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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



He is actually trying different ideas to seduce her whenever get a chance - kya kare sedhe baat maanne valom me se nahi hena ye Tigress😆...isliye i tell u intelligent girl se shadi nahi karni chahiye - by Maan(out of experience)

😆Baba MSK giving tips 🤣
Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

😆Baba MSK giving tips 🤣


yar agar kisini ne sahi baat bola toh uska khadar karni chahiye😆 aise majak nahi udate...Maan got hurt ek toh tigress pass nahi aane deti aur doosri taraf log uss pe hass raha hai😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just now read. Lovely update. You are really making us enjoy the trip while reading it. Loved Maneet moments. Poor Maan, kab tak he has to control. I loved this line so much
Small girl: thanq Uncle...do i have to kiss u in exchange for this apple just like the way aunt did?

I loved Geet's first kiss by Richard(Hope I am correct with the name) also. Geet is so possessive she is not allowing a small girl to kiss Maan.

You seem to be very shy writing in detail about their moments. Not that I mind b'coz I can read ur update without feeling conscious of my surroundings.
Thanx for the PM




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



i am writing now ...not sure whether i could provide the update today itself


Thanks dear... try to give if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jaaneee Update Aaj Doongi Ya ...Mey Hud Doom...LOL

Yar ...Abhee Thak Data structures se nikla nahee yar 😭...eeekkk ...

then CCN ,TCN ..Network ,Graphics ..OS ...phewww


Maths ko touch bhee nahee kiya ...





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Posted: 13 years ago
deeps,thanks...plj try...
one more thing,not only smart but also same age...aise me ladkiya tigress hote he and ladka(maan)bechara ko usse tolerate karna parta he...lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - LII

Warning : 18 +


Small girl: thanq Uncle...do i have to kiss u in exchange for this apple just like the way aunt did?


Geet opened her mouth wide open listening to the little girl.


Geet(with anger): no need...u can leave


Maan smiled looking at Geet. Geet became furious and took few steps forward and Maan followed her.


Geet: aaj kal ki bache...bache jaise nahi behave karte


She tripped in the snow and couldn't balance herself and was about to fall, Maan held her by her shoulders from the back and took her into his arms carefully when she was able to balance herself he made her turn towards him such that they face each other.


Maan: aur aaj kal ki bade...bade jaise nahi behave karte


Geet felt that Maan's words are aiming at her, the words appeared to convey so many things which she is trying to find out looking into his eyes. She felt Maan's eyes are trying to tell her something which she doesn't want to understand but she is not really a kid... so she could get something out of his eyes...since yesterday she is feeling the difference in his behaviour and the way he is looking at her. It is not like she doesn't like him being close to her but she is not aware how to react and respond to satisfy those lustrous eyes.


Maan loosened his grip on her shoulders and both of them didn't speak with each other later as they got engrossed in their own thoughts of how to let the other person know what they want.


**********


@ Villa 8:30 PM


Maan: Geet where is my white shirt?


Geet is standing at the balcony alone lost in her own thoughts and she didn't hear him


Maan: Geet...Geet...mujhe voh shirt nahi mil raha hai...where did u keep the shirt?


He is searching in the room for the shirt while calling Geet. He heard her mobile ringing which is placed on the table beside the bed. He has seen that it is Pari and attended the call.


Pari: Geet how r u?...y didn't u answer my messages?...r u coming to the office, then y didn't u meet me since last two days

Maan: Pari...will give a pause


Pari: Maan

Maan: ya...we are in swiss..i have planned surprise for Geet..so she didn't inform u


Pari: OMG!!!...u guyz in swiss for Honey Moon...Geet lucky u...ahem ahem it seems i have disturbed u guyz..sry carry on bye


Maan: Pari there is nothing like that...just wait.. i will give the phone to Geet


**********


Geet's self thought: Maan what r u expecting from me? Y don't u tell me what u want...agar bata nahi sakte toh ishara dedo...stupid Geet uss ne vahi toh kiya he told u to grow up kya ye baat kafi nahi tumhe samajne keliye..par mai kya karu? Mujhe kuch samaj me nahi a raha hai...god help me what should i do now


Maan: Geet ...Pari is on the line


Geet took the phone from Maan

Maan: where is my white shirt?

Geet: it's there in the 3rd rack itself

Maan: ok...she is waiting

Geet: ya ..i will talk with her

Geet: hi Pari

Pari: hello mam...could u plz take out few minutes of ur precious Honey Moon for ur friend


Geet: Pari stop it yar

Pari: vaise saara din bedroom me hi busy rahte ho ya phir...Maan tumhe bahar bhi lejata hai...ha batao... batao


Geet: Pari tum bhi na...aisi koi baat nahi hai

Pari: kya aisi koi baat nahi hai...iska kya matlab hai...Geet everything is fine between u guyz right..ur voice appears to be dull...waht's wrong..r u ok?


