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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats on new thread🥳🥳
Brilliant update.
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
congos 4 the new thread dear...
loved the update...hmmm... so finally geet is back to MSK😃...loved geet's sweet torture😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


dear for thread 4 of the FF ...

Nice part 👍🏼
I'm glad they made up ; lovely moments 😳

Loved it
& thanks for pm ...
Edited by drashsree100 - 13 years ago
Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
was eagerly waiting for your update... and am 😭...

update soon tomorrow!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

for ur new thread

geets sweet torture was superb
so geet staying for few days
Edited by nan_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update..!! :D
plz cont soon!
thnx soo much for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XXXVII



Geet came to the office next day along with Pari they have planned to go for shopping in the afternoon. Geet went to Maan's cabin to spend some time with him before they go for shopping. Maan is busy with his work...he heard some one knocking on the cabin's door.


Maan: come in


Geet came inside the cabin, he is busy with his lappy and didn't look at the person who came inside...Geet remained silent for few seconds but Maan didn't lift his head.


Maan: yes


Geet came near him and closed the screen of the lap top...Maan got furious and was about the bash the person who closed the screen "how dare u..." and stopped looking at Geet. She went near him and sat infornt of him on the table and said "ya... tell me Mr.Khurana" holding his tie and pulling him towards her.


Maan: so the tigress is back

Geet: yes


Maan: what r u doing here?

Geet: hmmm i thought u might be struggling with ur work so i came here to help u


He pulled her towards him and made her sit in his lap as he said "help me?"...he was about to kiss her then she pushed him away and said "i came here to help Pari...i don't have time for all this...leave me". Maan stopped her from leaving by holding her hand and said "ok u can help me in my work"...she smiled to herself and turned back towards him.


Maan asked her to review some files and check the design of some projects. She stayed in his cabin and helped him in his work. After few hours she received a message from Pari asking her to come to her place.


Geet: Maan i am leaving now...Pari needs me

Maan: Pari??

Geet: ya we have to go for shopping


Maan thought she came here to spend with him, but when she said she has to go for shopping he felt disappointed. He came near her and took her hands into his'.


Maan: Is it necessary to go?


Geet: u know that Pari doesn't have anyone, she treats me as her sister it's my responsibility to be with her when she needs me...i have to go


Maan is touched by Geet's concern towards Pari and their friendship, he touched her forehead with his'.


Maan: ek baat kahu Geet...i like this quality in u...u never back off from ur responsibility, u give importance to every relation in life...u know how to maintain and strengthen a relation...every word u speak comes directly from ur heart


Geet: and like this quality of urs...u would understand me without explaining anything


Maan kissed her forehead, she smiled and said "kya ab mai ja sakti hu Mr.Khurana". He smiled and left her hand.


***************


Geet joined Pari and both of them went to buy clothes for her wedding. Pari took her to an apartment where Yash and Pari are going to stay together after their marriage. It's a single bed room flat which is small and simple.


Geet: nice Pari...u can have the view of the entire city from this balcony

Pari: ya


Geet: i think u have to buy the furniture also...when are we going for shopping?

Pari: may be tomorrow i have asked Yash also to come...but i am not sure that he would accompany us


Geet: do u want me talk with Maan to relieve Yash for few days

Pari: no Geet...plz don't tell Maan anything


Geet: ok...vaise no probs...i am there with u right...we will manage


Geet and Pari bought the necessary furniture for the house. Geet used to spend with Maan at the office half a day and spend with Pari for shopping and wedding arrangements the rest of the day. Maan took her for dinner every day.

***************


Pari and Yash decided to go for a registered marriage, Maan and Geet are the witness for their marriage. Pari informed their parents and got their approval, Yash has no one except an elder sister. They threw a Reception party after their marriage and invited all their colleagues and friends, Yash's sister came to the party...Pari's parents tried to come to the party but they didn't.


Geet: Pari aaj tum pehli baar ladki ki tarah dikh rahi ho

Pari: what?...what do u mean by that?


