I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 8 updated pg33 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome deeps.. 🤗 happy to see ur lovely update.. 😊 atlast maaneet reached mumbai to fullfill their dream...waiting for next.. thanks for pm !! take care of ur health..😆
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Edited by JayaR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi there...good to see u bak ...thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional update! Maan is so caring! Love arya! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey itne din baad k fine simply superb update precap also osum
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hey dear,
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PART - LXXIV


PART - LXXV



Geet is playing with Arya when he wanted to play on the floor with his toys she placed him down from the couch. She then applied moisturiser to her hands and placed the bottle on the table near the couch, she asked chitra (maid) to take care of Arya and went to the kitchen.


Chitra has seen that Arya is playing with the toys without doing any mischief and left from there after few minutes as she remembered some work assigned to her by Geet.


Chitra to Arya : i will be back in few minutes plz stay here Arya

Arya's self thought: sry i can't promise u about this


Chitra left from there and Arya has thrown all his toys here and there after he got bored of playing with them, then he went near the table where Geet placed the moisturiser.The height of the table is small enough so that Arya could reach the things placed on the table. Arya has seen Geet applying the liquid to her hands and somehow managed to open the bottle.


Arya's self thought: yeah!!! I have opened the bottle... and now what did mom do something comes out of this ... let me try


He ran with the bottle in his hand and sat on the floor. He started experimenting with the bottle, he made the bottle upside down and started pressing the bottle and that's it he won...a victorious smile appeared on his face. He almost emptied the bottle and liquid spread all around him then he thew away the bottle and placed his hands on the liquid.


Arya's self thought: eeehhh!!!...this is sticky ...y is mom applying this to her hands...i don't need this

He got up and again went near the table, this time he has seen Geet's cell phone on the table

Arya's self thought: what is this?...hmm let me check it out

He pressed all the buttons and then threw it on the floor. Cell phone landed on the floor making some noise though it didn't break the screen of the phone got damaged.

Arya's self thought: nice sound...let me try once again

Now he took the paper weight made of glass and threw it on the foor, it broke into pieces making some noise

Arya's self thought: yuppie!!!!!...so many glass peices

He got amazed and clapped with his small hands looking at those small glass pieces.He thought everything placed on that table would create sound or will get splitted into pieces. He has seen a magazine and threw it on the floor waiting for some new kind of sound but the magazine landed on the floor without making any noise which disturbed Arya.

Arya's self thought: what's this ?...i hate this thing ...let me try the other one

He took the News Paper and threw it on the floor. Again his plan failed so he sat on the floor and started tearing the News Paper into pieces smiling every time he tore the paper.

*************

Maaneet heard the sound when the paper weight borke into pieces and rushed to the hall.

Geet: Maan see how ur kid is growing...this is what he is learning

As usual Arya is smiling at his mischief looking at his parents. Arya stood up trying to reach his mom and dad, he is about to step on glass piece. Geet got worried and tried to pick up Arya.

Geet: Arya ...stay there baby

Maan stopped Geet and he carefully lifted Arya from that place so that Arya won't get hurt by any chance. Geet took him from Maan's arms.

Geet(to Arya): r u fine?...what is chitra doing?...i told her to take care of u

Maan (shouting): chitra...chitra

Chitra got scared when she heard Maan shouting her name and came running leaving the work she is doing. She didn't look at the floor while running and stepped on the liquid (moisturiser)... that's it she fell down shouting due to the pain caused in her backbone.

Maaneet came near chitra, before Maan could scold her he has seen y she fell down. Geet looked at Arya's sticky arms and his wet shirt and understood that it is Arya's mischief. They couldn't say anything either to Arya or to Chitra other than looking at each other.

*************


Maan: What's the problem?...y r u saying NO

Geet: problem?...it's because of his highness ARYAMAAN SINGH KHURANA

Maan: what did he do?

Geet: didn't u see what he has done just now...i don't want this to happen at the Hotel also...do u know what he has done yesterday he has thrown all the ironed clothes out of the balcony when i left him for a second

Maan: Geet he is just a kid

Geet: i know...if u want we will go some where else but not for any Dinner Date or something

Maan placed Arya in his lap and said on behalf of Arya

Maan : mom plz accept dad's request and come to the date ... i promise that i won't make any mischief there


Arya's self thought: mom i didn't say anything...if something happens there i am not the one who is responsible...it is dad who said all this and he should face the consequences...don't blame me later


Geet smiled looking at the way Maan is trying to convince her

Geet : YES...we r going

Maan: thanq mom

Arya's self thought: yeah!!!...luv u mom


@ HOTEL


Maaneet along with Arya entered the hotel. Maan is discussing something with the waiter over there... meanwhile Arya started irking her mom and crying without any reason.

Geet: what's wrong?...what do u want?


He managed to get down from Geet's arms and ran towards the Garden Restaurant looking at the plants over there.Geet went after Arya and she has seen Arya plucking the flowers from the plant.


Geet: stop it Arya


Arya took the flower and ran towards one of the tables present there. Maan has planned some surprise for Geet but he is forced to dine at the Garden Restaurant because of Arya.


Maan's self thought: so everything has gone to drains...that's ok this place is also fine

Geet: Maan let us dine here otherwise he will cry again

Maan: ya sure

Geet placed Arya on her lap and Maan is looking at the Menu card to give the order.

