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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - LXIII



Yash's self thought: being with Geet gives only pain..u would come to know what u r missing in ur life..y don't u understand and stay away from her


He broke the hug


Yash: how many days u r going to stay with her

Pari: 4 days for now...and whenever Maan goes for a business trip i will stay with her during his absence


Yash: but if u think u can't do it...tell him frankly that u can't...

Pari: no need Yash ... i am strong enough...i have to go...bye


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@ Khurana Mansion


Geet: OMG!!! stop it baby aaj kuch jyada hogaya...y don't u sleep...Titu i am not going to leave u... she is kicking me like anything


Geet's baby is giving her company by kicking her so that she won't feel alone under the absence of her dad.


Geet: plz baby sojao...mama ko tang mat karo


Maid came to Geet and informed her someone has come to meet her. Geet came to the hall and hugged Pari from the back.

Geet: oh no!! I can't even hug u properly


Pari laughed looking at Geet's misery

Geet: Pari itna mat hasso ...meri baari bhi ayegi...dekhna tab mai tumhara itna majak udaungi ki tum seh nahi paoge


Pari stopped laughing and made her sit on the couch

Pari: ok i am sorry..what is baby doing?


Geet: she is following the instructions of her mamaji

Pari: mamji?


Geet: ya titu's instructions...kicking me from the morning...u don't know she is not allowing me to sit properly for 5 minutes

Pari: Geet.. can u feel her?...what is she doing now?


Geet took Pari's hand and placed on her tummy

Geet: not only me...u can also feel her...see what she is doing


Pari felt the baby moving and really got excited and she is not aware that her eyes became moist


Pari: hey Geet i can feel her...she is moving

Geet: baby say hi to maasi


Baby kicked her

Pari: hey she is kicking...she is saying hi to me...can she really hear u?

Geet: ya she can hear us...but she would kick only me...i want her to kick her father also once


Pari smiled listening to this

Pari: ab Maan ne kya kiya

Geet: dekho na mujhe akele chod ke chala gaya


Pari: oh really?...someone told me that u have forced him to leave from here

Geet: Maan ne tumhe batadiya


Pari: ya i came here to be with u till Maan returns

Geet: hey really?...i don't believe this... thanq Pari...thanq very much


Geet felt extremely happy when she came to know that Pari would accompany her till Maan returns. Pari has nothing to do there but just to give her the company so that she won't feel alone...but Pari took good care of Geet personally...she took her to the hospital for regular check up and has done her best to make sure Geet is fine.


Maan returned from the business trip and Pari safely handed over Geet to Maan...days are passing and Maan used to visit places often every now and then and Pari used to be with Geet during his absence...though Yash felt staying with Geet causes pain to Pari...Pari felt that staying with Geet means strengthening her bond with Geet..she doesn't want to lose Geet as Pari knows that Geet also loves her in the same way as she loves Geet.


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Yash: plz stop crying Pari...i told u not to be with her but u didn't listen to me


Pari: it's not because of her...Yash if i could share my problem with anyone other than u is Geet...i am crying because i fear that i might tell her about myself before she gives birth to the baby...i don't want to make her feel unhappy when she is experiencing the most precious moments of her life by telling her about my problem...i fear i might give her stress


Yash: what u r thinking about her now also?...i don't understand about both of u...stop it now..we will tell her when the time comes...plz don't cry


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9 th month of Geet's pregnancy


During the mid night


Geet snapped her eyes open and looked at Maan, she has seen that he is sleeping and got up.


Geet: ishhh baby..papa is sleeping..ok...ok ...i will get u something for myself


Maan stretched her hand to feel Geet but he didn't find her.He got up and has seen that she is not present there. He hurriedly got off the bed and checked whether she is in the washroom..but he didn't find her there...he searched for in the entire house and finally found her in the kitchen and felt relieved.


Maan: Geet what r u doing here at this time of night


Geet: sry Maan tum utgaye...baby wants to eat kheer...so i thought of...


Maan: kheer... iss waqt...y r u taking baby's name...saaf saaf kyu nahi batati ki tumhe khane ka man kar raha hai


Geet: no Maan i am telling the truth she wants to eat kheer

Maan: thik hai...i will help u


Geet smiled and moved aside

Maan: Geet give me the sugar


She gave him the sugar

Geet: Maan r u sure u know how to prepare kheer


Maan: voh .. ya..hmmm i don't know

Geet: i knew it...Maan i will do it...and u will help me


Both of them prepared the sweet dish...Maan fed her with his hands.

Geet: hmm...yummy Maan..it's too good...baby wants to eat more


He smiled and continued feeding her...she suddenly stopped him and frowned


Maan: what happened...u don't want to eat anymore

Geet: no Maan...ur baby...it's troubling me


Maan: what's wrong?

Geet: i think she is eager to meet u


Maan: what?...r u ok?

Geet: Maan take me to the hospital...it's the labour pain


Maan: r u sure...delivery date is after two days then how could u get the labour pain now


Geet: oh god!! stop it Maan...baby doesn't know that doc gave the delivery date after two days...she is in a hurry to come to this world...oh no!! I can't bear this...plz...plz take me immediately to the doc..plz do something


Maan: ok...ok relax...we are going to the hospital


@ Hospital


Geet is placed on a stretcher trolley and Nurse is taking her to the Operation Theater (OT). The labour pain became intense and she started screaming all the while...Maan got scared looking at the way she is screaming out of pain...Maan took her hand into his' and tried to soothe her.


