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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting... Decide fast and update yaar...
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mindblowing upd. Dear...
Maneet hving gr8 time over there...
Thnx for pics dear...

N their wild cum sweet fight made me crazy...lolz

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved all five update
soz dat ive not reply bk
been on holiday
do continue
it was amazing
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PART - LIV


DAY - 5


Maan: Geet jaldi karo otherwise we will miss the train

Geet: ya Ma...Hutch!!...ya i am coming


They took cogwheel train from Interlaken Ost station to Jungfraujoch.



Geet: u can tell me now...where are we going?

Maan: ICE PALACE

Geet: ICE...HUTCH!!!...ICE PALACE???...wow


Jungfraujoch ICE PALACE



Geet is feeling so cold that she is hugging him tightly. She is feeling excited looking at the Snow Mountains and enjoying the train ride on the hill station. She is very much fascinated by the ice sculptures in the palace... which are made of different shapes such as igloo's, penguins, polar bear, eagles etc.




Geet: wow!!!... Maan this is really beautiful...i love this place...aur vaise...HUTCH!!!

Maan: Geet r u ok?


Geet: ya i am fine...because of this cold climate my nose..OH GOD!!!...Hutch!!...it's horrible

Maan: i think we have to return back


Geet: no Maan..i am fine...this place is nice, i don't want to go back

Maan: stop it Geet...look at u


Geet's nose became pink as she is sneezing since the morning and continuously rubbing her nose.


Geet: i said i am fine...Maan wait ...we will go after sometime


Maan is dragging her from there.

Geet: y don't u listen to me


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@ Villa


Maan cancelled all the programs that he has planned for that day and brought her back to the villa.


Geet: stupid nose...YUCK!!!...i couldn't complete the tour because of this running nose...HUTCH!!...Maan where r u going?


Maan: bus abhi aata hu


After 20 minutes

He came near her who is sitting on the bed struggling with her nose and took her hand into his. He made her sit on the floor along with him.


Geet: Maan what's all this?

Maan: come with me


Geet: what r u doing?...what's all this?

Maan: this is to get rid of ur cold ...steam inhalation


Geet: what ??...HUTCH!!!... steam... HUTCH!!!... inhalation


He kept the vessel filled with hot water infront of her and covered her with the blanket. Geet is struggling to breathe inside the blanket...she removed the blanket and started complaining.


Geet: OH my God!!!...i don't want to do this...i couldn't breathe inside this blanket..leave me


She tried to run away from there but Maan stopped her and made her sit and this time he covered both of them with the blanket...she is fighting with him under the blanket.


Geet: Maan plzzz

Maan: Geet...stop it and inhale the steam


Geet: this is horrible...what did u mix in this?...see how i am sweating

Maan: turmeric powder and vicks...u will get rid of the cold completely if u do this for 15 minutes


Geet: 15 minutes..oh no...leave me


He is holding her shoulders so that she couldn't escape from there...she is trying various ways to escape from him..she hit his forehead with hers'


Maan: ouch!!...Geet...stop it


He tightened his grip instead of releasing her..finally there is no way to escape so she starting inhaling the stupid steam to clear her stuffy nose... he is also sweating along with her by now.


Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm


Geet: tum se ek baat poochu

Maan: hmm


Geet: tell me about ur love story?

Maan: love story?...u want to listen to our story from me?


Geet: i am not talking about our story...i am talking about ur love story

Maan: my love story?...what r u talking?


Geet: yes..urs & Meera's love story


Maan raised his eyebrow's listening to Meera

Maan's self thought: who told u about Meera?...tell me the person's name...i will kill that person for sure


Maan: there is nothing like love between me & Meera


Geet: jhoot mat bolo...i am ur frnd before becoming ur wife...no problem, promise... i won't tell this to any one..u can trust me..u can share ur love story with me...plz plzz...tell me Maan..i am getting bored inside this blanket..plz tell me ur love story


Maan's self thought: stupid..what r u trying to find out?...there is nothing like that between us...anyways i have to be careful in Meera's case...god knows how she would react...ek pal me silence aur ek pal me violence..inka koi bharsa nahi hai


Geet: Maan i am waiting

Maan: thik hai...i will tell u, but u should tell me who told u about Meera to u


Geet: hmmm...i will think of it

Maan: no u have to tell me


Geet: ok first tell me about Meera

Maan: voh Meera


Geet: ha Meera

Maan: voh ...voh..Meera


Geet: Maan aage bado

Maan: she is a nice girl...she is my class mate..one of my close frnds and...and..

