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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: poongs123

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Dear plz update plzzz😍😍😍



i have started writing dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



i have started writing dear



How long ll it take???

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-



How long ll it take???



2 hrs dear
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank U ...waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting eagerly... as there was no precap ... am too much anxious
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by sldeeps

Originally posted by poongs123

😍 Waiting 😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting 😍Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting 😍
Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting 😍Waiting 😍Waiting 😍Waiting😍 Waiting😍 Waiting 😍
Dear plz update plzzz😍😍😍


i have started writing dear


How long ll it take???



2 hrs dear


ok dear v wil wait 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART - XXX



Mohindar smiled as he said "go ahead meri bachi" and patted on her head. Geet smiled and ran towards Maan. Pari has seen Geet running towards them with a big smile on her face.


Pari: Maan...Geet


Maan turned towards the direction where Pari is pointing and got surprised at what he has seen. Geet came running towards them and hugged Pari. Pari is shocked to receive Geet's hug, Maan remained still looking at Geet. Geet is hugging Pari and is between Yash and Pari whereas Pari is between Geet and Maan. Geet is looking at Maan while hugging Pari and smiling through her tears. Geet's voice is cracking out of happiness and is not clear because of her whimpers. She whispered in Pari's ears.


Geet: papa said ok

Pari: what?...what r u trying to tell me?

Geet: he chose Maan for me...he wants me to get married to Maan


Pari is so happy and she hugged her back. Maan's happiness knew no bounds, he is looking straight into Geet's eyes and he is angry on Geet for not hugging him and not sharing the news with him. Though Geet hugged Pari she has shared the news with Maan through Pari, Maan knows this but still he is angry on Geet.


Maan: Pari leave her


Pari didn't understand anything she tried to break the hug but Geet didn't leave her. She whispered in Pari's ear.


Geet: Pari plz don't leave me

Pari: what?...but y?

Maan: Pari i tell u leave her

Geet: no Pari u r not leaving me

Pari: Geet what's going on...what r u guyz doing?

Geet: try to understand...papa is seeing us..don't leave me


Pari understood what Geet meant and joined Geet in her mischief, she is not allowing Maan to touch Geet. Maan is trying to get hold of Geet, Geet is enjoying this she is smiling mischievously at Maan. Maan is losing his temper and he is getting more and more irritated each and every passing second.


Maan's self thought : that's my hug...Pari leave her


Maan: Yash i am warning u take ur girl frnd away from here...otherwise i don't mind to take ur girl frnd along with my girl frnd


Already confused Yash became scared by Maan's statement.

Yash: what's going on..what do u mean by taking away my girl frnd...Pari leave her


Yash tried hard and separated both Geet and Pari still both of them are laughing. Maan tried to get hold of Geet but stopped looking at Mohindar.


Mohindar: Geet what happened it appears as if u guyz r fighting for something...what's wrong?


Geet: papa voh Maan ne...


Pari squeezed Geet's hand indicating her not to tell anything to her dad.


Pari: kuch nahi uncle

Maan: kuch nahi uncle

Both Maan and Pari said at the same time, few seconds later Geet also joined them

Geet: ya dad...nothing..everything is fine


Mohindar didn't understand what's going on between them but Yash felt relieved because Pari is safe now.


Mohindar took Geet's hand and placed in Maan's hand.


Mohindar: aaj se ye mera bachi nahi hai...tumhara jeevan saathi hai...i gave u the responsibility of my daughter to u in this same airport before 6 months and now again i am giving the life time responsibility of my daughter to u... plz take care of my daughter


Maan: sure uncle...i will take care of Geet..she is my life


Both Maan and Geet took blessings from Mohindar.

Mohindar: now i can take rest by getting u both married and handing over my business responsibility to u my son


Geet: dad he already has a big responsibility on him...he is the heir of KHURANA's, he is the owner of SMART SOLUTIONS & Co...he is taking the charge as CEO today


Mohindar is surprised and felt happy for both of them. Pari and Yash became dumbstruck when they heard Maan is the owner of the company in which they are working.


Mohindar(giving shake hand to Maan): well young man, congratulations in advance

Maan: thanq Uncle but i want u to attend the party and wish me there again


Mohindar: ok ...hmm Geet then when r u resigning?

Geet: voh mai...


