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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!
convo wid baby ...is shhooo...sweet...
wht happened 2 pari...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome updates dear...
i loved it...maaneet scenes r chooo cute...
but y pari is worried😕...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 59
nice part...
liked Titu's teasing...
whats wrong with Pari?
liked Maan Geet scene...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n awesum emotional update. Rano advising Geet what 2 eat. Geet feeling nauseos n vomiting. Tito is so sweet! Geet getting irriated. Maaneet convo was awesum. Maan talking to baby was adorable. Pari phoning Geet. Wonder what happened to her! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update...
loved it...
omg... geet kitna sawal karti hain...
maans convo with baby is awesome...
wat happened to pari?????? is she fine or nt???
plzzz continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm dear... :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the conversation between Rano-Geet-Titu.
Also loved father-baby talk.
Geet is too innocent and at the same time demon also.
Can't pari conceive or she doesn't want a baby? SUSPENSE
Thanx for the PM
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting Dude...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

hey dear,
went over all the updates on this thread again and was now able to hit the like button!!
waiting for more updates sweets!!



oh that's so sweet of u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


updating dear
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PART - LX



Geet is rolling on the bed from hours trying to sleep, she hugged Cutie tightly but it didn't help her to enter into her dream land. She hugged cutie on to her chest and moved her knees towards her stomach remembering Maan. She is missing his warm breaths on her face, she is missing his strong arms around her...she is missing all his mischief. She tightly closed her eyes and frowned...no use...she is unabe to sleep. She got up and took the earphones and played songs on the iphone...she leaned on to bed as she sat with Cutie on her lap. She loves songs but now songs doesn't seem to grab her attention so she took out the ear phones and placed the iphone aside.


Geet: Maan i miss u ... i want to melt in ur arms...what r u doing?...i wanna hug u...cutie is not doing her duty efficiently..i need u right now...come and take me away with u... u have spoiled me a lot..stupid


Geet to Cutie: sry cutie but this is the fact...i want to be with him..i want to kiss him..i want to bite his nose...do u understand what i am saying?...Maan plz come to me...what should i do now?


She is missing him like hell, her hormones are screaming for his company. She is struggling to pacify her nerves...she thought of talking with him for sometime to get rid of her loneliness but dropped the idea as she thought she might disturb his sleep.


Geet's self thought: Maan i don't know about u...but this is like hell for me...i have to find ways to convince mom to go back


She didn't sleep the whole night cursing Maan for spoiling her.


*************


Next day


Rano has seen Geet packing her luggage

Rano: Geet kya kar rahe ho?


Geet: voh...voh ma...mai vaapas ja rahi hu

Rano: but u didn't tell me anything yesterday..y r u going suddenly...is everything fine there?


Geet: ya ...everything is fine..i told Maan that i would come with in few days...it has been so many days i came here ...now i have to go

Rano: ha Geet..but suddenly...i am worried that u don't know how to care of urself...how would u manage alone


Geet: it's just 4th month of pregnancy and i am perfectly fine i will manage...Maan is alone there, he needs me...and...and i am also missing him mom


Rano smiled listening to this

Rano: toh ye baat hai...isliye achanak se itni jaldi packing kar rahe ho


Geet lowered her gaze

Geet: baby is missing her father...isliye..


Rano: ha mujhe pata hai...Geet mai samajh sakti hu..kuch bolne ki koi jaroori nahi hai...ye jaan ke mai bahot khush hu ki tum aur Maan ek dusre se alag nahi reh sakte...thik hai tum ja sakti ho..par Geet agar koi bhi takleef ho toh...don't hesitate to tell me


Geet: ok ...thanq very much mom ...ek aur baat..u have to convince dad for this

Rano: thik hai


*************


Mohindar: Geet kya tum ja rahi ho...vo bhi achanak se kya hua?


Geet is standing beside her mom and she pressed her mom's hand indicating her to answer her dad. Rano understood her gesture and tried to answer him.


Rano: voh.. i told her to go...voh kitne din apni myka me rahegi...vaha Maan ko iski jarrorat hogi na

Mohindar: yes but...she needs to be taken care


Geet: papa mai bilkul thik hu...abhi se yaha rehna ki kya jaroori hai

Mohindar: toh tum khud jaana chahti ho


Geet: voh papa mai...

Rano: voh apna ghar jaa rahi hai... isme galat kya hai


Mohindar: agar tum logon ne decide kar liya toh thik hai...ur wish..then no need to consider my opinion..Geet u can go


Geet and Rano looked at each other as they didn't understand how to convince Mohindar as he appeared to be angry on Geet. Geet went near her dad and held his hand.


Geet: papa aap aise baate kyu kar rahe ho

Mohindar placed his hand on her head


Mohindar: Geet tum bachi ho...tumhe khud ki khyal rakhna nahi aati isliye...