Maan: don't worry everything would be fine...doc is there to take care of u...think of our baby Geet i am sure she is going to be a Demon like u...we are going to have a baby girl...Geet plz look at me..u r going to be fine...nothing..


Geet is crying and screaming...they approached the OT


Nurse: sir plz don't worry...plz leave her hand ...we have reached the OT


Maan kissed on her forehead and left her hand reluctantly...he waited for her outside the OT...he could hear her screaming and got scared


Maan's self thought: Oh God!!.. i took the right decision by cancelling the business tour...varna pata nahi kya hota...i don't even want to imagine...i hope everything goes fine


He has waited outside for 2 hours...then the nurse came outside of OT


Nurse: congrats!!...ur wife gave birth to a boy

Maan: how is my wife?


Nurse: it's a normal delivery and she is fine

Maan: thanq ...thanq very much...can i see her


Nurse: not now..i will inform when to meet her

Maan: ok


After 1 hour nurse told Maan that he can meet Geet...he is dying to meet her he rushed towards her. He entered the room and has seen that she is sleeping. Nurse came inside and told him that she would come to conscious state within few minutes and gave the baby to Maan. Maan took the baby into his hands ..the baby's eyes are closed and he is struggling to open the eyes...he blinked his eyes and finally opened his eyes...he looked at his father. Maan's happiness knew no bounds...he touched baby's forehead gently with his lips. Maan went near the bed and sat beside Geet waiting for her to see the baby.


Maan: Geet...Geet...look at our baby..it's a boy...he is so cute


(pic by princess163)


Baby Boy - 1 Hour Old - Newborn Gallery


Geet opened her eyes and has seen Maan holding their baby...she rose to sitting posture with Maan's help and took the baby into her arms...she kept her finger in her hand and baby closed his fist holding her finger...she touched the soft skin of the baby's cheek with her fingers


Geet: hi baby...thik se kheer bhi nahi khane diya papane tumhe... hena

Maan: what ?...what did i do?


Geet: what is the need to help me while i am preparing the dish for myself i don't know what u have mixed in that and see i had to face the labour pain in advance...that's ok...i was able to meet my son two days in advance...baby say thanx to papa


Maan smiled and kissed her...he touched her forehead with his'


Maan: thanq Geet

Geet: to u too


Maan: u won't have to face the pain any more

Geet got surprised listening to Maan


Geet: i thought u forgot...

Maan: how could i forget?...u r free now...i am feeling very much relieved


Baby is licking Geet's finger and bit her finger

Geet: see Maan he doesn't have teeth but still trying to bite my finger


Maan: oh No!!..he also likes to bite just like u

Geet: really...yeah he is like me...not boring like u


Maan: who said that i am boring?...i am not boring and my son will be like me not like u

Geet: oh hello Mr.Khurana he is not only ur son...he is my son also...and he is going to be just like me


Maan: no like me

Geet: no like me


Baby thought of resolving their fight...but according to history no baby would talk on the first day of his entry into this world...the baby doesn't want to behave abnormal so he kept quiet and became a spectator of the fight between his mom and dad.


PRECAP: ok done we will exchange our kids


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


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guyz could u suggest a name for Maaneet's baby boy?


PART - LXIV

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great update...finally baby come...yar pari ki kia problem hai??? and what a racap😲😲 hope ab baby has come everythink will be fine...
Edited by cute1122 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awasome update dear
finallyyy geet gave birh to baby boy!!!😃😉
deeps she is really mad yar she just got conciouness n fighting with maan for not allowing herself to cock!!!
what will happens to maan now onwards as he has to take care of two babies!!!😉😉
pls brng dadi n geets family back now i want to see geet complaining about maan with her parents n dadima n also maan se baby ka diper change karwana use raat bar jagake rakhna(not get me wrong) n more...
deeps pls ab bata bhi do whats problem with pari is she had miscarriage or woh kabhi maa nahi ban sakti aur suspence math rakna wait nahi hota interesting precap
plzzz continue soon (me very selfish subah tak ek aur update plzzz😆😆😃)
will be waiting for morning ok!!!!!!!!!😊😊
Edited by anupm04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
deeps yeh kya precap tha?? we will excahnge our babies??? 😕
very nice update of 9 months... one thing i dint understand... Maan had promised to take care of Geet but that never meant he will take care for all 9 months... first delivery is generally at mayka... n here in Maan's case neither his daadi nor geet's mom are around... aise kaise delivery hai yeh??
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow baby is out. enjoyed the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

SO THIS IS BLUE BABY LOVELY... LOVED MAANEETS CUTE FIGHT... STILL WORRIED FOR PARI... AWESOME UPDDATE

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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super update...loved their cute fight...poor baby viewing

mummypapas f8 on its first day itself

baby ka nam

i suggest...

prem,krish,raj

maanki related ho tho...maanav,armaan

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome yaar..jst loved it !!! wat a way to day that she is in labour pain yaar !!
precap sounds scary..they gonna exchange babys ???
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLSSS YAAR BATHAO PARI KI KYA PROBLEM HAI...AUR YE PRECAP :- BABY EXACHANGING?????????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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