if we go somewhere? ... instead of going outside with u it is better to go to the office


Maan took the file from the bed and said "Geet shall we go to the office"


Geet: what office?...just now u told that u don't want to go to the office...then what happened suddenly

Maan: but now i have changed my decision

Pari : guyz shall we go

Maan : yes Pari we are coming


Pari left from there and Maan is about to leave the room then Geet stopped Maan, She pulled him towards her. She stood infornt of him closed his shirt buttons, she put on his tie and adjusted his hair.


Geet: u r looking hot now...let's go

Maan's self thought : hot????...does she even know the meaning of HOT...Geet u r an IDIOT for sure


*************


@ the Office


Geet sat on her chair turned on the lappy and adjust the stuff present beside her lappy. She found a folded paper in between the files. She opened it to find out what's the content of the paper.

Dear Geet,

I like ur smile very much. I have been craving to talk with u from so many days, but i didn't find the opportunity to talk with u alone. I wish to spend some time with u and know about u. Will u come on a date with me?

Maan has seen Geet holding the paper from quite a long time. He snatched the letter from her and read the content of the letter. He became furious.


Maan: Geet do u know who wrote this letter for u

Geet: yes...that's Rohan


Maan knew that Rohan is the only one who could do such thing to Geet, but Maan is shocked to know that Geet is aware that Rohan has written that letter for her.


Maan: how did u know that it's Rohan

Geet: hand writing


Maan: then what r u doing? Will u go on a date with him?

Geet: No


Maan felt happy that Geet is not interested in Rohan.


Geet: he is a coward, he don't know how to approach a girl...he is asking me for a date through letter instead of approaching directly and did u see that ... the letter didn't have any from address...STUPID


Maan felt relieved and turned towards his lappy...he repeated her words again...suddenly something irked him. He dragged Geet's chair close to his chair.


Maan : Geet if he approaches u directly and asks u for a date...then what will u do?... will u go along with him on a date?

Geet : Yes



PRECAP: Maan y did u tear the letter, i wanted to save that letter.



PART - XXIV

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay me first i was just reading ur ff once again...
but saw it now before ur pm and i read it
yipee
yipeee...
and ur update sooo gud
to see my maan baby jealous...literally😆awww tat so sweet😳
and dont take long time to tell
" that wat ever happnd in geets room was just an co incidence."...
thank for such a wonderful update dear.😳..
u rock deeps...😃👏
let thier love blooms slowly😳
ill wait😆
Edited by aziza_ahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
missed the 1st Position but 2nd is not that bat
yupiee on 2nd wohooo

Originally posted by: sldeeps


Geet: i don't want to come to office today

Pari: y what happened?

Geet: i am not feeling well

Maan : Geet what happened...r u alright?

Geet: i think i have fever


Maan and Pari : fever???

Geet: if not fever, i am having head ache

Maan and Pari : head ache??

Geet: ok then i have typhoid



Geet is such a dumbo she didnt even notice a Man in her room or poor Maan going to be mad n crazy
Rohan asked Geet for a Date

Originally posted by: sldeeps


I like ur smile very much

such a typical line

PreCap: oye hoey possesive very gud MAAN now go n tear that Rohan too Ganda bacha how dare he is
Edited by Speechless - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Step 1: take Crosin for head ache 1000mg and swallow it with lots and lots water ..keep the glass away .. (not near u)
step2: now read My comment ...




thum and thuhmara geet merey Maan Ko aakhir Kya Samajthee HO????????

Deeps ..ek tho mujey without updates torture karthee ho..
i am gair(not close) i agree ..but ...this maan tho thumara apna (beta jaisa
...its going to be ur expressions ..but reason => (because u madehim please dont cry ...aisa hota hi..ok hogaya ..ab ...) ok ..... no drool dream land .because i am already there no more space for anybody else.)


..apno se bhee ithna dushmanee...unko bhee thum nahee chodthey
.
.oh poor his tight
pants and zips...
kithna pressure uff..u are too much cruel...

U are an ISO certified Sadist
..GRRR


and after read
ing my comments ...i know ..wink wink how u will be feeling ..mujey .and karney ka man hoga na...
ha haa a...oh oh..its ok ok ...

no need to thank me..




Last but Not ...the precap...

She is angry for tearing Rohans Letter .hmmm .was it her
first love letter , ( or her first love letter she got in australia) she want to show it to her Dad ....and Maan teared it ....

Edited by an.anit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
geetko hosh hi nahi hai
apne as pas ke barame
😆testing time for maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
i would love to see maan jealous.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome one
now maan definetely ll go mad ...

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