Geet: kuch nahi

Pari: matlab kuch toh hai...tell me waht's bothering u


Geet: i don't know Pari...voh Maan ne toh..

Pari: did he say anything to u?


Geet: no ...he is so nice to me

Pari: then what's wrong...did u say anything wrong with him?


Geet: OH God!!...how should i tell u...mujhe bus itna pata hai ki...he loves me a lot and he is expecting a lot from me and i don't know how to ...how to...tum samaj rahe ho na mai kya batane ki koshish kar rahi hu


Pari: uffoo!!! Geet...tum phir se vahi baat ke bareme soch rahe ho...stupid u have ruined 2 days because of ur stupidity...hats off to Maan's patience jo tumhe jhel raha hai...u don't have any right to ruin his dreams Geet...he always thinks about how to make u happy and how to make u feel special aur tum...kya problem hai tumhe agar tum khud kuch kar nahi sakte ho toh, just give him a hint that u r ok with anything he does to u... Geet just remember one thing don't take decisions hastily ...just think once before coming to conclusions..that is what i can say...u r not a kid don't forget that and Maan has every right over u


Geet: ok


**********


Maan came to Geet who is still at the balcony. He hugged her from the back and kissd on her neck.


Maan: kya soch rahi ho

Geet: voh...kuch nahi

Maan: Geet andar ajao...it's too cold

Geet: hmmm


They went inside the bed room

Maan: go get ready

Geet: but Maan

Maan: just go ...i am waiting


Maan pushed her into the bathroom and closed the door. Geet completed the shower and took the towel on the hanger, she wrapped the towel around her and lost in her thoughts. She stood infornt of the mirror looking at herself and recollecting Pari's words. She blinked her eyes and came to senses and got shocked looking at the dress at the hanger. She missed to see the dress which Maan placed for her while taking the towel as she is thinking something. She took the dress into her hands with her mouth wide open.





Geet's self thought: where did this lingerie come from..i didn't bring this here?...aahhh Maan


She became angry and rushed towards to door to fight with Maan. She placed her hand on the door knob and remembered Pari's words


"Geet just remember one thing don't take decisions hastily ...just think once before coming to conclusions..that is what i can say...u r not a kid don't forget that and Maan has every right over u"


She made a pout and sat on the edge of the bath tub looking at the lingerie.


Geet(to lingerie): i know that u r laughing at me...hass lo tum bhi hass lo...sab ko yahi lagta hai na ki mai galat hu aur voh prince charming sahi hai..hena... u know what.. i hate him..i hate him for loving me so much...kya jaroorat thi itna kuch karne ki...idiot pata nahi kya kya soch raha hai vaha bait ke mere bare me...but chahe kuch bhi hojaye i am not going to wear this stupid dress...MAAANNN I HATE U...mai raat bhar yahi baiti rahungi..i am not going outside


**********


Maan is decorating the room with candles and red roses. He knows that she couldn't say no to him, but he wants her to feel the sameway how he feels for her. He is trying his ways to create an ambiance so that she herself would come to him and make the day special for him...kya kare tigress is having a starting problem some one needs to make her realise that she also wants this to happen.




His thoughts are filled with how she is going to react and how he should handle her...then he heard the sound of the door and turned towards her direction. He is litting the candle and stopped looking at her coming from the bathroom with the match stick in his hand.His excitement knew no bounds looking at her...yes she wore the lingerie for him...she is blushing and pulling the lingerie down her thighs with one hand even though she knows that she couldn't cover her thighs by pulling the lingerie down. She is covering her shoulders by placing other hand over her chest. She is glowing in the light of candles and she is perfectly looking SEXY now...Maan blurted out "SEXY" looking at her from top to bottom.


Geet slowly raised her gaze and observed the room which has completely transformed, the dark room is glowing with the light of the candles and the roses are saying "HELLO" to her. It appeared as if the roses and candles are encouraging her to make the night special for Maan. Geet is continuously staring at the white rose which is present in between bunch of the red roses that is decorated on the wall just beside Maan. She felt that the roses are speaking with her.



White Rose: Maan brought us here to tell u that he loves u a lot...we gave u the message that he wants us to give u...then how r u going to tell him that u also love him?


Geet is thinking about what she should say to answer the rose. Now it's the turn of the candles.


Candles: Maan knows that u r scared to present urself nakXX infront of him...he brought us to assure u that nothing is wrong in what u r doing...i am here to fulfil his dream of his right to see u nakXX without hurting u...did u get what i am referring to?...Geet he loves u a lot and he has proved that ...how r u going to prove that u love him the same way as he loves u?