Geet: kitna close thi?


Asked Geet with so much curiosity...Maan thought of running away from there looking at her curiosity


Maan: dekho Geet...jaisa tum soch rahi ho..vaisa kuch bhi nahi hai

Geet: Maan stop hesitating...tell me how did she express her love to u?


Maan: voh she always used to stare at me...i didn't understand initially but when she made her feelings obvious i told her frankly that i am not interested


Geet: made her feelings obvious ...matlab..kaise

Maan: matlab...she...she...kissed me


Maan got scared to death anticipating Geet's reaction...he closed his eyes, he didn't hear her screaming at him so he slowly opened one eye and has seen that she is normal then he opened other eye and is counting the seconds waiting for her to scream loud at him...but she remained still.


Geet moved forward and touched his forehead with her finger "did she kiss here?"

Maan(hesitantly): N...No


She brought her finger to his eyes "here?"

"NO"


She kept her finger at his nose "here?"

"NO"


Her fingers are trembling all the while she is tracing his face...she placed her index finger on her lower lip "here?"...her hear beat is racing waiting for his reply

"No"


"oh god!!!" she took a deep breath of relief and proceeded ..this time she traced his cheeks and asked "here?"


"NO"


Now she got irritated..she made a pout and said "Maan it seems u r lying to me...where did she kiss u then?"


Maan: here

He has shown his hand...she smiled looking at his hand "here?"


Maan: ya...she went on her knees, gave me yellow roses before proposing and kissed on my hand and said "I LUV U" to me

Geet: really?...but yellow roses?


Maan: she doesn't want to lose my friendship whatever i say...so she gave me yellow roses

Geet: then... what happened next?...what did u say?


Maan: what would i say?...i said i am not interested

Geet: y Maan?...y did u say No?...she is so sweet..see how nicely she proposed u and u said NO???...how could u do that?


Maan got confused the way she is asking him questions

Maan's self thought: ye ladki sachme pagal hai...see how she is asking about her hubby's love story...without feeling J


Maan: Geet she propsed me when i am 17..do u think that is an age for any sort of commitments...so i said NO


Geet: oh then if she had proposed when u r 25 then?

Maan: what r trying to find out?


He removed the blanket and was about to leave form there...Geet stopped him with her hand "ok this is my last question...i won't ask anything else...plz.plzz...plz honey"


Maan got furious but controlled himself and thought of teasing her.

Maan: may be i would have said YES


Geet made her eyes big listening to him.."iska matlab u too like her"...then "y did u marry me?"..."u cheat "..."i hate u"...she started hitting him on his shoulders.


Maan felt relaxed looking at mad Geet...he is laughing looking at her.

"u stupid..have u gone mad...y r u laughing?" she is screaming and shouting at him


Maan is trying to stop her she got hold of her hands and made her sit in his lap forcibly...she is still struggling to escape from his grip.


Maan: what happened?...u didn't like my love story?

Geet: I HATE U


Maan: pehle tum mujhe ye batao ki..who told u about Meera?

Geet: go to hell...i won't tell u...u idiot..if u like Meera then y did u marry me


Maan: because Meera is not a DEMON like u...because Meera is not SEXY like u...because she is not an FM RADIO like u...and


Geet closed his mouth "u and ur stupid names" she pushed him and made him lay on the floor, she is laying on top of him looking seriously into his eyes.


Maan: aur kya janna chahti ho


Geet melted just like ice listening to his voice..she could feel the transparency of his mind, she smiled and placed her head on his chest.


Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm

Geet: nothing


She is drawing paintings with her finger on his chest, she then slowly opened the buttons of his shirt.


Maan: what r u doing?

Geet(blushing): saving ur shirt


Maan: i think we can use the bed

Geet(whispered in his ear): no need...i am comfortable here


She grabbed the blanket which is laying beside and spread it over them.


PRECAP: how shameless!!!


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge



Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
lovely update great to listen maan's love story😆
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

but who told her abt meera??

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet update

love you

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was chooo cute yaar...
maan was sooo loving n caring😍...n maan's love story n geet's reaction😆 all r superbbb n precap is interesting😉...looking fwd...

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