She is looking at Maan with confused face

Maan: it takes some time for the proper resignation process, so she has to attend the office along with us now

Geet: ya dad

Mohindar understood what Maan meant by this, he smiled to himself and didn't want to disturb them so he thought of leaving them alone but before leaving he has seen Yash with Pari.


Mohindar: Pari don't u introduce me to ur boy friend


Pari felt embarrassed and started cursing Geet in her mind for telling about Yash to her dad.

Pari: uncle he is Yash, he is also working along with us in the same company...Yash he is Geet's dad


Yash gave shake hand to Mohindar, he patted Yash and left from there. Geet turned towards Pari.


Geet: Pari i think we have to celebrate for this, dad accepted Maan and Maan is going to take charge as the CEO...all 4 of us are going to celebrate today...what do u say Pari?


"yes we are going to celebrate together" said Pari with lots of excitement

"No" said both Yash and Maan at the same time.


Maan: Yash i think we have to celebrate this separately...plz take Pari along with u


Yash: yes u r right...Pari u r coming with me

"But we can celebrate together right" said Geet

Pari: ya


But Yash and Maan forcibly separated Pari and Geet. Pari and Geet went along with them without understanding y Yash and Maan doesn't want to celebrate together.


Maan dragged Geet along with him, took her to a corner and pinned her to the wall. He pressed his lips against hers' before she could understand what's going on. He kissed her passionately while his hand is roaming around her waist and stomach. He want to tell her that she belongs to him and only him. He is convincing himself that she is his' by kissing her arrogantly without letting her to breathe. She is enjoying his right over her, she doesn't want to stop him. The feeling that he is showing his authority over her is giving her pleasure, she is cooperating with him as if it's her duty to satisfy him. He let her hand inside her shirt and traced lines over her collar bone and opened the top button to trace her cleavage...other hand went inside her shirt to squeeze her waist. Geet started responding to his passion, she took over the kiss as she dug nails into his back. She kissed his lips and placed trail of kisses on his jaw line and throat.


Maan: how could u think of leaving me Geet?


Geet stopped kissing Maan and raised her head to look into his eyes filled with pain. She didn't answer him but stared at him with remorse and helplessness.


Maan kissed her eyes and cheeks, "never try to repeat this again" said Maan as he kissed her lips.


Maan questioned Geet "what did u say Geet?"

as he remembered her words - don't touch me... i am no more urs


i am the only one who has right to touch u

u belong to me

i can do anything to u

i have every right over u...understand don't dare to repeat this again because

u r mine...u r only mine


Geet is looking at Maan with her eyes filled with tears.

Maan: i don't like to see tears in ur eyes

Geet: I am not the only one who is crying u r also crying


Geet wiped off Maan's tears. She touched Maan's forehead with hers'

Geet: u r right i am urs, u have every right over me...i am ready for the punishment u can do anything to me


Maan: kiss me...be mine forever...never ever think of leaving me...u r my life...be with me forever


"i accept the punishment" said Geet as she kissed him on his lips. They hugged each other expressing their love for each other.


Maan: vaise Geet mujhe lagta hai ki no one is ready to marry u...isliye tumhare dad ne tumhari haat mujhe dedi...i feel that i have to rethink about my decision


Geet: oh yeah is that so honey...then don't worry, i will call Rohan...he will help u to get rid of me


Maan: Geet tum phir se uss Rohan ki bare me baat kar rahe ho...damn it!!! Don't talk with me about Rohan again...and don't even think about that stupid


"ok honey as u wish" said Geet biting his angry nose. Maan smiled at her mishchief.


PRECAP: sry no preacap as i didn't decide what to write next


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.


PART - XXXI

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hippie me first ..later night read and comment ..
Sorry for late comments ..me in pious mode during daytime ... cant read ur chee chee update ..even if you bar bar claims u are bachee ..i cant see any bachpana ..airport pe ithna karna ..too much yar ..lol ...


for next rocking Update ..lol


Edited by an.anit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was Beautiful ...lovely!!!

Does Pari & Geet are so innocent that they were not able to understand their point??? Its seems like sometimes their brain works slowly.

loved Maan's restlessness ...It was so cute!!!

wonderful update!!

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update... loved geet and pari mischief...

and the way they tried to manage mohindar... OMG...😃

Maan and Yash telling a no for partying together... totally understandable 😉...

Continue soon

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