Geet: oops!!! Sry galti se sach bol diya...i have never seen u wearing a saree before

Pari: Geeet... this is not funny


Geet: sry baby...u r looking gorgeous...yash ki hosh ke bareme soch ke mujhe dar lag raha hai

ParI: will u stop it

Geet(giggled): ok


Geet is also wearing a red colour saree along with Pari. She stood beside Pari on the stage, she is waiting for Maan. Maan had an important meeting so he told that he would join her at the party. Her eyes twinkled at the sight of Maan's presence in the party. Maan came to the them and wished them, Maan looked at Geet he is trying for an excuse to talk with her alone.


"i want to talk something with u" whispered Maan in Geet's ear

"Pari needs me..i will talk with u later" replied Geet

"ok u guyz can carry on" Whispered Pari


Geet felt embarrassed listening to Pari and gave a deathly glare to Maan. Pari laughed and said "it's ok Geet". Geet excused them and went along with Maan. He took her to an isolated place.


Geet: do u have any idea how i felt...what is the need to embarrass me infront of Pari...Maan i hate u


Maan silenced her by placing his finger on her lips and pulled her into his embrace.


Maan: Miss.FM RADIO would u give me a chance to speak...u r looking gorgeous in this saree


Geet pushed Maan back and folded her hands across her chest indicating that she is not convinced.She turned her back towards Maan and made a pout. Maan smiled to himself at her gesture and placed his hand on her bare waist and pulled her towards himself so that her back collided with his broad chest. Geet couldn't speak anything she raised her head to look at Maan, he is smiling mischievously looking straight into her eyes. She wants him to remove his hand from her waist, but she is unable to speak out. She is pleading him to remove his hand through her eyes. Maan is enjoying this and thought of teasing her more and squeezed her waist. Geet got frozed and clutched his collar tightly...she is trying hard to get out of his embrace but her hands and legs are not cooperating with her. Her heart is beating fast, she wants to get rid of this torture but Maan is not leaving her.


"Maan Plz" moaned Geet with great effort. Maan got lost looking at her parted lips he leaned forward to reach her lips, Geet placed her hand on his hand which is present on her waist and slowly removed his hand form there. She felt a great relief when his hand is removed from her waist. Maan closed her eyes as he moved close to her. She gave a quick peck on his lips and released herself out of his embrace.


Maan: GEEET

Geet: stop it Maan...enough now


She went near him and Maan hugged her from the back, she took his hands into hers' so that he won't repeat the mischief again. They are looking at Pari and Yash on the stage.


Geet: cute couple right?

"hmmm...yes" said Maan hugging her tightly


Geet: finally Pari is going to have a family now...it's her dream to have a family, i am so happy for her...i am really lucky to have a friend like her...u know Maan, Pari is getting married for us


Maan: what?...i didn't understand anything


Geet: Pari and Yash decided to marry but not so early, i told her that i want to meet u but i don't know what excuse i should give to my father...then she discussed with Yash about their marriage and insisted to get married as soon as possible...she cares a lot for me...i feel i am lucky to have Pari in my life, i don't know y she is loves me...i know that i didn't do anything for her but still she treats me as her sister..i owe her a lot Maan...i am thankful to god for gifting me such a nice friend...will i ever be able to give her back the same amount of love that she is giving me?


Geet's eyes became moist


Maan: Geet u have to be in accounts department.. u always think about balancing the deeds..don't let the tears come out of ur eyes...Pari is a nice girl and u r right that u r really lucky to have her in ur life not every one will have a friend like Pari...u should feel happy for that, don't cry...and i know that u will be always there for Pari not only u i am also there for her...don't forget that she is my friend also, i am also lucky along with u


Geet smiled through her tears, Maan wipped off her tears.


Maan: Pari is right u have become a CRY BABY

"no... i am not a CRY BABY" said Geet hitting him on his chest.


PRECAP: i want to be with Maan throughout my life, i wanna live for him


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.



PART - XXXVIII

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god you updated... i was just waiting for it...

awesome update...

Geet and Pari are just awesome... their friendship is just awesome...

loved maaneet... they are just amazing...

continue soon... (me selfish again)
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Posted: 13 years ago

when she said she dont know how she will give her the same love, is indication of some twist in story

it is nice to see what all pari is doing for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...loved geet nd pari relation...pari is sooo sweet...cont soon...thanks 4 pm

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