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Posted: 13 years ago
wow! what an update. awesome yaar. the expression of feelings were superb. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting dear hopping that we get an update today
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PART - LXII



@ Khurana Mansion


Maan: Geet how much time will u take i am getting late..bahar ajao...Geet...Geet


He didn't get any response from Geet. He got worried and broke the washroom door and has seen that Geet fainted in the washroom. He hurriedly brought her out of the washroom and made her lay on the bed.


Maan: Geet open ur eyes ...Geet..Geet


He sprinkled water on her face and patted on her cheeks to bring her to her senses. He felt relieved when she opened her eyes.


Maan: thank god...how r u feeling now?

She sat on the bed with the help of Maan

Geet: ya i am feeling better now


Maan feared that whether he could take care of her alone looking at her condition. She appears to be fine but faints suddenly... he got worried because she will be alone at the house if he goes to the office...she needs someone beside her under his absence so he appointed a maid servant specially to take care of her. He himself stayed in the house whenever he felt Geet needs him.


Geet has seen that Maan is worried for her and she thought of being careful and she used to strictly follow the advice of the doctor. She used to send him to the office forcibly and if he works from the home she used to help Maan...so Maan thought instead of giving her the stress it is better to work in the office itself...but as months are passing she is behaving responsible enough so that Maan would feel relieved..she is missing her mom whenever she is left alone in the house...dadima is at Mumbai to take care of Mumbai's branch office and Vicky is busy with his studies and he is about to finish his final semester after which he is going to join the office to share the responsibility along with Maan.

*****************

During 7th month of Geet's pregnancy


Geet: OMG!!! i have increased 8kgs of my weight


Geet is checking herself in the mirror look at the increasing bump...Maan is smiling looking at her.


Maan: Geet u r worried for 8kgs...when u enter last trimester u r going to gain more weight


Geet: more than 8kgs...oh no!!

Maan placed his hand on her stomach


Maan: Geet she has to be healthy and she is growing ...vaise u r looking so cute with increased bump


She smiled patting her stomach

Geet: dekha baby papa kiase maska mar raha hai


Baby kicked her from inside

Geet: Maan she is listening to us...she kicked me just now...vaise aaj kal bahot mar rahi hai mujhe...i think she is following Titu's advice


Maan smiled listening to her.


*****************


After few Weeks


Maan came late night from the office and sat on the couch feeling tiered; he closed his eyes and bent his head back on to the couch. He felt someone massaging his head and opened his eyes.


Geet: don't move...just relax and close ur eyes


Maan has done the same...she is doing oil massage for him so that he would come out of the stress.


Geet: how r u feeling now?

Maan: ya better


Geet: r u still worried about the new project

Maan: it's done...the deal is finalised...we got the project


Geet: really?...did they agree for our terms?

Maan: ya...but after lot of discussions..anyways finally they have agreed

*****************


At the office


Maan is attending a meeting in the office room with the staff Pari is also present among them. The meeting has finished and everybody left from there.


Pari: hi Maan ...congrats!! for the new project

Maan: thanq


Pari: the deal has been finalised but still u appear to be very much stressed...is everything ok?


Maan: the problem is i have to visit our other branches and client site from here after frequently...i am happy that i got the project...but Geet ...


Pari: what's wrong with Geet...is she ok?


Maan: relax Pari...she is fine...she has entered the last trimester and she needs me now...she is not complaining but she is missing her mom...i am trying to work from home to make her forget about her mom but whenever i work from home she is taking the stress of helping me...i thought of calling dadima but Geet won't agree for this...i know that she needs her mom but i couldn't call her as i am the one who promised her dad that i will take care of her...i think i am wrong in doing so...she needs her mom... i thought selfishly and brought her here...what would happen if she needs me when i am not present here...this thought is killing me... Pari placed her hand on Maan's shoulder


Pari: Maan can i work from home?...i mean...from ur home?

Maan: iska matlab

Pari: ya u r right


Maan felt happy listening to her...Pari raised her hand and Maan gave HI5 and hugged her.


Maan: thanq very much Pari


*****************


@ Pari's House


Yash: Pari r u aware of what u r doing?

Pari: what r u talking about?


Yash: ur decision of staying with Geet

Pari: what's wrong in it?


Yash: Pari u r aware of what i am talking...tell me y r u doing this to urself

Pari: she needs me...


Yash: uss Geet ke naam sunte hi tumhe koi aur baat samajh me nahi aati...y do u want to take her responsibility when she is not related to u?


Pari: yash stop it...u know what she means to me in my life...there r only few persons in my life and i don't want to miss anyone of them because of any reason


Yash: Pari this would only cause pain to u

Pari: no ... i am strong enough...so don't try to...

Yash: i told u to stay away from her ...u r not going anywhere...stop right now


Pari collapsed on to the couch as tears rolled down on her cheeks.

Yash: Pari plz y don't u understand

Pari: she needs me


Yash: she has so many people in her life other than u...they will take care of her...and it is my responsibility to take care of u...so stay away from her


Pari: i miss my parents..i came to know about family because of her...what is her fault if i am not lucky enough...y r u blaming her

Yash: she is the one because of whom all this happened...u r happy in ur life...but after u came from Australia ...ur life is dedicated to her...to help her and her husband...every decision u take is to make her feel happy... u have made them become wife and husband...u r there for them whenever they need u...u have got married for ur friend in advance...not any more...u have ur own life...


Pari: Yash plz...plz stop it...she never asked me to do anything...i have done everything out of my own wish..i have done everything for myself...because i don't want to miss a sister in my life...i feel happy whenever she treats me as her sister and shares everything with me and whenever her family treats me as their daughter...she never makes me feel that i am alone, she cares for me...do u know that i became Team Leader because of her...


Yash: u deserve it Pari...that has got nothing to do with her


Pari: i know i deserve it...but there should be someone to recognise so that u get what u deserve.. i am not doing this expecting something in return ... relationships are not assessed by counting the deeds and the number of favours they have done to one another..but i am explaining for ur sake...i am doing this for myself...she is not the only one who needs me...i also need her...so Yash plz don't blame her unnecessarily


Yash tried his best to stop Pari but he failed in his attempt so he accepted the defeat and thought of consoling her...he hugged Pari and said "i hope u know what u r doing to urself"...she hugged him and cried.


Yash's self thought: being with Geet gives only pain..u would come to know what u r missing in ur life..y don't u understand and stay away from her

PRECAP: can u feel her...what is she doing now?


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


PART - LXIII

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
heermeher thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome i m eager to see the story unfold what actually the relationship between geet and pari
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher

awesome i m eager to see the story unfold what actually the relationship between geet and pari



they are just friends dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update!!
waiting for more!!
hope maan will be there when geet is in labour and not in a bussines trip.
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan should be always beside Geet now as its her final trimester & also to enjoy the cutest moments..as for feeling the baby's kick & so & so forth..
loved the update Deeps..curious for more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
is pari ok?
and why didnt she discussed her problems with Geet, if she considers her as her sister
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice part...

bt why is yash saying to pari that stay away from geet😕

con soon w8ng

thanx 4 the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god wat happened to pari. in wat way geet is responsible. waiting for the story to unfold

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