Geet: Maan is there to take care of me...plz believe me...i know him and i promise that i will be careful


Mohindar: u won't listen to me...bahot jiddi ban gayi ho...ok i will drop u

Geet: thanq dad


Mohindar asked the servant to take the luggage and they came outside the house. Geet said bye to her mom and headed towards the car...Rano shouted "Geet" suddenly. Mohindar turned back listening to Rano's scream. He has seen that Geet fell on the ground and rushed towards.


Rano: Geet ...Geet

Mohindar and Rano took Geet inside the house and made her lay on the bed. He called the doctor immediately and Rano made her drink water.


Mohindar: abhi abhi bata rahi hai ki mai bilkul thik hu...ab dekho kya hua

Rano: kal tak toh thik thi...pata nahi achank se behosh hogayi


Doctor came and tested her and informed them that she is weak, he checked the prescription of medicines which she is taking and gave instructions to Rano about what else they should include in the intake of medicines and the diet Geet should follow.


Geet came to her senses and has seen her father sitting beside her.


Mohindar: how r u feeling now?

Geet: i am ok now


Mohindar: u r not taking proper food...doctor said that u r so weak...Geet u have to be very careful


Geet didn't reply as she knows her father won't lesten to her. He gave strict warning to Rano to take care of her...he asked Geet to take rest without taking any stress and went to the office.


Geet: ma...isme meri kya galti hai...i couldn't digest the food...and these vomitings... oh god!!...bus aise khati hu aur aise bahar aa jaati hai...YUCK!!!


Rano: Geet chup chap se ye juice peelo aur aaram karlo

Geet: i got vexed of this orange juice...i am taking rest from quite a long time...not any more...


Rano: chup raho...tumhari vajah se mujhe daant mil raha hai...dekha abhi tumhara papa ne kitna kuch sunaya mujhe

Geet: mom


Rano: i said finish this juice

Geet: yuck!!...every day this orange juice...no no...plz


Rano forcibly made her drink the juice and went away without paying attention towards Geet's cribbing.


Geet: what sort of house arrest is this?...i want to go..Maan come here and take me away with u


*************


@ Khurana Mansion


Maan's self thought: what is this?...y is she not picking up the phone... ab kya mujhse baat bhi nahi karegi...she said she will come back within few days, months are passing but she didn't come back...i have to do something...kaisa family hai beti ko apne paas hi rakh liya...y don't they understand that my baby is also with her...i want to see her with the baby bump...y don't they send her back


He called the land line as Geet is not lifting her phone. Titu received the phone call.


Titu: hi jiju

Maan: Titu tum..Geet ko phone dedo


Titu: didi ko... voh so rahi hai

Maan: itna jaldi


Titu: she is not feeling well...she has fainted in the morning and she couldn't eat anything because of nausea and vomiting...she is so weak..mom is making her eat forcibly...she got tiered fighting with mom so she is sleeping now


Maan: how is she now?

Titu: as i said she got exhausted fighting with every one she is sleeping now


Maan: thik hai...don't disturb her...mai baad me phone karta hu


*************


@ Night


Mohindar came to Geet's room and sat beside her.

Mohindar: Geet


She turned away form him and made a pout.


Mohindar: Geet what happened?

Geet: aaj jo kuch bhi hua issme mera kya galti thi...mom ne bola ki pregnancy me aisa hota hai...y did u scold me and mom unnecessarily


Mohindar: toh iss baat keliye naraaj ho mujhse

Geet: ha


Mohindar: what if i say sry?

Geet: mujhe sry nahi chahiye


Mohindar: then what do u want?

Geet: mujhe Maan ke paas jana hai


Mohindar: don't be stubborn ...u need some one to take care of u there...Maan would be busy with his work so it would be better if u stay with us


Geet placed her head on Mohindar's shoulder

Geet: but i miss him


Mohindar didn't understand what to do and how to convince her...he patted her and made her sleep.


*************


Next Day


Geet is wearing the saree and observed something she stood infront of the mirror checking herself.


Geet: am i eating so much that my stomach is showing the bump...no it's the baby..mom


Geet went near mom to show the baby bump

Geet: mom see ...my baby it's growing


Rano smiled as Geet placed Rano's hand on her stomach. Titu came near her and he too placed his hand on her stomach.


Titu: common baby kick ur mom this is the best time to hit her

Geet: Titu tum kya sikha rahe ho baby ko


Titu: i told the truth...what's wrong in it...mom didn't she kick u when she is in ur womb

Geet: titu tum toh...


Rano: not again ...stop both of u..


Mohindar called Geet and she went from there to meet her father. She has seen her father talking with some one she came near her father and got surprised looking at the person.


PRECAP: she is coming with me


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


PART - LXI

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago

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