Arya's self thought: I too want a special chair for me...I am no more a kid...mom I want to sit individually


He started hitting Geet trying to get off the chair. He is screaming in this process which drew everyone's attention towards them...peaceful atmosphere is filled with Arya's screaming.Geet stood up and placed him on the floor.


Geet: ok ... what do u want now?


Arya tried to sit on the chair by himself...then Geet helped him to sit on the chair.Maan asked the waiter to arrange one more chair and Geet sat in that chair. Geet got angry at Maan who brought her to the hotel without listening to her. Maan could understand the reason behind Geet's deathly glare towards him and tried to avoid looking at her.


Maan (looking at the Menu): so... what do u want?

Geet said angrily "ask ur son"


Maan didn't answer her and gave the order himself. Arya couldn't see the things on the table so he tried to stand on the chair, his leg slipped from the chair in this process. Maan reacted immediately and helped him to stand on the chair. Arya smiled thanking his dad and concentrated on what he has to do next. He has seen a fork and spoon placed either side of a plate infront of him, a flower vase at the middle of the table, paper napkins and all other stuff. He took the paper napkins and played with them for few seconds then he took the salt bottle and spreaded the salt every where on the table. Geet didn't stop Arya as she want Maan to know Arya's mischief so that he would come to know how she is handling him while Arya is growing each and every day. She kept her hands under her chin and watched what is going on. Maan took the salt bottle from Arya.


Arya's self thought: dad...that's mine...ok then i will take this one


This time it is the pepper bottle...Maan tried to grab the bottle then Arya started crying. Again every body started looking at them. Geet didn't react then Maan understood that he has to deal with him alone.


Maan: Arya be a good boy...stop crying dear


He tried to take Arya into his arms but Arya refused to come near him and threw the plate on the floor and scattered everything on the table. Waiter came near their table and looked at Maan. Geet stopped Arya and tried to pacify him.


Maan to the waiter: I will pay for the loss


Arya tried to get down the chair, Geet helped him to get down. He again ran from there Geet followed him while Maan is talking with the waiter. Arya ran towards a Party Hall and tried to push the door.


Geet: enough now...u r not going inside ...come with me

Arya started crying while trying to push the door.

Geet: no Arya..not this time..we don't know whose Party is happening inside...so u r not going inside...

While Geet is trying to take Arya from there somebody opened the door from inside and Arya ran inside the Party Hall

Arya's self thought: yes i have done it!!!


Geet gave a fake smile to those who r coming from inside and then followed Arya. Maan has seen them going inside the Party Hall.


Maan's self thought: OH NO!!!...what else is left?...Arya plz come back

Maan is left with no other option other than entering some stranger's party.

Geet: Arya stop...where r u going?

Arya's self thought(smiling): mom catch me if u can?


Arya came and stood on the dance floor looking at the dancing couples. Melodious music started and the lights r turned off which scared Arya.


Arya's self thought: I should have listened to mom


Few spot lights r turned on and couples started dancing for the slow music. Arya is looking at the changed atmosphere with a scary and surprised look on his face. Geet came near him and took him into her arms.


Geet: got u...if u repeat this again...i tell u Arya...

Geet has seen Arya's scary face and stopped scolding him.

Geet(with a smile on her lips): wanna dance with me?


She took his little hand into her hand and started dancing with Arya in her arms. This is totally a new arena for Arya he slowly started enjoying the music and the way Geet is making him to swing along with her. Randomly moving spot lights stopped moving and one spot light is focussd on Geet and Arya...aur hamara Geet...she goes mad after music...she ignored the starring eyes on her, she forgot that she is not invited to that party, she got lost in her musical world and danced slowly in rythm with the light music. Only onething is there in her mind...she is aware that she is carrying a baby inside her womb and a baby in her arms which made her to dance slowly, carefully, gracefully and elegantly.


It's a visual treat for every one who is watching a pregnant woman along with her son doing a couple dance. Maan has seen everything that is going on...how Geet got lost and started dancing with Arya and how people stopped dancing looking at them.He stood there adoring her beloved wife dancing with his son. He became one of the audience and starred at her wife...Geet's saree got stuck to her sandals while she is tried give slight leg movements ...she was about to fall on the ground...every one made their eyes big and opened their mounth's wide open anticipating what is going to happen.


Maan rushed towards Geet and made her stand properly and adjusted her saree...then Geet realised what she is doing and got scared looking at those starring eyes of the people present around her. Maan smiled and blinked his eyes, he nodded his head indicating her to continue and he kept one hand around her waist and one hand on both Geet's and Arya's hand.


Arya's self thought: hey dad!!...this is just a thrilling experience...thanx for joining us


Maan's family danced for few moments and gave a bow to the other dancing couples on the dance floor and others who are watching them when the music ended and lights turned on. Everyone clapped out of excitement when they gave a bow.


Geet: I think it's enough for today

Maan: ya it's a mind blowing date...I too feel the same...let's go from here


They left from there when the lights turned on...leaving the spectators to scratch their heads and questioning themselves...who they r?


PRECAP: sry Geet I can't accept this child


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge




Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear!!
@precap: is it pari talking about not accepting the child??
oh god, me so confused!!
pls continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow..beautiful update..you actually took great effort in pointing out Arya's each move.And then the dance..It was altogether fabulous.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
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Edited by Shruti_Goyal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
I loved it.
Arya is rocking. Loved arya & geet's dance.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.

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