I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 2 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the ff...
i got the pms for the parts but cudnt read them and now i read it in all one go...
i loved all the updates...
how their relation started as colleagues and now they r friends...
loving all their nok jhok
but the last update precap is shocker...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
u are a great writer ya. y dont u try in television industry
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha



she remains in her limit - that is before Maan started teasing her sexy but after that did u remember that video chat scene she has pushed him on her bed and laid on top of him - then what do u want to say about that scene, she pushed him aside in the kitchen to prepare coffee for him - dear she also started being touchy - touchy with him, that is the progress from her side - their petty fights brought them close to say in one word, now she doesn't mind being close with him

hope this would clarify u, let me know if u r still
not convinced

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the ff...

i got the pms for the parts but cudnt read them and now i read it in all one go...
i loved all the updates...
how their relation started as colleagues and now they r friends...
loving all their nok jhok
but the last update precap is shocker...
pl cont soon



sry for continuous PM's, plz don't mind na

anyways my PM's made u to read the FF😆, thanx for loving and welcome to my FF😃

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

got the chance of read it in one go today

loved the strong and independent geet



finally my FF got ur attention

thanx for taking out time to read my FF buddy and welcome to my FF dear😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! geet is unknowingly falling for maan😉...
i loved the way geet arguing with maan in park n the hug😳...wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbb...precap is interesting...so maan have to impress geet's dad to marry her😆...hai na...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for the lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Since your Inbox is full ..so informing u here that we hv shifted your FF to the FF-Section since it has crossed over 15 pages...

From Geet DT
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART - XIX


Rano : itna jalbaji kyu kar rahe ho aap

Mohindar : nahi Rano maine faisla karliya, I am going to search a groom for Geet


Rano : but Geet asked for 2 years of time

Mohindar : when Geet returns to India 2 years would be completed and as soon as she returns I will get her married


Rano: what happened suddenly that u r insisting on Geet's marriage?

Mohindar : kyunki Geet uss ladka se pyaar karti hai


Rano: what??? What r u talking about?... I didn't understand anything

Mohindar: yes Rano, Geet is in love with that Maan whom we have seen at the airport while giving send off to Geet


Rano : Did Geet tell u that she loves Maan

Mohindar : No...she didn't realise that she loves Maan yet...but before she realises i have to do something


Rano : if Geet loves Maan then r u ready to accept their love


Mohindar: nahi Rano, he is just an employee...how would i get my daughter married to a mere employee...i know that he is a nice guy but that is not enough for marriage he has to take care of my daughter, he should be able to give her all the happiness in life...my daughter is grown up like a princess in my hands...i allowed her to stay away from us because of her stubbornness to be independent...but i am not going to spare this anymore she started ignoring my words, she is changing Rano...my princess is changing, she is ignoring her father...she has never done this before...i don't want anyone to come in between me and my daughter...i know she loves me and she obeys me ...i will find a guy of my choice to my daughter.


Rano : but if Geet loves Maan then her happiness lies with him only, so y don't u give her what she wants


Mohindar: Rano Geet doesn't know that she loves that guy yet, before she realises her love for him i will get her married...then i won't lose my daughter


Rano : What r u talking, u want to take away Geet's happiness because a guy is taking ur place in her life...if Maan loves her the way u love her then she is the luckiest girl, we should feel happy for our daughter ...but instead of feeling happy for Geet y are u feeling insecure?


Mohindar : Rano we know that Geet loves Maan but we are not sure that Maan also loves our daughter in the same way...if he breaks her heart...if he turns out to be like other guyz who flirt with girls in the name of love and deceive them... no i can't let this happen to my daughter


Rano: but still we are not sure that Maan is a bad guy so y don't u...


Mohindar: bus Rano...i don't want to discuss about this anymore, i will talk with Geet about her marriage, as she promised me before leaving the house she will listen to me and marry a guy of my choice...she is my daughter and she will never say NO to my decision.

**********************

Both Geet and Pari are busy woking on their lap tops in Geet's bedroom in the early morning. Geet is very much engrossed into her work then she heard her mobile ringing, she smiled looking at the display screen of her mobile and attended the call.

Geet : gud mrng dad


Mohindar : Geet i want to ask ur opinion on something important

Geet : ya dad tell me


Mohindar : Geet i am going to find a guy for u, i want u to get married as soon as u return from Australia

Geet: papa what's so hurry u can wait till i...


Mohindar : no Geet just tell me yes or no?... u want me to find a guy for u or not?

Geet sensed the seriousness in Mohindar's voice and she didn't want to argue with him as they have already discussed about her marriage before she joined the job. She promised her dad that she will marry a guy of her father's choice after 2 years when her mother wants her to get married instead of doing the job. She was able to convince them to postpone her marriage for 2 years, she thought that - now it's her responsibility to fulfill her promise.

Geet : papa isme poochne vali kaunsi baat hai... yes dad i will marry a guy of ur choice

**********************

Mohindar is so happy that Geet reacted in the same way as he has expected. He hanged up the phone.


Mohindar to Rano : voh mera bachi hai...isne ha boldi...i will get her the best guy who will always make her feel happy and take good care of her through out the entire life.

**********************

Pari is present beside Geet when Geet is talking with her dad. She understood they are talking about Geet's marriage and Geet said YES to her father without thinking for a sec before saying YES. Geet is very normal after her conversation with her father and again got busy with her work. Pari thought of warning Geet about her decision, she doesn't want her to suffer later because of her own decision.


Pari : Geet can i ask u something

Geet : ha Pari...what do u want to know?


Pari: It's ur personal matter...would u mind me interfering in ur personal matter

Geet: common Pari u r my friend u can ask me anything...y r u hesitating ...what do u want to know about me?


Pari : R u discussing about ur marriage with ur father

Geet: yes Pari, he wants me to get married


Pari : what did u say?

Geet: i said yes...what's the big deal in it?

Pari : but Geet...

Pari is unable to find words how to warn Geet about her decision, she is struggling to talk with her. Pari is thinking ways to explain what exactly she wants to tell Geet. Geet didn't observe the nervousness and hesitation in Pari's voice, she is completely concentrated on her work and she is not looking at Pari so she didn't identify Pari's discomfort in talking with her. Finally Pari thought of warning her indirectly.

Pari : Geet i can say only one thing... before coming to any decision once have a self check...try to analyse urself once, what u want ...or maybe ...whom u want to be with the rest of ur life


Geet though didn't understand what Pari is trying to tell her, she understood that Pari is trying to help her. She turned towards Pari.


Geet: Pari what r u trying to tell me...i didn't understand what u r saying...tell me what do u exactly mean

Pari : Geet what i mean is...


Maan came to Geet's room and interrupted their conversation.


Maan: Geet i want coffee

Geet : Maan y don't u prepare for urself, i am busy - i have to complete the designing part of this page


Maan leaned on the door and folded his arms across his chest.


Maan : is that so... think once again Geet...u asked me to make pasta for u...u will get Pasta only if u prepare coffee for me


Geet: ok baba i am coming...Pari do u want anything

Pari : no thanks Geet


Both Maan and Geet went to the kitchen and Pari remained worried about how to make Geet understand the entire situation.


Pari's self thought : Geet y don't u realise that u love Maan...plz react before it becomes too late otherwise u have to repent for ur own decision...oh god plz do something that she knows what she exactly wants.


PRECAP : Maan u stole my best friend



PART - XX


Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yipeee :) i think i am first to post :)
awesome update dear short and sweet :)
now i am feeelling restless coz of geet decision😊

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