Geet doesn't know how to answer the candle, she moved her eyes from the questioning candles to Maan. She has seen the desire and lust in his eyes..."ouch!!!" Maan forgot that he holding the match stick in his hand..."Maan"... Geet went near him and kept his finger in her mouth. Maan is staring into her eyes..."r u ok now?" asked Geet...he smiled as reply.


Geet: Maan plz aisa mat dekho


Maan lifted her up and carried in his hands towards the bed and placed her on the bed. She sat on the bed and observed that blanket is missing.


Geet's self thought: Oh No!!...Maan what r u doing?...iska badla toh mai jaroor loongi


She is listening to the sound of her heat beats.


Geet's self thought: oh god!! phir se ye drum beat shuru hogayi...Maan tumhe jo kuch bhi karna hai jaldi kardo ...varna i am going to die out of nervousness


Maan sat infront of her and kept his hand on her cheek as he moved forward to kiss her. She closed her eyes as she moved towards him. He pulled her close to himself and slid the thin strap over her shoulder and bit on her shoulder. His hand travelled inside her dress and he squeezed her waist as he continued placing kisses on her collar bone. Geet clutched her collar and tore his shirt and removed the shirt form him, she pushed him on the bed and leaned on to him. She kept all her weight on him and raised his leg sliding upwards towards his chest such that her knee would touch his chin. Maan placed his hand on her legs and kissed on her knee. She captured his lips and kissed him passionately, she took his hair into her fist and bit his ear lobe. She kissed on his nape and throat arrogantly...she placed kisses all over his chest while tracing lines on his back with her fingers creating shiver in his spine.


He hugged her tightly and tried to kiss her then she released herself from his hug and laid beside him. He turned towards her side then she rolled over him and laid on other side of him making him feel restless. He turned towards her and seen her winking at him, he pinned her hands on the bed with his hands on either side of her head she is laughing naughtily at him. He is laying on top of her but didn't place his weight on him, she kissed him at the center of his chest and he loosened his grip on her wrists. She escaped from him and tried to run away from the bed but Maan got hold of her and pulled her back on to the bed. She sat in his lap and encircled her legs around his waist by herself and cupped his face with her hands.


Geet: y do u love me so much?

Maan: what would u say... if i ask u the same question


Geet: i don't know y...may be because u give importance to my happiness more than urs...may be because u r ready to hurt urself instead of hurting me...may be because i can't shower the same amount of love as much as u shower on me...may be because...


Maan closed her mouth with his'

Maan: will u stop it

Geet: y r u stopping urself when u have every right on me?...u can do anything to me...Maan i am urs


She kissed him surrendering herself completely to him. He made her lay on the bed and kissed on her feet. He traced her legs and thighs with his hands and bent on her she wrapped her legs around him. He removed her lingerie and threw it away, he got rid of his clothes. He kissed on her chest and between her breXXX, she arched her body and so that he could bury his head into her chest and fulfuil his desires. He placed trail of kisses as he lowered and kissed her button on the stomach and bit her waist. She dug her nails into his back and started moaning as his passion grew. She pushed him on to the bed and bit his cheek and kissed his beard and jaw line. He bit her lips and crushed her breXXX under his chest. He hugged her tightly and squeezed her body tightly that she is sweating in that cold weather.


Geet(whispered in her ear with a husky voice): what r u waiting for?


He smiled at her impatience and made his way to enter into her her. She moaned and scratched him for torturing her with his wild love making. She clutched the pillow with her fists as he entered into her ...he fulfilled her wish and made her complete.


Maan: u want more?

Geet: don't ask me...when u r aware that i too want the same


Maan touched her forehead with his' "u tigress it is very much difficult to satisfy u"..."oh yeah...let's get to work...i don't like to waste the time unnecessarily" she bit his nose and licked his throat and chest...arousing him to pounce on her.


The roses and candles got their answer as they witnessed their love making... the candles melted to save them from the eyes of the roses which are filled with 'J'.


PRECAP: darthi bhi aur karthi bhi


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge



Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps

updating...feeling nervous about the update...oh god plz help me


U r nervous... oh god.. now i am getting nervous
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps

updating...feeling nervous about the update...oh god plz help me

its ok...we're waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps

updating...feeling nervous about the update...oh god plz help me


butterflies ...again..hmm aisa hota hi deeps ...har ek ladkee ko aisa hee nervousness kabhee na kabhee to hota hi...

me nervously blushing now...

Edited:

Finally ...

GODDESS OF ...HONEYMOON


Edited by magicia - 13 years ago

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